Disclaimer: If you're under age to read stuff about guys having sex or if you find it offensive, your society finds it offensive or illegal then stop reading now! This story is completely fictional, as are all the characters.
There was a break of almost ten years between writing chapters 34 and 35. Because of this there may be one or two inconsistencies between the old and the new chapters. I've tried to compensate so it would work anyway, but I hope you don't mind too much.
Unlike the original chapters I edit and rewrite before I post them, and I also planned the story ahead, I don't know if you can tell. I took a break from editing during November 2011 while I wrote a novel, my first year doing NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month). Now I'm back on track editing Going Home.
This is the fifth new chapter, and the third one to be set on the moon orbiting the planet. I haven't written as far, but I intend to move them off this moon and out into the galaxy soon enough.
For those who may be new to this story, you shouldn't start here. If you do anyway: It contains some disturbing imagery and violence. But no matter what happens to the narrator and his friends, they always come back.
Hope you enjoy!
My Kenny and I re-materialised on our respective platforms.
`You're probably not going to like hearing this, but there was absolutely no difference between being fucked by you or being fucked by the other Kenny' I said.
`Of course not. We're still basically the same person. I don't mind hearing that. I'm not as jealous as you think. Especially not of myself. And the other Jack's ass felt as wonderful as yours' my Kenny said and then kissed me.
We stepped off our platforms and I walked over to the couch and looked down at my corpse underneath that of the other Kenny.
`How do you make this lower into the floor?' I said.
`Leave it. We can't activate those. It will be done automatically in the morning' Alex said as he and Scott stepped off their platforms.
`It worked! We got new bodies and we're at our bed!' the other me shouted from way over where his and the other Kenny's bed was..
`Shut up asshole! People are trying to fu... sleep here' somebody said a bit closer to my double. There were some more arguing but we didn't really pay attention to that.
I moved over to look at the corpses of my Kenny and the other Jack on the bed and that scene wasn't that dissimilar from the one on the couch. Then Kenny pressed the button on the wall next to our bunk bed and the bed disappeared into the wall and came back empty. Meanwhile Alex pressed the appropriate button for the top bunk and that also went into the matter reclamation unit. More or less at the same time Brian and Paul came and went in their bed and they re-appeared almost immediately on their platforms.
I started removing my shorts which Scott also did and Brian followed suit. Paul pressed the button that made the middle bunk move into the matter reclamation unit. As I started laying down on mine and Kenny's bed I noticed that Kenny, Alex and Paul were whispering to each other and then put their right hands together in some sort of three way handshake.
`Jack, get off that bed and climb to the top bunk' Alex said.
`What's going on?' I said.
`Instead of just fucking the same guys all night where shaking things up a bit. Alex and Paul have already fucked their respective boyfriends tonight and I have fucked a Jack, though not my Jack. So before we get to consummate our marriage we're switching partners a bit first. You go to the top bunk for starters, while I have Brian in the bottom bunk and Paul has Scott in the middle bunk' Kenny said.
I didn't say anything, I just got off the bed and climbed up to the top bunk after kissing Kenny.
`Lie face down' Alex instructed as he climbed up after me.
I lay down as he instructed, sort of diagonally on the bed so my head was at the edge of the mattress and my legs spread wide apart. Alex sat on his knees between my legs and I soon felt him press his cock in between my buttocks and then it reached my hole. He did the same routine of pressing, then waiting and then pressing again as Kenny always did, and then I felt his cock slide inside me. Alex lay on top of me with one hand on each side of my torso and started moving his hip.
As Alex fucked me I moaned with pleasure, but I also peered over the edge of the bed down to the middle bunk where Scott lay on his back with just his shoulders on the mattress and head on the pillow while his feet was straight up to the underside of the top bunk and Paul had both of Scott's legs on his shoulders and fucking him. I could also hear Brian moaning with pleasure from being fucked by Kenny on the bottom bunk.
I looked over to the next set of bunk beds where Kim and Mark where fucking in the bottom bunk and Stan was doing Tim in the middle bunk. On the top bunk was Jim, with his feet in the air and basically in the same position as Scott below me. He was being fucked by somebody over there.
`Who's fucking Jim?' I said.
`Don't concern yourself with that now' Alex said and then leaned forward so we could kiss as much as possible when being fucked from behind.
