Accepted -4

Authors Note- Hey you guys. I'm so sorry for the delay I have had tons of trouble with my computer, but I think its ok now. Anyway, I wrote this during class so it took a while, sense I had to be stealthy but it is the best chapter yet!



Accepted 4

I woke up forgetting where I was. I felt an arm around me, pulling me closer. Mark I thought, I realized after the daze of sleepiness left that I was still in the hospital.

I turned my head and saw that he was awake.

"Morning Sunshine" I said, smiling.

"Shut Up" Mark said, playfully biting my ear.

"Can I go home yet?" I asked.

"I'll go ask"

"K babe" I said as Mark got off the bed and walked out the door.

Five minutes later he came back in with the Doctor behind him.

"Mr. Moore?" the doctor asked.

"That's Me" I said, smiling.

"It seems that you are doing much better, and can go home after the paper work is filled out and you change clothes"

"Thank You So much" I said.

The doctor walked over and shook my hand, then whispered in my ear,

"Take care of my little bro"

I looked at him, he just winked and walked out.

Mark walked over to me and leaned in for a kiss, but I dodged him.

Mark suddenly looked like a child who found out there wasn't a Santa Clause, very puzzled and a bit sad.

"Let's save it for when we get home"

"Alright" Mark said, sticking out his bottom lip.

I got out of bed and got my clothes. I told mark to turn his head. I didn't want him seeing anything till that night.


After I pulled on Jeans and a t shirt, we walked to the front desk to check me out. I walked outside and was hit by a blast of cold air.

"Damn!" I yelled.

Mark pulled his jacket off, and gave it to me. He was only wearing a wife beater, and a tight one at that.

"Keep the jacket" I said. But Mark, being the sweet , kind person that he is, put the jacket around my shoulders and his arm around my shoulders.

"Better?" he asked.

"Bunches" I smiled. We got to parking deck and found marks car. He opened my door for me and I kissed his cheek as I got in.

"Tease" I heard him mutter under his breath taking smile.

On the way home mark pulled in to a McDonalds. After eating out food, we held hands all the way home.

When we pulled up at marks house, his dad opened the door and stepped onto the porch.

"How are two favorite men?" he asked, Messing my hair.

"Shut Up Dad" Mark said blushing.

"Ima just jokin son, how're ya jack?"

"I'm great" I said, sliding my arm around Marks waist.

"Lets go in" Steve said, and he lead the way.

~Now to make myself clear I have never been to Mark's house before this. It was easier for him to get to my house, than for me to get to his. His dad knew he was gay and his mom died when he was six. She was hit by a drunk driver and died before the EMS got there.~

Mark took my hand and led me to his drop dead gorgeous house.

"Was that really your brother in the hospital?" I whispered.

"I'll explain later" Mark whispered very low in my ear.

"Alright Babe" I said, kissing his cheek.

We walked through the door and before I could even blink Mark was pulling me up the stairs to his room. We got to the end of the hallway and I was pulled to the last door on the left which had posters of various "scream-o" bands. I couldn't understand how Mark liked that stuff.

But that was the last thing on my mind at that moment.

Marks room was painted a light blue, I loved it! It had a very peaceful atmosphere. There was not one thing out of its place. Football trophies lined the shelves on the walls . Pictures covered the walls, Mark and his Football team, Mark and His Brother. Mark at a club, at birthday parties and also a picture that REALLY caught me eye. It was of Mark, shirtless with his jeans pulled down really low. I knew it was professional.

"Ah" Mark said behind me "That picture is one of my favorites. I had it done about 6 months ago and wanted to give it to you. But I wanted to wait for the perfect time."

Mark walked over to the picture and took it off the wall. He walked over to me and handed it to me.

"Look at the back" he told me. I turned it over and saw a handwritten note:


This picture is for you. I wanted you to have a picture of me since you gave me one of you. I hope you like it. I love you so much and cant believe we have been together for a year! I hope we have many, many more.

Love You,


I turned the picture back over and stared at it some more. It was in Sepia, the brownish tint made Mark look astonishing. He was turned and had his fingers in his belt loops. The picture showed the tattoo that I loved so much. Mark had defiantly gotten more muscle since this picture, but he still had a six pack and was muscular. This meant so much to me.

I looked up at Mark.

"Do you like it?" he asked

"I love it Mark, I absolutely love it" I laid it carefully on the desk beside us that held a laptop, and various CD's and Magazines. I wrapped my arms around Marks neck and pulled his lips to mine. I wasn't a very passionate kiss but in was heaven. To be, every kiss don't have to be filled with, knee buckling, cock hardening passion. Every kiss with Mark even just a peck as just as much passion as any.

When I pulled away Mark had a concerned look on his face.

"What's wrong?" I asked

"We need to talk" Mark said "about tonight"

"Okay" I said, and both of us walked over to the bed and sat down. I took Mark's hand and squeezed it.

"Are you scared?" he asked me.

"Yes Mark" I said "I am"

"I just don't want to hurt you" he said.

"Mark" I said "It's going to hurt, I know it will. But from what I've heard, the pain doesn't last long"

"I just want you to be honest and tell me if you want to stop"

"I will" I promised.

"Ok" was all the Mark said.

