Date: Fri, 3 Mar 2006 22:50:48 -0800 (PST) From: Steam Train Subject: Alternative deterrence Ch 18 Alternative Deterrence. By Steam Train (steam_t2000@yahoo.com) Chapter 18:Eric. Owen Green upon his return from Piney Hills was sitting in his study thinking deeply. Tom's suggestion that he take Eric and Melissa to court on a parental disposition to issue a NEWDD was too extreme he had decided. But what was he to do about their blatant disregard of his long standing instructions that no one from the family was to go the Eastbrook Discipline Centre unless on official business. Mr Green was annoyed again today at his son. Eric had left the house that morning without seeing him. He had distinctly told his son to see him this morning about his behaviour yesterday! Melissa at least had stayed home and invited some friends over. Mr Greens eyes Idled over his desk looking at nothing in particular as he thought through what to do with his son and daughter. His eyes stopped on the local `Community Watch' newsletter. He had yet to read it, there was little crime in his local community as was the case almost everywhere thanks to the reforms of Ex-President Shelley, so it never interested him normally but this time a banner advertisement at the bottom of the front page caught his attention. He read the advertisement a couple of times, though about its contents for a few minutes then picked up the phone and rang the contact number given. A long conversation followed with Dr Milos Learner a retired Psychologist who was also the local Community Watch Honorary Operations Secretary. By the end of the conversation when he hung up the phone, Mr Green was sitting up straight in his chair full of attention and thought. Tom's suggestion and Daniels NEWDD humiliation and embarrassment plus the radical voluntary programme supported by the Community Watch had resolved his problem. Could he really do that to Eric and Melissa, would he dare do it, what would his wife think of his idea? He got up from his desk and decided to find out what his wife thought of this most novel punishment idea! Within twenty minutes Owen and Vicki Green were driving down the street for a face to face meeting with Dr Learner! Some hours later in the early afternoon Eric returned accompanied by Rick, Josh, Brady, Teddy, Marco, Justin, Charlie and Joey. The same group of friends that had been with Eric yesterday at the Eastbrook Discipline Centre "Man am I glad we are home, I got to go and piss as soon as I get inside, I'm busting!" Eric informed his friends. Eric invited his friends inside. Most were older than him and in fact were his brother's former friends, but with his brothers demise Eric was big noting himself and attempting to take over his older brother's position as the leader of the gang. The fact that five of the group with him, Rick, Josh, Brady, Charlie and Joey had Juvenile court appearances on Tuesday and could end up NEWDD's themselves did not worry him at that moment. In fact it gave Eric more chance of taking over the leadership of the gang. As soon as Eric stepped inside after allowing his friends into the house, he was met by his dad. "Where have you been?" A very annoyed Mr Green demanded of Eric. "Out with my friends, why?" "You didn't ask to leave the house," Mr Green asserted. "Since when do I have too, especially on a weekend?" the defiant Eric answered. "Since last night and mind your mouth son! Mr Green rebuked. "I told you I would consider your blatant disregard for my wishes and let you know this morning after I had cooled down and then select an appropriate punishment," Mr Green said. "You never said I was grounded" Eric replied indignantly. "No I said I would see you in the morning, meaning just that! This morning! You took it on yourself to sneak out before I had the chance to talk with you" replied Mr Green. "I didn't sneak out! I arranged with the guys to meet at nine, no one was around when I got up, I couldn't even find Tom so I got myself a bite to eat and left. If you had been up you would have found me!" Eric stated. Eric's friends stood around fascinated by the unfolding family drama, but not daring to move or make a sound. The raised voices also bought Melissa and her friends Kathy, Kim and Marcie downstairs from Mel's room to see what was going on. In his mind Owen Green was taken aback by the comment that he wasn't up. He was of course up, but locked away downstairs in the basement! Vicki Green was giving him one of those looks that only wives can give husbands as she knew only too well that he in fact was out of bed early that morning as he often was. He choose not to go there! "Wether I was up or not, is not the issue, I told you to see me in the morning, you should have waited" said Mr Green. "No you