Date: Mon, 8 Sep 2014 16:41:38 -0400 From: DOGG Subject: cityofbrotherlove-18 CITY OF BROTHERLY LOVE-18 Posttraumatic Denial Written by Eugene Marvin -aka- NPhillydogg@aol.com ___________________ >>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>SCENE-1<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< NORTH PHILLY Precinct-23 Philadelphia police detectives Malik Jones [28] and Maleece Cortez [35] sat at their perspective desks, both awaiting their partners, unsure how they would react after circumstances beyond their controls caused their partners to perform sexually in ways they never expected [see: chaps-12 & 17 for details]! 39 year old Lewis Alexander [Malik's new partner] came in and sat down quietly at his desk without speaking to everyone [which was definitely out of character for the married father of 2]! He avoided making eye contact with Malik, as his former partner [Paul Rothman] couldn't help but notice the sudden change in his behavior, walked over to Lewis's desk to speak on it...! "Lewis..." he said, taking a seat [uninvited]...! "...what happened to you...? Where've you been...?" he asked, concerned! "Nothing..." said Lewis, acting as if nothing had happened...! "...I...just...needed a day or 2 to myself, is all...!" he said simply! Paul wasn't buying it...! "Bullshit...!" whispered the older man [harshly]! "I've known you for nearly 6 years now..., and in all that time, you've NEVER needed to a few days to yourself...!" speculated the detective! "This all started the DAY you were assigned to work with Malik..." he added, as Malik looked up from his paperwork [hearing his name]...! "...did he DO something that upset you...? You 2 disappeared so quickly that day...did he MAKE you do something you didn't feel comfortable with...?!" Lewis looked over at Malik [who was still looking back at him], and immediately began thinking of how Malik took him down to Snyder's Drive [a known tranny prostitute strip in North Philly] and made him have sex with one of the hookers [Khloe]...! Malik could SEE the memories churning about in Lewis's head as it replayed in his brain...wondering if he was going to spill the beans and tell the truth...? "No..." answered Lewis, causing Malik to breathe a sigh of relief...! "...nothing of the sort...! I just...needed a day or so to adjust to the idea...!" Paul leaned into Lewis... "You don't have to be afraid to tell me the TRUTH..." insisted the Caucasian detective, pressing the issue! "...no one would hold it again against you...!" "Really, Paul..." smiled Lewis, tapping his ex-partner on the shoulder with a file folder...! "...you need to relax...! You're too tense!" he added, before getting up from his desk to head over to the filing cabinet...! Paul looked back at Malik [who smiled at detective Rothman innocently] with destine...! "I know you did SOMETHING to my partner, Malik..." he accused, openly...! "...and I'll find out WHAT...!" "He's MY partner now, Paul...!" said Malik, as Rothman stormed back to his desk to sulk! Malik got up to follow Lewis... "Lew..." he called, as detective Alexander turned around [reluctantly]...! "...I just...wanted to THANK YOU for not turning me IN and revealing what I taught you...!" "Taught me...?" questioned Lewis, thoughtfully! "Let me think...YOU taught me...how to be unfaithful to my wife...! YOU taught me...how to screw around and forsake my wedding vows! And YOU taught me...to FUCK a $5 hooker for nothing...! So I suppose you taught me a lot! Thank YOU, Malik!" said Lewis, sarcastically! "uh...I see you're still working THROUGH some of those issues..." said Malik, backing away...! "I'll uh...I'll be at my desk if you ever wanna talk about it...!" he offered, before heading back...! Lewis instantly got angry with himself, having promised himself he wasn't going to snap at Malik, that he was going to accept what happened as `part of the job' working undercover...! He hated that he couldn't just get over it, but he felt so dirty now sleeping next to his wife in bed...! And it was ALL Malik's fault! MEANWHILE just a few minutes later, 30 y/o detective Nicolas Hightower walked into the building, taking his seat opposite his partner [Maleece]...! Maleece watched Hightower's every move [as he logged onto the computer mainframe], wondering if he was going to SNAP on him over what happened yesterday...? "YOU okay...?" asked Maleece, wondering how Nick slept last night...? "Not now...not