Date: Thu, 30 Jul 2009 00:18:49 -0700 (PDT) From: Jerry Chen Subject: Dragon Love Ch.5 science fiction / fantasy Thanks for reading! I would like opinions, criticisms, suggestions, comments, and feedback from you guys that read this. Thank you and ENJOY! Chapter 5 Friends help Narrator's POV "What did you do to him?" Alexis screamed at the magician. "I did what he had asked and granted him access." The magician replied simply. "Then I want entrance too." Alexis said with determination. "Then you are to give up sight." The magician replied stoically. "What?" She asked disbelievingly. "Every mortal must give up something precious to gain entrance whether they like it or not." He replied seemingly bored. "I agree." She said walking closer to the magician. "Wait! If your going then I am too." Erik said walking to stand next to his girlfriend. "And were going too." Emily, Andy, and Thomas said in unison. "Very well." The magician said before raising his hand at them and engulfing them in a blue light. Christopher awoke after a short period of time in a room. The walls were made out of crystal and shimmered. Looking around he saw his friend unconscious there too then same wizard in the room next to a door. He quickly made his way to his friends shaking them. Not long after he shook them did they wake up. "Huh?" Emily said groggily. "Come on wake up guys I think we are inside." Christopher said as he stood back up. "Hey I can see." Alexis said looking around. "What do you mean?" Christopher asked her looking at his friend while she was looking around at her surroundings. "That magician said that I would have to give up sight if I wanted to gain entrance to come here." Alexis said pointing her finger at the said magician. "Really?" Christopher replied. Before she could say something the magician spoke up. "It's true I said you must give up something precious to gain entrance but the was the question the Dragon King had set up for this year to see who was brave enough most mortals run away." He replied. "But why?" Erik asked standing besides his girlfriend once again. The magician didn't reply to him. "Your majesty there are mortals here." Said the magician as his voice echoed around the place. Not long before they could hear footsteps coming their way as the Dragon King and Queen came accompanied by some other people. "Why are you here?" The King said furiously with a murderous gleam in his eye. "I wish to see Jeffrey." Christopher spoke calmly looking at the Dragon King. "Never." Came his reply as his murderous gaze looked at the group of mortals. "Your majesty, really now let him explain." The Queen said walking up to the mortal eyeing him before returning to the king and whispering something in his ears. `He doesn't seem to have any weapons on him' "Very well I'll hear you out but make it quick." The King said while thinking. `They passed the test of courage but that is a big sacrifice just to come here' "I wish to see Jeffrey because I love him." Christopher said shocking the King and Queen along with the merman King and mermaid Queen along with everyone there. "Never take them out now!" The King said furious. `I won't let my son be with some mortal! He thought. Suddenly grabbed by guards that looked like prawns and crabs they were being pulled out. "Jeffrey!" Christopher continuously yelled as he was being pulled out. Meanwhile in the Throne room Jeffrey's POV I didn't know where I was it was dark and I felt pain course through my body. When I suddenly heard yelling. I couldn't figure out what was being said but I heard my name being yelled loud and clear by Christopher. `Why would he be here?' I thought. I tried my best to open my eyes when they fluttered open I could only see blurry things closing my eyes for a minute while hearing my named being yelled I quickly opened then again as I got my perfect eye sight again. I quickly got up and almost falling over because of the sudden pain and dizziness. But I kept moving Christopher was yelling for me. I walked to where the voices were and saw mother, father, Queen Voltartia, and King Saleragi, my `bodyguards', and most shockingly my mortal friends. Narrator's POV "Why are you guys yelling and what are you guys doing here?" Jeffrey asked shocking everyone with his presence. Everyone turned to look at Jeffrey would was shaking a little and pale. "Jeffrey dear what are you doing up and how are you feeling?" His mother asked walking up to him and supporting him so he could stand. "I'm fine but what was all the yelling about?" Jeffrey asked no one in particular. "These mortals seem to have made it in here and want to talk to you." His father said angrily still looking at Jeffrey's friends. "Why are you here anyways you should be resting." Queen Voltaria said walking up to Jeffrey as well. "I heard Christopher calling for me so I followed the voice and I got here." Jeffrey said out loud to no one again. Everyone looked shocked except his friends who didn't know what was happening. To be continued... Sorry I got lazy and slowed the typing thing down... bleh I got tired so I only got this much up sorry. I'll try to type more for next chapter. Please sends comments or what ever to my e-mail (no flings thanks) jerrychen150@yahoo.com