Date: Fri, 3 Mar 2006 22:50:48 -0800 (PST) From: Steam Train Subject: Alternative deterrence Ch 17 Alternative Deterrence. By Steam Train (steam_t2000@yahoo.com) Chapter 17 Mall. Daniel sat by himself in the slave section of the local bus as it took him into Downtown Eastbrook. It was still early and being a Sunday not many people were yet up and about. When Daniel arrived at the main bus interchange he took out of his backpack the instructions Tom had written out and went looking for bay 11 where he would catch the bus to Piney Hills. There were a few more people around the interchange but it was not busy. As he walked the thought occurred to him how public nudity was just accepted by so many adults. Children and teenagers; well that was another matter! He got some extra stares because of his small package but most people he passed just walked by reacting little differently than if he had been clothed. The public decency laws forced on the community by the right wing fundamentalist religious groups had removed most naked indentured slaves from being seen in public except for special circumstances like punishment sessions, but it was well known that a large number of the slave population were kept naked on private property. The principal reason was not that the masters wanted to gawk at their property though admiration of the beauty of a well formed naked body was part of it, no It was an economic decision, it was cheaper if you kept slaves naked There were minimal clothing bills and little in the way of laundry costs. Thinking a bit more about this Daniel was sure those who were naked didn't accept this state of affairs anywhere near as casually as the free citizens did. Daniel had never thought he would be a NEWDD, he was sure most citizens never thought that they would be enslaved either. Daniel had already learnt his first NEWDD lesson, the misapprehension that `It can't happen to me' was now supplanted by the absolute realisation that `yes it can'! He had heard some time ago from a friend that there were naked slaves at the Piney Hills Golf Club, which was a private `members only' course. This was where he was scheduled to do Community Service on Tuesdays and Thursdays, so he was hoping that his nakedness would not be so obvious if all the slaves were kept naked. As he approached bay eleven he was relieved to see he was not the only NEWDD who would be catching the bus when it arrived. There were about six NEWDD's already waiting. As he approached he recognised Greg Pearson and Todd Riddell from his college. He could feel himself blushing, even though Greg had seen him naked at the Discipline Centre and Todd must have been there too, though Daniel could not recall seeing him there. "Hey Daniel" Todd happily said in greeting, "Hows it hanging" he said causing Daniel to blush some more. "Man that's a small pecker ya got there, I caught a glimpse of it yesterday at Poulton Park but now that I can have a nice close look, it's just such a cute `pin' dick" exclaimed Todd! Daniel didn't know what to say. In the back of his mind the similar comment by Marco at the Discipline Centre yesterday flashed back into his consciousness. "What are you on about Todd, that pathetic excuse of manhood is embarrassing not cute! At least I got something to show unlike this little boy' Greg asserted giving his well developed cock and balls a good shake in front of Daniel. "Leave him alone Greg, where all in this together and he will need our help just like we were helped to get through the utter humiliation of the Community Service at the Piney Hills Fair!" Todd responded. `He'll need more than our help with a cock that small, the good free citizens of Piney Hills wont have anything to grab onto" said Greg with a smile. Even Todd saw the joke in that comment and laughed. `What's so funny, what did you mean anything to grab onto" Daniel asked? Daniel was no fool and he thought he already knew the answer to his question but he wanted to have his worst fears confirmed. "They didn't explain your Community Service at the Mall did they?" Todd asked. "No, why?" Daniel asked. Greg interrupted with bitterness in his voice and said "Cause they fucking make us walk around with these fucking stupid metal bins on our backs all day serving as naked shopping trolleys for the pleasure of the upstanding free customers of Piney Hills Fair. These shoppers, complete strangers will pull you around the Mall all day by your cock. That's what I meant!" Todd came into the conversation and added "Its one of the worst community service tasks you could have been allocated, from what I have heard only the Piney Hills Golf Club is worse. If you had been lucky you would have got litter patrol or tree planting. At the Mall you will find almost none of the shoppers will ever consider speaking to you; I