We kept going for quite a while, but not as long as when the other Kenny had done me and my Kenny had done the other Jack. I felt the pleasure building in me and my heart started racing again. I heard two bangs from the bottom bunk and just moments after two more from the middle bunk just before I certainly must have made hole in that mattress when my heart charge went and I felt the blast from Alex as well as the wetness of his blood and my ass filling with cum once more.
Once more all six of us stood on the platforms and this time things went more quickly. Kenny, Paul and Alex sent the beds into the matter reclamation units while Brian, Scott and I removed our shorts.
`I could see you looking at me while we were getting fucked' Scott said.
`Yeah, I noticed you were looking back' I said as I reached out and stroked his cock.
Then Paul pulled me aside and hoisted me up onto the middle bunk while Kenny manoeuvred Scott onto the bottom bunk. Brian climbed to the top bunk on his own accord.
`Watch out, I think my heart charge must have made hole in the mattress up there' I said to Brian.
`If it did no one will know. When the beds come back out the matter has been re-arranged and it's basically a new mattress. Takes away blood semen, corpses and holes' Alex said.
Paul kissed me to shut me up as he put me on my back and lifted my legs onto his shoulders. He fucked me the same way he had fucked Scott. I looked up and there I saw Brian peeking down at me over the side of the bed. We waved to each other.
`You broke my neck! What did you do that for? I was just about to come' Jim's voice came out of the darkness where his silhouette was standing on his platform next to another silhouette.
`So you wouldn't have to suffer the pain of having your heart blown to bits, love' the voice of the other boy, who apparently was assigned to share Jim's bed.
`The pleasure of the orgasm is greater than the pain of the explosion. If I don't get to come there's no point in having sex. Actually, in a way dying at the moment of coming even seems to enhance the pleasure, strangely enough' Jim's voice said.
`Really? I hate dying' the other's voice said.
`So do I. But not coming when having sex makes the death pointless. Besides, you're new at being Terran, you'll need to get used to dying. Let's fuck again, but let me die from the heart charge this time or I will break your neck' Jim said.
`Are you sure?' the other's voice said.
`Absolutely. Now fuck me' Jim said.
`I think Jim is a bit of a power bottom, I like that' Brian said.
All three couples in our bunkbed kept on fucking almost the same amount of time as just before. This time the first two explosions came from the top bunk and then from the bottom bunk before Paul and I shot our loads as well as sprayed each other with blood from our heart charges. Not that we noticed that as we had our eyes closed, kissing.
`We've got to stop meeting like this' Scott said as we appeared on the platforms again.
`Why, don't you like having sex?' Brian said.
`It's a saying, sort of, that I used as a joke. I do like having sex. But if you don't mind I don't really feel like any more partner switching... tonight' Scott said.
`I think I get the joke' Brian said.
`I agree with Scott. I want my boyfriend inside me now. Actually I want my husband inside me now' I said and dragged Kenny to our bed where he quickly stripped me of my shorts and I removed his.
Brian and Paul climbed to their bed and shortly after two pairs of shorts came falling down and Scott and Alex did the same. I lay down on our bed and Kenny climbed on top of me. We kissed for a moment and then Kenny lifted my legs onto his shoulders and I soon could feel his cock pressing against my anus. After a brief pause he pressed forward again and was soon inside me. As he started moving his hip he leaned forward and we started kissing again. As we kept fucking we heard two sets of thumps from the middle bunk as Brian and Paul came and went. The middle bunk went still for a moment and then Brian and Paul appeared at their respective platforms next to the bed. After Brian and Paul sent their corpses into the matter reclamation unit they climbed back up. This time they lay still and tried to sleep, though. Shortly after Scott and Alex also came and went almost at the same time and they too sent their corpses into the matter reclamation unit and went back up to sleep. None of this kept me or Kenny from continuing to fuck and kiss.
From the next top bunk there was also two bangs as Jim and the boy who shared his bed both had their hearts blown to pieces. So the other boy did listen to Jim. I made a mental note that I would like to meet this boy that shared Jim's bed. The fact that he had broken Jim's neck while having sex earlier seemed to worry me, though I couldn't quite put my finger on what it was.
I felt a stirring in my groin as I started to come close to orgasm and my heart started beating faster so it felt like it was going to beat it's way through my ribcage, but instead it was blown to pieces by the explosive attached to it and I shot my load. At the same time I felt the blast from Kenny's chest and my ass filled up with his cum as my body quickly went numb.
Next thing I knew I was standing on the platform again, with Kenny right beside me. We glanced over at each other and smiled, though we could just about see each other in the darkness. We looked at our bodies still joined at the hip on the bed.
