Date: Thu, 29 May 2003 20:04:08 -0700 (PDT) From: CYN P Subject: "LANNY'S LOSSES" (B/B) - Section 1 Submitted herewith is the first section of an erotic story I have written. The full story, which is in 10 sections, involves the following categories: Boy/Boy Sex * Incest * Teen/Teen Sex * Man/Teen Sex Rural Settings Body Modifications (Amputations) *Most prevalent sexual themes Disclaimer: This story contains sex between minor boys. It also contains instances of incest, teen/teen and man/boy relationships and sex, and includes segments on body modification. If you find any of these topics to be at all troubling or distasteful, then kindly surf another web site. In other words, LEAVE NOW! But you won't do that, will you? This is what you are here for - and this is what I am about to present for your enjoyment. The story is a total fiction with no connection to actual or specific persons and/or life experiences. --------------------------------------------------------------- I would appreciate any thoughts or comments. Please send them to me at cyn_p_md@yahoo.com ======================= LANNY LOSSES ======================= By CYN Copyright (c) 2003 - All Rights Reserved THIS IS A COPYRIGHTED WORK. It is intended solely for private, individual reading. It may not be reproduced by any method, distributed or posted on additional web sites without the expressed written consent of the copyright holder. A SHORT NOTE ON THE LANGUAGE USED IN THIS STORY: I know some will be turned off bah the "accent" or "dialect" spoken by the characters in this story. For this I am sorry. However, it was the way I heard the individuals in my head (or "mah haid" as they would say) and the way I wrote it. I do not purport to accuracy in the dialect used. It was written for effect and atmosphere, nothing more. No criticism of any group is intended, whether by design or accident. Forgive me and please persevere. Ah'm ahopin' y'all will find it a rewardin' read. Section 1 Ah gots a real swee' lahfe now. It jess...jess amazin'! Lahfe suh easy `n comf'able! Ah steel cain't belief how lucky ah am `n how fuckin' happy ah am. An' ah'm only eighteen now! Suh much happ'n tuh me in the lass few years. Ah has tuh admit now tha' it all been fuh the good. But ah...ah didn't think suh when it fust happenin'. Ah ain't always has it suh easy. Ah means, ah has it real, real rough mos' a mah lahfe. Accidents, beatins, abandoned, foster homes, livin' on the streets, whorin'.. Well, yuh knows the rag. But now thangs is jess swell. Ah means, real great! Ah lives in a great house, in a wonderful warm place, have sum nahce folk takin' care a ever'thang ah needs, `n ah'm happy wit' wha' ah gots. Ah wanna tell yuh mah story but ah don't knows where tuh begin. An' ah don't wanna make it all borin' cuz ah know yuh got better thangs tuh do then spend a lotta tahme wit' me `n mah prollems. Suh, ah guess ah'll jess take thangs in order `n start as far back as ah kin remember. OK? Ah was born in bayou country in Louisiana, `cept we calls it Loosian. We all lives in a teeny town far outsahde a big town. The big city thet close tuh us is Houma, `n it ain't real big. Bah "we," ah'm talkin' `bout mah momma, mah daddy, mah older brothah Arthur (he two year older `n me) `n me. Then there all mah othah brothahs `n sistahs. There lots of us. Thirteen or fourteen kids, ah thinks, but ah forgets the `xact nummer. Ah'm Lancelot Beauregard Labordeaux, but ever'one call me Lanny. Mah momma got real hung up on King Arthur `n them knights in shinin' armor `n all thet kinda shit when she carryin' Artie who ollest. She tell me this one night when she a lilla drunk. She kin read. Daddy cain't. All we kids got redish-blondish hair. It real cool. Ah mean, yuh kin see alla us frum fuhr `way. We alsuh a very hanum lookin' family. Ever'one say suh. `Ceptin' fuh daddy. He a real pig. He hairy, got lotsa tattoos, don't shave, don't wash much neithah. We sorta live in a swamp in a house up on poles ovah the water. Yuh has tuh cross a wood plank-lahke thang tuh get tuh the house. Well, ah s'pose it in a swamp. Lotsa bugs `n critters all round us. Sumtahmes when it rain or a bad storm comin' ahr way a lotta the water come very hah, up tuh the house and sumtahmes it even come in. When the hurrycane come, it kin get real bad. Then the police comes `n takes us tuh a sheller. But we nevah leaves livin' in this here house. Once Artie ask daddy whah we stays in this mizable shit hole fuh. He smack Artie `cross the face and yell on him real bad. "Mah fuckin' daddy born and he dahd in this here house an' ah'm afixin' tuh do the same!" Thet nahte in bed, Artie say thet daddy dahin' cain't be acomin' soon nuff fuh him. Fuh kids it great tho! It lahke a fun park. Runnin' `n playin' `n catchin' all `em fish `n