Date: Tue, 28 Mar 2000 18:17:41 EST From: Cnjshore9@aol.com Subject: Chapter 3 of "Just Being Neighborly" WARNING! This story contains graphic depictions of sexual activity between consenting adult males. If you are offended by such material, read no further. Also, if you are under legal age, in a state or community where such material is prohibited by law, or there is any other reason you shouldn't be reading this.. Don't! This is my first attempt at writing one of these stories. Afer having read a number of them from the Nifty Archives, I decided to try my talents at becoming more active in the world of fantasy, and, believe me, it is really quite exciting to see your `innermost secrets' on the printed page. Oh yes, I should also tell you that this is a work of fiction and imagination and any resemblance to any real life persons or events is purely coincidental, etc. etc. etc... I would appreciate any feedback you wish to give (thanks to those of you who have already responded about Chapters 1 and 2), and will try to take heed of any constructive criticisms. Flames will be extinguished! Just Being Neighborly. Chapter 3 It had been a couple weeks since my visit across the street to what I now think of as "the Chuck wagon. and its Texas- sized tube steaks". Now believe me, I've lived in Texas - - and nothing there was any bigger or better than what I've been finding here! Especially, at the Chuck wagon!! I have really thought of nothing else since that incredible "Day-1". It's been replayed over and over in my mind and has been the source of many, many fantasies and jerk sessions. Damn! I could use another pass at that game! I've just kept hoping. It was about 11am on a Saturday, and I had gone outside to pick up some trash from my yard out by the street. My wife had gone to the hairdresser for a perm and would be gone for a couple hours, so I was just looking forward to doing "all those little things that need to get done". As I stepped out into the street to pick up a piece of old newspaper that must have blown down from up the block, I looked up into the grill of a silver grey SUV just before it turned into the driveway beside Chuck's truck. I knew that vehicle! It had been parked in the same spot two weeks before, when I `stumbled' into the hottest crew of dudes I had ever had the great fortune to discover. Sure enough, the driver-side door opened; and, before I could see anyone, I heard a familiar voice saying: "Boy! You looked like a deer in the headlights, guy!! Honest.. I wouldn't have hit you..although I do like you when you're lying down." "Oh, hi, Rick.. You'll have to excuse me while I go in and clean out my shorts!! Where the hell did you learn how to drive?! New York?" As he walked into the street toward me, my eyes were busy. Actually, it was the first time I had seen him with clothes on. and it wasn't a bad sight at all. One might say he looked downright good-enough-to-eat when he didn't have them on. But this way my imagination was starting to work overtime at the thought of getting them off him. He was dressed almost identically to me, in sweat pants, sneakers, and a sweatshirt with the sleeves cut off - - except the neck of his shirt was slit down the front so you could see the mat of light blonde hair in the "V" that was formed there. Altogether, it was a really nice sight! I couldn't make out much behind the front seam of those sweat pants. So often there is a very visible shape. This time, though, it wasn't so apparent, but there was definitely something in there. .and from what I remembered, what I could see, really didn't do justice to what was in there. "So, what's up, Peter? Been back over to see Chuck lately?" "No. I've been running around for the past couple weeks like the proverbial chicken-without-a-head, and haven't been able to cook up any good reason to go over and spend any time. Believe me, I wish I had been able to. Where have you been?" "Same thing. Just been too busy to get back over here." Looking over to my driveway, he asked: "Where is the big one?" "Oh, that's my wife's car. She has it out getting her hair done." "Gonna be gone long?" "A couple of hours. Would you want to come in for a minute or two..??" "Sure. Let's go. " Looking over to the right, where the [nosey] neighbor was usually standing at the window over her sink, I noticed her car was also gone - so that coast was clear too. "C'mon," I said, and turned and headed for the front door to my house. As I did, my eye caught a movement in Chuck's kitchen window, so I turned back slightly, and gave a quick wave. As I did, the curtain pulled back and I saw Chuck give me a thumbs-up sign. "Wonder if he'll come over too?" I thought to myself. As I entered the house, I went straight on through the living room to the kitchen so I could drop the trash I had picked up from the yard and street into the garbage can there. I reached out and bent over to drop it through the flip-lid. As I did, I felt two hands reach around and grab the tops of my legs. Then I felt something warm press against my bum.something