Date: Sun, 23 Apr 2006 03:49:19 -0400 From: Gary Butler Subject: Jamal's Visit To Atlanta Hello, fellas. This is my first attempt at creating a work of fiction so please leave any comments (constructive criticism) that you might have. Also, if you'd like to see a story posted on a certain topic make sure you let me know. You may e-mail me at mrgbj04@hotmail.com. This story, as well as the characters, are a work of fiction and do not represent any real life events. All rights are the authors and Nifty's. Please do not distribute story without the permission of the author. Jamal is your typical 17 year old high school student: weighing in at about 165 pounds, standing 5'11, with the most beautiful hazel eyes you have ever seen. Jamal has a toned caramel brown complexion with a wavy low cut. All of the females at school and around the way hawk at the cutie, however, Jamal has always been more interested in guys but never acted on it because he had of fear of being "gay". Well, summer had finally arrived and that meant no school for 2 months! Jamal was going up to Atlanta to visit his close cousin (Tyrone...a.k.a Ty) who he hadn't seen since he was 14 years old. Jamal was in bed having a dream that he was being fucked by the super sexy Ludacris. That's when his father began pounding on the door to a wake him..." Jamal, wake up or your going to miss your flight"...damn, I was just in dream land having the most wonderful dreams of all time and dad just had to ruin it for. "I'll be down in a few dad. Just carry my luggage to the car for me". I showered, jacked my 7 inch circumcised dick, dressed, and rush downstairs so dad could drop me off at the airport. Once at the airport, I hugged dad goodbye, boarded the plane, and was off to HOTLANTA!!! Ty was waiting for me at the airport as I carried my luggage towards the terminal. Whoa, once I saw Jamal who was now 20 years old, my mouth must have dropped to the ground. Ty had turned from the geeky older cousin to a hott thug. He was sporting the most recent timberland boots, with baggy black jeans, and a tanned timberland shirt to match the boots. Ty was now about 6'2, shoulder length braids, gold teeth, pecan complexion, and from the looks of this his body was perfectly tone. I snapped out of my trance once Ty said "Wat's good cousin? You've really grown up man". Only if I could say what I was really thinking, to bad I couldn't. "Yea, I know man. I'm almost 6 feet now. You've grown up too man. You went from geek to hardcore". We both laughed at the joke as we went to Ty car to head to his apartment. Since my flight arrived at 9pm, there wasn't much for us to do on this Thursday night. "Yo, Jamal...we're just gonna chillout tonight since there isn't shit poppin on a Thursday night". "That's find with me man, I'm a little tired from the trip up here anyways." Once I unpacked all of my things and headed to the small but organized living room to watch a little TV I noticed how hot it was in Ty's apartment. Ty was just getting out of the shower and was in his birthday suit, with the exception of his "boxers". I couldn't believe what I was seeing...Ty had the perfect 8 pack, nice calves, but what turned me on most is the neatly trimmed line of hair leading down to his man hood which swung low in the boxers. "Damn, Ty looks like you been hitting the gym". "Yea, I gotta keep my body tight for the hoes. I make sure I hit the gym five times a week". Damn, I wish he would "hit" me. Now I never really considered myself gay but I've been fantasizing about men for a very long time now but I never acted upon it. Tonight was the night to have my first experience. I had to come up with a plan to get Ty out of those boxers. "Yo, Ty why is it so damn hot in here man". Ty replied "Well, I guess I should have let you know...the A.C. is broken until the A.C. guy comes to repair it next week. Take off all those clothes and you'll cool off. Don't you see I'm down to my boxers nigga"? It seems as if everything was going as planned. I quickly stripped down to my boxers as Jamal went to grab two beers out the kitchen. I went into the bedroom to grab a cover and pillow since Jamal only had one bedroom and I would be sleeping on the living room couch. Jamal came back with the beers and set next to me on the couch. At this time, I had the cover wrapped around me to conceal my massive hard on. "So Ty, what's up with the bitches up here?" "Yo, the bitches up here can give some bomb ass head! Just one problem tho". Out of curiosity I ask, "What's that?" Ty nonchalantly responded "They can't deep throat a nigga dick, I be having them gaggin and wheezing". We both laughed as Ty imitated the gaggin noises. Little did he know was that he was further turning me on, which at this point seemed impossible. As Jamal got comfortable on the couch he lifted both legs up onto the couch. I looked over discreetly as Jamal was tuning in to the television...I noticed his nuts hanging really low. Wow, those was the most beautiful balls I ever seen. They were like the size of eggs; with a few stands of hair covering them. To bad I couldn't see the dick to match. I had to think of a plan to see that dick. "So Ty, how is it that the chicks