Date: Tue, 3 Aug 2010 04:35:49 -0700 (PDT) From: Greg Subject: More is Better ch 32 More is Better By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com) Story Consultant: Drew Editor and Proofreader: Jere The author copyrights this story, with permission for posting on the Nifty Archive. It may not be copied to another website without prior permission from the author. This is a fictional story ... any similarities to actual people, places, events or other entities is purely coincidental. The story involves gay sex between family members and their friends, and is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who aren't offended by material of this type! If you are underage, or this type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now. *** Since this, along with the earlier installments in this series, is a gay story, I've only had minimal female presence in the chapters. I plan to continue that to the end of this tale. However, like in chapter 31, there are girls in this chapter. I tend to think it makes the story more realistic, but I enjoyed the comments some of you had about this subject. Hey ... whatever it takes to get a discussion going among the Group members! lol Oh, in case any of you are wondering why Kaiden has been getting so much story time over the past few months, it is because he is Drew's favorite character! lol I gotta keep my guy happy as much of the time as I can! Chapter Thirty-two (It's still Kaiden.) Both Robert and Amy agreed with Tim. Wow, it looked like Robert was gonna get some from his girlfriend tonight ... FINALLY! "Yeah, yeah," Jared laughed, while fingering his throbbing dick. He needed release in the worst way! "You two lovers go have some fun, I guess." As Robert and Amy walked off, in search of some privacy, Carlos spoke up. "Hey, Jared, let me take care of that for you." "You're a real pal, Carlos," Jared replied, draping his hooker's arm over the football playing twin. "Um ... it'll only cost you twenty bucks," Carlos said, straight-faced. "Out hustling for tricks, huh?" Jared chuckled, pulling the bill halfway out of his top. "Well ... it IS Halloween," Carlos laughed, reaching for the money. "And us Lopez boys have gotta stick together." "I guess," Jared said, stuffing the bill back into his bra, "but, not so fast; you've gotta get me off first!" "That'll be easy enough," Carlos replied, sure of his abilities. With a smile on his face, Jared answered, "Yeah ... well ... maybe so, but you still have to make me cum first." I don't know if Jared ever paid up with cash, or not, but, after quickly kneeling in front of Jared, Carlos got a tasty reward for his efforts. And, moments later, I think those two had more than sucking in mind, when they wandered away from the game. After losing three fun couples, 'Pin the Tail on the Donkey' wasn't the same, though those of us who remained kept at it until everyone got a turn to either be on the giving or receiving end. When a CD of slow-dance music began to play, however, several more couples drifted away and the game ended. While pulling off his blindfold, Josh asked, "Ryan, how about this dance?" His throbbing dick was firmly lodged in Ryan's dark red, upturned ass. "Sure, Dad," the little devil replied, as Josh withdrew. Then, with a naughty smile on his face, Ryan added, "As long as you promise to put that dick of yours inside me again, and keep it there the whole time, that is." "Now THAT'S a deal I can live with!" Josh exclaimed, while squatting some. The two hugged, and, with Ryan's arms around his neck, Josh stood. My brother wrapped his coltish legs around my Dad's ass, lifting his body, while Josh fisted his dripping manhood. In seconds, the two were coupled, and, hugging him tightly, Ryan lovingly fucked himself on Dad's penis, while Josh slowly danced. Ben, who had been taking photos all night, snapped several of Ryan loving on Josh. "I never thought I'd be saying this about a guy having sex with his dad ... 'cause I sure never wanted any with MY dad ... but just look at those two," Eric commented wistfully, before laying his head on my shoulder. "Man, Kaiden, it's SO awesome out here on the ranch!" "Yeah, Eric, it really is," I agreed, holding him tight. "I just hope I'm still here, after they go to court next week," Eric added, in a halting voice, barely louder than a whisper. Ben took a couple photos of us. "You will be," I said, in what I hoped was a confident voice. "You GOTTA be, Eric. I love you too much to lose you." Suddenly tensing his body, while lifting his head and earnestly peering into my eyes, Eric implored, "Kaiden, I don't wanna leave here ... not ever!" "Son, I promise you, that's not going to happen," Ben replied, his voice brimming with adult authority. Eric relaxed some. "Thanks, Dad," he smiled. "I sure hope you're right." Ben hugged us both at the same time. "It's going to be okay, Eric; it really will," he added confidently. Before releasing us, he smiled broadly at my boyfriend, and then me. "You two make an awesome couple." "I sure love this guy," I stated, kissing him tenderly. Eric's lips pressed back. "I was SO confused for a while," I added, as I glanced at Brianne and Drew, "but not anymore. Eric took care of all that." "I didn't have any idea it could be like this," Eric stated. "I mean ... I