didn't' retorted Eric, "You said you would see me in the morning not that I had to see you!" "Don't play semantics with me son, you knew what I meant and choose to twist my words to suit your requirements. Your doing too much of this lately Eric. I had decided on your punishment and your absence all morning has only helped to confirm my decision". "And so what's that decision to be then Dad?" Eric asked sarcastically deciding to bring the discussion to a head and show off his boldness in front of his friends. Neither Owen Green, Vicki Green or Tom missed the sarcasm, but it was Mr Green, who responded, "Second warning son, mind the way your talking or I'll reconsider my original plan of making a disposition to the juvenile court based upon your misbehaviour and disrespect of my rules and apply to have you made a NEWDD". Eric's friends gasped, Melissa and her friends gasped, Eric gasped. "Your fortunate son that I decided not to go down that course of action" Mr Green continued. There was a noticeable easing of tension in Eric's body and in Mel's as well as she was also on notice. "Instead son I have decided to issue a domestic NEWDD" Mr Green said then paused, looked at his wife then waited for the inevitable reaction from his son. "What the fuck's a domestic NEWDD" Eric blurted out! "Eric for that out burst I'm adding another two days to your original punishment of five days. I have warned you about your language and attitude too much already today!" "Sorry dad but what's a domestic NEWDD the now very worried Eric asked politely. "The moment you enter this house from this moment on, till seven days time you must instantly remove all your clothing, till such time as you leave the house again. Further you must ask permission of your Mum, Tom or me before you can leave the house. The same punishment rules that apply for a seventeen year old NEWDD juvenile apply to you whilst you are in this house" Mr Green explained. On hearing Eric's new naked orders Melissa friends Kathy, Kim and Marcie began to giggle at the thought of seeing Eric naked. Melissa however had a very nervous look on her face. She was wondering if this punishment would apply to her too. The girls had been hanging around hoping to grab a chance to see Daniel naked, now it seemed they might be going to get an added bonus. There were even snickers from Eric's friends who couldn't believe what they had just heard. `You can't make me go around the house naked, no way can you" Eric asserted defiantly. "It is against the law!" `It's not against the law son unless you step outside our house then you need a juvenile court issued, Notice of Exemption from Wearing Decent Dress. Within this house your mum and I decide the rules and if we choose to have you naked as a punishment then naked you shall be," said Mr Green. Again there were snickers and giggles. Despite her personal worries about her own involvement in this new scheme Melissa could not help thinking `this is just so awesome, both my brat brothers naked in the house. Maybe both my slaves'! Her father disrupted her reverie. "Ok Eric, strip off your clothes and hang them on the coat rack next to the door, you're inside and your punishment time has started" instructed Mr Green. "What, me get naked here in front of everyone? No way!" shouted Eric at his father. "Oh, yes you will son," said Mr Green, "right this instant, now start undressing! "No!" a defiant Eric shouted back at his dad. "I said NOW!" shouted back Mr Green. "You have two minutes, starting now!" "No, you can't make me," Eric continued to protest. "Yes I can," the now very angry Mr Green informed his son. And you have just earned yourselves a spanking, for defying my orders. Any further delay will only make it worst." I am not doing this, I am not a little boy, and I won't be treated like one, you can't make me" Eric protested again. "Do it, or I will personally remove all your clothes in front of your friends and the girls!" shouted Mr Green, moving towards his son "Yeah sure you will dad, you and who else" Eric retorted. "Me and the Community Guardians, that's who! Your mum and I went over to the local Community Watch and registered you for their voluntary domestic NEWDD program earlier today. So if you try to defy me, Eric the Guardians will help me deal with you" The mention of the Community Guardians bought gasps and drawn breaths from the assembled boys and girls. The Guardians were a group of semi-official volunteers whose job was to assist the police locally within the community in monitoring and correcting bad behavior. Eric could guess how eagerly this group of local vigilantes would volunteer to help strip him. He was now getting the clear message from his fathers words and actions that he was soon about to suffer a similar