Date: Thu, 8 Apr 2004 11:46:07 -0700 (PDT) From: Mr Swannie Subject: Stripper Son Chapter 13 Disclaimer: The following story is FICTIONAL. It contains descriptions of incest sexual activities between teenage boys and Adults. If you are not over 18 years of age, or if you find this type of story offensive, or viewing this material is illegal where you live, then please don't read it! Stripper Son By : Mr. Swannie cumsoakedface@yahoo.com www.geocities.com/cumsoakedface/index.html I hope you all enjoy this story, but remember it is a fantasy and in these fantasies there are no Aids, HIV, crabs, syphilis, gonorrhea, genital warts or such but they are in the real world so when you are fucking and think about these stories please make sure there is a condom on your cock. Play safe and continue to read these fantasies for a long, long time STRIPPER SON CHAPTER 13 Mad Dog smiled at me and I at him as we pushed open the door to the bar and we all walked in. I looked at Mad Dog and said, "I can't wait to see what cumin next." I didn't have to wait to long for what was next. We all walked into the gay bar to find that the boys had been all freed from their ropes and where all drinking and carrying on in the bar. We looked around and there was my son Jason sitting at a booth with a horde of frat brothers and some pledges. Jason was talking and a few of the pledges looked on at my beautiful son with a mixture of lust, love and want. I tapped Mad Dog on the shoulder and pointed at Jason and he looked over and then back to me with a smile on his face, "He is one pretty boy you got there." Mad Dog said all smiles. I smiled, filled with pride that my son was so secure with himself that he could command a room and keep everyone's attention. I would like to think it had something to do with the way that my wife and I had raised him but I had a feeling it had more to do with the fact that all the boys staring at him waiting for his next word had seen him naked at some point. Mad Dog, Jerry and I walked over to the boys and everyone stopped and looked up at us with smiles. "Hi Dad." Jason said scooting over to make room next to him for me to sit. "So you all got untied." I said as I sat down close to my son. I looked to see he had on a pair of cut offs and sneakers with a tight wife beater tank top. "And you found clothes." I said smiling and looking around the table to see who we had here. "God Dad you sound like I'm naked twenty-four-seven." Jason said nudging me and laughing. Mad Dog draped his arm around Jerry's shoulder and asked, "Where's Ant?" Jason looked over to the far corner and pointed. We all looked over to see Ant, Ron and Tommy playing "South Park" Pinball machine. Mad Dog moved away from Jerry and walked across the bar to his son and mine. "You brought your brothers to a gay bar?" I said sounding shocked. "Please." Jason said, "The guys at the bar pleaded with me to bring them back and put on another show like we did the other night." I looked around and everyone had a horny smile on their faces. "You up for it?" Jason asked and squeezed my cock through my shorts. "No way." I said shaking my head. "What you get shy all of a sudden?" I smiled big and said, "I have over worked my dick to the point it's going to fall off and my balls have got to be dry by now." Everyone laughed. "But you guys feel free." I said with a grope of my oldest son's crotch. Jason smiled big at me and said, "We promised we would wait until all the guys where untied and got here." Just about then Peter the head of the frat walked over and grabbed Jerry's ass making the boy jump with surprise. Peter smiled at Jerry and then looked to me and said, "How'd the experiment go?" I looked at Jerry and had forgotten why Mad Dog and I had come to the bar in the first place. Jerry did look so out of place and at that moment I hoped he would some how get into the frat. "That's why we are here." I said smiling and winking at Jerry who returned a sheepish grin. "Jerry is excited about stripping for the guys aren't you?" Jerry smiled and nodded yes. Peter raised his eyebrows and smiled and said, "Well I'm sure the owners would be willing to give you another chance up on their pedestal." He pointed to a small box about four feet high with a small spot light on it. Peter's gaze was pulled to the door as a few more guys walked in and a man of about forty-six or so from his look. Peter smiled big and turned towards Jerry and said, "You had better be good you have a tuff judge in the audience tonight." With that Peter walked Jerry over to the pedestal and boosted him up on it. I looked to Jason and asked, "Who's that guy that just came in?" Jason looked over to the man who was now sitting at the bar with two of the pledges who seemed to like the man a lot. Jason smiled and said, "That's Chris Roberts. He's the faculty advisor for our frat's chapter; I think he teaches a music appreciation class. They say if he doesn't like a pledge he doesn't get in." I looked to the guy and then over to the very nervous Jerry, "Ok you have to help me out." I told Jason. Mad Dog and I kind