am sure now after having done this now for quite a while, that in their minds we are nothing more than mere dumb animals or items of property'. Daniel was too shocked to speak. Being naked in a shopping Mall was bad enough but being dragged around by your penis was already sounding like it was horrendously humiliating and maybe even painful. Even worse he was being sent to the golf course on Tuesdays and Thursdays. "What's up with the golf course?" Daniel asked his face turning white with a newfound fear. Both the guys noticed Daniels reaction. "You didn't get the course as well did you?" Greg asked. "Yeah, on Tuesdays and Thursdays but why?" Daniel asked again. "Shit I'm sorry Daniel, if I'd known I wouldn't have said anything" Todd apologised. "Well now you've said that Todd we better tell him. Better he knows" Greg said this time showing real compassion in his voice. "I guess so" said Todd, "you tell him you're the one who had the friend who was told about this ". "Daniel I only got this second hand from a friend ok, so I don't know for sure it's true, sounds so off that it might just be true, anyways, my friend was told by his friend who was sent there to do Community Service that he was made to stand in a special enclosure before the tenth tee and ... and well ... he was ... he was the ....." Greg stuttered not being able to break the horrifying information to Daniel. "Go on! What was he?" Daniel begged, not wanting to know but dearly needing to know. Todd relieved Greg of his misery and said, "He was the players half way urinal!" The conversation just sort of died at that point, everyone obviously no longer felt like saying anything. Five or six more NEWDD juveniles arrived before the bus pulled in and all the NEWDD's settled down on the wooded slave seats for the journey to Piney Hills Fair. Piney Hills the most exclusive suburb of Eastbrook was situated as the name suggested on a small outcrop of rolling hills to the south east of town. Piney Hills looked back over the river and suburban Eastbrook. The bus wound it's way out of the Downtown area and through the inner south eastern suburbs along River Road before taking the off ramp for Piney Hills Road, and then almost immediately beginning the steep ascent to the top of the hills. Piney Hills Road is a divided road, for the first mile or so, and just before the divided section ended Daniel noticed the turn off for Piney Hills Golf Club. Cold fear struck deep at his being for it would be here that he did his community service on Tuesdays and Thursdays. As the bus climbed the hill it passed the residences of the wealthy and influential of Eastbrook. Many hidden almost totally from view behind strong gates and high manicured hedges. From time to time slaves could already be seen sweating away and working hard in the gardens of some of these properties. There was no such thing as a weekend off for a slave. Finally the bus pulled into the transit bay in front of Piney Hills Fair. The mall was a very prosperous and very upmarket looking shopping complex. Daniel had been there with his mum once or twice when he was younger but as it was full of designer label stores that were frequented by the well to do and the status conscious of the community neither of which his family fell into it was not a common shopping experience for him. "Come on follow us we will take you to meet our overseer" Todd helpfully offered to Daniel. "Thanks" Daniel replied. Todd seemed really nice for a gay guy and he hadn't tried to fondle Daniel at all during the bus trip even though he had sat right next to Daniel. Daniel admitted only to himself that he was slightly disappointed that nothing had happened. His opinions about gay guys were slowly changing! The NEWDD's walked around to the side of the Mall and entered by one of the slave's entrances. There was a guard there who checked the contents of their backpacks and scanned their temporary collars obtaining all their juvenile details. Daniel couldn't help notice the smirk on the guards face as he arrived at the head of the queue and his flaccid little penis was revealed to the guard's sight. "I hope you can get that up to something reasonable boy, the customers will be complaining bitterly if there is nothing to hold onto" he commented with a laugh, amusing himself but not Daniel. They were all assembled into a back dock area and made to stand at attention for a considerable time as more and more NEWDD juveniles arrived. All the juveniles were males; there was no sign of any female NEWDD's. Finally a young woman no more than eighteen or nineteen appeared. She checked a printed out list she had attached to a clipboard then called out "Daniel Green and Kyle Prescott raise your hands". Once identified the two first time NEWDD's were taken aside by the overseer who introduced