Date: Fri, 22 Jun 2001 16:28:14 -0400 From: Danny Meyer Subject: COOL KID BROTHER! - Chapter 20 _________________________________________________ COOL KID BROTHER! CHAPTER 20 READING TIME: 15 MINUTES _________________________________________________ Copyright (C) June 22, 2001 by Danny Meyer. All rights reserved. For "Alex, Andrew, Austin, Billy, Bob, Brian, Bryan, Chad, Chris, Christian, Cody, Craig, David, Donald, Earl, Eric, Frank, Fred, 'Gusto,' GW, Jayson, Jerry, Jim, Joe, John, Jordan, Jorge, Josh, Ken, Keo, Lance, Marc, Marty, Matt, Mike, 'Miss Brooks,' Nick, Paul, Pete, Phil, Randy, Ray, Rick, Rob, Ryan, Sean, Skip, Steve, Terry, Tim, Todd, Tom, Trent, Vince, Warren, Wes," and others. Thank you. 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This story contains fictional graphic depictions of actions and tendencies considered extreme by many people. This entire story is purely a fantasy, and is for entertainment purposes only--it is not a reflection of life. All readers are warned not to attempt to re-enact, or recreate any of the actions or incidents portrayed or implied in any of this story's contents or events, which are entirely fictitious. The foregoing and subsequent text applies to all chapters and portions of this story--past, present, and future. This fantasy was written for gay men and women. The orientation is gay male. Some bisexual men and women may also enjoy it, as well as some straight men and women, who are curious. If you like high-school age male-to-male sex, read on. This is a fictional story. None of this ever really happened. None of the people are real people. The story is about sex and daily living of high-school boys, ages 14 to 17. It's an all-gay story. If you like, and you're allowed to read this, please read on. If not, please pick another story, and have a good day. No hatred or prejudice here. ____________________________________________________ ALL NAMES PLACES AND EVENTS IN THIS STORY ARE WHOLLY FICTITIOUS, AND BEAR NO CONNECTION WITH, RESEMBLANCE OR RELATION TO, ANY REAL PERSON OR ENTITY. ANY SUCH SIMILARITY IS PURELY COINCIDENTAL, AND UNINTENTIONAL. ____________________________________________________ MAIN CHARACTERS, (SO FAR) _________________________ --The Brothers-- Tommy - 16 years old (Thomas James Robison, Jr.) - the serious one. Tommy is the most athletic of the brothers. He is the most sensitive, also. He is in love with Billy and the two of them are on the same baseball team. In Chapter 1, Tommy makes his first sexual move, on Billy. Tommy is 5' 10" tall, 165 pounds, smooth, with dark hair, and deep, hot, brown eyes. Billy - 14 (William Darren Robison) - the playful one. Billy is 'all over the map.' He wants it all. He loves to tease and joke around. Tommy's daring approach of Billy in Chapter 1 awakened Billy's sexuality and he's non-stop. Billy's speed and agility make him a slightly better baseball player than Tommy. [Billy narrates.] Billy is the thinnest and fairest of the three brothers. He is 5' 6" tall, 120 pounds, very tight-looking, and smooth. His blonde hair is very fine and invisible, in places. Billy has striking blue eyes. Robby - 12 (Robert Michael Robison) - the unsure, outspoken one. Robby is the youngest and 'Bi' brother of the three. He is an early developer and has an oversized 'endowment' for his age. He has admitted to fooling around, orally with a girl, and has started to 'play' with his brothers. NICKNAMES: Champ; Boy-genius. Robby is 5' 5" tall, 120 lbs.--almost as tall as Billy, but not as thin as Billy. Robby has medium reddish-brown hair, and green eyes. He is slender, but has a more defined look than Billy does. --A Neighbor College Boy-- Marc - Marc Denton, age 19. Marc lives across the street and is a college student, home for the summer. Marc is 6'-1" tall, 180 lbs. He's thin but athletic-looking. Marc has dark brown hair, green eyes, and is an end on his college football team. Marc has fine, aquiline facial features and is considered to be very good-looking. Marc often plays backyard sports with Tommy and Billy. Sometimes he wrestles with all three brothers, and other boys. Marc is introduced at the end of Chapter 11. --A fellow student who lives down the road-- Scott - Scott Miller, age 17. A younger, slightly thinner, but more striking version