Date: Fri, 27 Mar 2009 23:59:19 -0400 From: ashley hartwick Subject: A Weekend with Natalia For the first time in a long time, Dane Oliver was happy. He was sitting back, relaxing, and getting ready for what would be a long and fun (and probably very drunk) weekend with his buddies. It had been over a month since he had seen them. For the past month he had been grounded, but for this weekend, his mother and step-father were going on vacation, leaving Dane and his little step-sister Natalia at home alone for the weekend. Natalia would certainly not be joining Dane and his buddies in their night of debauchery, however. Dane could not imagine a little bitch in the entire world that would be nearly as bad as that little cunt Natalia. Dane was 17, Natalia had just turned 15. She had been an only child her entire life until Dane's golddigger mother had married Natalia's father. Natalia's father was Ramon Hernandez, a multimillionaire from Mexico. Ramon had originally been a military man, but had then left and started a company that engineered military supplies which he then sold back to the Mexican military. Dane imagined that Ramon was also a very crooked man, being that he often had dangerous looking men over, when they would disappear for hours into Ramon's office. Ramon had many questionable friends and was a very cold and calculated man. Dane knew that his stepfather had had some experience moving drugs, based on some of the things that he had come across when going through his office looking for money to buy booze on a couple occasions. The good thing was that normally Dane didn't have to buy booze. This is because, along with Ramon's Cuban cigar collection, which was worth over $100,000, he also had an extensive liquor and beer cabinet which was always stocked. The liquor collection is half the reason that Dane ended up grounded more the previous month. The other half of the reason was Natalia. Natalia Hernandez. For a fifteen year old, Natalia was already a beautiful young girl. No one, even Dane, would argue that. The first time he met her he had fantasies of her being his girlfriend. What a joke that was now. Her personality couldn't be any worse. She was a complete spoiled bitch. On the outside, you saw this girl with a beautiful tan face, long black hair and a nice thin figure. She was 5'0, just a bit over 90 pounds. She had big, pouty lips and nice full brown eyes. She had a perfectly tanned and toned body, from growing up always having time to tan, having a personal trainer, and having a swimming pool to swim in and a personal chef to cook her all the right foods. She had nice little developed 32B breasts, which weren't huge but actually looked fairly big on her tiny body. They were perfectly round and shaped, and couldn't have been any more perky. Her ass was tiny, but super tight and round. She had just started to develop womanly hips and waist. Her legs were short (since she was short) but tan and tight like the rest of her body. She had made a habit of shaving her pussy, ever since the girls in the shower in gym class at school had made fun of her for still having hair. Yes, she was smoking hot. But she was also a spoiled little brat. From day one, Natalia had lived to torment Dane. Dane and his mother Pam were just middle class folks from Dallas, Texas. Dane's dad was a deadbeat who had disappeared years ago. Until Pam had met Ramon, she had been stripping to pay the rent and buy groceries. So even though Dane was suspicious of Ramon, he liked the thought that at least his mother was safe and taken care of. However, once he met, Natalia, he hated the Hernandez family. Natalia always got what she wanted. She would whine and cry and bitch to Pam and Ramon until she got everything she desired. Because Ramon had all the power, she had become the favorite child in the family, even to Pam. Dane envied Natalia for this, and it pissed him off something awful that Natalia somehow was even the favorite of Dane's own mother. Not only that, but Natalia was always making fun of Dane. She was also constantly trying to get him in trouble. Which brings us to how Dane got grounded. Dane had been stealing liquor from Ramon for a while. Dane had made some good friends at his new school, but these guys were also a bit of trouble makers. Nothing too bad, but just the normal teenage stuff: drinking, some drug use, any sex they could get, etc. Dane was able to ease his way into the group by offering free liquor. He would do the old trick of replacing Ramon's liquor with water, filling his own empty two liter bottles with vodka or whatever else from Ramon's huge liquor collection. Natalia had told on Dane for drinking before, but Dane had not gotten in trouble because Ramon and Pam had not really seen any proof. Natalia had gotten a brilliant idea though, one that would really bust Dane's balls good. She had gotten a new digital camcorder for Christmas, among thousands of dollars worth of other gifts. She hid in the room where the liquor was on a Friday night, knowing that Dane would be in shortly to steal it. She positioned herself behind a couch and aimed