small critters - it ever'thang a young kid want tuh do. Ah don't nevah unnerstan' ah'm helpin' tuh feed all a us bah catchin' suh many fish `n othah small thangs, lahke crawfish (we calls `em mud puppies) `n possums `n turtles `n small gators. We real dirt poor only ah don't know it then `n mah sistahs `n brothahs don't neither. Lotsa folk round town calls us white trash. Mah daddy do sum work `n make sum money sumtahmes but mose a the tahme he round the place `n he do nothang `cept fahte a lot wit' momma. Ah s'pose they alsuh fucks cuz there so many a us. Sum tahmes they hit each othah `n momma gets hurt real bad a lot. When this happen, momma have black eyes `n cain't open her mouth tuh eat or tuh talk or anythang. They alsuh drinks a lotta likker `n beer `n they smokes a lot. Ah thinks they gets the likker frum sum guy who make it. Me `n Artie do ever'thang tuhgethah cuz there ain't no othah kids round where we lives. We make lotsa fun doin' lotsa thangs `n love bein' wit' the othah. Oh, `n we don't go tuh school much neither. That makes thangs even better. We hates school but we leans a lilla bit. Lahke we kin reads `n do sum math. We alsuh sleeps in the same bed. There only one bedroom in the house `n momma `n daddy sleeps there `n sumtahmes a new baby. The resta us sleeps anywheres. Me, Artie `n othah boys sleeps on a back porch. The girls sleeps in the kitchen `n in the settin' room thet jess part a the kitchen. Ah loves sleepin' wit' Artie. An' we gots ahr own mattress. It momma `n daddy old one. We cuddles tuhgethah tuh keep warm in the winner tahme. An' we alsuh cuddles tuhgethah othah tahmes too. It lotsa fun. Ah loves sleepin' wit' Artie. We touches the othah guy bod `n holds on tuh each othah. Ah loves holdin' Artie smooth, hot bod. An' he say thet he love holdin' mahne. The lilla kids loves tuh be wit' us oller kids. Me, Artie `n mah ollest sistah Guen, we takes care a `em all. But Guen lahkes tuh go tuh school. She say she got a buncha nahce frens there and she learn lotsa great stuff. So me `n Artie wit' the lilla kids mose a the tahme and we feeds `em `n change `em `n do ever'thang else. Nahtetime is mah fav'rite tahme. Ah loves it when we tuhgethah in ahr bed. Sumtahmes we touches the othah boy parts. Thet nahce too. We does it only unner the sheet `n when it dark. Ah gets all warm `n suh tingly when Artie touches me `tween mah laigs. An' he say thet he feel great when ah touches him too. Ah don't rememmah how we starts but when we does, we knows we loves it a lot. Playin' wit' mah brothah dick `n balls give me a big thrill. It the only tahme ah really likes. It the only tahme ah'm not bein' funned at or teased bah the doofy kids at school or bah mah daddy likker buddies. When me `n Artie tuhgethuh in bed `n holdin' `n touchin' ah feels real great and loved. The res' a the tahme mah lahfe all fucked up. Ah means FUCKED! Ah ain't smart in school. The troot is thet ah'm a real dummy. Ah'm real, real stupid. Ah is. Ever'one say it. Ah has real trouble readin' and writin' and ah cain't do much math. The teachers all laughs at me, makin' funna me and so do lots a the kids. Ah ain't got no frens at the school cuz they say we white trash, and they rahte. Folks keep `em `way frum all a us. An' we is white trash cuz we got nothin', we does nothin', `n we helps nothin'. And fuckin' daddy ain't round tuh help nun. He don't work, he don't bring no food, he don't help take care a the babies. He a fuckin' nothin' in ahr lifes. He ain't home mose a the tahme, an' thet OK wit' us. But when he home thangs ain't no better. They worse. He beat up on ever'one. Momma and all us kids. Cuz he `n momma get all likkered up and he beat on all a us. Momma try tuh stop `im but it don't help nun. She jess get hit hard. But the real, real worse prollem is thet we ain't got `nuff tuh eat mose a the tahme. An' the lilla kids cry and ah feels suh sorry fuh `em. They cries `emselfs tuh sleep. The girls don't cry as much as the boys. But it real hard. We alls so thin and folks says we scrawny and look starved, and they rahte. One a `em charties in Houma comes ever' mont' or suh tuh the house and gives us stuff. Ah means, they gives us foods and clodes. `Bout four folk come in a pickup and they leaves cans a food stuff `long wit' rice, flour, breads, lard, meats, cereals and thangs lahke thet. They alsuh gives us clodes, but nun a it new. They all oldish and sum worn a lilla bit. But it all do help cuz we ain't got nothin' else. The girls love the clodes and dress up when they comes. The folks who come are real nahce and ain't old. They seems tuh lahke us kids a lot and they plays wit' the lilla ones. One a the young guys talks tuh me `n Artie a lot. He nahce lookin' and speak quite-lahke `n smahles a lot. He lahkes tuh put his