Date: Thu, 27 May 2004 17:45:22 -0700 (PDT) From: Jay Winton Subject: Erik's song 11 Odd parent's...fairly odd parents...ok I'm done...onto chapter 11...we're almost done:) I was shocked when Erik uttered those words...I didn't think he would feel that way...but they way he looked at me as he continued to kiss my stomach made me realize that what he felt was true...my heart soared right then and there. " Jay, do you mind?" Erik said to me as gently as he could. "No, Erik...I'm ready...I mean I've already done this before right?" I said...half jokingly and half not. He winced at the comment. "Yea sure Jay, but this time you want it...right?" He said kind of worriedly. "Yes, Erik...I do" I said as I reached his lips and kissed him to make him shut up. I unbutton my jeans and let them slide to my feet as he did the same. I opened my eyes for some reason and looked around. This place has never been so...green. The colors were so vibrant; the sounds so clear and crisps...the smell was over bearing and filled my nose as I breathed in a large breath as Erik gently entered me. I gasped, " Oh my god...Erik" He just smiled at me. "Are you okay?" He asked me while he brushed my brown hair out of my face, and then to his own blonde hair. "Yea...Erik, I'm just fine," I said panting and short of breath. He then slowly started to push in and out of me. I could feel his pole sliding in and out ever so gently. He was brushing against my prostate and it made me shiver as the sweat dripped down from his face and onto my body. "O god! Jay...you feel so good." Erik said as he bit his lower lip...and quickened his pace. "Keep going babe." I said. I guess he took that as the go ahead, because right at that moment he lifted my legs up and put them on his shoulders and started to slam into me. He threw his head back...and I threw my head back at the same moment. "O god Erik...it feels so good" I said, noting the fact that it felt so much better than it did when it was my dad. He didn't let up, he pounded my ass. I could hear his balls slap my ass. I don't know how long we were fucking for, but all of a sudden he collapsed on my body. "You done babe?" I asked. "No, I'm just too tired to continue." He said, panting and dripping with sweat. "Then let me do the work," I said to him with a grin, that I tried to mimic like his. He rolled on his stomach, and I got on top of him. I started to lick his nipples. I swirled my tongue around each one, and gently bit each one, as he moaned into my ear. I then took him by surprise and lowered myself onto his rock hard dick. He gasped, and I just looked at him and winked. I started lifting myself up and down on his dick, making him buck his hips to meet my ass. He was burying his head into the grass and gritting his teeth, as he tried to speak. "Jay, babe...I love you." He said in a half-whisper, that if you weren't paying attention you wouldn't have heard. " I love you to Erik" I said, as I started to jump up and down on his rod. Feeling my ass come down hard on his dick, getting impaled by his fuck pole never felt so good. "I'm going to cum!" he screamed, but I wasn't done just yet, I had a trick up my sleeve. I stopped jumping; I stopped fucking myself on him. I sat there on his dick and did nothing. He looked at me weird, " Why'd you stop? I was just about to cum" He said a little frustrated. I just looked at him and winked. "Jay, come on! you can't do-" I cut him off as I started to slowly, very, very slowly lift my ass up on his rock hard fuck pole. I squeezed my ass so tight around his dick, I thought it was gonna loose blood flow. I made my ass tighter and warmer for him. "O SHIT!" he screamed..."here it comes!" At that moment, my ass was filled with loads of Erik's cum. He was gritting his teeth and grabbing hold of the grass as he filled my ass. "Jay, baby come here" Erik reached out for me, as I lay down on his chest, he started to comb my hair with his hand. I felt a tear... fall on my cheek. I awoke to the image of the sun setting, I looked at the sky and saw oranges and yellows, pinks and purples was over the sky as it prepared to take a nap, until the morning when it would shine again. "Erik?" I said, trying to wake him up "Yea? What's wrong?" He asked, as he stood up concerned. "Nothing, nothing is wrong...just wanted to tell you it's getting late," I said. "O, okay...let's get going" He said as he helped me to my feet. I realized that his load was still inside of me, so I got my backpack and took a shirt from it. "I need a shower," I said... "Yea, I can see that...sorry" He said apologetic. "No, it's ok...I loved it" I said as I grabbed his hand and we headed down the familiar path through the woods. For some reason I started to whistle. "What are you whistling?" Erik asked me. "O, nothing" I said as I quickly stopped. "No! Tell me." He said. "It's the melody to a song I'm writing...and that's all I'm saying," I said to him. He tried to open his mouth for a rebuttal but I quickly kissed his lips to shut him up. "Well...if every time I'm going to talk, and you kiss me...I'd be a happy man." He said to me with a smile as he swung my hand in his, as we walked down "our" path. "Erik?" I asked him, as the reality of some shit set in. "Yes?" He replied while looking off somewhere. "Where do I go? I can't go back home." I said to him. He automactally stopped and looked at me... "I really don't know...I didn't think about that." He said. " I can-" I started to say before he cut me off "NO! You're NOT sleeping in the streets, your staying with me" he said as we started to walk in the other direction to his house. That's chapter 11...haven't been getting too many emails..i guess the story sucks...so I guess I might as well end it... Feedback: spokenword87@yahoo.com ~Jay