the camera at the liquor cabinet. She caught Dane on camera coming in, emptying some vodka into a bottle, and replacing the vodka with water. She then ran immediately and showed her father. Ramon was incredibly mad. Being the rich business man that he was, he had little mercy and could become angry whenever anything didn't go his way. He demanded to Pam that Dane be grounded indefinitely, and Pam reluctantly agreed. So it was. Dane had been grounded for over a month now. But today was Friday and Ramon and Pam were heading to Cabo for the weekend. He had been put in charge of the house and of his little step-sister for the weekend, neither of which he gave a fuck about. All he cared about was having his buddies over and getting wasted. He had told them to come over around 8, and by 6 he had stolen the liquor (his mother and step-dad had left at approximately 5:58, leaving him 120 before he stole the liquor!). Natalia was getting a professional massage and wouldn't be back till around seven. Dane took this opportunity to go into her room to try to find her camcorder. No way was he going to let her walk in on his little party with that camera again and fuck him over. Dane walked into her massive room, which was virtually all pink, and had its own bathroom and kitchenette attached to it. He didn't see where the camera was, so he quickly started rummaging through her stuff. Nothing under the bed, nothing in the closet...where the fuck could that camera be? Finally, he started going through her drawers. He found it in the top drawer, along with her panties. He had never really seen any of her panties before, and he was sort of intrigued. He shuffled through a few pairs of them...blue thong...pink lacy g string...white boy shorts...purple see through string bikini...and many other thongs and sexy sets of panties. Wow, Dane thought, she has quite the slutty little collection here. And that's when it caught his eye. At the bottom of her underwear drawer, hiding under a pink bikini bottom, was a small clitoral vibrator. HOLY FUCK! Dane almost yelled. He looked at the little two inch long silver vibrator. His little step-sis was a horny little bitch! It kind of turned him on, but he didn't have too much time to think about it now. He had to get ready for the guys to come over. He quickly put the camera in his room and got the rest of the liquor together. By eight, his buddies started to arrive. Natalia had come home around 7:30 and had headed to the shower. Good riddance, thought Dane, as she hustled up stairs in her towel. He went out on the back deck where the pools (yes, the Hernandez's were so rich that they multiple pools) and hot tubs were. Dane had three friends over tonight: his buddy Trevor, who was 18, and quarterback of the varsity football team, his friend James, who was kind of the funny pothead of the group, and who was 17 like Dane, and finally Ray, a wide receiver on the football team, and sort of the token black guy in their group of friends. They were sitting around drinking by the pool, just talking about girls and fucking and drinking and all the stuff 17 year old boys love to talk about. That's when Natalia came out. She walked outside and up to the four boys. Immediately they perked up. Ray, James, and Trevor had no idea what a bitch she was. All they knew was that when they came over to Dane's house there was always this hot little piece of ass running around, and that tonight they were all alone there with her. They watched her as she walked up to them wearing some tight skinny jeans. She was so thin that the size zero jeans even hugged her ass and gave them the perfect look at how her thighs were shaped. She was wearing a tight little American Eagle t-shirt, that wrapped her thin little body perfectly and made her tits look larger than they actually were. The three boys sat there with their jaws dropped as she walked up. Natalia: "Dane, you need to give me some of that money that Dad left me so that I can get some dinner, I'm like, starving." Dane: "It's on the kitchen table just grab it." Natalia: "I looked everywhere in there and I can't fucking find it, so why don't you go in and give it to me. I need to order a pizza. Dane: "Look, it's right under the blue envelope that mom and Ramon left us with their flight information in it. There's a white envelope under that with all the cash in it. Just grab it and order some pizza. Get us one too, pepperoni." Natalia just gave a bitchy look to her step-brother and walked off, her tight little ass shaking behind her. Dane knew damn good and well she wasn't going to order he and his friends shit. She was a selfish little bitch that would order what she wanted, then pocket the rest of that money to shop with tomorrow. He was pissed. James: "Damn, Dane, I would fucking pound the shit out of that! Hahaha" Dane: "Shut up dude, she's a fucking little bitch" Trevor: "Come on man...James is right, that girl is bangin...you know you would think she is fine too if she wasn't your sister." Dane: "First of all she's my step-sister, not my sister. And yeah, I mean, when I first met her I thought she