fate as his older brother. Kathy, Kim and Marcie all had huge smiles on their faces as they waited in anticipation of what was soon to be revealed. Melissa was getting very nervous but at the same time moist between her legs as her arousal heightened. Her girl friends were equally moist and all the boys had begun to tent their shorts and jeans, much to their discomfort because they were stuck the in the entrance hall with nowhere to go as Eric's punishment unfolded. Eric was now blushing and becoming flustered. He was quickly loosing face in front of his friends, so he made a quick decision to attempt to get out of the situation confronting him before the Guardians could be called. Eric remained still looking for the right moment to act. His friends took his hesitance as a sign of defiance but it wasn't. Then without warning Eric made a dash for the front door. Mr Green grabbed at him and shouted `Tom, grab him" With the large crowd of friends around him, Eric was hampered in his getaway but flung open the front door and ran out the door straight into a group of three Guardians. They grabbed him and bought him back inside to face his father. Two of the Guardians grabbed Eric's hands. No amount of struggling, pleading, or begging made any difference; Eric couldn't break loose from their grip. The third Guardian with assistance from Tom, began stripping the clothes off Eric, his tee shirt, his joggers and socks, his jeans, he was rapidly heading to be as naked as his brother. Soon the red-faced Eric was down to his white briefs, a very pronounced bulge showing in the front of them, certainly much more than Daniel was capable of producing. At that moment though he was regretting not choosing a pair of his boxers when he got dressed this morning. He could hear the snide comments about his cute `tighty whities'. Kathy, Kim Marcie and even Melissa held their breaths, as did the other boys waiting to see what would happen next. Eric pleaded one more time in desperation that he was a seventeen year old not a little boy and should be allowed to keep wearing his briefs. When Eric refused again to remove his briefs himself, Mr Green ordered the Guardian to remove Eric's last vestige of modesty and after a frantic struggle the Guardian with the help of Tom managed to strip his briefs from him. To Eric's abject horror a pair of socks folded inside each other to form a ball fell to the ground. All the watching audience thought, for a moment, that Eric's penis was flacid , then they saw a big drop of pre-cum seep out of it's tip. Eric was as hard as he was ever going to get! Eric was pretty hairy for his seventeen years of old. His legs were well endowed as was his chest and pubes. A very noticeable happy trail ran up to meet his belly button and was met by a cascading wave of hairs descending from his pecs down his chest. Unfortunately for Eric his mature looking hairy, macho body had a four-inch erect cock that was buried and almost hidden deep within his pubic forest. He had for some time stuffed a sock into his briefs to give the appearance that his cock and balls matched his masculine body. Now to his shame his secret was revealed. Eric blushing profusely tried to cover up but the Guardians had a firm grasp of his hands and held them away from his body. Mr Green ordered Eric to stop struggling and to put his hands on his head. At first he refused but the mention of a spanking by the Guardians was all it required to break Eric's resolve. Hesitantly and with great reluctance Eric slowly placed his hands on his head, putting all of his hairy glory on full display for the girls and his friends. Eric's face blushed the reddest it ever had been, embarrassingly aware that everyone was staring at his groin. Kathy, Kim and Marcie all gasped then burst out laughing at what they saw. "Hey, look everyone, Eric's got a little baby boner down there" Kim managed to get out between laughs. "Well, well," said Mrs Green, seeing Eric's private parts for the first time in many years and wanting to highlight her sons embarrassment and humiliation just like the proper NEWDD scheme, "Looks like Eric's still a little boy like his brother. You are very small aren't you? Why even your brother's transplanted little boy penis isn't much smaller and look at your sister she is way more mature". Eric blushed even deeper at this dig about his manhood or lack of manhood, but so surprisingly did Melissa. "Right" said Mr Green, "Anyone want to make a reasonable request for examination time with Eric, I'm sure he can wait a bit longer for that spanking he is due". For Kathy, Kim and Marcie this was unbelievable news. They were going to be allowed to inspect Eric like a real NEWDD not just look at him. Kim was the boldest and moved over and stood