`That was long overdue' Kenny said quietly.
`You mean fucking on our own time? Not when some Master told us to? And actually doing it with each other and not some copy of ourselves, our boyfriend or simply with other people in the bunk bed?' I said.
`You've got it' Kenny said.
`And apart from doing it just as soon as we arrived earlier today before we were sent to the arenas?' I said.
`Well... We weren't married back then' Kenny rallied.
`Good point' I said.
We cleared away our corpses and then climbed into bed and pulled the blanket over us. I lay on my side, facing the platform and Kenny spooned me. Not only that, I once again felt his cock press against my ass and shortly after entered me. But I didn't need to ask. I knew he wasn't going to fuck me this time. He just wanted me to fall asleep with his cock up my ass. I liked that, a lot. It didn't take long before I drifted to sleep and I believe Kenny fell asleep about the same time.
From time to time there were muffled bangs in pairs from different parts of the hall, as there apparently, all through the night was some couple somewhere fucking, so that when one couple finished some other couple started up. A few times Kenny and I woke up from bangs that happened somewhere close. Each time that happened we were unable to go back to sleep right away and Kenny ended up moving his hip back and forth until our exploding hearts woke up somebody else who started fucking again too. And after clearing our bodies away once more we went back to sleep again. Each time we did go to sleep Kenny spooned me with his cock up my ass so that when we were awakened next time he started fucking me once more.
A couple of times I couldn't quite go back to sleep right away so I brought up the HUD and then moved my eyes sideways so the page turned to a menu where I could choose different holographic recordings to watch. At first I watched the match between the other Jack and me, and then I started watching the one where we had sex on the table. But I stopped soon after as it didn't do anything for me. Watching it wasn't as exciting as it had been doing it. I switched to watching Brian fuck his own copy instead and that was arousing. Of course, my cock was still permanently erect, but it still had an arousing effect.
`Watching yourself and your copy?' Kenny whispered in my ear.
`No, I'm watching Brian and his copy, I find that more exciting to me, but I'll stop' I whispered back.
`No. Keep watching and stream it to me too' Kenny whispered as he started moving his hips.
I was about to ask how to stream it but then I saw the word "stream" being highlighted in the lower right corner and managed to get it to Kenny.
`Now switch on "senses" for the bottom version of Brian' Kenny whispered.
I was a bit confused by this statement but I quickly figured out how to do that and once I did I suddenly could feel the texture of the couch against my naked skin and Brian's cock moving inside me. I gasped at this. I didn't need to ask but knew Kenny had switched on the senses for the top version of Brian and now matched his movements so keeping my eyes closed I watched the recording, basically out of Brian's eyes as though I was him. It also seemed to sync us to the recording so Kenny and I came at the same time as them. The really weird thing was that, while being fucked, I was vaguely aware of Kenny and myself standing over by the bunk bed getting our tattoos.
After that time we slept until the lights came back on and a buzzer sounded waking everybody up. Kenny and I looked over the side of our bed at a large mound of discarded denim shorts.
`Which ones are ours?' I said.
`Impossible to tell. Let's get a fresh pair each, though' Kenny said.
`How?' I said.
Kenny didn't say anything but simply made a movement up and down with his eyebrows and then lifted my left leg up high as he moved his head under it and turned over until he was laying half on top of me with my left leg over his right shoulder. Through this manoeuvre he kept his stone hard cock in me the whole time. Then he started fucking and kissing me again. Hardly anybody else was out of bed either. Everybody seemed to have the same idea; fuck in order to get a new body with a fresh pair of shorts. I liked the idea and just shut my eyes and felt Kenny moving inside me as my tongue moved round and back and forth over his while his tongue did the same with mine. Soon enough we climaxed and our hearts detonated. Almost at the same time Brian and Paul as well as Scott and Alex also reached their climaxes the same way. All six of us materialised in a row on the platforms next to the bed.
We made a quick job of it disposing of all six corpses. When our bed came back out Kenny and I began loading the mound of discarded clothing onto it. Brian, Paul, Scott and Alex started at us at first but then they helped putting the rest on before we once more sent the bed with the clothing into the matter reclamation unit. Then we went over the the tables where I had been fucked by my other self the evening before.
`Keep up the good work' I said and patted the leg of my corpse on the couch as I passed by on the way to the tables. Brian laughed loudly at this while Kenny pinched my sides at first and then he jumped up on my back and I put my arms around his legs and allowed him to piggy back ride me to the tables.