warm.and with a hard rod that was pushing at the crack between my cheeks. "Shit! You don't waste any time, do you?" I said, looking around over my shoulder. "You said `.a minute or two.' and no, I don't waste time when there's an ass around that's as good and hot as the one on you!" he smiled back at me. "Well, let's not dally with those useless formalities - - like a little foreplay," I laughed, "Let's just get right on down to the brass tacks!!!" I turned slowly so that I could feel his now rock-hard manhood as it moved across my buttox and thigh and came to rest against my stomach just above my own super-sensitive rod. "Mmmm. Maybe it's not tacks we're getting down to. Seems more like a railroad spike to me." Then I reached my hand up under his sweat shirt and rubbed it across that delightful chest with its soft covering of fine blonde hair, finally coming to rest with my fingers on his left nipple. I could feel it already beginning to respond and it only took about three seconds for it to be as hard as that other engorged item farther down below. I slipped my other hand up to the bottom of his shirt and started to lift it up, letting go of his nipple with my left hand and using it to help raise the shirt up and over his head. There I was, face-to-chest with my lips buried into the space between two beautiful pecs. I turned and moved my head and mouth over to that hardened nipple and licked it. Then I began to suck on it lightly, moaning slightly at the pleasure of it all. That must have triggered a response, because all of a sudden I heard an echo to my own moan, and I felt his arms reach around and pull me tighter against him. I nibbled momentarily on the delicious nip in my mouth and then moved over to the other side and used my tongue and lips to bring the other one into play. As I enjoyed the one with my mouth, I moved my right hand over the other and pinched on it to keep it sensitized and erect. Working the two together, I felt a shiver quake through his entire body and his knees bent as though they were about to buckle. "Oh, damn! You are sooooo good and so hot! You've got my whole fucking body on edge!" We were standing near the door to the hall, so I backed him over through the door and onto the carpeting off the kitchen tile. The last time we were together, across at Chuck's, he had been in total control of the events. This time, I wanted to take the upper hand.at least for the beginning. I edged him back another 4 or 5 feet until we were beside the bathroom door and then I softly said, "just lie back down" and with only a slight interruption we got down onto the floor. I reached through the bathroom door and grabbed a couple large towels off the rack to use as pillows, putting one behind his head, and leaving the other one lying against the wall beside us. All the while, my lips were working up and across his chest, onto his neck, and finally onto his lips. As we started to kiss, his mouth opened for me and my tongue darted in, only to be met by his own in a sensuous tangle. I pulled my tongue from his lips and moved my head so I could kiss and tongue him just under his left ear and down the side of his neck . Damn! I couldn't get enough of that hot, young stud!!! I wanted to devour him!! Enough!!! I pulled back and knelt over him with my knees on each side of his hips. Reaching down, I grabbed his sweat shirt and pulled it the rest of the way up and off over his head. I leaned back, reaching around behind me, and grabbed and pulled both his sneakers off his feet, then lifted up, reached behind me again, grabbed the top of his sweat pants along with the waistband of his briefs and pulled/pushed them down. He lifted his butt slightly and bent his knees to allow me to pull them all the way down and then off. So, there he was now. under me. with nothing on but a smile and one helluva hard-on!!!!! Once again I was looking down at that bluish-red, strawberry head, glistening in the light coming in through the hallway door. It had that wonderful shiny, smooth-slick appearance that is only found on one that hasn't had its foreskin removed and been allowed to dry out. Now if they want to try cloning something worthwhile.. Just clone that cock of his - - so I can have one in each end. It's just begging to be eaten! .but I also want to feel it deep inside me from the other end. This is the eternal dilemma of a horny, cock-sucker and bottom!!! Not wanting to waste any more time, I stood up, and ,still straddling his thighs, I pulled my own shirt off over my head. Then, lifting first the left and then the right leg, I pulled my sweats and shorts off, taking a sneaker along with each pants leg. This done, I turned around and knelt over him so that I was looking directly into the piss slit of his lusting manhood. Reaching up with my right hand, I enveloped the shaft just below the head and pulled on it. As I did, the foreskin rolled slowly forward, moving over the shiny, slick head, and kicking my own lust into overdrive. A pearl of pre-cum formed and glistened at the slit, but I fought