Date: Mon, 17 Jun 2019 18:02:34 +0200 From: Eric Mabius Subject: Forbidden Chapter 10 PART X: THE VOID! Terry was in shock. He didn't have a clue as to what his daughter's been through or who she really was. `Lizzy, why did you never say anything all these years?' asked Terry. `How could I Dad? How do I tell my own Father that . . . that I really am a pathetic whore? You're normal Dad & I'm not!' said Lizzy not knowing how to feel at that moment. Terry heard these words. It appeared as though he had a lot more in common with his daughter than he realized & neither of them knew each other as well as they thought they did, `Forgive me Dad! I didn't mean to disgrace you with your friend Ben. I . . . I've just always felt this emptiness inside me & nothing I've done in my life has been able to fill it.' said Lizzy `Lizzy . . .' said Terry but before he could say anything else, Lizzy spoke, `If you want me & my family out of your house, I'll understand!' said Lizzy. Terry smiled, `Lizzy, you & your family aren't going anywhere! But I wanna ask, what if Jade was more like you? How would you feel if I was having sex with her?' asked Terry. Lizzy looked a little annoyed, `Dad, I get it, I never should've done those things with Nick! But honestly, if Jade was like me, I would be proud of her, in fact, I would encourage her to live her life the way she wanted. I'd be happy for her, because I know how fulfilling it is to embrace the FORBIDDEN things most people find taboo!' said Lizzy sounding a bit self righteous thinking her Father asked her that question so she would see how shameful this all was, but that was far from the truth. `So if I was having sex with your children, you'd be okay with it?' asked Terry. `If it's what THEY wanted, YES! I wouldn't stop them! EVEN at their young ages, I would stand by them cause I know how pathetic I felt growing up cause I was different & would never want my children feeling a tenth of that!' replied Lizzy, `Why is it so hard for you to understand Dad!' said Lizzy. Terry knew his daughter needed help, clearly she's been missing something in her life since her Mom took her away from him. But just then, both the kids ran back into the house. Before Terry could ask her to stop, Lizzy got up & walked away. `Can you give us a bath Grandpa?' asked Jade as she was so used to him bathing her. Terry sighed as he wished his conversation with Lizzy hadn't ended, `Sure sweetie.' replied Terry. He remembered that he needed to have a talk with Mike so shifted his attention there for now. He got up & ran them a bath. He started with Jade & she was disappointed he didn't join her in the tub. Then he gave her a towel & instructed her to go dry off in her room. That annoyed her even more as she knew he wanted alone time with Mike, but the little girl did as she was told. Mike jumped into the tub & although he didn't show it, the little boy loved feeling his Grandpa's hands on his tiny naked body, `Mikey, why aren't you speaking to me?' asked Terry in his most nurturing voice. `Cause you don't really love me! None of you do, even Dad fucked Jade today & didn't even touch me!' complained Mike. Terry thought for a moment & then replied, `Mikey, who was the first one between you & Jade that made me cum?' asked Terry. Mike's eyebrows lifted as he realized it was him, `Me.' he replied half smiling. `Who's bum did I fuck first?' asked Terry. `Mine.' replied Mike smiling even more `And who's STILL in the tub with me tonight?' asked Terry rubbing Mike's tiny asshole which the boy loved. Mike realized he was alone with his Grandpa, his sister wasn't there. Little Mike looked happy again. `I love you Mike! Just because I haven't fucked you in a couple of days, it doesn't mean I don't love you son!' said Terry. `Do you really mean that Grandpa?' asked Mike. Terry, who was still busy rubbing his left hand middle finger around Mike's ass, pushed his finger into the little boy's bum! Mike jerked & his eyes opened wide as he felt his Grandpa's finger penetrate his asshole! Then Terry put his hand at the back of Mike's neck & pulled his face to his. Mike felt his Grandpa's lips kiss his & happily kissed him back. Once he felt his Grandpa's tongue, he immediately opened lips. Terry slipped his tongue into his Grandson's mouth & they kissed passionately. Feeling his Grandpa finger his asshole while his tongue explored the inside of his mouth reminded little Mike why he loved his Grandfather! The little boy loved how his Grandpa's strong tongue licked & caressed his. He closed his eyes as they kissed for a moment. Terry pulled his lips from Mike's but left his finger inside the little boy's ass! `Now do you believe me when I said I love you?' asked Terry. Mike blushed, his Grandfather made him feel special again! Terry pulled his finger out of Mike's bum & finished bathing