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The tables were several rows of round tables with attached benches that were quarter circles. The rows of tables were then arranged in concentric circles around the central hub like wall of the huge hall. Along the inner wall were rows of slots from which came trays of food. Kenny climbed down off my back and kissed me before he joined Brian, Paul, Scott, Alex and I in a line to one of these slots. Once we got our trays Kenny and I sat down on a bench each at one of the tables and then Brian and Paul got down on the remaining two benches at that table. Scott and Alex sat down at the next table over, joining Mark and Kim.
`Only Tim is missing' I said suddenly.
`What?' Tim said.
He was sitting behind me at an adjacent table.
`I just realised that I was sitting with four of the same people I sat with in the canteen that night, after I had just died for the first time, and we caught Kenny fondling my corpse. The only missing person from that first time was you' I said.
`Do you have to bring that up? That I was fondling your corpse?' Kenny said.
`It may not have been your best moment. But if it hadn't been for that, do you think you and I would have found each other?' I said.
Kenny was quiet for a moment and then leaned over and kissed me.
`That's what I've always been telling him, even his lowest moments bring something good with it' Tim said.
`Is it okay if I borrow my boyfriend from your riveting conversation for a moment?' Stan said, putting an arm around Tim's shoulder.
At the same table as Tim and Stan was also Jim who was looking around as if searching for something.
`Jim, do you have somebody to share your bed with now?' I said and Jim turned and looked at me with a huge smile.
`Yes, how did you know?' Jim said.
`I saw that somebody was fucking you on your bed last night, but it was too dark to see what he looked like. I dead hear that argument about breaking your neck, though. I hope he didn't do that again, because I would very much like you to have somebody to love just as the rest of us have' I said.
`No, I have somebody who shares my bed and fucks me like a god. Or like a rabbit if you like, well at least after we cleared up that first little misunderstanding. He turned up last night just after lights out, we just climbed up to my bed and started fucking right away' Jim said with a look that told everybody that he was in love.
`Can I meet this god?' I said.
`Sure. Only, I haven't seen him all morning. I wonder where he is. Tim, Stan, have you seen Charlie this morning?' Jim said.
`Who?' Stan said.
`Have you seen Charlie this morning? You know, the guy who shares my bed?' Jim said.
`That jerk who broke your neck just before you came?' Tim said.
`Well, that was just that one time. He doesn't do that anymore. He's really sweet actually' Jim said.
`No. He appeared after lights out and I never got a good look at him. Have you seen him with the lights on yourself? He could be at the next table and none of us would know. I wish you a happy relationship, of course, but this sounds like it happened a bit too fast. But if you're sure we're behind you all the way' Stan said. Jim seemed a bit frustrated by this, which I could understand.
`Kim, Mark, have you seen Charlie this morning. Please tell me you've seen him at all. I'm sure I didn't imagine getting fucked last night' Jim said sounding a bit desperate.
`We heard the argument too, so it wasn't just your imagination. But we haven't seen him with the lights on either' Kim said.
Jim stood up and looked around and then formed a funnel round his mouth with his hands and shouted `Charlie?!'
`It's okay. We'll meet him eventually. I'm sorry you can't seem to find him at the moment as I understand that you'd like to be with him now. And I'm here for you if there's anything' I said and reached out my right hand for Jim who took it.
`Thanks' Jim said.
When I turned back to our table Kenny leaned over and kissed me again. After a few moments of kissing we turned our attention to our trays. On each tray was the same things. Two sandwiches that had been exposed to heat so they were golden brown and just slightly charred in places with melted butter and what I learned was orange marmalade on it. Apparently the bread was called toast. There was a glass of orange juice and a cup of that coffee that I had already grown to love. Then there was a large bowl of some white stuff that was some kind of slightly sour lactose product. Scott called it yoghurt, though he was a bit surprised that there was what he called cereal in it, as he claimed that where he came from he always had milk, not yoghurt, with his cereal. I hadn't eaten for as long as I could remember. Well, of course most of my clones never got to eat, at least not since some time yesterday, so I did what everybody else did and finished everything on the plate. Scott claimed that the yoghurt with cereal was actually edible to him too.
`I wonder what's inside that thing in the centre of this hall. It can't be the arenas. That area is much bigger than that central hub thing here' I said looking at the food slots.
`I think it's the cloning equipment and machinery for these food slots. The arenas are somewhere underneath this hall' Paul said.
