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THUNDER IN THE NIGHT
by Jeff Allen
I led Luis to the side of my king-sized bed. I pulled him into me and kissed
him again. This time he responded immediately by opening his mouth and allowing
my tongue to explore. He wrapped his arms around my neck.
I pulled at the loose knot of the towel around his waist dropping the towel
to the floor. I ran my hands down the sides of his face to his neck and then
down to his nipples. I rolled the nipples gently between my thumbs and forefingers
and was rewarded by an intake of breath and the hardening of the dark red-brown
areolas. He leaned his head back taking in the new sensations, and I gently
kissed his exposed neck. I tongued my way down to his nipples and took first
one and then the other hard nub into my mouth. He was moaning.
I sat on the bed and pulled him to me so that his cock was in my face as
he stood beside the bed. His cock was a beautiful sight nestled in its thick,
black patch of pubic hair. I'm circumcised, and I'd never been with an uncircumcised
guy before. I was fascinated. As his penis had become more erect his foreskin
pulled back exposing about half of the head of his penis. The head was a
little darker than the rest of his skin but much lighter in color than his
nipples. His almost hairless balls hung below. Like the rest of him, they
were not large, but they suited Luis perfectly.
I reached out and touched his cock feeling it twitch in response. I moved
his foreskin back and forth over the head for a while before I leaned in and
ran my tongue around the tip where the fold of his foreskin still covered
part of the head. He thrust his hips forward and moaned again. I placed my
mouth over his pole which was now expanded to about six inches and standing
fully upright, and I used my tongue to move his foreskin past the last portion
of the head. I began to move up and down allowing his foreskin to come part
way up over the head each time and then down with the return stroke.
He put his hands on my shoulders and began murmuring in Spanish. I was
too busy sucking on his dick to worry about the translation. Soon he bucked
his hips forward, and I felt the shaft of his cock enlarge in my mouth. I
knew he was going to cum so I deep-throated him burying my nose in his public
hair. He unloaded down my throat.
I maneuvered his body so that he was lying on the bed. When his penis began
to soften, I released my hold and moved up on the bed gathering him in my
arms and into a kiss.
"Paul, no one has ever done that to me before."
"No, Padre Robert only had me help him. I did not know how good a mouth
We cuddled in the bed for another half hour or so before deciding that we
were hungry. Reluctantly, we slipped out of bed and got dressed.
Luis took charge in the kitchen again. I followed his instructions setting
the table and preparing a salad while he did the main course. I found a good
red wine to go with the meal and opened it. We finished the entire bottle
during the course of the evening with the last glass being shared out on
the porch while we watched the sunset.
When the evening started to cool down, we moved back into the house. We had
been touching in some way all evening either by holding hands or sitting
next to one another so that out bodies were pressed together. Back in the
house we moved to the bedroom without a word being spoken.
I lifted Luis' shirt over his slim shoulders and began kissing and caressing
his chest. He lifted my head up, and we shared a deep kiss. For someone who
had never been kissed before he was learning fast.
He started opening the buttons on my shirt and playing with my nipples and
chest hair. He placed his mouth over my right nipple and then worked his
way down from there following the hair pattern until his tongue was running
along the belt line of my pants. He undid the belt and zipper, pulled my
throbbing prick free, and engulfed it in one swallow. All I could do was
I placed my hands under his shoulders and lifted him back to his feet
in order to kiss him again. When our lips parted we both began to strip off
what remained of our clothing. When we were both naked, he lay down on the
bed. I lay on top of him and began kissing and licking my way down his body
from his forehead to his toes. I marveled at how smooth his skin was. He
had no hair on his torso except for a very few wisps of short silky back
hairs from his navel to his pubic hair. His prick stood up against his stomach
and pulsed with every beat of his heart. His legs had a dusting of short
hairs, all silky soft like the hair on his head and crotch. When I reached
his toes I reversed course and moved up the inner side of his legs and thighs
to the secret space just below his ball sac. As I moved my tongue under his
scrotum, he moaned and spread his thighs apart giving me free access to him.