of Marc. Scott has that thin, tight, slight build, without being skinny. His muscles are not big, but they're extremely well defined. Scott is a blonde, blue-eyed god, as far as Tommy is concerned. He is 5'-10" tall, 160 lbs, and has well-tanned, golden skin. He is considered one of the hottest-looking guys in the school. Scott is on the swim team, and fits the ideal of the nice, 'boy-next-door' image, perfectly. He is gentle, and soft-spoken. Scott is introduced in Chapter 19. IN THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER... After Marc makes love to Robby, the couple 'deepens,' in more ways than one. Marc expresses his love. They have a long conversation, with Marc's erect penis still inside Robby. Robby lets the cat out of the bag about his brothers and him, all having sex. Robby learns the truth--that Marc is also attracted to Billy. Robby drops the bomb to Marc that Billy wants to have sex with him, badly. Marc said he might do it if Robby wants it. Robby has asked Marc to give him a hard and fast fuck, and Marc seems ready to do this. Billy and Tommy successfully video tape most of the love scene between Marc and Robby by kneeling at Marc's basement windows, with their camcorder. Tommy confesses to Billy, his love for Robby--which Billy had already guessed. Billy also wasn't surprised that Robby said he loved Tommy. Billy seems to be ok with the brothers loving each other, in this way. Tommy and Billy are about to have sex, when Scott's appearance at the front door stops them. Tommy has the hots for Scott in the worst way. Billy isn't exactly uninterested. All three go to the same school. Scott goes for a swim, in his briefs. Even though Scott is a great swimmer and diver, he chooses to do a cannonball into the pool-- mostly because he wants to relax and is not one for much showing off. Both Billy and Tommy get a nice feel of Scott's substantial dick, underwater. Scott responds, immediately, and becomes horny. When Billy goes back for a second feel, Scott's briefs are gone. "Hey, athlete!" Scott said to Billy, "Where'd you learn to dive, like that?" "My dad taught us. Tommy's a great diver, too," Billy said, as he reached out to Scott, for another feel. Only this time, there were no briefs." "Oh my God," Billy whispered, to Scott, "You're naked!" __________________________________________ REMINDER: Scroll up to: 'Main Characters' for more complete descriptions. __________________________________________ Chapter text: 19.4 K Reading time: 15 minutes _________________________________________________________ CHAPTER 20 - THAT FEELS SO GOOD---PLEASE DON'T STOP! _________________________________________________________ Billy's hand stayed wrapped around Scott's dick, and Billy could feel his own dick, throbbing in his red bikini. "Yeah," Scott said nervously, "You and Tommy copped a feel, and that... sorta gave me the courage to... take a chance..." Billy got brave, since Scott didn't seem to mind, so he stroked Scott, as slowly as he could. "Your hand... mmm," Scott said, softly. The comment made Billy so self-conscious about his hand, that he removed it from the hard penis. "Ahhh--that felt so good, don't stop." Billy took his hand, and scratched his right ear, then his left. This was an old, pre-arranged signal for Tommy to join him. He then returned his hand, eagerly to Scott's dick. "It's ok?" Billy said nervously, to Scott "Oh, yeah, Billy--sure is." "Oh, God," Billy gasped, "that feels nice." It looked like Scott thought it was really nice, to have a hand wrapped around his dick. "Hey, Tommy," Billy said, as I approached, "Somebody's horny!" Billy blushed, immediately. Scott was already blushing. Both my eyes and Billy's were riveted to Scott's. I thought MARC'S smile was a killer--Scott's was even hotter! His smile melted us, and I swore I'd need sunglasses, to look at it much longer--his teeth were so white and perfect. "Oh," I said, smiling--half in total nervousness and half not knowing for sure what was up, "Looks like you two are all set." "Hey, Tommy." Scott's voice came out like liquid velvet, and my boner could feel it! "Why don't we, uhh... do you think we could... you know, like, all stay together?" "Three of us? Um, uh... sure! Why not! Billy?" I said, hesitantly, not sure what my little bro was