Date: Mon, 12 Feb 2007 05:04:01 -0800 (PST) From: fotogme11@yahoo.com Subject: I'll Suck You chapter 23 I'll Suck You By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com) The author copyrights this story, with permission for posting on the Nifty Archive. It may not be copied to another website without prior permission from the author. This fictional story involves gay sex between family members and their friends, and it is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who aren't offended by material of this type! If you are underage, or this type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now. Hi guys! It was good to hear from some of you after chapter 22. I hope you enjoy chapter 23; and I'm always open to suggestions from you to make the story hotter! I won't promise to use all of them, but I will promise to consider each and every one of them! And as always, I'd sure like to hear from all of you! (fotogme11@yahoo.com) Chapter 23 (Chris narrates) Slowly I drifted back to consciousness, as the morning sunlight streamed into our tent. Tyler and I lay in each other's arms; and after I brought my lips to his, tenderly kissing his sleeping form, I nuzzled his cheek. His stubble scratched my nose ... and I pulled back for a moment. Clean-shaven, Tyler was probably the sexiest guy I knew; but a three-day beard raised his face to another level ... and my cock stood up, as it took notice! He had a heavy growth of short, dark whiskers on his cheeks and upper lip. While a line that began beneath his lower lip fanned out as it reached his chin. Damn, I could hardly wait to see how he'd look without shaving for a couple more days! And as I rubbed my hand over my cheeks and chin, I hoped the growth on my face looked half as hot as Tyler's. Tyler's shallow rhythmic breathing told me that he was still asleep. And as I began to hear voices from one of the other tents, I rolled onto my back. Absentmindedly I fondled my stiff rod, while my mind drifted back to last night. Tyler and I had fucked each other like rabbits, for what seemed like hours! He came three times in my ass, and each time was better than the one before it ... while I returned the favor twice. And after pissing, we'd pooped out the cum in the doorway of the tent before we fell asleep. I glanced lovingly at Tyler as he moaned in his sleep. His eyelids fluttered for a moment before closing again. And when I felt his cock harden against my side, I unzipped the sleeping bag, tossing if off of us. The smells of our sex last night, and sweaty boy parts, hung heavy in the air. There was just enough room in the tent for me to assume a sixty-nine pose with my slowly waking boyfriend. And after sliding into position, I examined his stiff meat. It was shiny ... I guess from a combination of his cum and my ass juices ... and hesitantly, I brought it to my mouth; I wasn't sure if I wanted to taste a cock that was so obviously messy! I don't know how long I held his cock just inches from my mouth, when Tyler broke into my thoughts. "I was wondering the same thing about yours!" he exclaimed, yawning. "I think we BOTH need a good shower!" "You're SO right about that!" Then I slowly, and oh so tentatively, touched his foreskin with the tip of my tongue. "Bitter!" I exclaimed. "And I wanted to suck you off so bad this morning ..." "Here ... let me get a taste of you," Tyler said, as he boldly took the knob of my head into his mouth. Quickly removing it, he screwed-up his face, "Fuck! I sure hate to say it ... but Chris ... I HAVE tasted better!" And laughing, he asked, "Well, what now?" "Why don't we just jack each other off this morning," I said as I sat up, spreading my legs. "Let's save the sucking until we're good and clean ... and can REALLY enjoy it!" "Sounds like a plan to me!" Tyler added as he yawned a second time. He just lay there for a few moments, and finally he roused himself enough to sit up. "Damn, I guess you must have really wore me out last night! I can't seem to wake up!" And we both laughed as we remembered last night. Tyler was right; it had been really strenuous ... but lots of fun! "Come here!" I exclaimed while bending my knees, as I pulled his face to mine, kissing him briefly. "Sit face-to-face with me, and put your legs under mine so our cocks are together." "Say ... why don't we dock again? We haven't done that for a while," Tyler commented as he got into position. "And you could jack us this time. In fact, I'll just keep my hands behind me, lean back on them and let you handle it all!" My cock was throbbing with desire, as I remembered the last time we'd coupled like this. Back then; I was excited because I didn't know what Tyler was planning, as he rolled his foreskin onto his shaft. But this morning, my hand trembled as it approached Tyler's meat. "Um ... sure!" I said, as I fisted both of our cocks. Doing it all was a little awkward, but finally I managed to bring the heads together, rolling his foreskin over my glans. "Fuck, you're hard this morning!" I exclaimed, as I began to stroke our combined meat. "Yeah," Tyler laughed, "I don't know why, but you have that affect on me!" Then he moaned. And raising his chin until he was looking at the peak of the tent, he stretched his torso, sucking in his muscular stomach. "Tyler, you look SO sexy ... leaning back like that!" I cried, as I slowly jacked the two of us. I felt pre-cum enter the base of my shaft. And soon, trapped by Tyler's foreskin, the natural