him. The little boy felt content believing he was loved after all! Later that evening . . . It was around 11h:00 PM & Terry walked through the house. He walked passed the kids room & heard them tossing & turning in bed. As he walked past Lizzy's room, he heard noises that intrigued him. The door was ajar, so he looked in. Lizzy was lying in bed on her stomach wearing her one-piece night dress that came to just below her bum cheeks. Terry looked closer & realized that she was fingering herself in bed! Terry's cock immediately started getting hard. Now Lizzy was a brunette with 34B breasts & a good size ass with excellent curves. She was exceptionally beautiful & to give you an idea, Ben's Diner got a lot more busy after she was employed! As a result, Terry couldn't help but feel this attraction to her since she returned home, but he never acted on it. Just then, Lizzy pulled her fingers out of her pussy, kicked off the blanket & reached behind with her right hand. She lifted her night dress & her fingers found her asshole. She stuffed 2 fingers into her ass as deep as she could. `Fuucccckkk!' moaned Lizzy loving the feeling of having something penetrate her ass. Terry watched as his Daughter struggled to finger herself, but as she was desperate, so she made do. Lizzy was incredibly horny as Cathy cut her session short with Ben earlier! She desperately needed to cum. She closed her eyes & fantasized as she always did when she played with herself. Terry watched as his Daughter's fingers moved deeper into her own ass. The sight of Lizzy fingering herself & her beautiful curvy ass on full display, made Terry's cock even harder, `OH DADDY!' moaned Lizzy. Terry's eyes opened wide! He was shocked when he heard his Daughter call his name while she fingered herself. She was pretending it was him in her ass! It seemed as though he wasn't the only one with the attraction! Hearing that, he decided what he would do . . . After taking off his clothes, Terry opened the door as quietly as he could. The extra light that entered the room didn't register with Lizzy as her eyes were closed. He walked in & stood behind her at the foot of the bed. He took a breath & then climbed on the bed on his knees. SHOCKED, Lizzy pulled her fingers out of her ass & turned her head. Lizzy was even more shocked when she realized her Father was on top of her! He was on his knees with one leg on either side of her bum. Her night dress was raised to waist, which meant she was laying on the bed bottomless! As she stared at her naked Father, she was speechless. Then, he lowered his upper body, put his hands down onto the bed on either side of Lizzy's head & was now on all fours. Terry's bottomless Daughter was lying on her stomach in between his legs & Lizzy could feel the tip of his hard cock touching her soft bum cheeks! Lizzy was in shock! She didn't move or say anything. Terry smiled at her as she stared at him. Then he reached down & slipped his right hand in between her legs & slipped them apart. Although she was in shock, Lizzy knew she wanted this! She turned forward & laid her head on her pillow on her right cheek & waited with baited breath for her Father to have his way with her body! She wondered if she was dreaming, can this be real, she wondered. She was just fantasizing about this & now it was actually happening. Before she had any more time to process, she felt the head of her Father's cock push it's way in between her bum cheeks until it found the entrance to her ass. Knowing her Dad's cock pressed against the entrance to her bum hole sent shivers through her body! Just then, Lizzy felt HER FATHER'S COCK PENETRATE HER ASS for the first time! `OH MY GOD! DADDY!' moaned Lizzy. Terry stuffed 4 inches of his cock into his Daughter's incredible ass. He pulled back & then thrust back into her bum again, `OH FUUUUCK!' moaned Lizzy in such intense pleasure. She moaned so loud that it was almost a scream. Terry couldn't believe he'd just inserted his cock into his Daughter's ass! It was tight, but nowhere near as tight as the Grandchildren's! He'd managed to get 7 inches of his cock inside Lizzy's ass at this point. He pulled back again, took a breath & then RAMMED his cock back inside her! Her entire body jerked, `OOHHH YES! FUCK, DADDY!' moaned Lizzy loudly again. She felt her Father's balls press against her bum cheeks & knew he was balls deep inside her. Just then, she felt tears roll down her cheeks & onto the pillow. Lizzy wiped her eyes & was confused. She wasn't in pain, if anything, her Father's cock in her ass felt amazing! Then she realized that these were happy tears. Could this be what she craved her entire life? Her Mother took her away from her Father when she was so young & she yearned for his love so badly that she latched onto anything that resembled it! Could this be what FINALLY