thinking. Then he smiled, and I knew it was ok. "Yup. Three's such a cool number." Now it was Scott's turn to be nervous. He could see Billy and I communicated well. "You guys uh... really seem to... know what you're doing, I, um--well, I just... didn't know if--I mean I'd like to, you know, do something with--" Suddenly I realized that Scott was very gentle and unsure of himself. I was so shocked. I thought Scott would be this big aggressive guy. He was strong and firm--you could feel power, from him--but he was controlled, soft, unassuming. Now, I was beginning to feel like Robby--I was about to take the reins, here, maybe. Scott was looking down, at the water, obviously blushing. While Scott wasn't watching, I winked at Billy--he smiled and nodded. I had an idea of having some fun with Scott. He seemed like the type this would work on. Billy knew, right away, what type of thing I was up to--and if anyone loved to tease and play games, it was Billy. With Billy backing me up, I always had tons of confidence. I knew it worked the same way, for Billy. "Well, I guess we better tell him Billy." "Yup, no use hiding it." "Yeah, he has the right to know, up front," I said, with a sigh and a raspy sound to my voice. "Billy, do you want to tell him?" Scott looked up, attentively. "No, Tommy, you go ahead." Which was great, since Billy had no clue what I had in mind. "What?" Scott said nervously, his eyes widening, "What do you mean?" _____ Marc had Robby almost folded in half. He lifted Robby's legs up and pushed them back as far as they could go. Robby looked like his feet were tickling his ears. The good-looking athlete held Robby's ankles, patiently. "Oh, yahhhh," Robby said, sensually, anticipating the big boy pumping his maleness into him, again. "Yah, is right," Marc said, taking in the sight, "Ok, hold your ankles, tight. Wow. Do you have any idea how sexy you look, now Robby?" "No," came Robby's soft voice--muffled by the fact that his legs were blocking the sound. "Well, you do. Very sexy. How do you feel, in that position?" "Weird." "Robby, do you want me to stop?" "Fuck, no!" "Robby! You CURSED!" "Yah. I do, sometimes." "Are you sure--do you still want me to f-fuck you--not make love to you?" "Yah. I'm sure--way sure. Shove it in, fast, too." "No, Robby," Marc said, fearfully, "I'm big. My dick's almost eight inches, and I'm--" "Eight? Are you sure?" "Yes." "I swear it looks like ten or eleven." "No, Robby--I'm not a freak. I'm just a little on the big side," Marc said, his body shivering in anticipation. "WAY big, compared to Tommy, and he's huge! Please shove it in. You've been in me all day--I'm used to it, by now. I don't care if it hurts. I'm strong, I can take it!" Robby reached out and put his fingers on Marc's trembling nuts. "Ahhhhhh, Robby! Shit! Ohhh... I'm going to cum if you keep that up." "Sorry," Robby said, with a devilish, little grin. "Yes, I can tell how sorry you are," Marc said, smiling back. "Uhhhhhhhhhhhh." "Robby, what's up?" "I think I'm gonna cum." _____ "We both think you're hot as hell," I said, gulping, as I put my hand with Billy's, on Scott's boner. Billy's eyes got real big. Scott's followed. Scott's boner throbbed, after I said that. I could tell Billy felt it, too, because he raised his eyebrows real quick, and smiled. Scott was grinning, a proud grin, ear to ear. "Whew. I'm glad to hear THAT," Scott said, "You guys had me going, there, for a sec!" Billy and I were gently squeezing Scott's dick, about a squeeze per second. "I think he feels pretty good, Billy, what do you think?" I said, as we kept up the gentle, wicked squeezing. "Yeah, feels like a good one, to me, Tommy." "Aw, fuck! Uhhh, you guys..." Scott said, getting as horny as I hoped his seventeen-year-old dick would get. There was something about the fact that I was seducing Scott, that was awesome, but double-teaming him with Billy--damn! I was ready to cum till the pool got cloudy. Billy and I were both staring at Scott's eyes. They were totally gorgeous--a deep, purple blue, with really pretty lines in them. I felt I was getting lost in Scott's eyes. I tried to find my tongue. "Um, yeah," I said, "well, do you--do you think you'd like to go upstairs?" "Wanna come to our room?" Billy said. All I could think of is that Billy said, 'CUM to