of took Jerry under our wing and told him we would help him get into the frat. Come over and cheer and stuff for Jerry." Jason looked over to Jerry and then back to me and said, "You told him he would get in? Dad come on the guys never going to...Oh I just go it." Jason said with a smile. "You promised him you'd help him get in and then you fucked his brains out." One of the buffer frat brothers looked over to Jerry and then looked at me and leant across the table and said, "You fucked piss boy?" I smiled and said, "Great see he already has a frat nick name." Everyone just looked at me and I said some what defeated "Ya we fucked piss boy." All the guys around the table started to murmur over this and one cute blond guy said, "I thought he was a virgin?" "He was." I said with a laugh, "and now he's not." Another frat brother asked, "Was he tight?" I could feel my dick getting harder and I tried to stop it by not thinking about how it felt to fuck his tight hard bubble boy butt, it wasn't working. "I thought my dick would snap off inside, but after a while we worked him up to a nice looser feel." "You mean you both fucked him?" Another asked. "Ya." I said surprised there was so much talk about this one kids ass hole. "Dam I thought that kid would never give it up." The blond said turning in his chair to watch as Jerry started to dance to the music. Jerry was dancing and the kid had two left feet to say the least. I got up and started across the bar towards Jerry and Jason and the rest where right on my heals. I acted as if I where lifting up my shirt and Jerry smiled at me and slowly pulled his shirt over his head. His small boy frame looked hot as he danced getting a bit more of the beat now. We all walked around the podium and stood there cheering Jerry on now he had a smile on his face. His face was turning red being a bit embarrassed as he hooked his thumbs in Ron's ripped shorts and pulled down a bit so that his pubic hair was in view. The boys all let out a cheer and I watched as the facility Advisor Chris walked over to us. I walked around the group to the man standing there watching. Chris Roberts was a good-looking man with blond hair and from his t-shirt he was wearing I could see he had a great tan. He was smiling up at Jerry with a big smile and tapping his foot to the music. When I looked at his crotch I saw he was packing quite a good size package. I smiled at him and said, "The kid's hot, hu?" Chris looked at me and smiled and said, "I think I remember him from his interview and I don't remember him impressing me all that much." "And what about now?" I asked smiling. Chris nodded and smiled, "We'll have to just see if he has what it takes to make it in this frat." "I hear you're the man who can get him in." I said. Chris looked at me and then looked up and down my body. "I don't think we met yet and yet some how I think that I know you from some where." He said looking like he was trying to place me. I smiled and put out my hand and said, "I'm Ray Martin. My son Jason is pledging the frat, I was a member a few years back, but back then the frat wasn't as...fun as it is now. I'm glad I don't think that I would have graduated if it had been like this, then." Chris smiled shaking my hand and said; "Of course I saw you and your wife last year when you brought your son in for registration. I'm Chris Roberts the music professor and the frat faculty advisor." He said and we looked around to the boys, "I'm sorry I'm awful with names, which one is Jason?" I smiled big and pointed to my son who was shoving a dollar into Jerry's shoe and sliding his hand inside the boy's ripped jean shorts and grabbing his small round balls. "He's the one with the fat, long cock who loves to suck and take it up the ass." I said with a wink. Chris raised his eyebrow and smiled, "Oh yes." He said looking at me, "I do remember your son." We looked back to Jerry who was timidly pulling off his shorts exposing his cute little hard dick and his two small round balls. Jason leant in and kissed Jerry's balls and when he pulled off he was all smiles. Chris and I watched as all the guys around Jason laughed and patted his back. A few of the older bar regulars walked over and started to feel up the naked young man as he tried to smile and dance. After a few minutes the regular strippers that the bar employs took to the stage and podiums and Jerry was helped down into the arms of the over egger bar regulars and the frat boys, the stripper that took to Jerry's podium was all muscles and looked to be a upper classman or of that age. He had dark hair and one hell of a great smile and bulge in his flush colored g-string. Jason looked at me and nodded towards the back booth where my sons and I had, had a wild orgy for the bar to watch just a few nights before. I smiled and nodded yes. Jason took the naked boy across the floor to the back booth and Chris and I walked behind him watching as Jason, Jerry and a few others went into the back booth. The rest stood back and waited to see what would happen. Chris and I walked up and a few boys moved so we