Date: Mon, 2 Jul 2007 03:09:26 -0700 (PDT) From: Greg Subject: I'll Suck You revised chapter 2 I'll Suck You By Photo Guy I'll Suck You By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com) The author copyrights this story, with permission for posting on the Nifty Archive. It may not be copied to another website without prior permission from the author. This fictional story involves gay sex between family members and their friends, and it is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who aren't offended by material of this type! If you are underage, or this type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now. The major formatting error of the original post has been taken care of in this revision. But besides that, I think that the revision is SO much better than the original! Chapter 2 Kaiden's cock deflated in my mouth and mine went down as fast as a balloon that just had the air let out of it. We were both naked and covered in cum! And it was too late to try to cover ourselves. Dad stopped next to the screen at the foot of our bed; and he looked like he was going to cry! I hadn't seen Dad like this since the funeral. We ... I ... had disappointed him ... Dad reached down, grabbed my boxers and threw them to Kaiden. "You boys better clean yourselves off!" And after Kaiden wiped the semen from his body, I did the same. Then Dad opened his arms wide, and pulled us into a three-way hug! "Guys, I love both of you so much ..." Tears began pouring from his eyes as he hugged us tightly. My eyes were moist, but hey ... what was going on here, anyway? I expected Dad to be angry, or maybe disappointed with us. But he didn't even seem to have noticed what we'd been doing! Or had he seen, but didn't care? I gotta tell you; I was confused! Dad hugged both of us tighter; and then he sat on the bed. I glanced towards Kaiden and he had a curious look on his face, too. My brother and I looked at each other and then to Dad before sitting down on either side of him. I know I was wondering where this was leading ... and Kaiden also seemed confused. "Boys, I'm so sorry ... since your mother died, I've been a terrible dad to both of you," Dad choked out between sobs. "I've allowed myself to hurt inside for WAY too long! Just when you needed me the most, I wasn't there for you." He looked at Kaiden and then at me, before pulling both of us into his loving embrace. When it was over, he held us at arm's length. "Just look at the two of you: you're growing up, and I feel like I've missed out on the past two years of your lives!" "Dad ... I love you," Kaiden said strongly, as he hugged Dad again. "There were times when you seemed SO far away," I stated. "But Dad ... I never doubted that you loved us. I guess I can't understand all of your feelings, but I know how much I miss Mom!" And I hugged Dad tightly. "Thanks," Dad said simply, and then he was quiet for a while. "Boys, can you ever forgive me?" Kaiden and I both grabbed Dad in the biggest hug you could imagine; and he fell backwards onto the bed as we both expressed our love and forgiveness. Dad smiled again. It was getting to be a habit, but one that I liked a lot! "This has been the best day I've had in a long time!" Kaiden exclaimed, and he was grinning from ear to ear. He propped himself up on his left elbow, as he gazed at our father. But soon his smile turned to a question. "Dad ... what made you realize how you'd been acting towards us?" "Yeah," I added, "don't get me wrong; I like you a lot better this way ..." Dad ruffled my hair as he smiled. "Well, boys ... I guess I must have known that I was depressed for quite a while. But last week, I got an e-mail from an old friend." Dad paused for a few seconds. "How about waiting to talk about it over dinner? I think we'd better get cleaned up, now!" I nodded 'sure'; but there was something else that I had to know. "Dad ... about what Kaiden and I were just doing ..." I began. Dad hadn't even mentioned it, but I wanted to clear the air while he was in such a good mood. Dad smiled warmly at us. "Chris, all boys are going to experiment with each other. I don't have a problem with that." He looked towards my brother. "But I am going to have to add a rule to the list; and this is especially for you, Kaiden. Never let anyone, including Chris, force you to do or try anything that you aren't comfortable with." And then he turned to me. "And Chris, remember that Kaiden is your younger brother. Don't try to make him do anything that he doesn't want to do! Okay?" Kaiden and I knew what Dad expected of us most of the time, and until today, Dad had only laid down three hard and fast rules: no drinking, no smoking and no drugs. Now we had four. We hadn't had a problem with the first three and I knew I could live with the fourth. "Deal," we both said at the same time. And again Dad smiled, as he hugged each of us. We knew from experience that the water heater in our apartment would give exactly twenty-one minutes of medium-warm water. Since I was already naked, I headed toward the bathroom. I planned to get the first seven minutes. But Kaiden followed me. "Hey, Chris ... do you mind if I join you?" He wanted to shower with me ... another first! How many could there be in one day? I'd just got my first blowjob and started to give my first. Kaiden told me his