guess I never knew what real love was." He hugged me tight again. Talking loudly, to be heard over the music, Cole began to speak. "GUYS!" he shouted. "LET ME HAVE YOUR ATTENtion." When someone cut the music, Cole immediately dropped his voice. "I don't know how many of you are planning to spend the night; but if you are, grab a sleeping bag from the other room." He pointed in the direction of the small changing room. "We're going to drive a Suburban or two out to the old ranch site. The old place is supposed to be haunted ... or so Josh tells me." Josh nodded his agreement, as Cole chuckled nervously. "Did you know about this?" I overheard Chris ask Tyler. "Hunh-uh," Tyler replied, "but it sounds like fun." "It does sound like fun, Kaiden," Eric agreed. "Are you gonna go?" "To a haunted house on Halloween? I wouldn't miss it," I exclaimed, glancing around the room to see what everyone else planned to do. It seemed that everybody was excited by the idea. While I didn't know whether I believed in ghosts, based on my trips to the old place, I knew it was spooky enough to have them. "Just be careful and don't burn that old house down!" Josh stated, the way any father might. "Cole, I'm putting you in charge. Don't let things get TOO out of hand." Both Cole and Josh chuckled. "Well, as far as a fire goes, when some of us went out there last week, we checked the wood stoves," the hot college guy/gal answered. "They're working fine." While adjusting his mammoth package and gazing into his boyfriend's emerald-green eyes, he draped an arm over Ryan's shoulder. "I can't promise anything about the other ... but I'll try my best." He scratched his crotch, through the fake pubic hair. Ryan's cock had only been semi-hard, but suddenly, swelling with blood, it jerked to full attention. In no time at all, it stood, proud and throbbing, against his slim, painted belly. "No unwanted pregnancies is what I meant," Josh said, with a laugh. Glancing at Robert, Luke, and Drew, he held several condoms high. "Be sure you guys take plenty of these with you ... and use them!" "Don't worry; we will," Luke replied, squeezing Sam to his almost naked body. "No way am I ready to be a dad, yet." "Well, Luke, this guy came while I was still in high school," Tim chuckled, while tousling Chris' hair. "I wasn't ready for him either, but I know from experience, a guy does what he has to do." "Awww, Dad!" Chris interjected. "Don't always tell that stuff." Tim lovingly glanced at his firstborn. "MOST of the time, I've never regretted it." Obviously filled with fatherly pride, he grinned, before continuing in a sober voice, "But it would have sure been easier on his mother and me, if he had come a few years later." He looked from Luke, to Robert, and then to Drew. "Sorry to get all preachy on you guys," he added, "but it's SO important you use condoms. Chris came from the first time I had sex with his mom." Drew laughed, while asking, "Brianne, are you ready to be a mom yet?" When she didn't answer right away, I wondered if maybe she DID want to have a baby. But she shook her head 'no', as she took Drew by the hand. "You'd make a cute dad, though," she added, before giving our friend a quick kiss. I was really happy that Brianne and Drew were becoming a couple. I mean, I think they had grown up together, and everything. But, apparently, it wasn't until after I told Brianne that Eric was the one for me, that the two of them began to go out. It was awesome that things worked out the way they had ... for all of us! Anyway, Tim gave each of the guys, with a girlfriend, a handful of condoms. Luke stuffed his into the pouch of his G-string, while Robert and Drew pocketed theirs. "Any other takers?" Dad asked, holding a condom high. When nobody spoke up, Cole chuckled. "Come on, guys, let's get this show on the road! Grab a sleeping bag and hop in the Suburbans." With lots of excited chattering, as we got dressed, all of us who were going to the old ranch site ... and that was all the teens who were still at the party ... collected sleeping bags and piled VERY QUICKLY into a couple of SUVs. Even though most of us had put our costumes back on, after the warmth of the party, it was very cold out! Ryan was in the other truck, but even so, I heard him curse loudly when his bare ass contacted the cold vinyl of the seat. Cole drove the other Suburban, while Tyler got behind the wheel of ours, and, moments later, with Cole in the lead, we were off. The full moon we had noticed earlier was now high in the sky, casting its pale bluish light over the fields around us. A cow bawled plaintively somewhere in the distance. "Kaiden, do you think the old place really IS haunted?" Eric asked, from beside me in the back seat. Shrugging my shoulders, I laughed, before replying, "Could be, I guess." I thought for a second. "If it is, Halloween ought to be the perfect time to find out." "I suppose," Eric said tentatively, "unless whatever lives out there is mean or something." "I hear that way back they had a hard winter on the ranch, and they were snowed in for months," Chris ... who obviously had heard Eric's and my conversation ... added. "And the dad got cabin fever, or something. They say he strangled his wife and shot the kids, before killing himself. They say all their ghosts still wander