was hot, but now that I know what a bitch she is I couldn't care less about her." Ray: "Shit though, dude, she's gotta fine ass on her man. I'd fucking split that up sooo good she wouldn't even know what to do with all the cock I'd give her." James: "Seriously, I'm about to go in there right now and drop my game on her and have her screamin' my name the rest of the night." Dane: "Ha. Good luck with that asshole. That girl is such a bitch, she would never even look your way. She's gonna stay a tight little bitch virgin until the day her daddy picks one of his billionaire friends to marry her off to. Until then, quit dreamin' man, she's a little cunt and that's all she is..." The boys all laughed and forgot about her for a while. They continued drinking well past midnight, until they were all fairly wasted. They had played lots of games of pool and darts, done a little swimming, and argued about sports. They played "who would you rather fuck" and talked about all the girls they had done stuff with lately, whether true or made up. Eventually, the subject of Natalia came back up again... James: "Speaking of bitches I'd fuck, how about that little sis up ther'a yurs, buddy", James slurred as he patted Dane on the back." Dane: "Look...Look man, you can try for her, but dude I'm telling you, she's a little bitch." Ray: "Haha we should dude, Let's just fucking go up there and smash the shit out of her!" Dane: "There's no way man, I don't even think that bitch knows what sex is. She's the type that would just lead a guy on. And lets face it...you guys are my friends, she'll automatically be a huge bitch to you. She'll never give you any." Trevor: "Yeah, you're probably right, but damn. She is so fuckin' sexy." James: "Well...who said she has to let us do anything?" James said with a sly smile on his face. James had always been the trouble maker of the group. He came from a bad family, a rough upbringing. He was the first to drink, the first to smoke weed, the first to have sex. He was the kind of guy who was sneaking his dad's playboys into the tree house to show the other guys when he was 9 or 10 years old. He was the one who had them stealing hubcaps at age 12 to make money to buy cigarettes. He was a good friend, but not a very good guy morally. Ray: "What the hell do you mean man?" James: "I mean, she's sittin in her room right now in this fuckin mansion, all alone, no one around to save her from anything. I'm saying we go up there, show her a good time, more importantly, show ourselves a good time, and fuck it...what is she gonna do about it?" "She can't do shit! We hold her here for the next day and don't let her go. Fuck that little cunt, we'll teach her a lesson for being such a little bitch all the time." Trevor: "Sounds good to me man!" Trevor said. Trevor was the type that he was the golden boy quarterback of the football team, but at the same time he wasn't much of a leader. He loved sex, he loved women, but at 18 he wasn't great at getting women still. He wasn't the best looking guy, actually, and was a little shy. He had always looked up to James and was always the first on bored with James's plans. Ray: "I'm in dog. Let's get some pussy...fuck it." Dane: "Hey come on guys, ease up. First of all, that's fuckin' rape man and it's wrong. Secondly, it's my fucking step sister and if you think there's anyway she won't rat me out the second my mom comes home you're fuckin' off your rocker." James: "Hey fuck that man, think of how that bitch has treated you. You have been stuck in this fuckin' house for the last 5 goddamn weeks because of that bitch and her asshole dad. Come on man. Let's get that bitch back. That little cunt went as far as fucking videotaping you stealing the booze to get you in trouble man...come on, let's fuckin' get her back. Dane: "I don't know man I mean...I do fuckin' hate her...look, you guys do what you wa-" James cuts him off, "We're on in man, let's go. And hey, I got an idea...you took that camera right, the one she fucked you over with so she couldn't do it again tonight?" Dane: "Yeah it's in my room-why?" James: "Go get it, we're gonna head inside, we'll meet you outside of Natalia's room." The guys all hurried inside. James, Trevor, and Ray stood quietly outside Natalia's room until Dane showed up with the camera. Natalia was in her room, lying on her bed watching tv when she heard the knock. She was a bit confused because she knew her brother and friends would be outside all night fucking around. Natalia: "Who is it?" The boys ignored her and opened the door and walked in. James: "Heyyy good lookin how ya doin?" Natalia: "Dane what the fuck are you guys doin in here, get the hell out of my room." James walked over and sat on her bed. "Come on babe calm down a little bit...don't you wanna get to know your brothers friends a bit?" he said. "No, you guys are losers get the hell out of my room...Dane, I'll call my dad right now and he'll fuck you up." She got up to go get the phone. Trevor jumped up and held her down on the bed forcefully with his strong arms. "Oh no you won't you little bitch...no more fucking over our buddy Dane here...he's done taking your shit," Trevor said. Natalia got a look of fear in her eyes. "What the hell?"