`Why do you want to know?' Brian asked.
`I don't know, I just got curious' I said.
`Curiosity killed the Terran' Paul said.
`Cat. The saying is, curiosity killed the cat' Scott interjected from the next table.
While we were talking I felt Kenny's hand on my thigh that was nearest him. He started stroking my thigh and moved the hand down to the inside of the thigh and up to my crotch. I, in turn, put my hand on his thigh and started doing similar things.
`You're right, of course. It was originally the same saying here, but the lack of cats on this world, and the fact that the Masters don't like it when Terrans ask too many questions, so they tend to kill the ones who do. So we've learned to not ask questions or to be curious when they're around. The saying has been updated accordingly to remind people not to be too curious' Paul said.
`Oh. Well, that makes sense' Scott said.
`So what's the harm in me being curious now? There aren't any Masters around, are there?' I said.
`Good point' Paul said.
`They have surveillance devices throughout these halls, mostly to record us having sex but they pick up sound too so we need to be careful what we talk about while people are having sex nearby' Alex said.
At this point Kenny was stroking the bulge in my shorts. I took my hand off Kenny's thigh and stuck it down inside the waist of his shorts and grabbed hold of his cock.
Kenny and I both turned so we sat astride our benches facing each other and started kissing. Around us came several hoot sounds as well as whistling.
`So much for curiosity' Scott said and suddenly added `Actually, there's something I'm curious about.'
Kenny and I stopped kissing and I watched as Scott got up and walked over to one of the food dispensing machines near the slots from which we'd got the breakfast trays. Meanwhile Kenny reached down and unbuttoned my fly and started jacking me off but stopped almost immediately and instead bent down and started sucking my cock. I moaned with pleasure and though it seemed a bit awkward briefly I found that I enjoyed the dozens pairs of eyes that watched me and Kenny enviously.
`Tea. Earl Grey. Hot' Scott said to the food dispensing machine. After a few moments a cup filled with hot liquid appeared and Scott took it and sipped carefully from it. Then he spit it out and poured out the contents of the cup in a hole in the wall that was shaped a bit like a sink or wash stand.
`It wasn't what you ordered?' Brian asked when Scott returned to his table.
`Actually it was exactly what I ordered. It's just that I don't like tea that much' Scott said as he sat down on his bench next to Alex.
`Why did you order it then?' Paul said.
`It's from one of those TV-shows, isn't it? As you said it, I suddenly saw a bald man before my mind's eye. He had some black trousers and a sweater that was black and red with four gold dots on the collar, and he used to order his tea that way, right?' I said while Kenny was still sucking my cock. Shortly his right hand came up and covered my mouth to make me shut up.
`Yes. It's from...' Scott said, but before he could continue Alex kissed him.
`You shouldn't talk about those things, or mention the planet we're from. We're not supposed to know about it. Jack, you shouldn't talk about your dreams either. Not as long as we're on this moon' Mark said in a hushed voice.
`Exactly! Remember what I just told you about the surveillance devices for watching us have sex. They're sure to be on now when Kenny is sucking your cock' Alex said quietly.
`Actually I haven't even dreamed of... the planet all night' I said quietly.
The PA system came back on.
`Breakfast is over. Prepare to be transferred to the arenas for the first round of matches of the day' the voice said.
Again there was a sweeping trigger field that moved around the circular hall clockwise. At first I thought it started closer than it did last evening, but then I realised it started in the same position which I suppose was north, and it only seemed closer because we were nearer the hub where the field had a shorter distance to travel all the way round than at the outer edge where the bunk beds were. Three tables over from us the chests burst on the two boys sitting on the benches furthest away from us, spraying the breakfast trays with blood and then the other couple, nearer to us died the same way and all four collapsed forward onto the table. Same thing happened at the table between them and the food slots as well as all four tables out to the walkway. Moment's later the same thing happened at the next row of tables, closer to us. I turned my attention to the blow job Kenny was giving me while I saw out of the corner of my eye how Tim and Stan turned to each other and kissed while Jim simply grabbed the edge of the table and shut his eyes. The trigger field hit him first and he collapsed into his half eaten bowl of yoghurt and cereal. Then Tim and Stan died as they kept kissing. I felt my heart beating faster again as well as the dizziness and the warmth.
`Kenny, see you later, darling' I blurted out as fast as I could before my heart exploded and I collapsed backwards onto the bench as my vision darkened. I could see Kenny's body jerk slightly as his heart charge blew and then he died as I shot my load in his mouth.