lube was squishing between and over our heads; and stroking faster, I tightened my grip on our meat. "Mmmmm Chris ... yeah!" Tyler moaned while flexing his stomach. "What you're doing feels so awesome; I wish it could last forever!" "Me too!" I replied. "I'll do my best to make the feelings last." From past experience, I knew that our fuses were about the same length ... most of the time, at least. And since we were docked, I sure hoped this morning was one of those times! Stroking harder and faster, I brought myself right to the brink. Tyler's body was beginning to writhe as I abruptly stopped jacking, lightly holding our joined meat in my hand. As we were beginning to go limp, I began to stroke again, and both our cocks were immediately hard against my fingers! After a few moments, I saw all the signs of an impending cum in Tyler's taut body. His balls were pulled up tight, and his mouth was hanging open, in the pained ... but OH SO SEXY ... look that he was famous for. And as I slowed my stroking to a halt, Tyler moaned, unfulfilled. Again and again I brought the two of us right to the edge. My body was a bundle of extra-sensitive nerve endings, and I was the one in control here ... I knew what I was going to do next. I could only imagine the sensations flowing through Tyler's body, as he desperately needed the release that so far I'd denied him. "Oh fuck, Chris," Tyler cried out. "You're driving me crazy; I can't take any more of this cock teasing!" I'd just stopped jacking us again, and his body was trembling. I laughed; but inwardly I guess I agreed with him. I was about to drive MYSELF crazy with all of this stopping and going! And after we were halfway limp, oh-so-lightly, I began to stroke our meat. In no time, we were both rock hard. My cock was super sensitive, as it sought to pull every sensation from my feathery touch. It was urging me to give in and go for it; and I sure hoped Tyler's cock was telling him the same thing! In the end, I guess that I was the one who couldn't take any more teasing, because suddenly I began to fist our meat wildly. And after sucking in my stomach, I cried out, "I'm gonna cum!" "Fuck!" Tyler groaned as his body stiffened and he began to unload. At the same time, my cock spasmed and began to spurt! And as I continued to jack Tyler's skin around both of us, our combined loads were forced out of his foreskin and onto my shaft. It seemed like we'd never stop cumming, as we shot over and again! A panting and sweating Tyler sat up and hugged me tightly. "Damn, Chris, that was the best!" he exclaimed. "I love you so much!" "Me too!" I replied as I lay Tyler's head on my shoulder. "Me too ..." And as we sat in silence, embracing, my mind drifted back to everything that had happened between us. I had a lifetime of memories, from just one week. And now, it looked like our love would have the opportunity to grow stronger, since we'd be moving in with Josh. It was absolutely un-fucking-believable! "You're thinking about all the good times we've had, aren't you?" Tyler asked as his heartbeat, and mine, returned to a normal rhythm. "Yeah, " I replied, lost in my thoughts. "Do you ever think about why, out of all the motels in Hays ... not to mention all the other towns along your route to Colorado, you stopped at my family's place to spend the night?" Tyler asked as he held me. "Only all the time," I said. "And you were behind the desk; and Kaiden and I came into the lobby. Dad could have checked-in by himself!" "I think it was meant to be ... that all this was MEANT to happen!" Tyler exclaimed, raising his head and looking me in the eyes. "It really screws with your brain to think about it, but it's an awful lot to have just happened by chance!" I wasn't sure I agreed with everything Tyler just said; but beyond a doubt, I agreed that our meeting was the best thing that had ever happened to me. Then again, maybe he was right; and if he was, it only made everything that much more special! As we sat there holding each other, I heard talking and laughter from the other guys. All the voices were coming from the same general direction, and it wasn't from the tents. They must already be up and moving around. "You think we out to join the rest of the guys?" I asked as I relaxed my hug. "I guess," Tyler responded wistfully. "They probably wonder what's taking us so long this morning." "I hope not," I replied. "They better know us well enough by now, to have a pretty good idea of what we've been doing!" And Tyler and I laughed and gave each other a final squeeze, before he unzipped the door and vestibule of our tent. "Hey guys!" Tyler said, as he emerged naked from the tent, with me right behind him. "Good morning! Is there any place to wash off around here?" "Morning boys," Josh replied with a smile on his angular face. "I wish, Tyler; but I don't think there's any water around the campsite ... at least I haven't seen any, and it doesn't show any on the map." "Damn!" Tyler replied. "Yeah ... believe me Tyler, I know how you feel!" It was Dad who replied this time. "And I'm used to roughing it in the wilderness, two or three times a year! But I like my hot showers as much as the next guy!" "I guess we'll all just have to be dirty for a while," Ryan added, acting like a little kid again. He was only now beginning to leave childhood behind for adolescence. I couldn't put my finger on it, but something about him seemed different this morning ... Kaiden was all over him, as usual; but they BOTH seemed happier this morning. Later, I'd have to ask them if something had happened. Maybe they just had an extra fun night ... "Well, just for the morning," Josh commented, breaking into my thoughts. "There's supposed to be a tiny lake just a mile or so from here. So we should be able to clean-up in the water when we get there." He paused for a moment. "We're really running low on drinking water, too!" I HAD been thinking that maybe I'd use the few inches of water in my bottle to wash the jack-off residue from my hands, before breakfast. But Josh's last comment put an end to that thought, as all of a sudden I felt really thirsty! With no prospect of a sponge bath this morning, Tyler and I returned to our tent and pulled on our cargos and t-shirts. 