I moved my tongue over the pucker of his anus and he cried out something in
Spanish. I moved my tongue over his hole again and then gently stuck the
tip just inside the opening.
He grabbed my head with both hands and pressed his ass into my tongue. "Paul,
that feels so good. No one has ever done that."
I continued to open his love tunnel with my tongue. I felt him relax,
and I moved an index finger up to the opening and began rotating the finger
in his hole as I lubricated it with my saliva.
"I want to suck you also," he moaned.
I moved around on top of him to a sixty-nine position. I felt his warm
mouth around my cock and his fingers gently moving near my asshole. I increased
the activity of my tongue and finger on his ass. When my finger moved across
his prostate, he jumped, moaned, and then deep throated my dick. I felt my
climax building as he milked my prong with his throat muscles. As my dick
started spewing cum down his throat, I increased the pressure on his prostate
and was rewarded with another moan followed by his balls drawing tight in
their sac and then feeling his warm semen flowing out between his belly and
I pulled my finger out and moved around to draw him into an embrace. I tasted
the remains of my load in his mouth when we kissed, and I felt his cum spreading
across my chest and on to him as we lay pressed together.
I woke once during the middle of the night. Luis' back was pressed against
my chest and belly. I reached out and pulled him even closer. He stirred momentarily,
but then we both fell back into unconsciousness.
When I woke in the morning, Luis was not in the bed. I sat up remembering
the events of the previous afternoon and night. Luis came into the bedroom.
He was already dressed and carried a steaming mug of coffee.
He smiled as he handed me the rich coffee. "Buenas dias, mi amigo.
Breakfast will be ready when you finish with the shower. The hair on your
chest is all sticky."
I accepted the coffee as I swung my legs over the side of the bed. "The stickiness
is your fault. You must have cum gallons."
"I may be small, but I am mighty." He kissed me lightly on the cheek.
"Now, shower! It is late and Deputy Campbell may be here soon." He turned
and walked out of the room.
Shit! I'd forgotten all about Mac coming over today. I looked at the bedside
clock. Nine o'clock! I hardly ever sleep past six or seven.
I hurried through my morning routine. As he'd promised, Luis had breakfast
waiting on the table when I came into the kitchen.
"Luis, I..I can call Mac and tell him not to come over."
He looked at me and smiled. "No. It is okay. You like this Mac, no?"
When I didn't reply immediately, he continued, "It's is okay. I think the
deputy is 'hot' also. You will have fun today. I think maybe Mac he likes
"How can you tell that?"
"Because he watches you when you are not looking. He watches you like I watch
you. I think he would like to take you into bed."
"Does that bother you?"
"A little, but I think he is...how you say it...sexy."
"Does it make you nervous that he's a sheriff's deputy."
"Yes, a little, but now I have the papers from Tia Juanita that
say I am Luis Ebanez so I will not worry so much. I think this Mac Campbell
is a good man, no?"
"Yes. I think Mac's a good person. I'm more concerned about Napier."
"Yes, I do not trust Señor Napier." He came over and placed
his arms around me and laid his face against my chest. "I trust you, Paul.
You have been so kind to me."
I pulled away from him slightly. "Luis, I don't want you to make love
to me because you think you have to repay me."
He stood up and moved away from me. I could see some fire in those coal-black
eyes. "I did not get into bed with you because I feel that I am paying for
something. I get in bed with you because of who you are."
"Luis, I'm sorry. I just want to be certain that I'm not taking advantage
He moved back and embraced me again. "I think most people would think I was
taking advantage of you and of your kindness. You make me feel different
inside than I have ever felt before. I know you have feelings for me in your
heart because you are so very tender, but I know you are attracted to the
Deputy Campbell also."
Our discussion was cut short by the sound of a vehicle coming up the drive
toward the house. I went out on the porch as Mac drove up in his F150 with
a horse trailer behind it.
I went outside to greet Mac and help him unload his horse who's name was
Sam. He was a beautiful chestnut colored Quarter Horse that followed Mac
around like a big dog.