our room.' "Sure," Scott said, with a more confident smile. "it's just that I--" "Oh, your briefs!" Billy said. "Yeah," Scott said, with a crooked, embarrassed smile. "I'm good, underwater," Billy said, proudly, "I'll get 'em." Scott's eyes were just drawing me to him. Without even knowing it, I was grabbing his shoulders, and my lips were on his ear, all of a sudden. "Scott," I whispered, "You are so fine." My body shivered against his tight muscles. "Tommy, you're a hunk. I can't believe this is happening. And Billy is--AHHH! SHIT! Ohhhhh!" "What?" I yelled, as I jumped. "Guess what I did?" Billy yelped, as he surfaced, with a big Cheshire-cat grin on his face. "Damn! You pulled a baby brother--" "FUCK that felt good!" Scott said, "Scared the shit out of--" "You liked it, huh?" Billy said, sounding more like Robby. "Yeah! Let's get to your room." Billy handed the wet briefs to Scott. I thought he would slip them on, in the water, but we both throbbed when we saw him get out of the pool, naked, facing us, and put them on. He pressed his very hard cock up against his abs, as he raised the waistband, and I was drooling. "Holy shit!" Billy said to me, obviously admiring the size of Scott. "What a fucking fine body! I gasped, trying to take in all of Scott, at once." "I want some of that," Billy said. "You share, 50-50, Billy. No hogging!" "Yup. No prob." "And I'm in charge," I said, commandingly. "Ok, ok!" "Shit. I think we're dreaming this, Billy. I've been dreaming about this kid for so long." "Fuck! Me too. And don't wake me up now!" Billy said, as we got out of the water. "You wanna go naked? We could take our swimsuits off." "Nah. We better not." _____ Marc yanked his cock out of Robby with lightning speed. "Robby--you're ready to cum? Now? Already?" "Yah. But--now I'm not. You pulled out," Robby said, sounding very disappointed. "Yes," Marc said, "and for a very good reason, young man." "Don't--don't say that. It reminds me of my dad." "Oh, sorry." "'S'ok." Marc stared at the boy's dick--so big for his age and size. He wanted to suck it, but he knew it was ready to go off. Marc decided it would be safer and more fun to lick Robby's balls--tight and firm in their hairless sack. As Marc leaned forward, he pressed, more, on Robby's legs, which squeezed a little air out of the small boy's body. "Uhhhhhhh." Marc's lips made contact with their target, and his tongue began to do long circles, all around Robby's balls. Marc inhaled the fresh scent of the boy, and became more aroused. "Oh, fuck!" Robby shouted, "Oh, fuck, FUCK!" Marc stopped, immediately. "Oh, God!" "Too close, Robby?" "Yah." "I guess I'll just have to take a chance and fuck you." "Oh, yah!" Marc prepped and lubed himself, then aligned his thick hardon against Robby's incredibly hot hole. Marc looked down at the little boy, folded in half and waiting for his ass to be impaled. He lifted himself into a push-up position. Marc's body was a model of the right way to do a push-up. Of course, he was getting ready to push down. The muscular athlete was not shaking from muscle fatigue--he was shaking from pure teen lust, and the consequences of waiting, waiting half the day with his cock up inside the boy, and now, afraid to do as he was asked--to go in, quickly. "Robby, I'm not sure about this. I mean--" "Just do it." "Robby--" "Please?" "Ok." Marc gave a colossal thrust of his hips and brutally impaled the boy in an instant. "Ohhhh God!" "Ahhhhhhhhhh. Ohhhhhhh!" "Robby! Oh, FUCK! I can't stop, now!" And Marc pounded little Robby's ass. He thrust harder than he thought possible, as his body took off, on its own. He shoved and slammed himself into Robby, crashing his body into him, and you could hear their pubic bones thump, together, as Robby's cries of pleasure were broken up into short, little bursts of sound--broken up my the massive, rapid thrusting of Marc's body, into his. "Uhh, uhh, uhh, uh, uh, uh, uh, uh!" "Oh, fuck, Robby! Ohhhhhhhhh.... FUCK!" "YAH! YAH! YAH! UHHHHHhhhhhhhh!" "Ohhhh GEEZ!" Sweat flew off their bodies, as Marc was a blur of desperate, adolescent fury, driving his spurting cock deeply into the boy. Shouting and screaming, he came--the high sounds of Robby's squeals in stark contrast against the deeper, college boy's voice, as Marc exploded, violently into