around out there." "You just made that up, Chris!" I declared, in what I hoped was a confident tone ... but had he, I wondered? "I wouldn't be too sure about that, bro," Chris replied, before adding, "All you guys had better be on your guard!" "What about you, Chris?" David asked. "Aren't you afraid, too?" In the darkness, we couldn't see, but I'm sure Chris puffed up his chest, as he answered, "They'd probably be afraid to go after men ... just women, and kids who aren't in high school yet." "Like YOU'RE a man, Chris," I shot back. "I don't know, Kaiden," Devon earnestly stated, in his high-pitched, little boy's voice. "He sure seems like a man to me." Then he snickered. "Well, SOME of the time, anyways." "NONE of the time," I laughed. Though my brother WAS starting to look more like a man all the time, I suppose, he sure didn't act like one! We laughed and joked around, as our SUV followed the slow-moving taillights of the one Cole was driving, over the barely visible tracks of the rutted road. Even though we were creeping most of the time ... and there were three of us in the back seat ... every once in a while, Tyler would hit an uneven patch of ground, throwing me against Eric, or my boyfriend would fall against me, while pressing me against the glass, keeping me at least semi-hard. Finally, though, as we turned a corner, the old, broken down ranch house and decaying outbuildings were visible in the moonlight. "That old place does look like it could be haunted," Brianne declared from the seat in front of me, to Drew going, "who-o-o-o-o-o-o-o," in eerie up and down tones. Everyone laughed. "Well, it DOES!" she exclaimed. In the almost darkness of the full moon, Drew replied, "I'll protect you, Brianne," as he curled his arm tightly around her shoulder. "Well, Drew, if what I've heard is true, she's gonna NEED lots of protection," Chris said, as Tyler parked our Suburban beside Cole's. Before any of us could get out of the truck, Cole, Robert, and Jared were beside the driver's door. "We're going to get fires burning in the wood stoves," Cole said. "Why don't you guys stay in the SUV, where it's warm, until we do?" "I wanna help you guys," Carlos offered. Standing, he squeezed past Eric and me, before hopping out of the truck. "Chris and I'll help, too," Tyler answered for both of them. While leaving the engine running, he turned his face toward us. "In no time, we'll have it all toasty inside that old house." Opening his door, he added, "Don't have TOO much fun while we're gone." When Chris left the front seat, Devon crawled over the seat back, joining the almost naked David up front. That gave room for Drew and Brianne to spread out some, and Eric and I had the back seat to ourselves, too. Right away, my lover pulled me on top of himself, and we began to kiss SO passionately. As we were rolling onto our sides, my hand groped under Eric's shirt, sensuously feeling the smooth, dry skin which covered his ribcage. Lovingly, I caressed each bone, causing goosebumps to form. "Oh, yeah, Kaiden," Eric murmured, barely above a whisper. "Fuck, I love it when you touch me like that!" My fingers played with a nipple. Right away, it perked-up, becoming tight and hard, and, after pulling his shirt over his head, I took the pert nubbin between my teeth. Eric groaned, at first, from the gentle bite, but was soon moaning uncontrollably, as I sucked harder. I love Eric so! Because of everything he'd gone through, I suppose, he'd been shy around the guys, when I first met him. But all boys like having fun, and Eric was sure no exception. It didn't take long for him to warm up to us. Maybe the most amazing thing to me, that night, was how I was able to give Eric so much enjoyment without even touching his dick! "Oh, yeah, David!" Devon's high-pitched voice cried out. "Suck it just like that." I'd been so absorbed with pleasuring Eric, that I'd almost forgotten we weren't alone in the Suburban. I gotta tell you, though, the thought of my friends making out, in the seats in front of us, only made my sexual urges stronger ... like they needed any help! As I continued to stimulate Eric, I listened to Brianne's panting and whimpering, while Devon softly moaned and groaned. In the almost darkness of the full moon, I prepared to pull off Eric's jeans, while stating, "I gotta get you naked, Eric ... right now!" "Oh, yeah, man," he started to agree, before Jared's voice called from the doorway of the old house. "Hey, guys, we finally got the fire going!" he cried out. Then, laughing, he added, "And it'll be WAY hotter after everybody is inside." Whooping and hollering, Ryan hopped from the front door of the other truck, before running toward the house ... and by the time the rest of us had grudgingly piled out of the Suburbans, he had long since disappeared through the front door. None of the rest of us wanted to linger outside, either; and, after collecting our sleeping bags, we hustled through the gaping door. "Hey, this is awesome!" Drew exclaimed, though Brianne shook her head, as if she wasn't so sure about that. The rusty hinges protested mightily, as our friend pulled the door closed behind us. The faint, underlying smell of age and decay assailed our nostrils, but Drew paid them no mind, as he immediately unrolled his sleeping bag on the recently swept