real feelings for me for the first time and I was beginning to realize that I loved him as more than just a brother. I saw Dad smile for the first time in months and found out that he really DID love us. Wow! "Sure, Kaiden," I smiled. I turned on the water, and as soon as the temperature was to my liking, I stepped into the tub ... and Kaiden was right behind me. I reached for the shampoo but Kaiden took it out of my hand. "Let me do that," he said, and he began to lather my hair. He gave my scalp a sensuous massage before heading down my body with his soapy hands. He kneaded my chest muscles and ran his fingers over my abs. "So nice ..." he murmured. He put more shampoo on his hands and lathered under my arms and then moved to my pubes, washing my cock and balls and finally my legs. "All done!" he proclaimed as I rinsed myself off. I drew his mouth to mine and kissed him firmly. "Now it's my turn," I stated. His sexy blonde hair was longer than mine and I tried to give it the best shampooing it'd ever had. I twisted his hair between my fingers. And as I rubbed his scalp, Kaiden cooed with pleasure. I soaped his chest and arms and washed his almost hairless pits. He had a small, perfect set of pubes for a thirteen year old. I ran my lathered fingers through the hair before jacking his hard, six-inch boyhood. He must have been right on the edge, because he came in moments. Then I washed his balls and finished with his legs, where the hair was just turning from that of a little boy to that of a teenager. 'So sexy ... and he wants ME!' I thought as he was rinsing off. As I turned off the water, we stepped from the shower. And I glanced towards the wall clock (I told you we had to time our showers): thirteen minutes. Dad would still have his hot water! Grabbing a couple of towels, we dried each other's bodies. And when we were through, we put on deodorant and cleaned up the room for Dad. As we left the bathroom, Dad asked, "Did you boys leave any hot water for me?" "Eight minutes," I stated with a smile. Dad smiled back. "Thanks, guys." And he slipped off his shoes and socks. Now that I think about it, I guess I had the youngest dad of all of my friends. Most of their dads were forty or fifty. Although all adults seemed pretty old to me, Dad was only thirty-three. And he had kept himself in great shape, in spite of the depression he'd been in lately. I looked long and hard at his body as he entered the bathroom. He was around six feet tall, with a toned body and deeply tanned skin. He had a smooth chest; and his chiseled butt and legs were covered in dark hair that extended to the tops of his feet and toes. His soft six inches and ample balls hung beneath pubes that were a little too thick for my taste. But for an adult, he was definitely hot! I heard the shower begin as Kaiden and I began to dress. Like I said before, it had been an awesome day so I decided to wear shorts; and Kaiden must have had the same idea, since we both chose cargos. His came to just below his knees with those dangly tie strings hanging out of the bottom of each leg. He slipped a pair of flip-flops onto his tanned feet ... and a bright yellow tank top finished the outfit. I adjusted my shorts, until they rode very low on my hips. And then I pulled on a pair of lo-cut socks, my new Nikes and a button front shirt. "Leave the buttons open," Kaiden said. "I want to see some of your awesome chest!" Wow! I ask you ... how could I refuse a request like that? So I did as he asked; and I was showing a line of smooth, tanned skin from my neck to my pubes. "Oooo ... looking good!" he exclaimed. We both stood in front of the mirror for quite a while, admiring ourselves, and each other. Damn, we WERE one hot pair of brothers! I leaned over and kissed Kaiden, giving him some tongue. And he responded by running his hands over my chest through the open buttons; and I popped a boner. He noticed and smiled. "I see someone is enjoying himself!" he exclaimed. As I glanced towards his crotch, it was obvious that Kaiden was packing wood too; and I smiled back. 'Why had we waited so long to try this?' I wondered, and I gave him another long kiss. I was showing Kaiden my biceps when Dad stepped out of the bathroom. "Guys, I'll be ready in a few minutes," he said as he began dressing. I was still flexing when he stepped up behind me and poked me in the ribs, which caused me to drop my arms and giggle. "Let me admire both of you," Dad said as he turned us around. "I'd have to say that you're the hottest two brothers in THIS town!" And he nodded his approval. "You're not too bad yourself ... for an old man!" Kaiden exclaimed, laughing. In fact, I couldn't think of another man that was half as hot as Dad! Dad grinned back, before tousling Kaiden's hair. "Well, boys ... let's head out," he said. "It's been a while, but Red Lobster used to be awful crowded on Friday nights." Dad's memory was good. We arrived around six and had a twenty-minute wait for a table. We looked at the tank of live lobsters for a while ... little did they know that they were soon to be someone's meal! And then we went outside to talk while we waited. We talked about everything: school, each other, our friends, Mom... "Boys, this afternoon I told you that I'd received an e-mail from an old friend ..." Dad began. "Matthews, table for