...was all she could get out before Ray jumped up and held her legs down. Natalia: "What the hell!" Natalia cried. "Dane what the fuck are you guys doing, tell these assholes to get off of me!" she screamed as she kicked and punched and tried to fight her way away from Ray and Trevor but to no avail. James: "Just be quiet you little fucking slut. You are ours now. This will be better for all of us if you just shut the fuck up and take what's coming to you...Dane, give me the camera." Dane sat there stunned. He was a little apprehensive, but also felt a new empowerment over this little bitch that has made his life living hell. He looked at her laying on the bed helpless, and couldn't help but think of how he had all the power now...yes...she was going to be his, he was going to make her life hell now. He handed James the camera. James walked over to the bed and smacked Natalia hard on the face. Jamie: "Now listen bitch, you're going to follow our rules, and you're gonna do what I say, okay? If you don't, you're going to get hurt, I promise you. So just be a good girl Natalia, and do everything we tell you, got it?" A tear came to Natalia's eye. She was terrified now. She nodded her head. James explained to her what would happen. The boys would get out of the picture. She would get her vibrator (which Dane had told them all about when he was drunk) and she would strip down and start playing with herself on camera. She would then beg Dane and his friends to give her some. She would yell at that and beg them to fuck her, so as if to make it look on camera as if she was the one making all this happen. Then, in reality, they would take everything they wanted from her all night, with Dane walking a way with a memory chip that had all the proof he needed to shoot down any story she told her little daddy. Dane grabbed the vibrator out of her underwear drawer and threw it at Natalia on the bed. James: "Okay baby, we're going to let you go now," James said and nodded at Ray and Trevor, who released her. "Now don't do anything crazy, because we WILL hurt you. Just be a good little cunt and do what I say..." This was the only window Natalia could see that she could get out of this. All four boys were now at the foot of the bed. She knew she was quick from all the athletic training she had had. She figured she could probably beat all the boys to the phone, and then hopefully into the bathroom so she could lock herself in and call the police. The time was now... Natalia quickly jumped out of bed and bolted to the phone. She grabbed it and threw a night stand down so that she could create a barrier between her and the boys. But it was no use. Ray was a star wideout on the football team, ready to go D1 next year. He was so much quicker than her it was embarrassing. He chased her down, tackled to the floor, and threw the phone across the room. James: "WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING YOU LITTLE FUCKING SLUT!!" Are you trying to fuck us here!!!" James screamed out of control. Ray dragged her over to the bed where he and Trevor held her down once again. This time, Dane joined in and held her head down. Jamie jumped on her and punched her hard in the stomach, knocking the wind out of her. He then smacked each side of her face, several times until her cheeks were red and she was crying. They had broken her. James: "Get the camera rolling Dane." The boys got up off of her, and set the camera up. "Now strip you little bitch," Dane said, finally feeling the flow of what was going on and getting in on the act. Natalia got up and looked into the camera. She quickly pulled her shirt over her head, exposing her flat little stomach and her pink bra. She dropped her jeans to the floor, exposing her legs and the pink silky thong she was wearing. James: "Oh, big daddy will be proud to see his precious little virgin daughter wearing such slutty underwear!" James said with a laugh. "Dance for us you whore, make this a real strip show." Natalia began to sway back and forth. She sensuously removed her bra, letting her pert little 32B breasts fall forth. All four boys stood there open mouthed, drooling. She then pulled off her thong, leaving her beautiful 5'0" tall naked, tight, tan body in front of everyone. James nodded toward the bed, she went and laid down. She began to rub her hands at her body. She could just look at James and Dane who would nod as she did the right thing and slap their hands together if she did something they didn't like, letting her know if she fucked up they would beat the shit out of her. She rubbed her breasts, licked her fingers, and pinched her nipples, as the boys nodded. They pointed down at her pussy, and she was reluctant. Jamie began to move toward her. She quickly moved her hand down to her pussy and began rubbing her clit. She fingered her clit, slowly at first, then closed her eyes and did it quicker and more furiously. She eyed the camera, wondering what this would look like to someone else's, like her