FILLS THE VOID inside her? Terry pulled back & then thrust into Lizzy again! Her body jerked as she moaned in pleasure. He pulled back & thrust into her even harder, her hands gripping the pillow tight as the incredible sensations inside her ass drove her crazy! Her Father pulled back & then thrust in again & again & then started a hard steady rhythm! `HARDER DADDY! FUCK ME HARDER!' cried Lizzy. Terry happily obliged & fucked his Daughter's ass HARD, his balls slapping against her bum cheeks each time he thrust into her. It was different fucking a woman's ass after he'd been fucking the children's small asses over the last few days! Feeling her bum cheeks against his waist while he fucked her ass was incredible & something he didn't realize he missed with Mike & Jade! Lizzy lifted her bum up & Terry felt his cock penetrate his Daughter even deeper! It was incredible as he thought he was as deep as he could go. Like her Daughter Jade, who came for the first time today from being fucked in the ass, Lizzy wanted her Father's cock to stimulate that magical spot inside her bum! His cock was already hitting it, but by lifting her bum, Lizzy hoped his cock would bang it harder, and it did! While Terry fucked his Daughter for the first time, he noticed 2 figures peeking from the doorway. He looked closer & saw that it was Jade & Mike. They were watching their Grandfather fuck their Mother's ass. Terry turned back to Lizzy, `Lizzy!' called Terry as he slowed down, `Yes Daddy!' replied Lizzy. `Did you mean EVERYTHING you said earlier?' asked Terry. `Of course I did Dad! Every word!' replied Lizzy thinking he was looking for re-assurance for what he was doing to her. Terry stopped fucking her ass to Lizzy's disappointment. She turned her head around & looked at her Father, `What's wrong Dad? Why'd you stop?' she asked. `Because, and I don't want you to freak out, but the kids are watching us from the doorway!' replied Terry. Lizzy immediately looked at the doorway & Jade & Mike were watching from the corner. They knew they were caught out & stepped into the light looking guilty, `Dad. . .' said Lizzy sounding freaked. `I said don't freak out! Lizzy, do you trust me?' asked Terry. Lizzy's heart was beating so fast. She was lying in bed bottomless while her Father fucked her ass & her children were watching! `Daddy . . .' said Lizzy confused & Terry interrupted her again, `Honey, DO YOU TRUST ME?' he asked once more, Lizzy paused. She looked at her Father's face & took a breath, `I trust you!' replied Lizzy. `Then do exactly what I say! Turn around & lie on your back.' instructed Terry. `Kids, come inside!' instructed Terry as he pulled his cock out of his Daughter's ass. Lizzy nervously turned her body around as her children watched. Terry got off the bed & stood at the foot of the bed once more. `Grandpa, are we gonna get to play with you & Mommy?' asked Jade. Lizzy looked at Jade shocked. She spoke as if she's done this before. She looked at her Father & wondered what the hell was going on, `Yes honey,' replied Terry to Jade, `now take off your clothes kids!' instructed Terry. Lizzy watched her kids take their clothes off & once they were naked, she saw their bodies in a whole new light. `Now help Mommy take off her night dress!' instructed Terry. Both kids looked at each other excited & then went to their Mom. Lizzy was speechless as her naked children lifted her night dress over her head. They admired their Mom's beautiful 34B breasts & giggled in excitement, `Lizzy, sit up & open your legs as wide as you can honey!' instructed Terry. Lizzy looked at her Father wide eyed, `Lizzy! Open them!' Instructed Terry once more in a more authoritative tone! Lizzy gulped & then slowly sat up & opened her legs as wide as she could. She looked at her children who moved back to get a bird's eye view of their Mom's pussy. `Jade, Mike, lie in between your Mom's legs on your stomach's & make sure your faces are as close to her pussy as possible.' instructed Terry. This was all so much for Lizzy, her chest rose up & down fast from breathing hard. The kids jumped onto the bed & laid on their bellies, an inch away from their Mom's wet cunt! They smiled, inspecting Lizzy's pussy for the first time. Terry then walked to the head-side of the bed. He climbed onto the bed next to Lizzy's head on his knees & ensured his cock was an inch away from her face on her left. Lizzy looked up at her Father, the poor girl looked so lost at what was happening. Terry simply smiled at her & then looked at the children in between her legs, `Kids,' said Terry & they looked up at their Grandfather, `Eat it!' he instructed! `Eat it?' asked Mike. `Uh huh! Eat your Mother's pussy!' he instructed. Lizzy's heart pounded as the children looked at their Mom's pussy excited! Both kids opened their mouths & licked their