can't deep throat you. If it I recall properly you never had a big dick". I started laughing at the end of that statement to keep the atmosphere light. "Dog, we was little kids when you saw me in the shower that day. Besides the water was cold as fuck. Let's just say I've done some growing since then". We both laughed at this comment. "I am 17 years old and I bet I am probably packing more than you". Again, I said this as a joke to give me an escape route in case Ty suspected anything. "Nigga please, my dick is nine inches. You don't stand a chance". Well, here was my chance. "Nine inches, whateva man...dat's impossible". "Nigga that's not impossible, yo big cousin is packin some heat here". Well, it was time for me to go for it..."I gotta see that to believe it. Smallest man gotta wash the dishes for a week". Ty gave me a weird look and said "No fucking way, I'm finna show a dude my dick. Are you on sumthin"? Damn, I needed another plan! "I was just sayin...that's something you gotta see to believe. That don't mean I wanna see it". Yes, I narrowly escaped this plan turned foul. "Well, I'mma go get into my bed. A nigga sleepy. You don't have to sleep on this couch. I have a king size bed you can crash there if you want". I couldn't conceal my excitement. Perhaps, there would be a second plan! I agreed to sleep in the bed with Ty. As we got into the king size bed, Ty cut the light out and took his boxers off (the room was illuminated by the full moon shining through the bedroom window). I only got a shot of Ty's ass which was tight and circular (perfect). Ty yawned and said "Make sure you stay on your side of the bed. My dragon is untamed here and he just might get you". He started laughing at his joke; however, I popped a major bone at the thought of it. Ty was lying on his back, with the cover concealing him from his waist down. He was near being asleep with the remote lying on top of his 8 pack. "I'm not that tired yet man, Imma turn the TV on". "Nigga, I am tryin to go to sleep. Better take your ass out on the couch if you wanna watch tv". I said "Nah, I'mma watch it right here nigga". Ty grabbed the remote from his well-defined abs and placed it in his groin under the covers. He started laughing and said "You won't be watching shit without the remote". I had to play it off so I said "Why did you do that dog! Fuck I was tryin to watch some tv". Ty chuckled and stated "Well unless you are gonna go down there to get the remote your not gonna be watchin shit". I couldn't believe this...it was time for plan two. "Nigga don't think I won't go get it. It ain't nuthin but a lil ass dick down there". Ty laughed and said "Alright, that's what you think. My dragon isn't nuthin to fuck with". I scooted over next to Ty and said "man I am going to get that remote". Ty responded "whatever go to sleep dog". I waited approximately 20 minutes until I heard Ty slightly snoring and went exploring for the "remote" under the covers. As I reached under the covers, I slowly slid my hand over his beautiful abs. I felt pubes and then I felt the big lump of meat. Ty definitely wasn't kidding when he said he had a dragon. I couldn't stop myself from slowing jerking his meat into its complete nine inches. The head on his big black circumcised dick starting leaking precum. Ty started stirring in his sleep so I couldn't just let go of his dick. It would flop onto his stomach and that could wake him. I was shocked when Ty said "what the fuck are you doing". Oh, shit, I was busted. "I am, ah, uh, looking for the remote. Ty laughed (what a relief) "That is a big remote, huh". I still had Ty manhood in my hand as he started slowly thrusting his hips up and down so my hand could slowly jack him off. "Yea, this can't be the remote. What is this"? I had to play it off like I grabbed something in error. Jamal stunned me when he said, why don't you get between my legs and find out". I didn't need to hear more so I quickly got between his legs and went exploring as I rubbed all over his egg sized nuts. "Why don't you put that big dick in your mouth until I nut all over your face". I couldn't believe this was happening. I never sucked dick before but tonight was going to be my first time. I put the huge snake into my mouth and the taste of the precum was delicious. I started to slide my tongue up and down on the pole. Soon I had the entire nine inches down my throat. Ty was in paradise and said "fuck, that's how you deep throat a dick". I couldn't stop and kept going as fast as I could. Ty said "you better stop or I'mma end up busting in your mouth". That's exactly what I wanted. I kept up the pace as I played with his balls. "Aww, uh, ahhh, FUCK"...My mouth was being filled with my first batch of man juice. I tried to swallow as fast as I could but started to choke on all the hot cum. Ty pulled out of my mouth and shot the rest of his load onto my face. As Ty smeared his nut all over my face with his black pole I lost my composure. I shot my load all over myself and my body shook in pure ecstasy. Ty and I didn't say anything for the rest of the night. I fell the sleep with my head between his legs, with his black pole (now soft) resting on my cum stained face.