could get into the booth area with the boys. Jason's cock was out of his pants and his legs where spread as he sat at the booth and was pushing Jerry down on his knees in front of him. Jerry looked over to me and looked a bit worried as I smiled and nodded yes. Jerry turned and faced my son's growing cock. Jason's still limp seven and a half inches was starting to grow as Jerry took his lips to my boy's cock head and slowly opened his mouth while everyone stood around and watched with smiles on their faces and boners in their pants. Jerry started to swallow more and more of Jason's growing cock. He sucked on Jason's cock head and then swallowed almost all of Jason's stiff cock. Jerry started to suck and lick my son's knob and soon was bobbing up and down on his hard cock. Chris was smiling watching the show and groping his crotch. After a few minutes of sucking Jason's cock while Jason played with his own nipples and smiling at the group of friends watching, Chris walked up close and a frat boy got up and let Chris sit right next to Jason. Jason smiled at Chris as he started to play with Jason's nipples. Jason smiled at me and then turning towards Chris he started to make out with the frat advisor. I watched as the man and my son groped and made out while Jerry kept sucking away on Jason's cock. To Jerry's credit he was starting to seem to get into it and was now bobbing up and down on Jason's stiff cock swallowing almost the whole thing. Jason unbuttoned Chris's pants and Chris lifted up his ass as Jason pulled down on his jeans. Chris's tan was an all over tan that seemed to start at the top of his head and rap all the way around to the bottom of his feet. His massive ten inches of thick uncut cock popped out of his pants and bounced up and down. His balls where finally freed and when he sat back down his balls hit the bench and then seemed to droop over the side towards the ground. This guy had to hang waits on his balls to make them look so big. His thick cock was tanned like the rest of his body and he had four piercing that went around the edge of his foreskin. Jason stroked Chris's plum cock and started to work it up to its full ten inches. Jason grabbed Jerry by the ears and pulled him over to Chris's cock and Jerry looked at the monster in front of him and slowly started to slide his mouth over his cock head. Chris took Jerry's head in his hands and started to pump his cock down the boy's throat. Jerry held onto the bench and closed his eyes as his head was bounced up and down over the towering cock. Jason stood up and took the cute blond frat boy by the hand and brought him over to Chris where Jason had just been sitting. Jason kissed the frat boy's lips tenderly and unsnapped his jeans. Jason pulled the jeans all the way off and the blond stepped out of them his cute bubble ass pushed towards us as he stepped out of the jeans and got up on the bench and stood with his growing six inches of frat boy meat pointed at Chris. Chris smiled at the boy's cock and took his hands from Jerry's head and grabbed the blond boy's ass and pulled him towards him. The blonde's cock shoved into Chris's mouth while his middle finger shoved into the boy's hot looking ass. Chris looked as happy as a man could be; he was getting sucked off by the small cute boy on his knees and had a cock down his throat and a finger fucking at a nice looking bubble butt. Jason walked over naked to me and leant against me and I wrapped my arms around his naked waist and kissed his ear, "Thanks for giving him a chance." I whispered into my son's ear and kissed it again. I could feel my cock aching as I felt Jason's nice firm ass pushing against it through my thin shorts. Peter walked over and saw that Jerry was sucking off Chris and even though he was choking a bit had almost the whole ten inches of man meat down his small boy throat. Peter looked at me and Jason and smiled and said, "You do good work." I smiled and said, "It's only work if you think of it as a job." Jason turned and looked at me smiling and said, "That's why I have a hard time thinking about it as a blow job." I laughed and kissed my son's lips and said, "Exactly." Peter hugged me and my naked boy and said, "You are the hottest fuckin family I have ever met." I wrapped my arm around his waist and we all stood there like that for a while watching the show in front of us. Chris pulled his mouth off the blond frat boy's cock and the boy looked over to his friends and us and smiled as Chris looked down at Jerry riding his cock with his mouth. He pulled Jerry up and Jerry stood there and looked at him not sure what was to happen next, I had a feeling what he was going to get next and I was right. Chris spun Jerry around to face us and pulled him up on his lap. Chris hard large tool stuck out between Jerry's legs and pushing against the boy's small round nuts and stiff cock. Chris with the help of his now naked blond frat brother friend helped pull Jerry up so his feet where on the bench and Chris aimed his cock at the small boy hole and you could see the pain on Jerry's face as Chris's cock