Date: Sat, 6 Jan 2007 02:40:21 -0800 (PST)
From: James Robinson <juzjamie20@yahoo.com.au>
Subject: City Train

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   City Train                                           by justjames17.


'Twas New year's Eve and our public transport was free to travel, I decided
to travel to the city on the train and set off to the station after 3pm
when the free travel kicked in. It was warm and humid weather with the
threat of thunderstorms brewing so light clothes were the go, cargo shorts
& polo shirt with sandals on my feet. I walked into the station and waited
there for the train to arrive, a very tall teen guy arrived, wearing camo
trousers and a t-shirt. First thing I noticed was he went to validate his
ticket so I said, "Hey mate it's free travel this arvo."

He looked surprised and grinned thanking me as my eyes flicked to his
crotch, man his goolies were tight bunched and showing through the light
cotton pants as a pointy bulge. I thought wow he is something else, he was
slender in body and dark of complexion, probably Mediterranean or South
American even though he had an Aussie accent. He was very handsome with
close-cropped black hair and the darkest eyes, full moist lips and cute
dimples. We chatted for a while then as the train arrived we separated and
got on different carriages.

The trip into the city was a blast, I hadn't travelled on trains in a long
time and they had improved amazingly, much faster than the old ones they
really jerked you about in the seat as they started and stopped, a bit like
a fun fair ride hehehe. The view was totally awesome too the arrival of
many hot guys all heading into town for the fireworks & public concert in
Federation Square, some had sheilas on their arms others alone or with
mates so I was entertained and had innumerable boners watching them.

We reached the city and everyone piled out racing up the escalators or
stairs to the main concourse where a huge crowd was milling about
excitedly. I was swallowed in the crushing crowd and it swept me along with
it, like a twig in a river, until we funnelled out through the ticket gates
and flowed out under the clocks where I hopped aside and stood leaning
against the entrance wall. The milling crowd and the constant motion of
people going and coming fascinated me as I stood there watching and
listening. Beside me was a group of Goths in their tatty black attire and
weird make up, the sheilas were gross to say the least, mostly fat and ugly
but one of the boys was pretty fit and stunning, what I'd call phat. He was
slim wearing skin tight black jeans which looked like a second skin and
showed his tight package to advantage, his black died hair was spiked to
the max about 6 inch spikes stood up all over his head looking like a huge
porcupine or hedgehog. He turned away to talk to one of the girls and I was
treated to the view of his so tight little bubble bum, I was so urged to
reach out and feel him up but the presence of two burly policemen put me
off as they stood watching the Goths closely.

The group moved away and I watched him till they melded into the swirling
crowd and disappeared from view. I decided, as it was so early I'd go for a
second train ride and waited to jump aboard a different train going out on
another line for variety. There I was standing watching the passing parade
when I looked up the escalators to see HIM, my heart stopped beating in my
chest, I couldn't breath as I watched him ride down to the platform. He was
sipping on a container of juice through a straw, I watched his perfect
puffy lips move as he sucked and my mind conjured pictures of that
beautiful face sucking on my stalk.

He was wearing black well-worn soft jeans and a black t-shirt the jeans not
skin tight but moulded softly to his muscular legs while a tantalising
bulge showed under the soft denim. His honey blond hair shone in the sun
light and his tanned smooth shiny skin glistened as he moved, a face that
was like something out of a dream, absolute perfection from his broad brow
to his strong chin. Not a single blemish on his satin skin his blue eyes
roved the crowd as he came through and stood near me leaning against a sign
in his scuffed sneakers. His hips were slightly thrust out accentuating his
sexy bulge as he sipped on his drink. Our eyes met and I saw him sort of
blink at me then he smiled around the straw, he'd caught me studying him
and I suspect he knew why, he must have been so used to both guys and girls
looking at him.

He shifted his stance a little and I watched his genitals move smoothly
under almost velvet of his worn denims, I sighed and tore my eyes away from
him as I heard a burst of giggling on my right. There was a stunning lad
with his girl, I was amazed black seemed to be the in colour today; this
boy about 17 was also dressed totally in black. He wore a pair of light
black track suit pants and a t-shirt about two sizes too small which
strained over his so slim torso, as I watched him he laughed and stretched
his arms up over his head. I swallowed hard and fast as his flat sexy
stomach came into view, the slight trace of fine black hairs dusted his
belly in a line from his sexy outie navel to the top of his trackies. I
wanted to lick him and make him squirm and moan as he talked animatedly
with his girl, his smooth face alight with happiness and expressively
showing his sweet nature.

I looked away as he lowered his arms and a train glided into the platform,
he and the girl stood up and made their way to the train as I watched his
amazing bubble bum as he walked arm in arm with his girl, his arse was
perfection and I imagined burying my face into those perfect buns. They
moved out of sight as I looked back to see the blond god still waiting so I
decided to stay and board the train he caught. My studying of his superb
body, face and demeanour continued unabated and every now and then he would
look over the top of his drink container to catch my avid stares and I
would see a certain merriment in his expressive eyes.