Robby, and Robby accepted the hot boy's cum, in all its glory. Flashes of tremendous heat passed between them, as Robby's tight, slippery insides added to the phenomenal fire of Marc's hungry, pulsing erection. "Oh, yesssss! Uhhhhhh! Oh, God!" "Yah! Yah! Ohhhhhhhhhh." "Oh, shit, Robby. I didn't last very long," Marc said, breathlessly--his chest heaving, as he let Robby's legs down, and fell on top of the boy. "Not long, at all. I fucked up, Robby." "Ohhhhhhhhhhhh... you did?" _____ Upstairs, Scott stood, awkwardly, in the middle of our room. Billy and I stood against the side of the bed. I was shocked when Scott came over to us and got on his knees. Scott had his hands on the waistband of my flesh-colored bikini at the same time I reached for them. We pulled them down, together. Billy just watched, and took his little red bikini off. Not a word was said, but Scott took my cock gently in his hand and looked at it for a long time. Before I knew it, Scott's lips were sliding over it. I looked over at Billy--he was precumming like mad, and giving me this really sexy look. I swore Billy's knees were gonna buckle any second. I put my arms out, behind me so I could lean back on the bed because my knees WERE buckling. It was like someone dipped my cock into a warm bath. All I could do was close my eyes and listen to my breath--and the sexy, slurpy sounds of Scott's mouth, pumping my hardon. I looked down and saw Scott's face--it was so red! I don't know whether it was his cologne, or something he had in his hair, but Scott smelled incredibly good! I was so close, I didn't know what to do or say. "Ohhhhhh...." I couldn't help moaning, but as soon as I did, Scott pulled off me, and looked up at Billy, who started to moan. "Ohhh, Scott," Billy said, for no apparent reason. Scott moved over, kneeling in front of Billy. I could see now, that Scott was embarrassed, but he seemed to be loving it. I could see through his briefs--he was hard as hell. "Scott, you're awesome," I said, finally finding my voice. My eyes were glued to Scott's cute mouth and my little brother's dick, as the two got closer together. I was so horny, I was shaking. I put my hand to my dick and started stroking, then I thought maybe that wouldn't be right, so I stopped. First, Scott stared at Billy's dick, which was as big and red as I'd ever seen it. No one moved a muscle as we all watched the tip of Billy's boner, bobbing up and down, with this sexy bounce. Billy's mouth was as open as Scott's was, as those cute lips slid over the tip of my brother's cock, and the head of it slowly disappeared. "Oh, fuck!" Billy said--out of breath, already. I put my arms around Billy's shoulders, as Scott gave him the slowest blow job I'd ever seen. I tried to kiss Billy, but that was hard to do because of all the moaning Billy was doing. "Urrrrphhhhh...mmmmmmm...ohhhhhhh..." I don't remember what happened next, but soon, we were all standing, and as my tongue slipped into Billy's mouth, Scott's lips joined with Billy's and mine. When I felt Scott's tongue lick my lips, I thought I would cum. After that, I don't know whose tongue touched whose, or licked what. Then we all stood slightly apart, in a little triangle. Billy and I were naked, and Scott had what looked like a big pole, trying to poke out of his wet briefs. Scott lifted his hands just a few inches, then Billy and I reached out for the waistband of Scott's briefs. Scott put his hands down, right away, but he looked real nervous about me and Billy pulling his briefs down, so I hesitated. Billy looked up at me and I nodded, slowly lowering the waistband, and drooling over how tight and well shaped Scott was. As we pulled the briefs down, more, the pole that was sticking straight up, was being pulled down because the tip was caught in a little pouch, formed by Scott's cock stretching the fabric. "Oww! Ahh! It hurts--wait!" We knew the problem, now. Scott's dick was so hard, and trying to stick straight up, that it hurt him for us to be bending it down like that. I stuck my hand in and stretched the briefs away from his dick, and we pulled them down to his ankles. "Sorry," I said, blushing. Now, we were all blushing. I noticed our triangle had tightened, and I moved closer to Scott. He looked down and saw what was happening and he got