off the immediate urge to taste it with the tip of my tongue. Instead, I continued to pull it slowly forward until the skin met and closed over the end. Only when it had formed that ingenious pucker, carrying the bead of shiny liquid with it, did I lick out and take my taste of it. Slowly, I changed direction and pushed away with my hand. The skin began to move backward, opened and parted over the tip, and continued to smoothly glide back over the wide part of the head. Then with a slight `pop', it dropped behind the rim. I quickly leaned forward just enough to envelop the head with my lips and run my tongue around it. Then I backed off and pulled the skin forward again. This time, just as it was almost about to close over the tip, I moved forward, slipped my tongue under the edge, and ran it around and around the head underneath the protecting skin. I don't know what it is, but that to me is about the most incredibly sexy thing I can think of. I could taste the sweet saltiness of his pre-cum honey. Then I pulled my tongue back, closed my lips down tight, and pushed forward with my mouth, sending his throbbing rod deep into the back of my mouth and freeing the head of its covering so that I could again go at it with the rough tip of my tongue. It must have had an effect, because Rick lifted his butt off the floor and growled, "Oh, shit!!! OOOOooooh, god that feels good! Suck that cock, Babe! Get it in all the way!! Give that head!!! Suck it! Suck it!!!" He reached up and grabbed my butt from both sides and pushed it up while pulling back to position me over his own hot mouth. I felt his breath on the skin right behind my balls. Then I felt a warm, wet tongue wash over the back side of my scrotum, coming to rest at one side. Then I felt the slight suction and warmth as he pulled the right orb into his mouth and began to wash it with his tongue. I pushed back to make it more available to him, but without losing my own grip on his joy stick. I was going to get as much joy out that thing as I could! I pulled back from him for a moment and again used my hand to push the skin over then back off the strawberry helmet. I did this several times, watching closely as the skin moved to cover then release the shiny, blue-pink glans. Damn! That's enough to drive me over the edge! Just watching that happen. But I still wanted to taste it more, so back onto it I went. This time bobbing my head and my hand in matched rhythm; stopping just long enough at the top each time to run my tongue under the skin and run it around the base of the head with a quick stop and rub on the `v'. With my left hand, I reached forward behind his balls, lifting, and squeezing them. What a nice handfull! Firm but so silky soft and pliant. "Yes, sir, there Mr.Balls, you're gonna give me every bit of what you're holding!!" I thought to myself. Suddenly he began to twist under me and bounce his hips in cadence with me. Rising to meet each of my downward, enveloping moves. "OOOOoooh! OOOOoohh! UUUuummmm! Nnnngggg! OOOoooh!" Our speed was picking up, and he had released my right ball from his mouth. Now he had grabbed my straining cock with his hand and started to jack me in time to the movement of my lips on his own love muscle. I knew he was close. I could feel his spunkers begin to lift inside their skin container and draw up closer to the bottom of the now almost vibrating shaft. Then I felt every fiber in his body jolt with a spark, as though he had just grabbed a live wire, and prepared to get my reward. And there it came.. And came.. And came. As it started, he began to make growling sounds and moans that there is no way to spell on paper, but I knew what it was!! I felt the head swell to the point that I though it would explode off the end of the shaft. Then it seemed to do just that! Well, the head stayed in place, .but it sure as hell exploded - - with enough jism to feed fifteen cum junkies. Hard as I tried, there was no way I could swallow everything that was jetting out of that superheated cannoli. Cum was running back out both sides of my mouth and dropping onto his pubic patch and the balls below. Quickly I grabbed the other towel I had pulled down, and shoved it under his thighs and butt to keep it from dripping on down into the carpet, but never missed a beat with my mouth and lips. Slowly I felt him dropping his butt back down to the floor and I felt the muscles on the top of his thighs begin relax and settle down. I continued to suck the last of the juice from his reservoir and felt his cock begin to loose some of the rigidness of before. I lifted my head and then let it drop down to his stomach and began to lick up what had overflowed before. This was some weekend brunch!!! Then I noticed that I wasn't as excited and rarin' to go as I was before.. In fact, I felt pretty mellow myself. That's when I looked down and saw the ropes of cum striping Rick's chest and stomach. I had been so into the incredible fireworks display between his thighs that I hadn't even noticed my own orgasm, but there it was for all to see. He