herself as Dana Webb, informed them both that she too had served time as a NEWDD and then proceeded to instruct them as to their Community Service duties at the Mall. Kyle seemed to be about fifteen was particularly shocked. He obviously didn't have the advanced warning that Daniel had received off Todd and Greg about the unique Piney Hills traditions. All the other NEWDD's had helped each other strap on the shopping bins so the Overseer then instructed Kyle and Daniel how to attach their bins. Kyle was shown how to fit up Daniel first. Nylon adjustable straps with shoulder pads came over Daniels shoulders and they were joined by a short strap that ran horizontally just below Daniels neck, then ran around under his pecs to join high up at the top of Daniels back to a large open metal mesh bin. There was a further adjustable strap running from the base of the bin around Daniels waist and back to the bin. On the whole it was just like a big open backpack The whole thing was tightened and Daniel was ready to begin his first day of community service as some sort of intelligent shopping trolley. When all preparations were complete the cohort of NEWDD male juveniles was marched into Piney Hill Fair and mustered into a small pen. It was made to look like a single post and rail timber fence, but in fact it was made of cardboard. The pen was located off to one side of the Fairs Customer Information Booth. Inside the pen Daniel found himself standing totally exposed waiting for his first customer, along with the other twenty odd NEWDD juvenile slaves. A big sign above the pen advised customers that the NEWDD juveniles in the pen were available free of charge as a community service to shoppers to assist them in carrying around their days shopping. `Enjoy the total Piney Hills experience' the sign said and then preceded to show diagrams of how to handle the NEWDD slaves by steering and guiding them by their penis. The Overseer then ordered, too Daniels total horror," For those of you who aren't already, get your penis erect, now!" "Oh shit!" thought Daniel. Seeing some hesitation especially with Kyle and Daniel the Overseer ordered, "Do it NOW!" slapping a punishment paddle that she had removed from her belt against her palm. Feeling totally humiliated Daniel joined Kyle and the other flaccid juveniles in rubbing their cocks. Soon all of the NEWDD juveniles had full erections Usual instructions troops the Overseer instructed, "I want those cocks of yours to stay hard for the rest of the day. A boy with a `hard on' is essential to good customer service!" Gradually the mall began to fill with people. Early on before the rush Daniel did not notice his father standing off to one side checking his son was all right. Nor did he see the smile on his fathers face as he took in the sight of his naked son fully erect standing in line waiting to begin his first day's community service. Daniels first customer was a very conservatively dressed elderly lady. A middle-aged slave who she led around on an expensive looking woven gold and silver leash accompanied her. Daniel was obviously the overflow trolley for the days shopping. It was her personal slave who was directed to `steer' Daniel, much to the seeming delight of the slave. The Customer never laid a hand on him! Daniel was out in the Mall for nearly four hours with just this one customer. Daniel hated shopping and he soon decided a new form of torture had been invented. He was forced to stand for long periods of time as his customer perused good and tried on clothes and shoes in various stores throughout the mall. Finally after being burdened down with a bin full of shopping plus having his hands full with shopping bags for the last hour as well he helped the slave load the purchases into the customers car. The customer initialled and noted the time on the tag attached to the bin indicating that Daniel had performed satisfactorily and dismissed Daniel so he was able to return to the NEWDD pen. Ms Webb the overseer was there at the pen waiting when he returned and checking the tag and then her list informed Daniel he had a fifteen-minute meal break due. "Right" said Ms Webb, "Do you need to give that boner of yours some relief, before you eat, do you want relief?' Daniel blushed at this relative stranger asking him did he want to jerk off. "Ummm no thanks mam " he replied. "Don't be bashful boy your cock looks like it desperately needs to relax for a while" Ms Webb responded. `Well do you want relief or not, it's your only chance till you finish your time?" Ms Webb asked impatiently. `Yes please mam" the exceedingly modest Daniel whimpered. His penis was throbbing and anything to ease his discomfort was welcome, but asking for a jerk off was just so humiliating. Ms Webb ordered one of the other NEWDD juveniles in the pen