closer, too. We both moved, until our dicks touched. By now, we had so much precum that they just slid around. Billy put his hand in place behind our hardons, and pressed his cock against ours. Billy was just pouring out precum, and he pumped his dick against mine and Scott's, in short, hard jabs. Billy's body blushed, all red, and he started shaking all over. Scott shifted and I wasn't sure what he was doing. "Oh, FUCK! I'm gonna cum!" Billy said, as Scott fell to his knees. I thought Scott was going to suck Billy and take his load, but instead, he did something with his fingers, behind Billy's balls and on his dick. Billy gave out a huge sigh but he didn't cum. I know my little brother's body, and I knew he was about to blow his load, right then. But he didn't. "Shit, what did you do," I said, "How'd you do that?" Scott got redder and redder by the minute. "Oh, just something I learned," he said, with an embarrassed smile. Now, Scott really had our attention. He was looking right at us. It was like we couldn't help it, but Billy and I just stared at Scott's eyes, as he stepped back, a little. It was quiet, but I felt energy going into my chest and down my abs, and come out of my cock, making it throb. I wondered if Billy felt the same thing. Our eyes wandered down to Scott's gorgeous, cut cock, and we both knelt. Our mouths went to it at the same time. I had one side, and Billy had the other and we were trying to stroke it with our lips. Billy looked up at Scott and started getting out of breath. His even rhythm, stroking Scott, started to break up, and his lips went off and on Scott's boner, because Billy started to moan. "Ohhhhh... oh, God... oh, GOD!" Billy's voice squeaked way high and cracked like it did when his voice first changed. "Ahhhh, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" Billy screamed. Cum shot up from Billy, and as he leaned back, it sprayed all over Scott, who was smiling, really big, as Billy's cum shot into Scott's hair, his face, chest, and a few streams hit Scott right in the dick. "Uhhhhh, uhhhhh, uhhhhhhhhhhh!" I could tell my little brother had one hell of a climax. I heard his cum, splattering against Scott's chest, I saw his body in big spasms, sitting, leaning back against the bed, and screaming. "Holy fuck! Billy are you ok?" "Oh shit! That felt so fucking good!" Scott and I both knelt and pulled Billy out to the middle of the floor. I grabbed for his hands. "No," Billy said, breathlessly, "Jus' lemme lay here for... a sec." His words came between his huge gasps for air. He seemed ok. Billy was smiling up at me from the floor when Scott's arms and mine reached for each other at the same time. We were in a full body hug, with all parts of us smashed together. We could feel each others' dicks, throbbing, as we kissed. Our tongues went crazy. Somehow, we toppled over onto the bed. The temperature of Scott's body shot up, suddenly, and I knew what would happen. This stud wanted to fuck me. He wanted me, and I wanted him. We kissed, hugged, and rolled on the bed. Scott tugged me this way and that, and he ended up on the bottom. I stared at him. Scott's eyes were warm and inviting. He had this little smile that made me shiver, all over. His lips trembled, and I went nuts, thinking my dick was going to explode. He never took his eyes off me, and he never had to say a word. I knew what he wanted, now. 'Oh, shit,' I thought, 'I'm the one who told Billy, no hogging, and here I am, about to fuck Scott, with Billy lying on the floor. My little brother's gonna ream my ass.' Which really didn't sound all that bad, as I thought about it. I did the prep stuff so quick, I don't remember doing it. I don't even remember taking my eyes off him, but there I was again, spellbound by those beep blue eyes, the curves of his biceps, the beautiful mounds of his pecs, and the perfection of his face. I slowly lifted his legs, and couldn't help noticing his nice 'v' shape and smooth, tanned skin, and his perfect, tight, smooth butt. Scott's mouth opened and he took a breath. It scared me--he had this power about him, and I knew it was just me--wanting him so bad, for so long. I watched him. His pleading look, turned slightly anxious, as I pulled his ankles, higher. 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