was the first to recover enough to speak. "Holy shit! What the hell did you do!?! I don't think I ever shot like that before. That was fucking incredible!!" "To quote my favorite saying.'A man does best that which he likes to do.'" I smiled and turned around over him so that my face was again above his. I lowered myself onto him and felt the slick coolness of my own cum that had been spewed out over him. Slowly, I rubbed my pubic area and cock against his. Just a slow easy rub, back-and-forth, up-and-down. The slick cum made us slide easily against each other. Then I leaned down again and planted my mouth on his. This time he opened his lips and pushed against mine with his tongue. I allowed him to enter and he put his hands behind my head and pulled me even tighter against his lips, moving his head to grind himself into me. About 10 seconds of that and I could feel us both coming to life again down below our navels. "Now.," he started, "are you going to let me fuck that super ass you showed me last time?" "Yes. Now I'm going to let you have that ass - - so I can have that mean muscle do its thing all over my insides. I want to feel you in there deep enough to make me gurgle when I try to talk. I want you to shoot a gallon of hot cum in there and let me feel every drop and every squirt. Then I want you to do it until you run absolutely dry!! Okay?" "It'll be my - no --our pleasure." Just then I thought I heard the sounds of footsteps coming onto the front deck. "Holy shit!" I thought, "She's home early. "how am I going to explain Rick being in here?. and what about our clothes?" Then there was a rap on the glass of the front door. "Oh, thank god it's not her. she wouldn't knock.but who the hell could it be?" I leaned over to the door into the living room and could see a large shadow through the curtains. Then it finally registered.it was Chuck. But what was he doing here? I went over to the door and opened it slightly (so I was still hidden behind it . wouldn't want any neighbor walking by and seeing me standing there naked with a hard-on.). "Hi, Chuck, get lonely over there?" "I was just sitting over there thinking about what was probably going on over here, and decided maybe I ought to join the fun -- assuming there is some `fun' going on. So, what's up here?" "You're right about the `fun', and there was just about to be some more of it. Hey, Rick, mind if Chuck joins us?" "Hell no.. the more the merrier, they say. But he better not try to horn in on where I was headed before he came over. That's my honey pot for right now!" "Don't worry. I couldn't take his `horn' without some work- up; but I can damn well handle yours right now! Who knows, maybe he'll be lucky and get some more `sloppy seconds'." I was remembering what happened the last time I had the two of them in succession. That sounded like a definite `fun time' to me! By this time both Rick and I had already cooled down and were going to have to `start over'. I took the time to go into the closet and bring out a large beach towel and lay it on the carpet in the living room, stopping in the bathroom and hall just long enough to grab a tube of lubricating lotion and the two towels that Rick and I had left there earlier. "Here we go, guys. This way we have more room, we can see out (if someone should pull into the driveway), and nobody can see us down here. I guess I get to play `business' and start at the bottom, right?" With that I lay down on the towel facing up toward my two young studs. Rick immediately knelt down by my left side and began to stroke my chest and the inside of my left thigh. Then he leaned forward and put his mouth over my right nipple and started to run his tongue back and forth over it. I reached out with my left hand and began to stroke the underside of his balls, running my hand back to where I could pull my finger back through the crack and over his rosey pucker. Chuck was pulling off his shirt and gym shorts, and had already kicked off his sneakers. He left his very well- filled jock strap on and quickly knelt down behind Rick. He reached around, and began running his hands up and down Rick's chest; then began to rub his lips against the back of Rick's head and neck, blowing his hot breath in little puffs. It only took a minute of this and I could feel Rick's member coming to life above my hand. I reached way back, and sure enough, I felt Chuck's meat in it's elastic cloth container behind him. It too had begun to thicken and lift slightly from its slack position but was being pretty much held down by the jock pouch. Hey, this was neat! I could reach back to one rising cock, and then come forward to another one. I closed my eyes and concentrated only on what I was feeling. The imagination and fantasies as I went from one hardening cock to the other - - until they were both fully engorged and hard - - were starting to have their effect on me. My breathing was getting deeper and heavier and the electricity in my groin was starting to build. All I could think of now was how much I wanted something entering my