here, Mal...please...?" asked Hightower, squirming in his seat as his asshole still smarted from the gangbang! Maleece tried to ignore it and let it go, but he was still reeling from what happened with his lover Jake [chap-15]! He got up from his desk, walked over and grabbed Hightower's arm and physically dragged him into the nearest men's room [catching everyone's attention]...! "Yo...Maleece...what the fuck...?!" asked Hightower, as he was being shoved into the restroom! There was an officer already using one of the urinals, he looked back at Maleece and Hightower when they came in, then zipped up and left without even washing his hands...! Maleece checked the stalls to make sure they were alone...! "That was a real STUPID thing you did yesterday...!" he shouted [protectively]! "I didn't NEED you to infiltrate The BLUDS...I was already IN there...!" "And NOW we have it covered from 2 different angles..." argued Hightower, still believing he did the right thing! "Yeah...your MOUTH and your ASS...!" snared Maleece [sarcastically], getting a shocked [then hurt] look from his partner...! "I didn't NEED you in there as backup...! I needed you out HERE, working from the office in case I needed something like I did with that fake apartment you set me up in...!" "That's what PAUL is for...!" argued Hightower, wanting to be IN the field! "Besides, I can STILL work from the office if I need to..., I don't work FOR the chop-shop...I just bring them CARS every once in a while...!" "And you don't think Caesar's men aren't gonna stop by the airport long-term parking lot to SEE you working in action...?" asked Maleece! "When I pretend to be a drug dealer, I HAVE to put IN a certain amount of hours on the corners to commit to the job...! Caesar and his men drive by all the time to make SURE I'm working and pulling my own weight! You don't think they'll POP-UP at the airport from time to time, looking for YOU to survey cars in the parking lot...?" "I...I uh...I didn't THINK of that..." said Hightower...! Maleece signed [his hands on his hips], looking worried that HT's identity wouldn't hold up with Caesar...! "We're gonna HAVE to go to McDonald and SEE if we have any contacts at the airport that could collaborate your story and get you some hours sitting in the parking garage...!" Hightower grabbed Mal's arm as he was about to leave... "Mal..." he called, still visibly shaken after the initiation and what happened to him... "...I'm sorry if I fucked up...!" he apologized, sincerely! "And...THANK YOU for helping me through it last night...!" he added, referring to Mal fucking him in front of Carlito]! Mal could SEE the remorse in HT's eyes...knowing the initiation had done a NUMBER on him mentally! "Look Nick..." said Maleece, taking him into his confidence...! "...I had to go through the same initiation rite...not with the gang, but with Caesar himself and his brother Javier...! I understand some of the traumatics running through your head...! You're NOT alone...! SOME of us are very dedicated to our roles...me, Malik, Ramone...we in DEEP because we do what we HAVE to do to stay undetected...!" "So the rumors were TRUE about Malik and Ramone fucking with drug dealers undercover...?" asked HT, curiously...! "Look...it ain't about RUMORS right now..." said Maleece, shoving his hand in HT's chest to get him focused on the NOW...! "...it's about YOU, and what YOU'RE gonna do to keep your identity straight and gather as much information as you can...! Now we've GOT to involve the airport in our investigation...! It would've been better had we had a LEAD that someone at the airport was REALLY stealing cars and selling them to Caesar, that way we could justify to McDonald WHY you need a cover there...! It's gonna be a hard sell otherwise!" "I'll take responsibility for it..." said Hightower, gallantly! "You're damn right you will!" assured Maleece, leading the way out the door...! +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Malik was busy working at his desk, when he suddenly got an unexpected call on his cell phone...! "Hey..." he said, seeing Tyrone's name pop up on caller ID, "...I was just thinking about you...!" he said, knowing he and his lover needed to TALK openly about what happened at Kane's...! "Huh...? Yeah, I know it well...!" he responded, looking at his watch...! "I could be there in 30 minutes...! Yes. Okay. See you then!" he said, before opening his desk draw and putting his