three," someone announced. "Let's get our seats," Dad said. And we went back inside, where someone led us to our booth. Kaiden and Dad took one side and I sat across from Kaiden. We smiled at each other and Dad smiled at me. The waiter ... Jan, according to his nametag ... was a hot-looking redhead of around eighteen. He brought us menus, and a few minutes later, he took our orders. Kaiden and I wanted fried shrimp and Dad ordered some kind of fresh fish. And before too much longer, we had our food. I'd almost forgotten how much I loved Red Lobster! I guess Kaiden must have felt the same way, because we both wolfed down our meals. Dad wasn't too far behind and soon we were considering dessert, as Jan walked up to our table. "How about Key Lime pie all around?" Dad asked; and we shook our heads 'yes' in agreement. And moments later, Jan returned with our dessert. As we were finishing our meal, Dad said, "Boys ... this afternoon, I told you that I'd received an e-mail from an old friend." He looked at me. "I doubt if you remember him, Chris, since Josh moved away when you were one or two. But he was my best friend as a kid, and all through high school. In fact, he was Best Man at my wedding." Then he paused, before continuing, "I haven't seen him in almost thirteen years ..." Dad shook his head, like he wondered where all the years had gone. "Well ... last week, out of the blue, he sent me an email." "I was so depressed that day, last week Thursday, that I almost felt I couldn't go on!" I was shocked and saddened to hear Dad talk like that. I guess that while I always thought he should be there for us, I never considered that maybe WE needed to be there for HIM. "Anyway, in his e-mail, Josh began by saying again how sorry he was about Mom's death ... and that he probably should have written earlier, but the time never seemed right. But then he said that he heard from another old friend that I'd been really depressed for the last year." "Tim, you've got to snap out of it," he wrote. "Think of your boys ... they're teenagers now, and they need a strong Dad ... not some wimpy guy who's going to mope around the house all day! They've already lost their mom; and now it sounds like they've lost their dad, as well!" "He went on to talk about a few other things, but his words caused me to start thinking. I HAD been feeling sorry for myself the last two years. I was only thinking of my feelings and my loss; I was hardly considering the two of you! His words kept playing across my mind for the last week ... how could I continue to let both of you down?" I got out of my seat, walked around the table to Dad's left side, and hugged him; and Kaiden joined in from Dad's right. "I'm going to be here for both of you from now on!" Dad exclaimed. As we were hugging, Jan returned with the bill. "It looks like you three have something good going on," he stated with a big smile. "We do now," Dad said as he paid the bill, leaving a generous tip for Jan. "Thanks for the great meal." We left the restaurant, got in the car and headed for home. "Josh said one more thing in his e-mail," Dad continued with his earlier thought. "He wants us to come and visit him this summer. He lives in Colorado now, and he'd like for us to take two weeks and go backpacking with him in the mountains. He said he's lived there for twelve years but had never really been up in the mountains for more than a day at a time. Boys, what do you think about taking a Colorado vacation?" What DID I think about that? On the one hand, it sounded like it might be a lot of fun! But Kaiden and I had just discovered our feelings for each other. Would it mean two weeks of pretending that we were JUST brothers? Could we even jack off during two weeks of backpacking? I was happy that Dad felt better, but what about my needs? "Can Chris and I have sex?" Kaiden asked. He was usually the one who came right out and said what was on his mind. I, on the other hand, normally kept my comments on sensitive issues to myself. "I don't see why not," Dad laughed. "Josh and I were best buddies in EVERY sense of the word until I met your Mom." Dad's face had a far-off look, like he was remembering good times. "I don't think he'll have a problem with you boys being boys!" Kaiden laughed with relief, and I told Dad that a trip to Colorado sounded like fun to me! "Great!" Dad said. "I'll check my calendar and call Josh tomorrow. I hope we can set the date." Wow, a lot had happened today; and everything was good. I wish every day could be like this one! I touched Dad's arm and looked into his eyes. "I love you so much!" I declared. "I don't deserve either of you," Dad stated. He glanced away from the road, looked into my eyes and smiled. As he looked back at the road, his eyes turned to the left. "Hey guys, there's the video store. What do you say we rent a movie?" As you'd expect from a couple of teenaged boys, we thought it was a great idea! And after some discussion, we finally settled on "Spiderman" and went home. Dad got a big bottle of Coke from the refrigerator, while I put in the DVD. Dad had bought a big screen TV a couple of years ago. It was great for watching movies; almost like going to the theater. And as the movie began, Dad returned with the bottle of soda and three glasses of ice. I took a seat in the middle of the small couch, while Kaiden plopped down on my left. Dad sat down on my right, poured himself a soda and handed me the bottle. I poured Kaiden and myself a glass and put the bottle on the floor, near my feet. Toby Maguire is one hot dude; and I loved the way Spiderman's suit showed every muscle in his chest! By the middle of the movie, Kaiden was laying with his legs over the arm of the couch and his head in my lap. His hand absent-mindedly rubbed my left leg and played with the hairs. I was getting a boner as he rubbed his head against it. After leaning my head against Dad's shoulder, I inhaled his manly scent. He raised his arm, and draped it around my shoulder. And I sighed, as his hand began to massage my chest. 