father's, eyes. She was mortified. She felt terrible and worthless...if only she knew what was coming. She grabbed her vibrator off the bed and began to let it buzz on her clit, now plunging her two fingers into her vagina, pounding it in and out. After several minutes, with the boys all mesmerized and extremely aroused, she began to get wet. She couldn't help but start enjoying her masturbation session. This pissed off James. The ides was not for this cunt to get to feel good. She was to be used by them to get them off. This bitch was not to get anything she wanted. At that, he said, "Alright Natalia, now demand that Dane eat you out." Natalia: "Dane, eat my pussy now, I need it and want it...c...come on..." Dane hesitated a moment, and then the raging hormones of a 17 year old boy took their effect. He moved forward and looked down at his naked step-sister. She looked sexy. She looked so young and so much like a little girl, innocent and naïve, but at the same time like a hot sexy beautiful woman. Her long black semi-curly hair falling over her shoulders and her pouty little lips looked so girly and young. But her firm breasts and wet pussy made her look like a hot young slut ready to fuck. Dane moved in and began licking at her clit. Natalia had begun crying again, closing her eyes so she didn't have to look at her step-brother eating her pussy. After several moments, James had had enough. He turned off the camera, figuring that would be enough to incriminate Natalia in the case of her parents finding out about this. He removed his clothing, letting his 6 inch hard prick stand out, ready for sex. James moved forward, and seeing Natalia's eyes closed, jammed his cock into her mouth. "Suck on it bitch," he said, "and play nice, don't do anything to make me have to hit you again." He began thrusting his hard cock into and out of her mouth, with no regard for how much she could take. She was gagging every time he went deep. At the same time, Dane was down on her still eating at her pussy. He had three fingers buried deep in her virgin cunt. He was tired of this shit though. He wasn't getting anything from this. Dane hadn't told the guys, but he was actually a virgin. His dick had never gotten to feel the wonderful feel of a woman's pussy. It was his time. He jumped up, dropped his pants, and brought his 8" cock to his step-sister's tight young pussy. Ray and Trevor stood in awe looking at this scene. James: "What's the problem you two? You two fucking fags or something. You all see each other's cocks in the showers all the time anyway. Don't be scared, jump in here and fuck this bitch." The other two guys began to disrobe as Dane slowly pushed his cock into his sister's pussy. It was so incredibly tight he couldn't believe it. He could hear her muffled screams of pain as she had James's cock rammed deep into her young throat. Inch by inch, Dane forced his cock into her pussy. About three inches in, he could feel a snap, and blood began to seep from her pussy. He just popped his virgin step-sister's cherry, he realized. "Fuck her" he thought, "she deserves this." He rammed the rest of his cock deep into her and began to pound her pussy in the missionary position. James saw her cherry popped and this turned him on even more. "Wow, you really are a fucking virgin aren't you you little whore!" he said, as he grabbed her hair and forced her mouth all the way deep on his dick. He couldn't help but notice her tears covered face. It turned him on so much, this sexy little girl servicing him by force, having her pussy robbed by her own brother. It was too much...James finally began to ejaculate violently into Natalia's throat, letting her taste a man's cum for the first time in her life...but certainly not the last. James pulled back and sat on the floor, trying to recover. Natalia choked and gagged on the cum, spitting some of it up but also swallowing some accidentally. As he lay back to recover, Trevor stood up. Having seen James cum, he was ready to man up and get ready to go. Trevor moved up to take James's spot. Natalia's body was rocking furiously now, as Dane was totally into it, slamming his step-sister's pussy as hard as he could with his cock. He was taking out all of his anger now. Trevor had always been a breast man, so he took some time to kiss and play with Natalia's tits. He bit her nipples and flicked them, sometimes biting them a little too hard so as to make her cry out. By this time she was practically bawling anyway, having her pussy ripped apart by Dane. Finally Trevor got up and forced his cock into her mouth, slamming his 7.5 inches into her mouth and once again causing her to choke, gasping for breath out of her nose whenever she could. Meanwhile, Dane was about to bust. He buried his cock deep inside of her. Slamming in and out, in and out. "Ohhh fuck yeah you little bitch. Now I'm fucking you just like you have always tried to fuck me. Take my cum you little whore! I'm gonna fill you up. Ohhhha...Ahhhh God!" With that, Dane shot load after load of cum directly into his step-sister's virgin, unprotected pussy. He pulled out and practically