badge, wallet, and registered weapon inside before locking them away and heading out the door to his rendezvous...! "Malik..." called his new partner [Lewis], following behind...! "...where we going...?" "WE...?" asked Malik, looking back at Lewis as if he were crazy...! "I'M going to MEET with someone..." he said, coldly! "...YOU can stay here and...continue whatever it is you DO with Rothman...!" "But Rothman's NOT my partner anymore...YOU are...!" corrected Lewis, getting closer to Malik as he spoke! "Look...I CAN'T take you with me, yet..." said Malik, knowing Lewis wanted to contribute! "...you're NOT ready...and we haven't established an identity for you yet...!" "But I thought I was your homeboy RAWDAWG from prison...?" corrected Lewis! "Wasn't THAT the ID you gave me when you hooked me up with that tran...with Khloe...?" Malik shook his head, trying not to chuckle [disrespectfully]... "That was a spur of the moment whim..." he clarified, "...we can't take an identity THAT flimsy to Kane and expect him to just instantly make you a member of his NJM...! We have to sit down and establish a bonafed character...someone you can live, breathe, and taste as a REAL human being...! THAT'S the only way you'll be able to infiltrate a gang and be accepted as ONE OF THEM...!" "But...I thought THAT was why you took me down to Synder's Drive...?" asked Lewis, confused...! "That was just to get your FEET wet!" corrected Malik! "Khloe can't help you establish an identity...she's just a hooker! Kane probably doesn't even KNOW her...!" he said walking away! But then he stopped, realizing Lewis was a little wet behind the ears...! "If you want to get INTO the gang, you're going to have to start at the bottom UP..., as a street dealer first, working in one of the drug houses like I did...!" "So basically I'm on my own...?" asked Lewis, looking at the big picture...! "Sorry..." said Malik, hunching his shoulders as he walked out the door... >>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>SCENE-2<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< NE PHILLY 30 y/o Columbus Maximillian lay in bed on top of his girlfriend [Ashley], fucking her hard and deep as he lay between her legs, driving his dick through her juicy wet cunt 8 and 1/2 inches with every thrust! They'd been fucking for hours, his stamina off the charts as he lay chest to chest, holding her legs up about his biceps as he pumped straight through her vagina like a horny teenager high off Sextacy! Ashley's cunt was numbing from all the extra sex they'd been having, clinging to Max's back like a life preserve as he buried his face in the pillows behind her head and fucked, battering his way through her body! Ashley had cum multiple times since the session began [earlier that morning], having had to call off work because he refused to let her go, wanting to fuck all morning! Ashley didn't question Max's motives, she simply reached for the phone and told her department store manager that she wouldn't be coming IN today because she felt ill! The managed wished her a speedy recovery as Max pulled her back to bed, covering her mouth, face, and neck in heavy kisses as he re-rammed himself back inside her! Max suckled Ashley's tits while he fucked, bending his head down as he physically grasped her one breast and pulled it up to meet his mouth, latching his lips to the fat nipple and suckling like a hungry baby! Ashley groaned as he pulled her left leg up higher to get even deeper inside her, plunging through her as he slapped pelvises! She ran her fingers through his sweaty hair and back, trying to claw him with her nails! Max pulled away from sucking her tits long enough to kiss her in the mouth, letting her suckle his tongue as it slipped into her oral cavity! Ashley panted into his mouth as he continued fucking her, making her titties bounce back and forth like water balloons! Max rose up on his arms in pushup position over top her, then started banging into her hard, slapping bodies as he drove his dick deep, slamming his meaty white sausage through her pretty pink cunt! Ashley looked up into his face [seeing Max's eyes roll over white] and knew he was about to blow another load inside her...! "Give IT to me, baby..." she encouraged, as he fucked her harder, causing the entire bed to rock and move! "...GIVE it to me...GIVE IT to me...give it TO ME...give it TO me..." she panted and gasped as his body crashed into her over and