head poked into his tight sore hole. Had I been thinking I should have let Jerry sleep and gave his ass hole a rest before subjecting it to another assault tonight. As the blond boy pushed down on Jerry's solders forcing more of Chris's cock into his hole you could see Jerry's face wince with pain and his eyes water. "Fuck the kid is in so much pain and yet somehow it makes my cock hard watching him." Peter said. I knew what he meant some how this boy's pain was connected to our cocks. Mine was throbbing and as I slowly stroked my son's cock as he leant against my front I could tell it was the same for him. After Jerry somehow managed to take all of Chris's cock up his ass, tears streamed down his face Peter let go of us and walked over to the show where the blond stood and fucked Chris's face while Chris lifted Jerry's ass up and down over his stiff prick. Peter stripped naked his enormous eleven inches of frat boy cock was stiff, but so heavy it couldn't stand straight up. My mouth watered just looking at it, I had, had it before in this very bar and right now was dieing for more but I simply could take any more tonight. Peter stood up on the bench his naked body shinning in the bar lights as he took Jerry's face in his hands and started to cram his cock down the bewildered boy's throat. The crowd cheered on their leader as more and more of his cock slid into Jerry's empty gullet. It was so hot watching the show in front of us. Chris's cock was wet with Jerry's ass juices and he lifted Jerry high so just the very tip of his cock stayed inside Jerry's ass before he pushed the boy down and Jerry slid down the man's cock. I wanted to go and fuck him myself here right now in front of the crowd, my son and his friends, but my ass, cock and balls where done for the night and I knew that. To be eighteen again I can guaranty I wouldn't waist as much time as I had. My younger sons came walking over with Mad Dog and Ant and watched the show with us. Ron's cock was standing straight up in front of him and he stroked it slowly as he smiled big watching Jerry getting fucked like a cheap whore. I watched my sons as Tommy reached over to his brother without taking his eyes off the show and took his older brother's cock in his hands and started to caress it. This made me even hornier. The blond naked boy fucking Chris's mouth started to sweat in buckets and his hard muscles glistened in the bar lights. The crowd was yelling and cheering on the bar fuckers as the blond started to throw his head around and fill Chris's mouth with his hot frat brother cream. Chris pulled off the boy's cock with a smile on his face as the boy's cock swayed in front of his face spewing his cum from Chris's nose to chin. The crowd screamed their approval even louder. The blond boy's cum covered Chris's smiling face; he opened his mouth wide and took the remaining squirts down his throat. He grabbed the boy's hard-spent cock and pulled it to his mouth, as he humped Jerry's ass, as sucked the remaining cum from the boy's piss slit and then deep throated the lad. The boy's eyes where glazed over as he was sucked clean. Chris started fucking jerry's soar ass harder and harder and pulled out shooting his load all over Jerry's balls, cock and stomach. His thick white man cream shot stream after stream making puddles on Jerry's stomach. Peter got off the bench and dropped between Jerry's legs and licked Chris's cum off Jerry quivering body. The blond dropped down and started to help clean up Jerry's body with his tongue. When all the boys had regained there composure the crowd turned and looked at my naked sons. "When do we get to watch you guys?" One frat brother asked. "Ya, I want to see the brothers." A regular at the bar said. Jason looked at me and smiled then at his younger brothers. Both Tommy and Ron smiled big and winked at Jason. Jason took his brothers by the hand and led them to the center of the bar to a small round table. Jason then bent over his stomach against the tabletop his ass in the air. Jason took hold of his ass cheeks and spread them and smiled. Ron stepped up behind his big brother and smiled as he jerked his fifteen-year-old cock to its full stiff nine inches. The crowd soon circled my boys as Ron jammed his stiff cock into his big brother's ass hole. Dam my cock was hard as steal and it hurt as Tommy took his fourteen-year-old stiff six and a half inches and crammed it into Jason's wanting mouth. The crowd started to cheer on my boys as they sucked and fucked. Jason looked so hot with his baby brothers fucking him from both ends. The two younger boys started up a nice rhythm and where now fucking him nice and hard. "Oh Fuck Ya...Fuck your brother's ass and mouth good and hard!" A guy in the crowd yelled out. Tommy smiled big as he started to fuck his large cock in and out even faster, his tight bubble but tensing and relaxing as he fucked his big brother's throat. Ron was slapping Jason's ass nice and hard as he fucked him faster and harder slamming his cock deep into Jason's ass. You could see Jason loved being used like this and loved