to come over, "Right this slave has requested relief, I am delegating that duty to you. You have five minutes to get him his relief, and then it's his lunch break. Get going!" She handed Daniel a paper cup and said, "Here shoot into this and don't make a mess, or you will be licking it up!" Without hesitation right there in the middle of the mall the younger boy who at thirteen already had plump hanging balls and a penis not yet adult size, but well on the way topped with a trimmed pubic bush that looked like it was very respectable in it's natural state grabbed Daniels penis and began stroking it. Daniel gasped then began to softly moan as the pleasure and relief flowed through his throbbing little erection. The boy had some initial trouble getting used to Daniels small penile size but soon worked out a good technique using his thumb and forefinger. In less than two minutes Daniel was jigging on the spot as his little penis pulsed with another public orgasm and shot out a good load of cum into the cup. The relief as the Juvenile Deterrence brochure had suggested was immense. Daniel located his backpack, sat at the back of the pen and enjoyed his ten minutes of respite. Tom had packed him some sandwiches and an apple, both of which he enjoyed. There were only three other `trolleys in the pen when his ten minutes were up, so he was soon out around the mall again, this time being led by a teenager not much older than himself. This guy said nothing to Daniel just like the elderly matron before him but his fingers on Daniels penis said that he was enjoying the experience. Like Daniel this guy was a purpose driven shopper. He quickly bought his choice of designer label tee shirts and jeans and was on his way. During the remainder of the day Daniel was of service to a mother with a very young family and then finally a family group consisting of the Mother and Father plus two naked NEWDD boys and a fully dressed sister. The younger of the two brothers was sprouting a skinny two-and-a-half inch hairless little penis that was fully erect revealing the small set of balls it usually hid. The older brothers bobbing three-and-half inch penis was longer and thicker than his younger brother's, and was topped by a sparse patch of thin pubic hair. His balls were considerably larger than his brothers, at that in between stage between little boy and older teen. >From the conversation it was obvious that the two NEWDD boys had just been picked up from their community service litter patrol duties. It was also obvious from the comments that this was their first and only week as NEWDD juveniles. Daniel walked along behind the family, the eleven year old daughter steering him with glee by his erect and throbbingly sore penis. "This is so embarrassing," lamented the older brother to his younger sibling as he pointed to his erect penis. "Yeah I can't get mine down either" the younger brother replied. Hearing the conversation the sister butted in gloating, "I love seeing all these stiff handles on you boys". "Hey, careful, with him twerp," shouted the sympathetic older brother noticing how she was roughing up Daniels penis, "or he will be squirting in your hand." Daniel thought 'I wish' as the thought of obtaining `relief' was becoming very desirous again. "Great," gloated the sister, her brothers comments only encouraging her to go to town even more on Daniels penis. "Stop that," shouted the equally sympathetic younger brother. "No, you stop that noise," the mother turned and ordered her son, "slaves should be seen but not heard". "As far as NEWDD's are concerned, the mall is a touching zone. Your sister is in her right to do what she is doing" the father added to the conversation. "Yeah, well," lamely replied the older son, "even if she is in her rights, she should be a NEWDD too." "Be that as it may, the judge didn't rule that way," the mother responded to her son, " Actually, the mother dearly wished that the judge had sentenced her to time in NEWDD along with her brothers as requested. She was old enough, and of late she was becoming increasingly disrespectful and disdainful of parental authority, becoming ever bolder and bolder. The Judge just hadn't seen it that way! Still the mum was already thinking of ways around this judicial setback. The mother had noticed an advertisement in her local Community Watch Newsletter last month and again this month about a new imitative that was being encouraged by the Government. She had already set enquiries in motion. As Daniel was to find out when he got home that night tired and weary his last customers were not the only ones who had read their local Community Watch Newsletter. End Chapter 17. Acknowledgements: A Middle Class Slave by Pete Brown A Middle Class Slave Revisited by Steam Train The Jeffers Kids Nightmare by Nialos Leaning