over, the momentum of his thrusts stopped by his bouncing balls slapping into her ass! "Arrrrhhh fuck..." he groaned, gritting his teet before ramming all the way IN and holding his ground! "Yes...! YES!" shouted Ashley! "GIVE IT TO ME...!" she yelled, already in the thralls of pleasure! "ARRRRRRRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHHHH...!!" screamed Max, feeling his dick thicken, pulse, and strain somewhere deep inside her vagina before it finally exploded its load of cum cargo [from his aching and convulsing balls] directly into her, filling her full of hot gushing sperm! "OH YES...! YES...! OOOooohhhh...! Uhhhhh...uhhhhhh...yessss..." moaned Ashley, coming with him as he cunt tightened and spasm around his embedded prick, milking it dry inside her! Max lay on top of her for a while as his dick drained, then rolled off onto his back, panting as if he'd just ran 10 miles! Ashley waited beside him for a moment, basking in the afterglow of fantastic sex before getting up to shower...! "Are we going to LEAVE the apartment at all today...?" she asked as she headed into the bathroom...! "I mean...I called off from work and we've had sex 4 times already...! Is THAT all we're going to do today...?" she asked, taking a pee on the toilet while her vagina throbbed...! Max continued to lay naked in bed, staring up at the ceiling! He could barely hear Ashley talking, as his mind was cluttered with thoughts, wondering whatever possessed him to DO what he DID to the mayor...?? Max prided himself on being a virile heterosexual, a man's man, someone other men looked up to to emulate! It turned him stomach and made him want to hurl every time he thought of going down on Mayor McConnell [the visions played vividly in his mind over and over, looping on repeat], sucking his big black dick and eating his cum...! If they guys at the job ever found out..., hell, if his partner [Jack] ever found out, he'd never be about to live it down or lift his head again in public! He knew he wouldn't be able to simply forget it happened! Seeing McConnell again would surely bring the memories back to the forefront of his brain! Not to mention McConnell...! WHAT must HE be thinking...?? He probably thought they were lovers now...?! He'd probably have a candle light dinner waiting for him in the wongs every night, hoping to repeat what happened! Max wasn't going out like that! He wasn't gay, and he wouldn't be anybody's bitch, no matter WHO they were or WHAT their political status was! He was a man's man, someone to be emulated and admired! He wasn't about to have his reputation tarnished over some bullshit! He jumped up out of bed and rushed into the shower, yanking back the curtains to catch another round with his women! "AHHH...!" screamed Ashley [when he yanked back the curtain on her], having seen PSYCHO once! "You scared me...!" she blushed, as he climbed into the shower with her, his hard dick sticking straight out at her as he backed her into the corner and started stuffing his cock back up her worn cunt...! "My god..." she gasped as he lifted her legs for deeper access... "...did you take a Viagra this morning...?" she asked, as he started humping in and out of her...! >>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>SCENE-3<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< CITY HALL Police Officer Malik Jones emptied out his packets as he entered through City Hall's metal detector, gaining access into the building! He knew Mayor McConnell's office was on the second floor, but he wasn't there to see his former Captain! He made his way instead to The Tower [where the 27 ton, 37 foot tall statue of William Penn stood watching over the city he helped found]! Malik got into the 6 man elevator leading up to the Observation Deck located just below the base of the statue, and got off to find himself facing a panoramic view of the city! The circular deck [which was once fenced in by a chain linked fence] was encased in glass [for extra added safety]! Malik was so mesmerized by the spectacular view of the city that he nearly forgot the real reason why he was up there...! "You didn't bring me up here to SHOVE me off the side, did you...?" he joked [awkwardly], as his boyfriend Tyrone rounded the deck...! "DMoney's doing a PSA with McConnell downstairs...!" answered Tyrone, without cracking a smile! "Look Ty..." said Malik, as the 2 men closed the huge gap between them...! "...I'm SORRY for