everyone watching. God my son was so like me. I watched as Ron pulled his cock back so the ridge of his cock head popped out of Jason's ass hole, the tip staying in as he crammed it all the way back in. He would then pull out again and I could feel my eyes straining to see my boy's dark pink cock head as it was shoved back in. Tommy took his cock from Jason's throat and slapped his brother's face hard with his cock and said loud, "You love my cock don't you fagot?" You could hear only the pounding of everyone's heart as they leant in to hear Jason say, "Yes let me suck your big cock baby brother." With that there was a moan through the crowd, as Tommy crammed his cock all the way back in Jason's mouth and throat. Ron pulled his cock all the way out and slapped it against Jason's ass and then in one moved crammed it all the way back in. Jason's cock was throbbing between his spread legs as he took it all from his brothers and moaned. The crowd had their cocks out and some were sucking others while they watched and other's jerking their cocks or the guy next to them as the show went on. Ron pulled all the way out and smiled at Tommy and winked. Tommy smiled and pulled his cock out and walked over to Jason's exposed ass. Ron pulled up a chair and pulled Jason to his feet and the pushed him down in the chair. Tommy crawled up on his brother's lap and sat on Jason's fat nine and a half inch cock. He pumped himself on it a few times and then leant back against his brother's chest, he pulled his legs up and held them exposing his ass hole and his brother's cock inside it. Ron smiled and stepped up and taking hold of his massive cock he shoved his cock head against Jason's cock and pushed up. His cock head pushed against Tommy's ass hole and then popped in. The crowd stepped closer and moaned as we all watched Ron's cock slowly shoved into his younger brother's ass while his older brother's cock remained inside Tommy. Tommy was taking two big fat cocks inside his ass and from the hardness of his cock and the lustful look on his face you could see he had done this before and he loved the way that it felt. We all watched as inch by inch of both Jason and Ron's cock pushed together all the way inside Tommy's ass. When they where both all the way in Tommy held Ron's shoulder hard and bit his bottom lip. After a few minutes Tommy nodded and Ron started to slide his cock in and out of Tommy's ass while Tommy humped himself on Jason's cock. Both cocks slid back and forth inside my baby boy's ass while Jason groped his brother's nipples. It was something to see my three sons all fucking together and the look of lust and love on their faces was so hot. I stepped up and massaged Jason's shoulders and watched down his chest to the base of his cock as Tommy's ass slid up and down on it. Tommy was moaning and his head started to swivel as he started to jerk his meat. My cock and ass where to soar to fuck around but I knew I could handle a fresh load of cum from my son. I got down on my knees between my youngest son's legs and wrapped my lips around the head of his tasty meat. "Go for it Daddy!!" Some one yelled out from the crowd, and the rest joined in yelling even louder. In no time Tommy was favoring me with another of his tasty protein shakes. His hot boy cum shot into my mouth and I sucked his balls dry again. I sucked his whole cock into my throat and didn't move. My son's cock sat deep in my throat as he regained his senses and the over sensitive period ended. When I felt his cock start to deflate I knew I could start working it back up again. I slowly started to bob my head up and down over Tommy's cock and soon his meat was as hard as metal. I pulled off just leaving my lips on his cock head and looked around at the now mostly naked crowd as they sucked, fucked and stroked while they watched my family's every move. "Of Fuck, Ya...Fuck Ya!!!" Ron started to moan and I got off Tommy's cock and moved to Ron's balls as he and his brother fucked his baby brother's ass. I sucked his balls and licked my son's ass hole as he moaned even louder. As Ron pulled his cock out of Tommy's ass a squirt of his cum flew across my face. I lifted my head up to get more and could see into Tommy's ass. Jason's powerful cock was coated in Ron's cum as he shoved his tool back into his brother's ass. Another squirt of cum flew onto my face and I looked up to see Ron looking down at me with a snarl of lust on his face his cock shooting more cream onto my nose and lips. My mouth was now open and I took his next stream over my tongue and lips. I felt like my face was covered in my son's fresh boy cream and I loved it, so did the crowd. Tommy was hoisted up onto his feet and I turned to see Jason's cock head flying towards my mouth. I opened it just as his cock plowed into my mouth. In two strokes he pulled out and his cum started to blast my face and neck and opening my mouth I took all that I could get. My hair was matted down as Jason's cum dripped over my eyebrows and onto my bare chest. I looked at a figure walking quickly towards us and saw that it was