Date: Thu, 11 Mar 1999 23:04:24 EST
From: BrianZhane@aol.com
Subject: Brian and Zhane 01

Hey what's up you guys. Here is a story, hope you like it. This story
is not true (Darn!), false, never happen. Keep in mind, this is my first
time writing a story. If the story is not good or good, then e-mail me
or else (BrianZhane@aol.com). If you guys want to talk to me live, then
you may IM me. Sorry for the spelling and everything. I am not very good
with English. 

			Part One of Brian and Zhane
				  By: Le

"Zhane get your butt out here and let's get going," Tony said.

Hi, my name is Zhane. I am about 17 years old, have dark brown hair
and dark blue eyes. I am a bright person. I am shy (don't talk a lot)
and a quiet person.

"Helloooo????" Tony said again.

That's one of my two best friends. He is also 17, but have blond hair
and brown eyes. Tony is like a bro to me but mostly he acts like a bossy
person, kinda like a father.

"We are still waiting!" Brad shouted.

That's my other best friend. He is a year younger, have brown eyes and
hair. Brad is a little bro to me.I met Tony and Brad in 2nd grade. Ever
since then we have been buddies. We were always there for each other.

"What are you doing in there, jacking off?" Tony said sounding
pissed off.

But sometime they can be a pain in the ass.

"I am coming," I said as I exit my room.

"About time," Brad said.

"Sorry," I said.

"You better be," Tony said.

"So where are we going?" Brad asked igroning Tony.

"Let's go to the mall," I said.

"Ok," Brad said.

"You know I was just joking around, right?" Tony ask smiling.

"Of course I knew bucket head," I said while playfully punching
Tony in the arm.

"Ok, Ok, let's get going," Brad said pushing us out of the
door.

When we got out of our house, we got in Brad beat up car.

"Aren't you ever going to get a new car?" Tony ask as he
got in the car.

"What's wrong with this car ?" Brad reply as he start the
engine.

"It is all beat up and old," Tony said.

"Well you are all beat up and old but you are still my best friend,
and anyway this car works fine," Brad said smiling.

"Oh be quiet," Tony said laughing. 

"So what are we going to do at the mall any ways," Brad ask
me.

"Just hang out, I am tired of staying in the house with bucket
head here," I said pointing at Tony.

"Hey, you are very lucky that I hang out with you or your life
would be boring," Tony said.

"Please, give me a break," I said.

"You guys are always fighting like dogs and cats," Brad said
laughing.

"Shut up and drive!" me and Tony said in unison.

"Ok, Ok, don't have a cow," Brad said.

Five minutes later, we arrive at the mall, where thousands of girls
were everywhere.

"Whoa! Look at this place, it is a magnet for girls," Tony
said while checking out some of the chicks.

"Give up Tony, you will never get a date," Brad said.

"Just watch the pro," Tony said jumping out of the cars and
walk up to this blond girl.

About a minute later, the girl slap Tony in the face and shouted "Beat
It Pervert" and then stomped away. Tony then walk back to the car.

"So is that how you get a girl," Brad ask laughing.

"Oh be quiet, she just didn't know you I am," Tony said rubbing
his red face.

"Sure she didn't," Brad start laughing and parked in a parking
spot.

After they parked the car, the three of them walked into the mall. Tony
then said he wanted to get some clothes and Brad said he did too. So we
want to a clothes store. I waited for 15 minutes until I got tired and
hugrey . I told the guys that I be back in 15 minutes while I go buy something
to eat. I want to this hotdog stand.

"Excuse me, how much are the hot dogs?" I ask the guy at the
stand.

"One dollar and fifty cents," the guy reply.

"Can you give me 2 hot dogs and a cup of coke," I said.

"Yes sir, it will be four dollars," the guy said.

I took a five dollar bill and gave it to him which he then gave me my
change and my order. I took my order and turned around and then from no
where I bump into this guy and drop my 2 hot dogs and my drink.

"I am so sorry," the mystery guy said.

"No, it is my fault, I should have watch where I was going,"
I said still looking at my wasted lunch.

"No it wasn't, here let me buy you another lunch, it is the least
I can do," the mystery guy said.

"No really it was my fault," I said.

"I won't take a no for a answer," he said.

I knew I wasn't going to win this agrument, " Ok, Ok," I said
as I look at him. That was when I froze. He had dark brown hair and a cute
face, but the thing that froze me was his blue crysal eyes. I must have
stare at him for a long time because he look at me strangly.

"Are you ok?" he ask smiling.

"Huh, oh sorry," I said looking down and blushing.

"There is nothing to be sorry about, I should be the one saying
sorry," he said still smiling

"Well I forgive you," I said.

"Good, so what's your name?" he ask.

"My name is Zhane," I answer.

"That's a cool name," he said.

"Thanks, so what's your name?" I ask him.

He looked surprise that I ask what was his name was.

"Are you ok?" I ask.

"Huh, oh sorry, it is just that a lot of people know my name, well
anyways my name is Brian," he said.

"Cool," I said.

"Well, come on, let me go buy you the lunch I said I would,"
Brian told me.

"Ok," I said.

We walk back to the stand and he order 5 hot dogs, 2 cokes, and a slice
of pizza. Wow, he sure eat a lot, I said to myself.

Brian heard me and said," Well the 5 hot dogs is for you."

"But I only bought 2 hot dog," I told him.

"Well it is the least I can do," Brian reply.

"You don't have to you know," I said.