Mother's pussy simultaneously, `OH FUUUUCK!' moaned Lizzy as she felt her 9 year old son's & 10 year old Daughter's tongue on her pussy & clit. It was the softest, tiniest tongues she'd ever felt on her pussy. They seemed to be battling for space, each of them trying to suck more of her pussy than the other. The children tasted their Mom's pussy for the first time. Jade thought her Mom's pussy juices tasted so much like her Grandpa's cum! Mike, on the other hand thought it was a lot sweeter & found it more delicious! They pushed their tongues into Lizzy's cunt & whilst their tongues were small enough to both fit, their faces battled for the best position for their tongues to insert! Her pussy was so soft & squishy inside, it was nothing like sucking cock, but they liked it! Their tongues inadvertently licked each other's inside their Mom & they found themselves tasting each other along with Lizzy' cunt! Terry admired his Grandson & Granddaughter's flat naked bodies laying side by side on the bed with their heads buried into their Mother's pussy! Their small little bum's looked incredible, wiggling while battling for more & more of their Mother's sweet cunt! He turned his attention back to his Daughter & climbed over Lizzy, one leg on either side of her chest on his knees. Lizzy was once again in between her Father's legs. She looked at his 8 inch cock directly in front of her face, pre-cum stained on the tip. Unable to resist, she opened her mouth & swallowed it, tasting his pre-cum & drinking it for the first time! Terry pushed Lizzy's head back so that the back of her head was against the head-board & grabbed her head with both his hands. At this point, just the head of his cock was inside Lizzy's mouth & she had a suspicion of what her Father wanted to do to her & was all for it! He pulled his cock back & then shoved, with a bit of force, into his Daughter's mouth. Lizzy's body jerked as her Father's cock hit the back of her throat! Forcing his cock into her throat was such a turn-on for Lizzy that her pussy gushed. Her children immediately tasted it & were delighted to be getting more of their Mom's pussy juices to drink! Terry had 5 inches of his cock inside his Daughter's mouth as it pressed against the back of her throat. He pulled back about 3 inches & then while looking at her face, RAMMED his cock back into her mouth HARD! Lizzy's body jerked once more as she opened her mouth as wide as she could. Her Father's cock entered her throat & pushed into it. Lizzy's eyes opened wide having not felt a man's cock in her throat in years! She stuck out her tongue as far as she could trying desperately to accommodate his cock all the way down her throat. Her throat squeezed Terry's cock almost as tightly as her children's did! Lizzy couldn't breathe as her Father's cock was 7 inches deep, but she didn't mind though & actually wanted the rest of it! The children looked up & could see their Mom's throat through their Grandfather's spread legs. It swelled with their Grandpa's cock inside it! They both knew how that felt & if they weren't eating their Mom's pussy, they would've been so jealous! Terry pulled back & this time removed his cock completely from his Daughter's throat! As soon as he did, Lizzy exhaled & took a deep breath. She swallowed the saliva in her mouth & looked up at her Father, catching her breath. Her face had tell tale signs of the wonderful sensations she was feeling inside her pussy, courtesy of her children's tongues. Terry smiled & then inserted his cock back to her mouth. Lizzy immediately swallowed it & took his cock straight back into her throat. `FUCK YEAH!' moaned Terry as he felt his cock enter his Daughter's throat once more. 6 inches of Terry's cock was buried inside Lizzy's mouth & throat. Then, he pulled back about 3 inches. Lizzy braced herself & her Father RAMMED his cock back into her mouth. Lizzy's body jerked once more as she felt her Father's entire 8 inch cock fill her mouth & throat! Feeling her Father's balls against her chin was fucking incredible! She held onto his waist, once again unable to breathe! Her Father's hands held her head as her nose pressed against his crotch! Terry was in heaven! Being balls deep inside his own Daughter's mouth was fucking amazing! He looked behind & saw the kids still eating their Mom's pussy, they looked like they couldn't get enough of it! He turned back to Lizzy, her throat squeezed his hard cock tight, stimulating it beautifully! He enjoyed how nice it felt for another moment & then slowly pulled his cock out of her throat. Lizzy felt the head of her Dad's cock slowly slip out of her throat. Once it was just in her mouth, she was able to breathe through her nose & took in as much air as she could. Terry let her take in a bit of air & then RAMMED his cock back into her! His balls hit her chin