Date: Wed, 04 Jun 2003 09:40:38 -0700 From: Loki Otaktay Subject: NEXT 3 Comments, Suggestions, Reactions . . . anything but flames are welcome. As, always you may email me at sethoran @hotmail. com. This is chapter three. The exciting conclusion to 17 pages of foreplay for the mind. (Yeah, I'm a tease, so sue me.) Umm . .. 18 and over. But you're already here. Can't stop you. So enjoy. Next Gabriel Duncan THREE "We're here," Ted announced as he opened the door. Ted's home was a large condo a few blocks away from Alex's and a half a mile from mine. It looked like the cover of a magazine. Very nice. Very, very nice. "Wow," I turned in a circle to admire my surroundings. He lead me into the kitchen, which was all stainless steal and teflon. "What do you want to eat?" "I dunno," Are you on the menu? Ted opened the fridge and sifted through and assortment of fresh pastas and meats. This was not your average college student. I was even more convinced when he bent over at the waist to rummage through the produce bins. He was a living Adonis. I wasn't in control when I stepped behind him and held him by the waist. His hands stopped rummaging momentarily. "Why don't we just skip dinner for now?" I couldn't believe I was saying this. Bad porn line fiesta, "I'm sure we're going to be twice as hungry afterwards." Ted stood and looked into my eyes. Absent-mindedly, he closed the door behind him. "What happened to that whole Scout's Honor, thing?" "I changed my mind." // He had satin sheets on his bed. Under them, touching him . . . I don't know how to describe. It all felt better. He didn't have any tanlines. After pulling off his bikini briefs with my mouth, I pushed him back to admire his body. All of it. God, it was beautiful. He had just the right amount of definition. Natural definition. Is this really happening? My eyes watched as my hands traced over his chest. But it felt like I was far away. Like I was commanding a puppet. It was still light outside. The shutters were shut. But light still found its way in between spaces in the slats. The light added another level of surrealism. Ted had a six pack that any man would have drooled over. His pecs were solid, but not bulging. His dipples are nickle-sized and delicious. His chest was without a shred of hair. And his honey trail was a perfect pebble path leading down to trimmed pubes and some very nice equipment. My tongue flicked at his nipple. He moaned and squirmed underneath me. I was deftly aware of a slimy trail that our cocks had formed along out bodies. I licked my way down his stomach, stoping to scoop at his navel. He was uncircumsized. I watched Ted as I licked my lips and slowly slid my mouth down his cock, engulfing the whole thing as slowly as possible. Our eyes were locked on eachother as I slid back up. I pulled off and kissed his tip, then plummeted back down, pulling his foreskin back with my mouth. "You're so fucking hot." He groaned. In reply, I massaged his cock with the muscles in the back of my throat and took in even more. His balls drew up instantly, so I decided to pull off him for a little bit. Ted was panting when I kissed him. "I can't believe this is happening," Our lips smacked. Ted scooted up against the headboard of his bed. I straddled his thighs. Our lips never left eachother. Hands roaming, we began grinding against each other in earnest. I could feel pressure building up through my whole body. I was holding my breath. I gasped and began panting when he slowly licked up my neck. "Oh man," I gasped. My hand wrapped around our cocks and I began to jerk us off as Ted was nibbling on my shoulders. He was getting me so hot. I hope he knew it. Almost as if he heard what I was thinking, he pushed my down gently and began jerking me off as he sucked and nibbled my nipples until the were hard. I was leaking precum everywhere. He leaned up to kiss me again, leaning his rod against my hole. I whimpered and wiggled my ass towards him. Instead, he teased me by rocking back and forth against my hole, barely apply pressure, but applying enough to melt me into a puddle of pre-orgasmic ooze. His body rubbed against my cock as he slid down to wrap his lips around it. I almost lost it right there, but Ted was quick and clamped his hand around the base of my cock; holding off orgasm for a while more. I was in pure ecstasy a ge gently squeezed on the base of my cock