I looked at his face, his eyes reflected how worried he was about what we were about to do.

"Hey" I said "Are you ok?"

"Yeah" he said, turning his head.

"Mark" I said, turning his head around to face me.

"I love you Mark" I said "You know that. And I would be a complete idiot if I didn't know you loved me."

Mark smiled at that one so I continued. "And true love respects each other. If you don't want to do this tonight, you don't have to. But I'm telling you, if your worried about hurting me, don't. I will be fine."

Mark looked me in the eyes.

"I want this" he said "More than anything in the world. I want to be with you forever. Tonight is going to happen. I want it to. I want to give my virginity away to you and only you"

"Well it's not like there is anyone else for me to compete with" I said smiling.

Mark chuckled. Then I leaned in, kissing him gently then he kissed me back with a hunger I had never seen in him before.

"You know what?" I said.


"I don't think I can wait until tonight" I whispered in his ear. Then nibbled on it.

Mark inhaled sharply as I did this. I kicked off my shoes and Mark did the same. I forgot I had his jacket on so I shrugged out of it. I ran hand down Marks stomach. Feeling the muscles under his too tight wife beater made my cock harden. I slowly slipped my hand under the wife beater and felt the warm skin and hair under my fingers. I pushed it up until Mark's whole torso was exposed. Then Mark slipped it over his head and put a hand behind his head, exposing his trimmed pits. I ran my hands up his stomach and chest then over to his armpits. Mark smiled at me as I ran my hands through the hair. I rested my head on Mark's shoulder as mark ran his other hand up and down my back. I leaned up as Mark pulled the shirt over my head.

Both of our exposed torsos were pressed against the other. It felt so good, Mark was wearing sweatpants so his hard on made a pretty big bulge.

Mark pulled me on top of him and hugged me. I felt his hands slide down my back and start pushing my pants down. I loved the feel of his hands as they pushed my pants farther and farther down.

Before I knew it I was naked on top of him, grinding my cock into him. Mark reached down and pushed his pants down, then kicked them to the floor. We were both naked now, kissing and caressing each other. I flipped us over so that Mark would have better access to me. He reached over to his nightstand and grabbed a bottle of lube.

"A present from Dad" he said, smiling. He squeezed some out and lube my hole first then his cock. He lined his cock up with my whole then looked at me, I just nodded.

He slowly pushed in. I took a sharp breath, because, as I suspected, It did hurt a bit.

Mark looked horrified.

"It's ok" I said "Just go slowly"

He slowly pushed in more until his whole cock was in me.

It felt good now. SO GOOD.

"Faster" I moaned. I started jerking off to the rhythm of his fucking me. He leaned down and kissed me. My tongue pushed its way into his mouth as my arms went around his neck.

"I love you" he whispered when he pulled back.

"I love you to" I said.

Mark smiled and kissed the tip of my nose. He quickened his pace. I knew he was close. I felt my own orgasm approaching slowly.

We were both sweating now. Mark looked incredibly sexy with the sweat on his chest. Not that he doesn't look like that all the time!

In three hard thrusts, Mark unloaded his balls deep in my ass. Then I came all over my stomach with 6 long ropes of cum.

Mark, red faced and sweaty, collapsed on top of me, smearing my cum on his stomach.

"How was it?" he asked me.

"A-MAZ-ING" I said between sharp intakes of breath.

Mark chuckled. Then asked.

"You want to take a shower?"

"How about the hot tub?" I asked.

"Even better"

Mark got up, my cum still on his stomach, and pulled me up.

We grabbed a couple of towels and headed to the hot tub in the sun room downstairs. When we walked out, I saw Steve, Mark's dad come out of the bathroom, completely NAKED.

He smiled and walked towards us. He, I felt icky for saying this, but my lovers dad was HOT. He just got out of the shower and water was dripping down his VERY muscular chest to his, what had to be 11 inch, cock!

"Ya'll headed to the hot tub?" he asked

"Yeah" Mark said.

"Mind if I tag along?" Steve asked.

"Not a bit" I said, smiling, maybe a little too much.

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Mark, Steve and I, had fun in the hot tub (and NO not that kind of fun) Steve was hilarious! Mark called him "Horse Man" because of his huge cock. I also found out that Steve was bi! After about 45 minutes, Steve got out of the hot tub, to go to bed. I watched his perfect ass until it was out of view.

"Damn Mark!" I said "Your dad is HOT!"

"I know" he said "I've jerked off many times because of him"

"Really?" I asked, shocked a bit.

"Yeah" Mark said "My dad has always been more of a best friend to me than a Dad, which I love. I just think of it as jerking off thinking about you. The only difference is you are the love of my life, and also a tad bit bigger in the cock area" he said smiling.

I chuckled and kissed him, then laid my head on his chest and drifted to sleep, being held by the sexiest man on earth. And he was allll mine.

Authors Note:

I hope that this chapter made up for the long period of time I couldn't write. I hope you liked this story and have as much fun reading it as I did writing it. I am writing chapter five and as soon as I am done I will type it and send it in. It shouldn't take long. But you never know! ;) Also, special thanks to my new friend Marius from Lithuania! Your awesome dude!! Comments are welcome at

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