He eventually finished his drink and walked close to me as he made his way
to the nearest rubbish bin where he crushed the container and dropped it
into the bin then he returned passing close by as he walked back to where
he stood. I inhaled as he passed and caught a hint of his essence, a faint
sweetness of after-shave and a musky heady aroma of fit young man, my cock
twitched in my jeans. The train pulled out almost emptying the platform as
we stood waiting for the train he used, our eye contact continued and I
watched his sweet upturned lips smile slightly each time we locked eyes.

Finally another train swished into the platform and we waited till the
scrambling horde descended onto the platform before we entered an empty
carriage, everyone was heading into the city for the fun while we were
travelling in the opposite direction. He settled himself in a corner seat
legs thrust out as he leaned back giving me a perfect view as I sat on the
opposite side facing towards him, he closed his eyes and folded his
muscular arms on his broad chest, his flat stomach tapered down to
disappear into the tight waist band of his jeans, the pockets sort of
pointing towards his crotch like little arrows.

I sat watching him closely praying nobody boarded our carriage before the
train started and as luck would have it the doors hissed closed and we
jerked off on our journey. The rocking of the carriage stirred my loins as
I watched his mound moving under the soft denim the motion seemed to excite
him too as his penis began to grow as I watched. He opened one blue eye and
looked across at me then he stretched accentuating his superb build and
making his jeans tighten up. I nearly swooned with lust as I watched him
then he opened his eyes and smiled, I took it as an invitation and I moved
across to sit next to him. He looked into my eyes and I saw desire
smouldering there as he spoke his voice croaky with excitement, "Would you
like to play?"

"Would I?" I nearly died on the spot as I tried to speak my mouth dry and
my throat filled with a heavy lump constricting my breathing and talking, I
swallowed several times to regain control then I nodded and rubbed my
fingers gently on the soft velvety denim on his muscled thigh. He sighed
softly and moved his so sexy legs apart a little more encouraging my hand
to move upwards to where my eyes saw an erection beginning to bulge as his
cock climbed up towards his right hip.

He placed a hand on mine, grasping and lifted it to cover his throbbing
hardness, I was shaking all over, my mouth dry as I felt him up, his hand
stroking and pressing mine to his tumescence. The feel of his living hot
pulsing prick was mind blowing and my own erection was painfully crushed in
my pants as I wriggled trying to ease the discomfort but unwilling to break
my contact with this young God's member. Suddenly he bent towards me and
kissed my hair as his other hand fondled my neck, I twisted my face up to
him and those perfect permanently smiling lips moved to my so dry ones as
he kissed me sensuously.

My heart raced madly in my chest as if I was having a heart attack as I
struggled to breathe his smiling eyes looked into mine as he whispered calm
down and breathe before you pass out. I took a hold of myself and took a
huge shuddering breath as he smiled and said, "There that's better isn't
it?"

I nodded then finally found my voice to croak out, "Oh gees mate I can't
believe we are kissing and I'm feeling you up."

He looked at me wryly and asked, "But why can't you believe it? We are both
gay, young and horny not to mention you are a very sexy looking dude I
wanted to get to know you when I first saw you on the platform as I came
down the escalator."

I gasped at his words and couldn't believe my ears, "He thought I was sexy?
Man oh man this stunning guy actually thought I was sexy."

He saw my confusion and he kissed me on the tip of my nose and nodded
saying, "Yeah you! You are a very sexy looking guy and I want to have fun
with you and maybe more will develop later."

I gasped gurgled and spluttered, "Crikey you really mean it?"

He nodded his so molten head and said, "Yop for sure, I think you are
really hot bubs."

With that he pressed me back so I was half lying on the seat and he groped
my straining hard on through my cargos, he pushed up my polo shirt baring
my belly and blew a raspberry in my belly button as I giggled and squirmed,
his tongue followed his lips and he licked my navel driving me into a
paroxysm of giggling. His fingers pulled down my zipper and his hand
slipped inside feeling my excited erection in my briefs, I gasped as he
squeezed my nuts gently then he pulled my briefs down and lifted my nuts up
and out as he tucked the waist band under them. My dick and balls stood out
from my fly as he breathed warm air on them making my cock pulse again and
again.

He wet tongue tasted my drooling slit supping on my pre cum, I quivered
like a jelly from his attention and as he went to suck my knob we felt the
train slowing as it approached the next station. He cursed under his breath
and sat up as I tucked everything away and zipped up my fly pulling my
shirt down to hide my boner. He sat hands on his lap covering his
erection. The doors opened and three guys got in and sat half way up the
carriage one facing towards us two looking the other way. I swore to myself
at the interruption and hoped they would soon get off so we could continue
our games.

Station after station passed and a few more climbed aboard as we sat with
blue balls aching agonisingly, eventually we reached his station and he
whispered, "Can you get off here I know a good place to go?"