hole and filling me with its hot, throbbing flesh. But I also wanted to have it in my mouth and suck it until it exploded there. So now I knew just what I wanted and how handy it was going to be that there were two other guys in here with me now instead of just one. "Rick, you get that fine steel rod down there between my legs where it belongs!" I demanded. "Chuck, you lean over here and let me have a mouthful of that delicious hunk of tube steak you've got strapped down in that jock!" It didn't take any other prodding to get them to move. Rick reached over and spread my legs and moved in between them on his knees. He then rolled up one of the towels, slipped it under my butt, and leaned over and began to kiss his way from my navel down to my now pulsing shaft. Chuck leaned forward and took over my nipple that Rick had left standing there hard and tall. My whole body began to shake as though it were about to go into overload. Rick squirted some of the lotion into his right hand and began to apply it to the length of his ravaging pole. I'll never forget how wonderful that rigid stake with its shiny blue-pink head looked, as he pulled the skin down and off the head and then pushed it back forward to cover all but the very tip, where I could just make out the slit that was going to fill me with his hot baby batter. I opened my legs wider, indicating to him that I was very much ready for him. I wanted him now!! But I wanted more too, so I reached over, pushed the jock to the side, and grabbed Chuck's cock as it jerked erect and bounced against his hard abs. I pulled on the foreskin and the head appeared. It was already slick from its own juices and I spread it around as I pushed and pulled on that warm baton. Rick poured some of the lotion onto me just behind my balls and let it run down into the crevice below and I could feel it as it passed over my ready entryway. With his right hand he began to rub the lotion around and over my puckering target, then with only a brief hesitation, he plunged a finger into me. He had only worked it into and around the hole for a second before it was joined by a second finger..then a third. I groaned and pushed my ass into the air. It was obvious that I was ready and didn't need much more in the way of preparation, so he lifted my legs over his shoulders and I felt him pressing his ram against the gate. Then I felt that wonderful feeling - the short, sharp pain, followed by an incredible sensation as he drove slowly forward and implanted himself into me. "Ooooooooohh, yessssssss! Oooooohh, c'mon, big guy, fuck me good!!! You know what I want; you know how I like it. Feed me that meat!! I want to feel it in there all the way! Drive it home! Push that cock into me! Oooooooooh, yessssss!!" Slowly he began to pull it back out.. then in again. out. in.. out. in... He had such a phenomenal rhythm. I was in heaven! I could feel every millimeter of movement inside me. Eight inches of the most perfect-sized cock I had ever had assault my wanting hole. It was like there was a ring around the base of the head that scraped its way up and then back out of my insatiable fuck chute, riding its crest along over my prostate and sending me into even further ecstacy! With that, Chuck moved suddenly to straddle me with his knees, his hot, cum-ready manhood pointing to my lips. "Oh, yesss. Mon, you've got what I want." As I opened my mouth, he leaned forward until the head entered, and I could run my tongue over the slit for a tasty reward of sweet-honey pre- cum. Here I was. one gorgeous cock riding in and out of my ass and another one, wider and equally as beautiful, in my mouth. I've always wondered what a double-header would be like.and, yes! It's as damned wonderful as I always imagined! I tried to swallow from both ends. I just wanted them both to go deep and give up their treasures into me. "Mmmmmmmmm. Nnnnggggggg." I couldn't even talk. just make sounds that gave them notice of my pleasure. Chuck leaned further forward with his hands and knees on the floor doggie-style and began to fuck my face. but not hard, or too deep, where it would be too much for me. He somehow sensed exactly how much of that monster meat I could handle at any point. Rick was now leaning forward over me as he began to drive his piston into me faster. I was in reflex - my mouth and throat were working on their own to give and get with Chuck, while my ass had taken over with its own mind to grip and pull on Rick's pounding ramrod. I couldn't talk.all I could do was think: "OOOooooooh, yessssss! Fill me guys! Pound those pricks into me! Make me take it and want more! Yes.. Yes.. I want more! Give it to me! Get it ready to load and fire!!! Give me that sweet nectar to drink! Let me feel that hot lava washing into me! Oooooooooh, god, yessss!! Ooooooooooohhhhh!... NNNNnnnnngggggg!!" "Goddam, you are one hot bitchin' mouth!" Chuck exclaimed. "I'm getting there! Ooooooh, yess, I'm getting there!!! You ready for one helluva mouthful?! `cause you are just about to get one!!! OOOOoooh, yes. here it is a comin'.. Get