Chris Roberts the Frat advisor. His stiff ten inches in hand as he stroked and walked up to me. As the last of Jason's cum shot into my mouth Chris's hot load hit my neck and face. I turned towards him and swallowed a healthy load before he shot more onto my already cum soaked face. The crowd was now at a deafening pitch as more guys walked up to us jerking their cocks and shooting all over my naked body. Man after boy was stepping up and I swallowed as much as I could and the rest was shot on my ass, face, neck and anywhere else they wanted to. My cock was rock hard and aching and covered in cum. I looked around and saw some guys shooting their loads on the bar floor and onto other guys as the last guys shot and walked away from me with smiles on their faces. My three sons had walked away from me leaving me alone in the center of the bar floor, center of attention. I looked up and saw Jerry walking towards me. In one quick movement he took my sticky head in his hands and shoved his small boy cock into my mouth. I smiled to myself as I started to suck off my young student and then I felt him shoot...but wait it didn't feel like cum it was more liquidy and hotter and...it dawned on me the kid was pissing into my mouth and now down my throat. I didn't know what to do so I swallowed. His piss was combining with the cum in my stomach and he held me in place as he peed, he pulled out and the crowd saw that he was pissing in me and started to cheer. A few guys where sucking cum off my naked body while this was going on and they looked shocked at what he was doing to me. A few guys walked up to me, they where about you piss on and in me when Jerry dropped to his knees and took their cocks in hand and took the shot for me. I looked over to see the young naked boy being what he seemed to like best, a piss boy. More frat brothers took Jerry up on his service and started to piss all over him soaking him in their wet yellow stream. I on the other hand had more and more guys licking and sucking my body clean. Mad Dog walked up to me his cock sticking straight out in front of him as he shook his head at me with a big smile he said, "I don't remember you being such a cum dumpster back in college." I smiled big and said, "Oh to be eighteen again." "Fuck that." He said all smiles. "They might be able to keep getting it up but with age you learn how to control it better." We both smiled and looked down at the frat brothers and bar regulars as they sucked the last of the cum off me. When I could I stood up and Peter walked over to me. "Fuck you two really did it." He said smiling "You turned a sure black ball into a yellow ball." We both laughed and looked at Jerry kneeling still being pissed on and in. I looked around for my son and Tommy walked over to me and leant against me, "I can't find my clothes." He said looking a tired as I felt. "Where did you leave them?" I asked. "Dad if I knew where I left them then I would know where they where." He said rolling his eyes. This was the son I knew; well he was more naked now but the same mouth. "Well I'm heading back for camp." I said. "What?" Mad Dog said, "The night is still early." "Ya well I'm not." I said patting his shoulder. "I'm coming too." Tommy said. "Let me grab my clothes and well go." I told him. I walked back to where I know I left my clothes, I think, and saw they where gone. "Where the hell are my clothes?" I said out loud. "Where did you leave them?" Tommy asked and smirked. "You get that mouth from your mother's side." I said. "Where did I get my cute ass from?" He countered with a smile. "Oh that's from my side." I said and laughed. We looked for our clothes for another five minutes and finally I said, "Oh fuck it lets go." "Sounds good." We walked over to Ron who was naked and dancing on a box next to his big brother who was also dancing for the crowd below. "We're heading back." I told him. "Come on Dad just a little longer." Ron begged. "I beat." I told him. "Jason can you walk your brother back to the camp site latter?" "I'll do it." Mad Dog said coming up behind me. "I'll be leaving in a bit and I'll catch you back at the camp site." I looked at Ron who was smiling at that suggestion and said, "Sounds good. You leave when he leaves." Ron shook his head yes and started to dance again. Tommy and I walked to the bar door naked and I took the handle in my hand and looked back at my two naked sons dancing for men and boys who where cheering them on. "There are my two Stripper Sons." I thought as I opened the door and the fresh air hit my and my son's naked bodies as we stepped out on the sidewalk naked. MORE TO CUM When I ask for feedback it is my asking about the story line. I don not need to know what is spelled wrong or if my grammar is off, I don't want to read it so please if my writing bothers you just don't read any more and that will cut out all the problems. I am not a professional writer so keep it about the story line only please. You can write to me about the story line to cumsoakedface@yahoo.com all my stories are at www.geocities.com/cumsoakedface/index.html