I whispered back yeah I can catch the next train back to the city because I
don't live out here I live on the next line to Alemain, he grinned and
stood up as we left the train. He led me from the station and around the
corner to a sports ground, he took my hand in his as we walked together
around the boundary to where the small grandstand was situated, he took me
around the back and pushed on a wooden door which creaked open onto a
grubby storage room with spots gear scattered about. He pushed the door
closed again and put a long box against it stopping anyone opening it from
outside then he turned and began undressing me as I did the same. His black
top slipped up over his blond head and he straightened up to my gasps of
total amazement at his superb torso. I knew he seemed to have a great body
but when uncovered it was amazing his muscles rippled under his tanned
golden skin, his ribs showed but he wasn't skinny just perfectly
formed. The silky smoothness gleamed as if polished, his nipples large and
puffy pouted from the smooth plains of his well-developed pectorals, his
rippled abs not a six pack but almost an eight pack as his torso
disappeared into the waist band of his jeans a gap showing where the
valleys began on their way to his groin.

He stood still as I fumbled at his top button, finally I succeeded in
undoing it and slid the zipper down over his tumescent tool and the soft
denim unfolded opening to expose his briefs, black and tight. His jeans
slid down his superb thighs and I could ogle his boned bolt as it throbbed
vertically while I could see a wet spot along with some dried whitish
stains where he'd oozed earlier on the train. I fell to my knees in
adoration of this god like being; I pressed my face to his fragrant warm
crotch inhaling his sensuous funky aroma as he held my head pulling me
against him.

I opened my hungry mouth to take him inside and taste his sweetness; he
humped against my lips driving his cotton-covered cock deep into my gagging
mouth as the material sucked the moisture from my orifice. My hands
clutched his amazingly firm heavily dimples arse cheeks; clinging to his
beautiful buttocks I felt his power as he humped my face forcefully and
groaned excitedly. His cock was weeping sweet juice and my taste buds were
raging for more as I struggled to pull off his tool, he let me go and I
slipped it from my lips ripping the briefs down then diving back onto the
tasty tossle. He humped and ground his cock into my throat as I swallowed
him deep grunting on his meat, his excited nuts were tight nuzzled against
the base of his throbbing dick.

He paused deep down my gullet as I felt his buttocks tighten my eyes looked
up his torso watching his tensed abs quiver as his prick throbbed deep in
my stretched throat as I swallowed again and again my muscles stroking him,
he grunted and I felt his hot lava spurt out running down into my belly as
I gulped and sucked bobbing on his throbbing manhood. He emptied his
essence into my hungry throat and I loved taking part of him to become part
of me, he humped and strained until his cock became too touchy and he
withdrew it sloppily wet with my saliva to slap wetly on his thigh. I
licked my lips and tasted his sweet spoog while I watched his superb body
as he stood chest heaving and red faced from exertion.

I stayed on my knees adoring him until he calmed and looked down at me
smiled and said, "Shit dude that was so rad I loved it now it's your turn."

He reached out and took my trembling hand lifting me to my feet as he bent
to press those sweet perfect lips to mine once again, we kissed and swapped
spit he must have been able to faintly taste himself but he said nothing as
I swayed a little unsteadily on my feet. He looked into my grey eyes and
whispered, "Perfect dude! My names Mark what's yours?"

I said, "James, Mark its awesome meeting you."

He dropped to his knees and licked my rock hard rod while I arched back,
his hand gripped my waist as he opened his smiling lips to ingest my dick
sucking me in fully in one go, I moaned loudly as I felt his agile tongue
licking, curling around my shaft and sensitive knob laving my hot horn so
sexily. I was humping in short fast jabs driving my pubes into his cute
nose, he moaned and took me fully down swallowing without a sound as he
opened his wet moist gullet to my sliding schlong.

I humped his fabulous face as he gobbled on my cock and soon I was groaning
and squirming in his mouth pressed hard to his nose as my balls erupted
volcanically pumping hot seed into his mouth and throat while he swallowed
and sucked like crazy. I was drained and exhausted my wobbly knees only
held my weight because he grasped my waist tightly holding onto me.

I sagged over his muscular broad shoulders as I panted for air looking down
his tapered back to where I could see his wide spread crack between those
superb white muscled mounds, his tan line obvious at the start of his
cleavage. Mark's mouth still held my deflating cock as he suckled gently on
it.

We slowly recovered and I helped him to his feet as we hugged each other
and kissed tongues delving deep into each other's mouths. I tasted my sperm
and sighed into his open mouth as we shared breath together.

It was getting late in the day and he glanced at his watch saying, "Shit
James I have to get home I'm late for tea and mum will kill me."

I nodded sadly and tentatively asked, "Can we get together again Mark?"

He smiled that perfect smile and nodded, "I'm on holidays from university
James I'm free most days here is my mobile number if you want to arrange a
meet."

I gave him mine and we arranged to meet tomorrow at the beach weather
permitting then we left the building walked back to the station where he
gave me a hug and left me. I walked onto the platform walking on air as I
day dreamed of my new friend and imagined what fun we could have at the
beach tomorrow.


                 The End.


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