and sucked one of my testicals into his mouth. My hips gyrated against Ted's hand to get just a little more friction, but he had me where he wanted me. I was whimpering louder and speaking in tongues as he slipped my first nut out and slid the next one in his mouth. Ted's arms wrapped around my thighs and I felt my ass getting lifted into the air until my legs met his shoulders and the knees and my shoulders were supporting the rest of my weight. I shuddered when his tongue found its way around my bud. I cried out when his tongue finally pierced my hole, "Oh god, Ted!" His tongue just pushed in harder. My legs almost cut off circulation to his head when I wrapped them around his neck. My body when limp as he started to jerk me off. I never thought anythign could feel this good. I was so turned on it was painful. Everytime he stroked me I was hit with waves of pain and pleasure. I was being lowered now, and I could feel something knocking at my back door. I don't think I could have been anymore ready. He leaned forward and kissed me gently as I felt his cock pierce through my skin. There was no pain. I moaned loudly as he slid into me. He pulled out of me. This was the first time there was no pain. "You're so tight," His breath on my neck. "Only for you," I said. "Fuck me, Ted." Ted propped himself up on his hands while I wrapped my legs around his waist. With one fluid gestur, he ran his hand over my nipple, causing me to arch my back, down my chest, over my cock, flondling my balls, down to his cock. He looked into my eyes and out mouths met in a passionate kiss as he guided himself back into me. I gripped his penis with my insides fiercley, holding him inside me so I could savor the feeling. Slowly, I let go as he slide out again and repeated the processs. It was wonderfully gentle and painfully slow. We began to speed up. He was almost sliding out again. Each push became a thrust. Each thrust became a groan. Muffled by his mouth, which was gently nipping and sucking at anything it could reach. My hands were on his back, pulling him closer. I hadn't felt his good in so long. It seemed like years. This seemed to last for years. Now that he was in me, all sense of urgency was gone. I felt complete. But, all too soon, things became urgent again. Ted's thrusts became quicker, deeper, harder. His hands were busy working on my cock. I was getting close to cumming. I could feel that delicious feeling starting to spread throughout my whole body. "I'm getting close." Ted gasped between thrusts. I pinched at his nipples and adjust our position so he could drive into my harder and deeper than before. "Come inside me?" He nodded wordlessly. And started thrusting faster. I was moaning louder, more openly, egging him on. "Mmm," He thrust into me harder. "Yeah, fuck me." He groaned. "I want to feel you come inside. I've been waiting for this for so long. You're so much better than Alex." A louder grunt. "Oh it feels so good inside. Oh! Harder! Harder! HARDER!" That's all it took for him and he pulled out all the stops. Every thrust brought us closer and closer to the edge of the bed. I screamed out in pleasure when I finally started shooting. My whole body seized and I pulled on his back to lift me up. Ted lost his balance and we tumbled to the floor, him still pumping inside me. With one last thrust he let out a battle cry and buried himself deep inside me. "Oh my fucking god," He gasped, trying to catch his breath. "If topping was as good as that everytime, I'd never be a bottom again." I laughed and pulled him closer to me for a kiss. We cuddled and went to sleep. // It was dark when I woke up. We were still curled up in a giant ball, Ted and I. Our legs were wrapped around each other and our forheads met in our embrace. My pants were glowing green. My cell phone. I looked at the clock on the nightstand. Ten-Forty-Five. "Shit!" Ted yawned and stretched, "Hmm?" "It's late," I grabbed pants and dug through my pocket for the phone. "I need to check in with my folks." -------------------------- That's chapter threee. Four is on the way. Comments, suggestions and constructive criticism are welcome. Flames will be asnwered, too. If you really want me to tear you limb from limb. :) This is literature, not a democracy. You either like it and tell me. Or hate and tell me you LOVED it to avoid your eventual execution. Sethoran @hotmail .com