'The shorts would really be smelling ripe if we had to wear them for very long today,' I thought, and I wondered if we'd be better off just hiking in the nude. As we re-emerged from the tent, I exclaimed, "Dad, these shorts are really starting to smell bad!" And laughing, he replied, "I wouldn't worry about that, son. Mine are the same way ... I guess all of ours are. And EVERYBODY on the trail will be in the same fix." After pausing for a moment, he continued, "Roughing it isn't for everybody. In fact, most people will never see this beautiful country, because they aren't able, or willing, to leave the comforts of civilization behind for a few days. But I hope you agree with me, that it's been worth it!" "Dad, I wasn't complaining," I said. (Well ... I WASN'T complaining ... not really ... ) "All the fun has MORE than made up for the grungy feelings. And you're right, the mountains are sure beautiful!" "Yeah," Kaiden replied as he took Ryan's hand. "I'm having a great time, too!" But changing the subject, he continued, "My stomach's growling; I'm ready for breakfast! When do we eat?" "Me too!" Ryan chimed in. "So am I," Josh added. "And by the looks of the shadows, the sun must be getting pretty high in the sky. I guess everybody was up late last night, and we all got a late start this morning." And he winked at Ryan, who smiled broadly, before he hugged Kaiden. "Okay guys ... what gives?" I asked looking from Josh to Ryan, and then to Kaiden and Dad. It seemed like everybody else knew something that I didn't. "Ryan?" Josh asked, nodding in his direction. "Why don't you tell Chris about it?" "Sure Dad," Ryan answered. "Well ... " and Ryan went on to describe everything that had happened last night. He told us about his insecurities and how he'd finally decided to trust Josh. Josh was a really nice guy, but it still must have been hard for Ryan to take that final step. When he was finished talking, each of us hugged him long and hard. And we all welcomed him into our little family, in the way that seemed most personal to us. "Now I'M the one who feels like an outsider!" Tyler commented with a wry smile. But he hugged Ryan again, just the same. "Tyler," Josh declared, "you're as much a part of our family as any of the rest of us!" And he pulled Tyler to his side, wrapping his arm around Tyler's neck and shoulder. "Um ... if you WANT to be, that is." "Fuck, yeah, Josh; you bet I do!" Tyler stated. "All of you are the coolest guys I've ever met! I've always dreamed of having a brother, but of course, it never happened. And now, I feel like I've got three of the hottest brothers any guy could ever wish for!" I was glad that Josh had included Tyler in our family ... REALLY glad! I wasn't sure how it would work out ... with his parents and all. But just living in the same town with him was going to be awesome! "I'm still hungry ..." Kaiden whined, as he began to rummage through the packs for something to eat. "Hey, it looks like the apples are almost gone." "Yeah; I thought we had to be about out of the fresh stuff," Josh said. "I guess it'll just be dried food for us, after breakfast this morning." As it turned out, we each had an apple and a couple of Power Bars for our morning meal. And we washed it down with the last of our water. I sure hoped that Josh was right about the lake coming up really soon! At least the climbing seemed to be behind us, so maybe we wouldn't get too thirsty. After eating, we broke camp. This was only our second morning on the trail, but already we'd fallen into a routine. Before we knew it, everything was packed up, and we were shouldering our backpacks. I'd been carrying a lot of the food in my pack, and I smiled inwardly at my good fortune. The trash bag, which I'd inherited, didn't weigh nearly as much as all those damn apples! Even though we were hiking down a gradual slope, I began to sweat right away. The sun was really beating down on us today! Finally, I spoke up; "Does anybody else think it's hot out today?" I asked as I stopped for a moment. I lowered my backpack and pulled off my t-shirt, mopping my brow with it. "I sure do!" Dad exclaimed, following my lead. And soon we were all bare-chested, as we slipped back into our packs. "I hope we come to that lake pretty soon; I could use a drink of water!" "Me too!" Ryan added, as we continued down the trail. "I guess I never thought about how much I'd want something to drink, 'cause it was always there!" "Well, we only need to hold out for a little bit longer ... the lake HAS to be coming up pretty soon!" Josh commented. And fortunately, he was right; after we rounded the next couple of bends in the trail, a small body of water appeared down the path a