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I found myself standing on an elliptical platform once more, wearing nothing more than a blue loin cloth, lifted at the front by my involuntary erection. In a stand protruding from the sand was a sword, similar to the one I had fought over twice yesterday. On the opposite side of the oval stood Jim, wearing a red loin cloth with a sword on a stand in front of him too. The ear piece voice instructed us that one of us would have to kill the other with the sword in front of him.
'Now they're stating the obvious' Jim said before I had a chance to.
The bell sounded and the match began. Both of us blinked to bring up the HUD.
'You know I don't want to kill you but...' I began as I took the sword in front of me.
'You will try your best, as will I. I don't want to kill you either of course' Jim said taking his sword.
The stands for the swords disappeared as they were no longer needed.
'Nothing personal' we said together and then we started fighting.
Jim ran at me with his sword held with both hands in front of him. I easily stepped aside and parried. Jim turned around and charged me again and I did the same.
`That's not how you fight with swords. Quit charging like a bull. Come in close where you can actually reach and harm me with your sword' I said.
`This is how Charlie, the guy who shares my bed, told me to do it. He said that if you get in too close the other guy can kill you' Jim said and charged me again. Once more I just stepped aside and swung my own sword, cutting his left arm.
`Really? And when did he tell you this?' I asked as Jim stopped for a moment and put his right hand over the cut in his arm.
`When we fought with swords in the arena yesterday. He told me I've got to do it this way if I want to win and go on to the next type of match' Jim said.
`Did you fight like that with him?' I said.
`Yes' Jim said.
`Did it work? Did you win against him?' I asked. Jim was quiet for a moment as he thought about this and then he shook his head.
`It wasn't very good advice, was it?' Jim asked.
`No. But that must have been before he turned out to be your bunk mate' I said.
`Yes. I thought it was a bit of a coincidence. But he said it wasn't. He said he liked me when we met in the arena and arranged to get assigned to my bed. That was after lights out so I couldn't actually tell if he really was the same guy except that he sort of sounded the same' Jim said.
`Interesting. When we get back to the big hall, I want to meet and have a chat with this Charlie' I said.
The voice in our ear pieces was just about to berate us for standing around talking but we closed the gap between us and started fighting properly. We kept at it for quite a while. One would attempt to cut or run the other through and the other would parry. Both of us suffered several minor cuts to our arms and I got one on my thigh. Then as I lounged and swung my sword sideways Jim failed to parry that move and the tip of my sword cut his belly open horizontally. He dropped his sword and clutched at his stomach but that wasn't enough to keep his guts in. Jim sank to his knees. On the HUD his ECG started getting irregular.
`I guess I don't win this one either. But you're right, I stand a better chance fighting this way' Jim said.
`Look, I'm sorry...' I said.
`Don't apologise, it's annoying as hell. One of us has to kill the other. You were better than me. Nothing personal' Jim said.
`Nothing personal' I repeated.
`Finish me, would you? I don't expect you to fuck me, but a kiss would be nice' Jim said.
I got down on my knees facing him and kissed him. As he went into the kiss I put the sword to the side of his chest at the height where the heart is and then I pushed the sword in to the cross bar. He felt it go in and tried to break the kiss for a moment, but when I wouldn't let him he realised that he'd prefer not to see after all and we went on kissing until he died. He flatlined almost immediately after I pushed the sword in, though it took a while before he actually died. Then I got 500 more points. However I was still getting single points now and then from people watching recordings of me.
Once more I dumped the body over the side of the platform as instructed by the ear piece voice.
`You are about to be transported to another platform for the next level fight. Do not leave your body on the platform for the next fighters to find' the voice said next.
I felt the usual symptoms that nowadays preceded the heart charge being detonated. I thought for a moment what the voice had meant about not leaving my body behind on the platform. Then I turned around and let myself fall backwards off the platform. I was counting on the device going off before I reached the spikes but I guess they were expecting me to do it this way and cancelled the detonation. A few seconds after I'd let myself fall off the platform I was impaled on several of the spikes. I could see three or four bloody spikes coming out of my chest. At the nearest platform I could see a boy stood at the edge looking at me for a moment and then he turned and fell off deliberately too. Apparently it was happening all over the arenas. My own ECG grew very irregular the moment I was impaled and shortly after it turned to a flat line. Moments later I was dead and materialised on another platform.
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