again as Lizzy jerked! He pulled back & then RAMMED in again, then back, and in again! Terry settled into a slow HARD rhythm, his cock sinking balls deep into Lizzy each time he thrust into her throat. The children watched their Grandfather's ass move back & forth & realized that he was actually fucking their Mother's mouth! Their Mom clearly liked it because her pussy was wetter than ever! They both were insanely curious how it felt & couldn't wait for their Grandfather to Face-Fuck them! Lizzy felt her Dad's cock ram into her throat over & over HARD! It hurt, but she LOVED being Face-Fucked! The last person to Face-Fuck her was Mitchell in High School! She wanted her husband to do it, but he was never game for that! She felt her body start to tense up, which actually disappointed her! She didn't want to cum so quickly, but the knowledge that it was her 61 year old Father's cock fucking her throat while her 9 & 10 year old children ate out her wet cunt made her insane. The intense pleasure of it all was too much for her! The children felt their Mother's pussy get tight. They realized she was about to cum & where insanely curious what happens inside a woman's pussy while she came! They licked & sucked her pussy with more intensity, waiting in anticipation to feel when their Mother orgasmed! Terry realized what was going on as well & it made his balls heavy. He was close to cumin as well & just then, Lizzy couldn't take anymore . . . Lizzy's entire body stiffened! She reached between her Father's legs, grabbed the back of her children's heads & pushed their faces hard into her pussy! The kids couldn't breathe because of how hard their Mother pushed their faces into her cunt! It wasn't more than 3 seconds later when Lizzy EXPLODED into an intense orgasm! She lost control & started rubbing her pussy up & down, smearing her pussy juice all over Mike & Jade's faces! Her Father continued fucking her face HARD! Terry saw his Daughter press the children's faces into her cunt & lather their faces with her pussy juice! It was so erotic that he felt his balls start to rise. Lizzy's body began jerking as she came over & over again! The children still couldn't breathe, but were fine for now! Terry fucked her mouth HARD & knew he was going to cum at any moment. Just then he felt his Daughter's hands return to his waist. He looked back at his Grandchildren & they were lying sideways on the bed panting. Their entire faces were wet from their Mom's pussy! Lizzy's orgasm was over & she turned her attention back to her Father. Just in time too as Terry pulled his cock out of her throat, but left it in her mouth, `HERE IT COMES HONEY! HERE . . . IT . . . CUUUMMMMSS!' moaned Terry as he felt his cock explode. Lizzy felt her Father's cum fill her mouth! It was the most delicious thing she'd ever tasted! She felt her Dad's body jerk over & over, Lizzy still unable to believe that it was her Father emptying his balls into her mouth! The children watched enviously as their Grandpa came in their Mother's mouth, they wished they could've gotten at least a taste of it! Terry was enjoying his cum so much, he forgot something! But in the middle of emptying his load into Lizzy, he suddenly remembered, `DON'T SWALLOW!' said Terry. Lizzy was surprised, but listened. Luckily, she hadn't swallowed any cum as yet, but had her Dad told her a few seconds later, he would've been too late! Terry must've cum for at least 15 seconds before his body finally started to relax. He looked down & could feel his cock immersed in his own cum inside his Daughter's mouth. He let go of Lizzy's head & slowly pulled his cock back. Lizzy held her lips tight around the shaft of his cock, not wanting any cum to spill out. Terry's cock slipped out of Lizzy's mouth & he climbed off the bed. Mike & Jade were sitting on their knees in front of their Mother. Lizzy was dying to drink all of her Dad's delicious cum, but waited for him as he asked her not to swallow. Terry took Lizzy's hands & lifted her up. She was still on the bed, but now on her knees with her body straight up. Her mouth was still closed, filled to the brim with her Father's cum, `Lizzy, feed some of my cum to the kids!' instructed Terry. Both children's faces lit up, but Lizzy looked disappointed. Terry saw her disappointment, `Lizzy, don't be selfish now!' said Terry. Lizzy dropped her shoulders & then turned to the kids. But then she saw their excited faces & she felt guilty about not wanting to share her Father's cum with her children. She was surprised that Mike, a boy, was so happy to drink cum. Curious if her son was into men like her or Jade, she pointed to him first. The little boy immediately rushed to his Mother. Lizzy then positioned her face directly over her son's as Mike turned his face up. Mike opened his mouth as wide as he could. Lizzy then