fell on the floor, tired from his first fuck. Ray: "Alright baby, my turn," he said, getting up and smiling wild, his white teeth shining against his dark black skin. Natalia almost lost consciousness as she saw this big black guy coming at her with his 11 inch cock hanging between his legs. She had experienced so much pain just from her step-brother's 8 inch dick, she didn't know how she could live through this. Ray: "Get up bitch, get on your hands and knees like a good little white...er, Mexican bitch." James and Trevor teamed up to pick Natalia up and put her on her hands and knees. Trevor immediately slammed his dick back into her mouth, not giving her time to talk or cry out. Ray got under her, gave her tits a quick rub and aimed his cock right into her pussy. He pushed all eleven inches right in, forcing his dick as deep in as it would go until he was pressing on her cervix. His big black cock was practically tearing her vaginal lips because he was so thick and her pussy was so tight. Natalia had closed her eyes and was trying to imagine she wasn't there. She felt so dirty, so worthless. These boys were making a whore out of her and she was totally helpless. She didn't think it could get any worse. But it did. James had finally recovered from cumming for the first time. He got up on the bed and positioned himself behind Natalia, who was still on her hands and knees. James: "Hope you like it in the ass bitch. Ha" James said. He had never fucked a girl in the ass. But this was the perfect opportunity, he figured. He pried her ass cheeks apart with this hands. She did have a wonder ass, he had to admit. This girl was pretty damn sexy overall, but her ass was probably her best part. It was so tiny and tight. Yet it was round and womanly at the same time. She was so petite and tiny it seemed impossible that she could even take one cock inside of her, but now she was about to take two. James looked down and saw Ray's impossible huge dick splitting her pussy open. His cock was almost half as wide as her entire ass. James smiled. He spread her ass cheeks farter and put the tip of his cock in her ass. She tightened her asshole at first, but quickly gave in. She was still sobbing as she sucked and licked on Trevor's cock. James pushed inch by inch, into her ass. Finally, he hit his balls on her butt, knowing that he now had all 6 inches buried deep in her rectum. He began thrusting in and out of her ass, in rhythm with Ray's cock going in and out of her pussy. The two were working in good motion. James felt the new sensation of the super tight anus hugging his cock but the relatively loose area inside of her colon. He could also feel Ray's cock filling up her previously virgin pussy. Dane had gotten up and moved to Natalia's mouth, filling up any space left in her mouth with his cock. He looked in the full wall mirror she had and caught a beautiful sight. His little fucking bitch step sister, crying and sobbing uncontrollably, with his cock and Trevor's cock in her mouth, one of her hands on each of their cocks (where they had placed them). He could see Ray underneath her, his hands grabbing and groping her tits, and James on top of her, fucking her ass like a little dog. It was Trevor who came first. He could feel it coming, pulled his dick out, and sprayed all over her face. Ray was next, he shot three loads of his black sperm into Natalia's cunt, then pulled out and sprayed all over her tummy. James pushed his cock balls deep into Natalia's ass. She was going to feel this one, James wanted to be sure of that. With that, James shot his load deep into her ass, coating her colon with his seed. James relaxed and laid on the floor for a moment. The last to shoot was her own sweet step-brother, Dane. Dane pulled out and used her hand to jack him off, until he came all over her face, in her eyes, in her mouth, and down on her neck. Finally, he stepped back. The boys were now all laying or standing around the bed. Natalia lay in bed, sobbing and crying, not knowing what to think or feel. She felt worthless, helpless, and used. Her pussy ached, her ass ached, and she felt very sick to her stomach. She could do nothing but cry. She knew her life would never be the same. In one night she went from being a virgin to a possibly pregnant whore who had fucked four guys, including a black guy. She had had anal, she had blown multiple guys at once. She was a stupid worthless whore. As she lay with her eyes closed she could only think of one thing. At least it was over. But, as she was about to pass out she heard words that made her skin crawl. Jamie: "Dane, go get something we can tie her up with, we have a whole weekend ahead of us after all. And call up Tom and T.J, they'll want in on this. Oh and call Jenny too, she's always wanted to be with a girl too..." To be continued...? If you liked this story or have any thoughts or comments about it, let me know at sexy.one.one@hotmail.com. I like to have comments and thoughts about my writing. If I get enough response I may write a part two, as long as people like it. Thank you for reading I hope you all love it!