ready! You ready? You better be, `cause it's on the way!!! Ooooohhh, yessssss!!! Ooooohhhhh, shit! Oh! Oh! Oh! OH! OH! YESSS! I'M CUMMIN'. IT'S CUMMIN'. Take it! Take all of it! I'm gonna feed you good!" And there it came! Great gobs of hot, milky jism began to flood into my mouth. Oh, god, was it wonderful! I was swallowing it as fast as I could, but again there was no way I - or anyone else - could keep up with that much. I swallowed once more, hard, so I could take a quick gasp of air, and then there was more! This guy must have been saving it up since the last time we were together. I never knew you could have that much cum up your dick!! But it had to be coming from somewhere!! "And now it's my turn!!!" Rick shouted... "Here comes a load for the other end!! Oh, yes! HOT, DAMN, MOMMA!!! Hope you can hold a gallon, `cause that's how much your gonna get down here!!! Oh, yesssss!!! Oh, shit. here it comes. HERE IT CUMS!!!!! OOOOOooooooooooohhhh, yes! Ooooh, yes! OOOOoooohh, yes! Take that hot juice!!! Let that ass suck it right out of me!!!" Again and again he pounded himself deep into me until his balls slapped against the upturned cheeks behind my asshole. Each time he came forward I pushed back to him, trying to get every last inch and every last drop he could give. All I could do was roll my head from side to side and moan "OOOOoooh," and grab the edges of the towel under me. Then somehow Chuck's head was between us and I felt the warmth as his hungry mouth slipped over the head of my own now-ready-to-explode cock! That was it! I was on my way! . and so was Rick!!! "OOOohhh, yes! MMmmmmmnnnnnggggg!! Stroke it, baby! Stroke it! Back that sweet hole up to me and take it all! Oooooooh, yes! Yeah, baby! Oooohh, yeah!" ...."Holy, shit! How much more is there to go!?! Take it, baby! Take it all! Let that sweet ass suck it dry! Ooooooh, yeah! Grip it, baby! Get a tight hold on there! OOOOoooooohhh, shit! Uuummmpp. Unnhunnnnh! Oooooooh, yeah!" .. Slowly Rick came to stop, still pushed deep into me, and working his butt in small circles to drain every last drop into my farthest recesses. Chuck pulled his head out and I could see some of my own cream shining around the edges of his lips. Rick leaned forward over me and planted his lips onto mine, grinding them against me. I could feel his hot, heavy breath coming out of his nose onto my cheek. Finally he lifted up and, looking deep into my eyes, he said: "WOW! Was that some sweet fuck!" I still couldn't talk. I just wrapped my legs around his back to hold him in and against me and reached up to pull his face back down onto my lips. I could stay like this for hours! Never have I felt so totally satiated.yet still seeming to want more. Then reality had to come back to the scene. There was some cleaning up and dressing to do - before someone should come along and find us. I unlocked my ankles and let Rick push his way up to standing. I watched as he moved and couldn't take my eyes off that beautiful rod of manhood that had given up its pleasures to me. Still, all I could think about was how much I wanted its pleasures again. Then I turned my head to the side to look at Chuck. He had already started to dress, so all I got was that fast glimpse as his fat, hooded fuck tool disappeared into his jock and then the fully loaded basket was covered by his shorts. Sometimes one of those quick views is even better than a long stare.and this was definitely one of those times as the picture was burned indelibly into my memory. "Here, c'mon up," Rick said as he offered his hand to help me off the floor. As I stood, he reached around me and pulled me to him, and again offered me his waiting lips. This just kept getting better!! I could feel him against me. I reached low behind him and pulled him against me tighter as I opened my lips to his probing tongue and once again battled him for the confines of our joined mouths. Both of us were moaning slightly as we rubbed together from knee to shoulder and mouth-to-mouth. Somehow, I had left heaven behind and was so far beyond anything I could have ever imagined. "If you ever decide to leave your wife, let me be the first one to know about it" he whispered in my ear. "Oh, god. you do make me think about it!" I whispered back. "...I just can't do it." "I know," he said to me, "and I would never try to push you. I realize what you have and what you'd lose, and do truly understand where you are coming from. ..so, I guess, we'll just have to `keep meeting like this'.". "Guess so," I replied. "Now get the hell out of here before I don't have any choice left." So he slipped into his clothes and he and Chuck went out the door and across the street. I bent over, picked up the towels and headed for the utility room (walking `a little funny', of course!!!). (to be continued....) This is still my first attempt at story writing. Hope you have enjoyed it so far, and will let me know if you want to see more. I'm also open to any constructive criticism and guidance you might want to suggest. Feel free to email me with your comments.