what I did..." he apologized, "...but it REALLY wasn't what you think it was...!" he defended in the same breath! "Yeah...I was having SEX with Kane and Marvin...but it wasn't because I wanted to...I HAD to, to get in closer to Kane...! You understand that, right...?" "We've both done things we might regret..." said Tyrone [referring to his decision to become DMoney's predecessor for The Underground], "...doesn't mean we don't love each other...just means we're ambitious, and will do whatever we HAVE to do to get ahead in our jobs...!" "That's not what I meant..." said Malik! Tyrone placed his finger up to Malik's lips, shutting him up...! "I ain't bring you here to argue, baby..." he said, pulling him in for a kiss! Malik was somewhat taken aback by the actions, but quickly gave in if it meant ending the fight between them! He felt Tyrone's tongue slip into his mouth and quickly accepted it, having hadn't kissed or hugged him since the fight! Tyrone wrapped his arms lovingly around his BF's waist, cupping his ass with his hands as he tongued his mouth, feeding him his spit! Malik could feel Tyrone's hardening dick beginning to press into him as they ground together...! Tyrone started to undo Malik's pants... "No Ty..." protested Malik, pushing away...! "...not HERE...they're cameras...!" he reminded, looking around...! "They ain't ON right now..." informed his lover, taking off his jacket and undoing his shirt... "...I paid security to give me a 30 minute window of privacy when I signaled him...!" "WHEN did you signal him...?" asked Malik curiously, already hungry for the lump forming in Ty's pants...! "As soon as you got off of the elevator...!" smiled Ty! Malik needed no more invitation than that, as he fell to his knees and started undoing Ty's pants for him! Tyrone watched as Malik freed his erection, then took it in his mouth before the air could even hit it, swallowing it whole in his throat! Tyrone held onto the banister surrounding the deck and watched Malik eat him up alive! Malik pressed his face all the way into Tyrone's pubes, his nose buried in his man's pubic hair while his chin smashed against his hairy ball set, the 8.5" dick completely lodged down into the very back of his throat! "MMMmmm..." he moaned as he pulled back, tightening his lips about the hard shaft as he suckled the sweet head before descending all the way back down on it! Tyrone allowed his lover to suck him for a few minutes, knowing how much Malik loved it! Malik made himself comfortable on his knees as he feasted on his lover's rod, taking his time to enjoy it sliding in and out of his throat, staring up into Tyrone's smoldering eyes as he stared back down at him, enjoying the hot porn show! "I love you, Ty...!" said Malik, pulling back to the head for a moment before swallowing him all over again! "I love you too, baby...!" said Tyrone, having finalized his deal with Kane! He pulled Malik up off his knees and kissed his mouth again, swabbing him good with a wet sloppy kiss! Malik sucked up all of Tyrone's drool, looping his tongue out of his mouth as he licked all about Tyrone's mouth, nose, and chin! Tyrone turned Malik around, then got down on his knees behind him, pushing his BF forward as Malik bent at the waist, exposing his bubbled ass! Tyrone spread the cheeks, then pushed his face all up inside, licking the ass crack and steamy hole! "OMG..." moaned Malik, looking at his watch before getting down on all fours! They still had 24 minutes before the camera came back on, catching them red handed! He pushed his ass back into Tyrone's face, feeling his stiff tongue enter his ass! Tyrone loved eating Malik's ass-pussy, prying the round cheeks apart before licking over the well-used hole! It definitely resembled a pussy at times, slightly haired with delicious looking pussy lips forming the hole! How many times had Tyrone pushed his dickhead between those lips, sinking into the hot rectum to be sucked off for 20 to 40 minutes of straight fucking nonstop...? How many times had he cum in that gut...? Had Malik been a woman, they would have a dozen babies by now! Tyrone pulled his face from Malik's ass after a few minutes of preparation, then got up on his knees and closed the gap between them, pushing his stiff/hard 8+ inch dick straight up into his lover's ass! Malik groaned erotically as the dick pushed through him, burying in his gut! He thrilled when Tyrone grabbed his waist and pulled him