opened her lips slowly. Terry & Jade watched as cum dripped from Lizzy's mouth directly into her son's. Mike tasted his Grandfather's delicious cum, mixed with his Mother's saliva, enter his mouth! It was so warm & just as delicious as his Mother's pussy! Mike made sure no cum went anywhere else but inside his mouth. Once Lizzy had given her son a decent share of her Father's cum, she closed her lips. Seeing his happy face, she knew her son liked men, cock & cum! Mike closed his mouth & swallowed the delicious treat his Mother just gave him, but was immediately disappointed that he wasn't going to get anymore `Move Mike, it's my turn!' complained Jade. Mike gave his sister an annoyed look & then moved out the way. Jade moved her naked body below her Mother's head & opened her mouth as wide as her brother did! Lizzy was taken with how much her children loved cum, they were more like her than she realized. Lizzy opened her lips & cum dripped out of mouth once more, this time filling her Daughter's mouth! Jade tasted her Grandpa's familiar cum as it filled her mouth. She was grateful as she thought they weren't going to get any after their Grandfather came directly into her Mom's mouth. Lizzy gave her a load about equal to what Mike got & then closed her lips. Jade closed her mouth, and like her brother, immediately swallowed! At the same time, Lizzy gulped, swallowing her share of Terry's cum too! She felts her Father's cum slowly flow down her throat & it was the most satisfying thing she'd ever drank! She gulped again, making sure every last drop was sent down to her belly. Jade hadn't moved & watched her Mother swallow her Grandpa's cum. Lizzy had her eyes closed while she swallowed & when she opened them, was pleasantly surprised to see her Daughter looking up at her. Lizzy smiled & wasn't really sure what came over her, but she lowered her face to her Daughter's. Jade saw her Mother's face draw closer to hers & felt nervous butterflies in her stomach! Their lips touched & Mother & Daughter kissed. The little girl opened her lips & felt her Mother's tongue enter her mouth for the first time in her life! Terry nearly fell over when he saw Lizzy slide her tongue into her 10 year old Daughter! He'd never witnessed a Lesbian kiss up live & this was both a Lesbian & Incestuous kiss at the same time! Lizzy licked & sucked the inside of her Daughter's mouth, their tongues caressing gently! They both tasted Terry's cum on their tongues which made the kiss that much more electric! Mike looked at his sister enviously. Then he realized something, his Grandpa's cock was still messed with cum residue. He quickly jumped off the bed & got on his knees in front of his Grandfather. The little boy grabbed his cock & swallowed it! Terry jerked not expecting that, but liking it nevertheless! Little Mike licked & sucked the head of his Grandpa's cock, the strong taste of his cum was all over it, which the little boy thoroughly enjoyed! Lizzy & Jade's lips parted, the little girl loving how incredible her first kiss with her Mother was. She looked over at her Grandfather & was surprised to see her little brother sucking his cock. She suddenly realized there was still a bit of cum on it, `HEY, NO FAIR! Howcome Mike gets to have the cum on Grandpa's cock?' complained Jade. Lizzy looked at her son, still surprised her little boy was into cock. Mike pulled his Grandfather's cock out of his mouth, `You snooze, you loose sis!' boasted the little boy as he swallowed his Grandfather's cock once more. Jade pulled her face, crossed her arms & dropped her shoulders! Lizzy looked around the room, was all this actually happening? Her 9 year old son was sucking her 61 year old Father's cock after drinking his cum that she fed him from her own mouth! She just kissed her 10 year old Daughter after feeding her cum as well! And her Dad had just fucked both her face AND HER ASS! She sat back & looked up at her Father `Dad!' called Lizzy. Terry smiled, his cock was semi-hard from little Mike blowing him, `I know, we should talk sweetie!' he replied smiling. Just then, 'DAD! LIZ!' came a voice from the bedroom door. Terry, Lizzy, Jade & Mike all turned to the door in horror. James, Terry's 24 year old son, Lizzy's younger brother, stood at the doorway, a suitcase in hand & his face in complete SHOCK! Thanks for reading. I didn't receive alot of positive feedback for Chapter 9. I assume it was because a central character was cut (The Father). His controlling influence may have interfered with one of the children's next choices, hence his temporary omission. Your comments motivate me to write more & I appreciate both negative and positive comments. If an aspect of my story does not appeal to you, tell me what you didn't like, your feedback always helps. As always, you can find me at EricMabius123@gmail.com