"Well then, I want to," Brian said smiling.

"Ok, Ok," I gave up.

"Good, now let's go find a seat," Brian said.

"But I don't even know you," I told him.

He was shock that I said that, but then he quickly recover and said,
"Well let's start knowing each other then." With those words,
he grap me and pull me to a table. We sat down and started to eat our lunch.

"So where are you from," Brain said as he took a bite of his
pizza.

"From Florida," I told him as I took a bite out of my hot
dog.

For the next 15 minutes, we just talked. It was very easy to talk with
Brian. We talk like we known each other for years. I started to relax.
As he talk, I would look into his eyes for only a second then I would have
to turn away or I would stare at him. He looked like someone I saw before.

"Hellooo," Brian said as he wave his hand in front of my eyes
which cause me to come back to reality.

"Sorry, it is just that you look like someone I saw before,"
I told him.

"Well you should," he told me.

"What?" I look at him weird.

"Oh nothing," he said as he looked away.

Oh well I thought to myself. Then we started to talk more for 2 hours
about our families, hobbies, and about everything that you could think
of. I looked at my watch and notice I have talked for about 3 hours.

"Shoot, I forgot all about my friend, um, Brian, I need to go,
it is getting late," I said as I begin to stand up.

"Well can I have your phone number so like maybe we could go somewhere
later," he said as he begin to stand up to.

"Sure, I would like that," I said.

I took a piece of napkin and wrote my phone number down. I gave it to
him and said bye. I rush back to the clothes store where I left Brad and
Tony. I looked all over the store and I still didn't find any of them.
The suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder. I turn around and saw Tony.

"Where have you been!" he shouted at me.

"Keep your voice down, I lost track of time," I said as other
people in the store begin to look up.

"Maybe you lost track of time, but you are going to lose your freedom
if you go wondering off like that again," he shouted again and then
he hit me in the face.

I was shock that he did that, my anger start to rise," Excuse you,
you are not my father you know, we might live together but it does not
mean that I have to listen to you. I am 17 years old, not 4," I shouted
back and I turned around and ran. I didn't care where I was going, all
I care was getting away from Tony.

"Where do you think you are going," Tony shouted as I kept
on running. I then saw Brad, I quickly ran into the restroom because I
didn't want to talk to anybody. I fell onto the floor and started to cry.

"Are you ok?" I heard someone said.

"Leave me alone," I shouted.

"I will not leave you alone until you tell me what is wrong,"
the man said again.

I didn't answer, so the man came to me and pick me up and drag me out
of the restroom and help me sit in a chair.

"I am not going to hurt you, and I will not leave you alone. I
don't like seeing people down," the guy said.

"I just had a fight with one of my best friend," I said as
I started to cry. I told him what happen, he just sat there and listen.

"Have you ever thought why he acted like that?" the guy ask
me.

"Because he is cruel and mean," I said.

"No, maybe because he cares about you," he said.

That was when I felt more down. He was right. Tony was just looking
out for me.

"I should know you know, because that's how I act when one of my
friends goes off like that," he said.

"Oh," was all I could said.

"Why don't you go back to him and apogly," he told me.

"I can't go back to him now, not until tomorrow when he cools down,"
I said.

"Well what are you going to do now?" he ask me.

"I don't know, get a hotel or something," I said as I started
to cry.

The guy started to feel bad for me," I usualy don't do this, but
I kinda feel sad for you, how about you stay with me for the night, I won't
hurt you, I promise," he said.

"No thanks," I said as I kept on crying.

"I won't take a no for a answer," he said.

That sounded so familiar. " Well I guess," I said, if I didn't
feel so bad, I would have never said yes, but I was so tired that I didn't
care if I get raped or killed.

"Good, come on, follow me," he said.

I stood up and follow him. I would sometime trip and fall because I
was tired, but he was there to help me up. We I got out there, I saw a
Limo.

"Whoa," I said.

"What?" he ask me.

"Oh nothing, it is just that I never thought of traveling this
way," I said, still shock.

"Get use to it when you are with me," he said laughing.

I got in the limo with the guy.

"Driver, can you call the other guys that I will be leaving early,"
he told the driver.

"Yes sir," he reply.

The limo started to move.

"So what's your name?" he ask me.

"Zhane," I told him.

"That's a cool name," he said.

"Thanks, so what's your name?" I ask him.

He looked shock that I ask him that, gosh, am I missing something, everybody
is being shock when I ask what their name is.

He quickly recovered, "My name is Kevin."

In five minutes, I was dead tired, I fell a sleep right there. When I woke
up, I notice I was in a hotal room, sleeping in a bed. Then I begin to
become nervous, what happen I thought to myself. Did I get raped or something.
After about 1 minute, I remember what had happen yesterday. I look around
the room and I saw a guy sleeping on the floor. What was his name again,
I try to think, oh yeah, it's Kevin or is it Kent. I was so confuse and
I had his bad head pain. I start to drift off.

The next thing I remember is someone shaking me up and saying Kevin.

"Kevin, Kevin, wake up, it's me," a voice said.

I turned over and then I was surprise. There was Brian.

(To be Continue... Well maybe?) 


Well there is part one. I hope you like it. I know the story is not
good but e-mail me and tell me if you like it or don't like
(BrianZhane@aol.com). 
Remember this is my first time writing a story . If you guys want me to
continue this story then I have to get a least 20 e-mail saying to continue
the story, so I know if this is worth it Thanks for reading! :o)