back into him, grinding against his ass, churning that meaty Rollins' woody around inside him! Once penetration had been established, Tyrone set to fucking, pulling backwards [withdrawing] and shoved back in [full throttle], burying his dick again and again! "Oh yes, Tyrone...fuck me, baby...! Oooohhh yeahhhh..." moaned Malik, looking out over the city staring back at them! Of all the office buildings surrounding City Hall, Malik wondered how many had people looking out of the windows at that moment...? Of course no one would be able to see THEM per-se, unless they had binoculars or a telescope! But then Malik started to think about all the office execs with telescopes in their offices and started to worry...! He was just about to voice his opinion [as it was still only midafternoon], when Tyrone started to thrust into harder, causing him to lose his train of thought! "Yeeahhh..." he moaned as he lifted up and titled his head backwards, reaching back to pull Tyrone into another soulful kiss! Tyrone met Malik's mouth with his own, sharing another wet one as he continued to hold onto his waist and fuck into his bubbled butt! "I can't believe we're up here FUCKING at the top of City Hall...just underneath William Penn...!" he moaned into his lover's kissing mouth! Tyrone reached up under Malik's shirt and tweaked his nipples, causing Malik to groan into his mouth! He shoved Malik face down against the floor, leaning in over top him as he maneuvered himself in-between Malik's legs and started to pound his ass into the ground! Malik arched his back, elevating his ass to allow Tyrone deeper access! "Yeah...fuck me...! Fuck me, baby!" he moaned lustfully, feeling Ty's pelvic bone starting to slap into his ass as he started to drive all 8.5 inches inside! "Like that dick...?" asked Tyrone [in pushup position], watching his dick disappear between Malik's around cheeks! Malik pushed his ass back against Tyrone's thrusts to show him just HOW MUCH he liked it, causing the dick to punch through him harder! Tyrone used his knees to push Malik's legs wider, gripping onto the back of his shoulders for support as he started to hammer through his ass, beating him down from the side out! Malik reached down and underneath his elevated hips and grabbed his hard-on and started stroking! "Oh yeah...oh god...fuck me...UHG...UHG...UHH..." he grunted every time Tyrone slammed into him! Tyrone could feel Malik's asshole sucking him off, the flexing anal muscles pulling at his shaft like a hot mouth! He wanted to cum, but not just yet, yanking his dick out of the succulent ass and flipping Malik over onto his back, pushing his legs into the air to elevated his buttock, then re-rammed his dick back in his hole and resumed fucking! "OH GOD..." groaned Malik, not knowing which way was up as he looked up at the stone base platform William Penn stood upon overhead! Tyrone leaned in over him and resumed fucking, picking up where he last left off as he started hammering his way through his lover's ass with deliberate deep strokes, battering his innards roughly like a rapist! Malik thrilled at the rough fucking, still stroking his hard-on as it started spurting across his exposed chest and stomach, painting white against his skin! Tyrone reached up and ran his thumb through it, then fed it to Malik as the undercover officer sucked his own cum off his fingers! Tyrone picked up the pace, slamming even harder before driving his dick balls deep...! "AAARRRRRRRRRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGGGG...!!!" he screamed as he rammed all the way in and came, shooting a firestorm of hot cum deep in Malik's active colon! "Urrhhh...uhhhh...ooohhh...ooo..." moaned Malik as he tightened his anal muscles to squeeze around Tyrone's embedded dick! Tyrone lifted his own shirt to lay flat across Malik's torso, mashing their bodies together so the cum Malik spilled won't get on their clothes, kissing him square on the lips as they both came down off their highs...! Tyrone looked at his gold watch... "3 minutes to spare...!" he smiled, pulling out of Malik as they quickly got dressed and left before the security cameras came back on! >>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>SCENE-4<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< EAST FALLS 53 y/o city mayor David L. McConnell paced around the upstairs bedroom of The Mayor's Mansion in East Falls, wondering HOW he was going to deal with confronting