ways, and off to our left. It was a tiny lake. Back at home; we'd probably have called it a pond. I guess it wasn't really that far away, but it seemed to take us forever to reach it! But finally we stood on the shore, dropping our packs. The lake appeared to be VERY shallow on the end closest to us, with a dark rocky bottom. And we all took out our empty water bottles in anticipation, while Josh assembled the filtration unit. "Ryan," Josh said, holding out a water bottle, "would you fill this for me?" "Sure!" Eagerly, Ryan took the bottle and dipped it into the crystal clear water. "Josh, the water's really warm here," he commented. "I think this'll be good for taking a bath, but I'd sure like something colder to drink!" "Why don't we walk along the shore for a ways?" Dad asked, heading off to the left. "Maybe the water gets a little bit deeper." And leaving our packs behind, we took the empty bottles and followed him. Sure enough, as we followed the footpath along the shore, we could see that the lakebed dropped off; it looked quite a bit deeper. "Ryan, try it here," Dad directed. "I bet the water is a lot colder." "It sure is!" Ryan said, as he lay on the rocky shore filling the water bottle. "This is a lot better!" Again and again he filled the bottle, as Josh purified our drinking water. And after we'd all drunk our fill, Josh topped-off our bottles, before repacking the filter. "Does anybody else feel like taking a bath?" he asked with a sly smile, removing the towel from his pack and holding up the bar of soap. Josh didn't need to ask twice; immediately he had five takers, as all of us stepped out of our shorts and into the shallow water. "This DOES feel good!" Tyler exclaimed as he lowered his body into the lake. Following Tyler's lead, we all splashed around in the warm water. We passed around the bar of soap, lathering up our own, or another guy's body. Nobody was in a hurry, because the warm bath felt so good! But finally, each of us was clean and rinsed off. After we'd finished up, Dad was still soft, but the rest of us had at least semi-s, while Kaiden and Ryan were sporting full-blown boners! "I know we haven't hiked very far today," Kaiden said; "but it's so much fun playing around in the water. Do you think we could set up our camp here for tonight?" He put on the little brother face he always wore when he asked Dad for something he really wanted; the face he used when he was afraid that Dad would turn him down. And it usually always worked for him! Dad shrugged his shoulders and turned to Josh. "What do you think; can we do that and still finish the hike on time?" "Well ... I don't see why not," Josh commented. "If that's what the rest of you want to do. But the park has a rule that we can only camp in certain places along the trail. Let me pull out the map and look for the closest campsite." And he waded out of the water, removed the map from its plastic tube and unrolled it on a large rock. "Kaiden, you're in luck! There should be a camping area not far from here." "Cool!" Kaiden replied. "Then we can stay here and fool around for a while?" "Sure!" Dad answered, splashing water towards my brother. Kaiden gave as good as he got, and soon we had a full-blown water war going on! We just drifted into two opposite sides, with Josh and Tyler joining Kaiden. As I've mentioned, the water was really shallow where we were, and slowly we drifted away from the shore. The water was around waist deep on me, and quickly getting cooler, when Ryan suddenly disappeared! Finally, his head popped up. "Fuck!" he cried, floundering around for a moment, before he swam back to us. "You guys better watch your step!" he exclaimed, shivering. "The bottom just drops off, over there. And the water is ice cold!" We spent the rest of the afternoon playing around in the water. Since the lake was so small, it was easy to swim from one side to the other, in the cold, deep water. And using the same teams we'd chosen earlier, we held a couple of relay races. Dad and Josh swam the first leg, Ryan and Kaiden the second, while Tyler and I swam the final lap. Each race was really close, but my team won both of them ... "YES!" I shouted as I high-fived Dad. "How about three out of five?" Josh yelled to the guys on the far shore. And to Tyler, he added, "Come on ... we can't let these guys beat us!" After everybody had time to catch his breath, the third race began. Josh and Dad were neck and neck, as they tagged Kaiden and Ryan. Ryan was a really strong swimmer, something that I hadn't expected from him, before we began. And he was a couple of body lengths ahead of Kaiden when he handed off to me. But Tyler swam like a guy, possessed! He made up for lost time and touched the rock finish line just before me. "Way to go!" someone shouted from the shore, several yards to my right. Shading my eyes with my hand, I looked toward the voice. "Cole?" I asked in surprise. ## Well guys, that's all for chapter 23. I sure hope you enjoyed it! Hmmm ... I wonder what Cole's appearance is going to mean ... I guess we'll find out in chapter 24! Why don't you email me at fotogme11@yahoo.com? I'd sure like to hear from you! And now a note about using the water resources in the wilderness: NPS regulations call for campsites to be 200 feet from a water source, and for bath water to be carried the same distance away, before being used. But in the world of my story, none of those regulations exist. Until next time, keep stroking! Greg