'This is what life should be like,' I thought. 'I've been missing this.' An hour later, Spiderman had saved everyone, the Green Goblin was dead and all was right with their world! Everything seemed to be right in my world, as well ... "Guys, I think it's time for bed," Dad announced. Kaiden got up and headed for the bathroom ... and I was close behind. As Kaiden was pissing, I let my stream join his. After we shook off, I hugged his hot body to my side. And then we brushed our teeth while Dad turned out the lights. "Hey, Chris ... how about sleeping in the nude tonight?" Kaiden suggested. And I nodded my agreement. I'd never slept naked before; but maybe I wouldn't be getting much sleep tonight, anyway! "Good night boys. Try not to keep me awake all night!" Dad said as he ruffled our hair. "We'll try not to be TOO loud," Kaiden smirked. "'Night" we both said. Dad went behind the screen to his bed, while Kaiden and I went to ours ... stripping as we went. We jumped in bed, and immediately we began cuddling and kissing. Our tongues dueled between our mouths, and one of Kaiden's hands found my right nipple. He began to pinch and twist it, and soon it was hard and puckered. Wow, I never knew my tits were so sensitive! I'd learned SO much about myself today ... Although Dad had turned out the lights, we had a streetlight just outside of the window to our room. In past nights, I'd cursed it, but tonight I was thankful for the light, since it allowed me to see every sensuous angle of Kaiden's body. I slipped from his arms, and began licking and kissing Kaiden's chest and stomach. My mouth was drawn towards his crotch, but I bypassed his cock, and began nuzzling his smallish balls. I slipped one tangy globe into my mouth ... and savored the flavor and texture ... as my nostrils flared, inhaling every nuance of his boyish scent. I closed my lips around it and began gently pulling it away from his body. Kaiden whimpered and writhed in ecstasy! And I began making like I was chewing on it ... pulling and moaning. Kaiden was going crazy, sucking in his already flat stomach and flexing his legs, when I took his other ball in my hand. I opened wide and stuffed it into my mouth. And I continued pulling while I began to stroke his stiff meat, while running the fingers of my other hand through his sparse pubes. His lean body was as tight as a stretched rubber band as his cock began to unload its sweet nectar straight up into the air. Kaiden moaned in delight, as his seed fell onto his pubes, my hand and my face. And using my tongue, I pushed his balls from my mouth. My jaw ached, but it was a good hurt; and I kissed his still-leaking cock. Wiping his sperm from my face, I lapped up his juice; my first taste of his cum. I can't say that I loved it, but I loved him ... and it came from him ... it WAS him! Our lips met, and we kissed passionately. "Now it's my turn," he said. And he immediately began to squeeze my turgid member. As he closed his teeth on my left nipple, I yelped ... and he bit down harder! I was learning that Kaiden really liked to use his teeth! With his fingers barely touching my overly sensitive body, Kaiden began to trace letters on my chest and abs. "Kaiden loves Chris," he murmured as he wrote. He had released my cock, but it was still as hard as steel. Every heartbeat caused the head to swell, and the pre-cum began to flow from it in a steady stream! His fingers swirled the liquid over my abs, and rubbed it into my pubic hair. And then, he jammed a finger into my belly button. Whoa ... another sensation! Where did he learn all of this, anyway? He released my erect nipple and immediately went down on my cock. He turned his head just so, as he swallowed, and I felt my dick touch the back of his throat. Kaiden began to gag and pulled off, but he went right back to it. My cock head was nestled in the sensitive membranes of his throat and I thought I couldn't take any more when he began to hum around it. His vibrating vocal chords brought me over the edge ... and I began to cum right into his stomach! "Oh fuck, Kaiden! Oh FU-U-C-K!" I exclaimed, as he pulled off to catch the last burst in his mouth. "Kaiden, that was UNBELIEVABLE!" As I was coming down from my orgasm, I heard a quick slapping sound from the other room. Awesome ... Dad was jacking off to the sounds of our sex! "Uhh! Uhh! Uhh!" and all was quiet. And I smiled at Kaiden, before we fell asleep in each other's arms. ## Guys, I sure hope you liked the revised chapter 2! If you'd like to send me an email, I'd love to hear from you! (fotogme11@yahoo.com) Thanks for reading my story! Greg