his chief security officer [Maximillian], after their sexual encounter...? It'd been a full day or so since Max followed McConnell out to Roswell Heights in South Philly and stopped him from assassinating the drug king KANE in cold blood, before taking him back home to the mansion and incidentally having sex with him [see: chap-16 for details]! Max ran outside to meet with his partner afterwards, but never came back into the house! The next morning when McConnell got up for work, the guards were gone and the morning staff had arrived to cook, clean, and attend the gardens...! McConnell had breakfast as usual, then was driven into work where he had meets scheduled all day, as well as a PSA [public service announcement] with Julio Espisedo and DeWayne `DMoney' Wright! The PSA video went great, with each candidate speaking directly into the camera about drugs and how its affected the community at large, and how to stop drugs from being sold in the worst hit neighborhoods! McConnell spoke first [talking about his campaign agenda to stop drugs on the streets]! Julio spoke second [discussing how drugs ripped his life apart when his only son was murdered in a drive-by shooting outside his home when he was only 6, the piece was very emotional as Julio broke down and sobbed, but then the camera cut back to him a few minutes later after he recovered to finish the piece]! DMoney's PSA was last, with him describing how he got caught up in selling drugs as a teenager, believing it was the only way for inner city urban kids to make money and get ahead! He then went on to say how he was wrong, and that drugs only ruins lives and tear down thriving communities and self-esteems! At the end of the commercial all 3 men stood together as a `united front', all speaking the same message together as a community of successful BLACK MEN [coming from nothing] standing as one! It was a powerful piece, one guaranteed to generate a lot of noise [which was the whole purpose of the commercial]! McConnell was proud of his accomplishment, and returned home after a tiring [draining] day to eat his dinner alone in the kitchen around 10pm! He kept expecting [hoping] Max would suddenly show up as he always had, so they could clear the air and discuss what happened, but Max never left the car! McConnell went to the window several times to make sure he was still there, noticing movement IN the car, before finally going up to bed! "That's like the 10th time he's checked that window..." said security officer Jack Lotman [Max's partner], "...you think he's LOOKING for someone...?" he asked, looking back at his partner who sat behind the wheel tonight...! "Maybe that PERP I saw running from his house yesterday...? Scaling over the back fence like a coward...! What kinda FAG runs and jumps a fence after fucking the mayor...?" wondered Jack, aloud...! "Some married guy with a family to lose if it got out, no doubt...! Or some office staffer at City Hall who's been sucking dick for a promotion...? Oh, or some HUSTLER with a rap sheet so long that one more bust for prostitution would've put him back in jail quicker than he could cum in the mayor's eye...!" he chuckled [at his own joke]! "I...I don't SEE McConnell fucking hustlers...!" said Max, pretending to read through a magazine [trying not to think of McConnell at all]...! "How do YOU know what perverts DO behind closed doors...?" asked Jack [argumentatively]! "You didn't SEE this big guy scaling the wall...! He was as big as YOU..." described Jack, causing Max's blood to run cold as he sank down in his seat [to look smaller], trying not to change his facial expression and continuing to glance through the magazine nonchalantly! "...YOU couldn't scale that wall as fast as HE did...! HE didn't want to be seen or get caught for a reason...!" he surmised, looking back out the car window at the house, checking to see if McConnell was still looking...? "He's definitely looking for SOMEONE..." he continued, as the downstairs light shut off...! __________________________________ This story writing by EUGENE MARVIN aka NPHILLYDOGG@aol.com __________________________________________ To leave comments, questions, and/or suggests, write me at address above, or hit me up on Facebook for updates on what I'm currently working on. ____________________________________________________ IF YOU ENJOYED THIS STORY [AND MANY MORE LIKE IT], MAKE SURE YOU DONATE TO NIFTY THIS MONTH...! Dogg!