floor. "This is gonna be WAY cool!" he added, unrolling Brianne's sleeping bag on top of his. "And it's really spooky in here, with all these candles." Four or five large candles provided some light, but their feeble glow had a hard time penetrating the darkness that enveloped the room. Maybe a person would have thought that was for the best, since the old place wasn't much to look at in broad daylight. But, somehow, this was even scarier ... since a guy didn't know what might be lurking in the shadows. "BOO!" a voice called out from behind Eric and me, causing both of us to jump and turn around. A grinning Jared stepped out of the shadows. "Gotcha!" he added. "Dude, don't do that!" I exclaimed, shaking my head. "Unless you want to give Eric, here, a heart attack." I wrapped my arm around my boyfriend's shoulder and pulled his body to mine. "Sorry, little guy," Jared replied, ruffling Eric's shaggy-looking, mousy brown hair, as he walked past us. Then, while glancing around, he added, "Damn, this is great for Halloween. Next year, you guys'll have to hold the party out here." "Yeah," Tyler agreed, as he and Jared walked through the doorway into the other room. Even though it had only been Jared, Eric was shaken, I guess. Because, while glancing around the shadowy interior of the old place, he timidly asked, "I wonder if Chris WAS right about those ghosts?" "Naw ... he was just trying to scare us," I replied, as confidently as I could, causing Eric's face to break into one of his amazing, patented smiles. I didn't add the words, 'I think' ... but, to be truthful, I wasn't sure. Even though, when us guys had been out to the old place before, we hadn't heard or seen anything ALL that weird; that had been on a summer afternoon. However, on Halloween, in the middle of the night, with no electricity, anything seemed possible. I don't think any of us spent too much time worrying about ghosts, though. Being the horny guys we were, all of us had other stuff on our minds ... and it was WAY more important! But, hey ... that's how it's supposed to be ... right? Without really saying anything, we divided up by age ... and all the older guys, except for Cole, went into the next room. Soon, all of us were naked and snuggled down into our sleeping bags with our lovers. It didn't take long for Eric and me to pick up where we'd left off, but this time, rolling on top of me, he took charge of things. "Man, Kaiden," Eric began, as his hands groped my sides and hairy pits, "I've needed you to be inside me all day." My cock twitched at his words, and it got a good-burning feeling in that special place where all the nerves are. "Eric, I wonder why it took so long for me to realize we'd make an awesome couple?" I asked, before continuing, "I mean, you're the guy for me ... and I think you always have been." "You just didn't know what was good for you, I guess," Eric replied, chuckling. Lifting the top sleeping bag ... which we'd just thrown over the bottom one, without zipping them together ... he straddled my torso with his sexy legs, then sat on my belly. "Man, I never knew I could love a guy like I love you, Kaiden!" He leaned down, and our lips met again in a hot kiss. "Me, either," I agreed, and I meant it with all my heart. Even though, at 13, I'd already had fun with lots of guys, and I'd had special relationships with both Chris and Ryan, it was different with Eric, somehow. It was SO hard to describe my love for Eric. Maybe that was because my middle school vocabulary just wasn't big enough, but maybe it was just because there weren't any words to describe the way I felt toward him. Sometimes, when I thought about him, I would get this burning sensation deep within my chest ... in my heart, I guess; while, at other times, he was just this special friend I enjoyed hanging with. But, as much as a 13 year old can know something, I knew he was the one for me. To sounds of sex all around us, Eric spit into my hand, and I swiped it over my throbbing, rock-hard penis. *** Okay guys ... whew! ... I finally finished this chapter. I sure hope you enjoyed reading it! I know why I have always taken summers off, as far as writing is concerned. lol Man, the last three weeks have been a blur! While waiting for the Colorado studio to be completed, I returned to Missouri to take studio photography, and close up shop there. As I'm writing this, the studio equipment is packed in a van, which I will be driving to Colorado over the weekend. (As I'm finishing the re-write, I'm in Salt Lake City, over a week later, for a trade show! lol) Anyway, I hope all of you have an awesome few weeks until I'm able to post the next chapter. I love and appreciate all my readers, and I'm sorry posts have become so infrequent. Greg If you would like to join the Yahoo! Group for my stories, you can do that here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ill_suck_you/join And if you've never read the earlier stories in this series, you might enjoy them. They're also in the Gay/Incest area of the Nifty Archive. "I'll Suck You" - Final Post Date: June 25, 2007 "I've Got the Best Family" - Final Post Date: May 23, 2008 "Us Guys" - Final Post Date: May 29, 2009 Or you can go to the "Prolific Authors" tab and scroll down to my pen name ... Photo Guy. Have a great week, guys! Greg