We saddled our mounts. Both horses seemed anxious to be on the move. Just
as we were ready to go, Luis came out of the house with two canteens and
He handed the sack and one of the canteens to me. The other canteen went
"I put ice and water in the canteens. It is hot today, and you need the water,
no? There are burritos in the bag for when you get hungry."
Mac smiled. "Thanks, Luis. These will be great."
We rode off leaving Luis standing by the porch. I felt guilty about leaving
Luis, but the sight of Mac Campbell riding in front of me made me forget
my guilt. He rode like he was born on a horse. I also liked watching his
shapely ass move against the saddle.
I took him to the bluff that had been my original destination three days
ago when I'd discovered the bodies. Had it only been three days? So much
had happened. It seemed much longer than that.
At the bluff we dismounted letting the horses pick at some of the low grass
while we looked at the view.
We sat in the grass and shared the burritos Luis had packed.
"Paul, this is a fantastic view. Thanks for bringing me out here."
"I like to come out here whenever I'm in Santa Teresa. I never get tired
of the view."
"I'll bet the sunrises and sunsets are spectacular from here."
I was lost in the view and my own thoughts otherwise I wouldn't have answered
as I did. "You know in all the years I've had the ranch I've never seen a
sunset or sunrise from here. Richard never wanted to get up that early and
never wanted to stay out on horseback after dark."
Oh shit! What had I just said? How could I get out of 'outing' myself?
"Er...ah...Richard was a 'friend' of mine who used to come out to the rancho
He looked at me, and I felt sweat break out on my upper lip. The silence
grew between us. Finally I couldn't stand it any longer. I decided to just
get it over.
"Richard was my lover." As I said it, I wondered how he'd react to the news
that I was gay. Would he get angry? He was so much bigger than me. If he decided
to beat the crap out of me, there wouldn't be any thing I could do to stop
He turned and looked back out across the plateau.
"Was?" His voice was so soft I almost missed it.
"Yes. Past tense."
"He cheated. I caught him. I asked him to leave."
"Two years ago."
He turned and faced me. His clear blue eyes betrayed his unease.
"What about Luis?"
I was the one who looked away. "I...I don't know. We've slept together, but
I don't know where it's going, if any where."
"Luis seems like a really nice person. He's sure cute enough, and I'd
say he thinks a lot of you judging from the way he looks when you're around."
"Mac, this conversation is not going in the direction I expected when I slipped
up and told you about Richard."
He smiled again. "I'm glad you slipped up. In this county I can't just
up and announce that I'm gay to everyone I meet and still expect to keep
my job. Knowing you're gay makes me feel better. I won't have to watch what
I say around you."
I know my mouth must have been hanging open.
He laughed and continued, "I love it in Santa Teresa County, and I love
my job, but it's kind of lonely here for a gay guy. I've managed to keep everything
under control until I met you, but I felt these strange vibes from you. My
'gaydar' has never been all that hot so I couldn't be sure. I really hoped
you were gay, but there was no way I could tell you first, and I couldn't
figure out how to get you to tell me.
"Paul," he turned serious. "I have to tell you that I'm very attracted to
you, but if you and Luis have something going I'll back off and settle for
just being friends."
"I don't know what Luis and I have going right now. Like I said, we've
slept together, and I think he's a great person. I like him a lot."
"But you don't love him."
"I've only known him for a ..." I caught myself just before saying 'a
few days' which would have really raised some questions in Mac's mind. "I've
only known him for a short time. I've never met anyone quite like him before,
but it's too early to start talking about love."
"Then it's okay for me to do this." He leaned forward, placed his large hand
behind my neck, and drew me into a kiss.
Man! What a kiss! It went on forever. I think I forgot to breath because
I started to get dizzy and pulled away. When I opened my eyes, he was looking
at me with moist eyes.
"It's time we start back. If we stay here I might lose control."
He got up and walked over toward the horses adjusting his dick in his
jeans as he went. I stood up, made my own adjustments to find a more comfortable
position for my suddenly and painfully hard prick, and followed him to the
(To be continued)