arms round mah shollers and squeezes me and it feel real great. He alsuh do it tuh Artie. He alsuh takes lotsa pitchas a all a us, specially a me, Artie and Perce. He take pitchas a us in jess ahr unnerwear. When he come back tuh see us he brin' `em pitchas `n show `em tuh us. We loves `em `n we lahkes him a lot. When Artie `bout 10 `n ah'm `bout 8, we fust have sum real boy fun tuhgethah. Yuh know, thet when we really plays wit' each othah bods, `n special wit' the othah guy dick `n nuts `n we tickles `em `n rubs `em `n all. We bote lahke the feelin' in ah bodies `n special on ahr dicks. We both think it lotsa fun `n we loves doin' it a lot. We alsuh likes rubbin' the othah body - yuh knows, rubbin' Artie tummy `n little titties `n unner his arms `n down his great laigs. We bot' very smoove `n it feel great! Ah loves wha' Artie do tuh me and the feelins ahr gets runnin' in mah whole body. Once, we out in ahr lilla swamp skiff `n it very hot. It summer. Very, very hot. We bot' wearin' shorts `n no unnerwear `n nothin' else. Artie say that he very hot `n very uncomf'able `n he pull off his shorts. Ah says thet ah'm hot too `n ah alsuh takes off mah shorts. So, we bot' sittin' in the skiff fishin' `n we totally nekked. Artie opens up a bagga samiches he make `n we eats `n drinks our pop. Affa we finishes we falls tuh sleep rahte there in the skiff. The quite of the swamp `n feelin' full frum wha' we eats fuh lunch make us real sleepy. Ah'm dreamin' `bout sailin' on the smoove swamp water wit' jess the sounda the bugs `n frogs . `n ah feels suh warm . `n suh great . `n so relax. Sudden-like, ah opens mah eyes `n ah sees Artie on his knees in fronta me `n he got my dick `tween his lips . `n he suckin' hard on it. It feel fantastical! Ah ain't never feel nothang lahke it b'foh. Mah dick tinglin' . mah whole bod tinglin'. An' ah kin see how ah'm pushin' my lilla dick intuh Artie mout'. An' he suckin' way lahke crazy! Then he lift his haid . `n he give me a great big shit-eatin' grin, `n then he go rahte back tuh suckin' on mah dick. Ah smiles back at him but he don't see it. Ah closes mah eye `gain `n puts mah haid back `n just seems tuh float in the `cred'ble feelin' ah'm agettin' frum Artie havin' mah dick in his hot mout' `n the feelin' of his suckin' it suh hard `n suh great. Amazin'! It jess suh amazin'! Ah'm nevah feelin' nothang lahke it b'foh! Mah whole body seem tuh be floatin' `way off the boat. Alls ah kin feel a incred'ble tinglin' all up `n down mah `tire bod. An' still Artie workin' `way on me. Now he start pullin' on my teeny nuts `n squishin' `em `n pushin' his hand intuh `em `n this too feel suh great. Ah knows ah'm makin' lotsa noise but ain't nobody round tuh hear me. An' ah'm feelin' suh fuckin' t'rrific! Then he start lickin' my lilla ball bag. Jesus! Do it ever feel great! He jess lickin' the skin a the bag wit' his tongue and takin' the skin `tween his lips and squeezin' it. Then he open his mout' and suck mah bag `n balls intuh his hot mout'. He rollin' mah teeny nuts round in his mout' and his tongue doin' such wunnerful thangs tuh mah stuff. Ah'm pushin' mah dick in `n outta his hot suckin' mout' so quick. I don't know thet ah kin move suh fass `n thet mah bod kin move thet fass. Soon he got bot' mah dick and mah nuts insahde his mout'. It the mose amazin' thang ah ever knows. It feel lahke a million needle stickin' in me all at once! The tinglin' feelin so great `n ah feels lahke mah dick on fahr - like it burnin' up. Mah bod movin' up `n down `n Artie stop the suckin' but mah dick still in his mout' `n still feel lahke it still burnin'. Soon he take his mout' offa my stuff `n give me a big smahle `n rub his hands over mah little titties `n belly. Ah'm still breat'in' hard `n fass but ah'm slowin' down sum. Ah ain't thinkin' rahte but perty soon ah kin talk. "Wha' was THET?" ah says. "Sex!" "Huh?" He still rubbin' me. Ah loves when he do thet. Now he rub mah laigs `n it feel so, so wunnerful. Then he rub mah chess `n mah titties and soon we kissin' a lot. "It sex. Thet wha' Timmy LaJohn tell me. He say thet brothah a his suck his dick `n balls ever' nahte `n he jess love it. Did yuh love it, Lanny?" "It great! An' yeah, ah loves it a lot!" "Well, thet sex. When yuh plays wit' yuh boy parts or othah peoples play wit' yuh parts, `n sucks on `em, thet sex." "Yuh means thet we jess have sex?" "Yup. We jess have sex! Ain't it great?" Ah smahles at Artie. "Yup! It great! Real great!" End of Section 1 ----------------------------------------------------------- This is my first attempt at writing any type of boy love tale. ALL criticisms and comments (the good as well as the bad and everything in between) are very much appreciated and welcomed. I hopefully will be able to answer each and every one.