in front of the profusely blushing Eric. "Spread your legs" Kim commanded. Her family had a number of slaves and she had grown up watching her father and later her eldest brother carry out inspections. "Oh God, please don't touch me, please, PLEASE don't do this" Eric begged much to amusement of his friends and the other girls. Kim rubbed her hands up and down Eric's calves and thighs. "Turn around" Kim ordered, and she then ran her hands over his shoulders first, then down his back, one hand on either side, with her fingers probing around into Eric's ribs. She spent a lot of time pressing Eric's ass muscles cupping his butt, and testing and stretching the muscles there. Everyone was fascinated and mesmerized by how expert twelve year old Kim was at performing such an examination. "Face me again, boy". She ordered. The use of the term `boy' causing Eric to blush noticeably again. Kim ran her hands lightly now down over Eric's pecs, but she didn't pay any attention to Eric's nipples, instead she looked hard at his penis, which was still in a fully erect state. Finally she reached down and grabbed Eric's throbbing erection through its cover of pubic hair. At the touch of Kim's fingers Eric gasped. "Come on girls, have a feel its so silky smooth" Kim said to her friends. Soon the hesitancy was broken and first the other girls including even Melissa were feeling every inch of Eric's naked body then some of the boys grabbed Eric's dick and had a good feel. Prominent amongst then was Marco. Before Eric could be bought to an orgasm, Kathy and Marcie decided to see if Eric was ticklish. Feeling totally aroused Kathy reached out and began giving Eric a tickle. "No don't" Eric again pleaded but too late, the fingers of Kathy then Marcie followed by many other willing fingers from the audience began tormenting what seemed to Eric like every inch of his naked flesh. "Please, no don't, please stop, please I'm going to .... " Eric begged through his laughs, but his pleas just encouraged the tickling even more. "Oh no!!!!" Eric exclaimed as he lost control of his bloated bladder, and a solid stream of urine shot out of his penis slit and spilled on to the patio floor narrowly missing his tickling tormentors. Eric tried to regain control but couldn't stop the relentless flow of piss Suddenly Brady and Charlie began to chant, "Piss -- er, Piss -- er", the others soon joined in the chant. Finally Mr Green decided his son had been examined enough and ordered, "Eric, Its time for that spanking I promised". "Tom would you be so kind as to assist by doing the actual spanking" Mr Green requested. "My pleasure, Master" replied Tom as he took one of the ornamental hall chairs and carefully avoiding the puddle of urine sat on the chair ready for action. "Over Tom's knees now!" Mr Green ordered. Eric glanced at the three guardians and knew he should obey, however he tried one last plea. `Dad no you can't, you have never had me hit before. Please, PLEASE DON"T! Eric begged. "Son thanks to your brother I can see I've been too soft on all three of you. I don't hold with the extreme public discipline displayed at the Discipline Centre in Eastbrook but I can see that a totally embarrassing and humiliating experience or experiences combined with some painfully remembered spankings can set you on a path to being a law abiding respectful citizen". "Ok lets get this over with" Mr Green responded. The guardians moved Eric over to where Tom was sitting and Tom forcefully pulled Eric into position on his lap ready to be spanked. A position that gave everyone an excellent view of Eric's till now private anus and sphincter. Soon Tom was reigning down one hard hand spank after another, Eric to his shame was soon kicking, squirming, begging and crying in front of his friends and the four girls. He was proving to be less of a man than his brother who had endured not just hand spanks but the paddle and the cane. Eric's bare bottom began turning a bright red under the relentless onslaught of Tom. Hand smack after hand smack descended upon his increasingly burning, increasingly painful backside as Tom let out years of frustration at having to service Eric's every demand and tidy up after Eric without complaint. Too soon for the totally enthralled girls and the eight guys, but not quick enough for Eric the show was over. Only to be replaced with a show of Eric dancing, prancing, rubbing, sobbing and jumping all about the hall, even treading in his own piss. "Eric stop that rubbing and jumping this instant" Mr Green ordered. "Yes daddy" the now totally humiliated and subservient Eric replied. End Chapter 18. Acknowledgements: Willing Slave by Pete Brown My Greatest Birthday Ever, Taking Back Control & Timmy's Terrible Saturday by Nialos Learning.