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The following story is a fictional work. All resemblances to real
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Hunter and Mason's Shower Confessions
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by GMartinez
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Synopsis:
Two young friends discover a new dimension to their friendship after a little discussion on how dicks work.
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His
name is Hunter.
Though
he had never thought to question his
parents on the reason for his name, he knew what it meant. A hunter was
one who
tracks down and overpowers its prey. A hunter was one who triumphs, one
who
succeeds, one who doesn’t stop until he comes out on top. The
young boy gripped
the steel bat harder, every knuckle on every finger as tense as a
hunter
preparing to strike. Every bead of sweat on his round, youthful face
was a moment
of anticipation, patiently awaiting the moment to attack. It was as if
all the
ten meagre years of his existence led up to this one decisive encounter.
The
day will come when all would recognize
him as the hunter he was named to be. And as he swung to meet the small
white
ball speeding towards him at breakneck speed, he knew.
Today
was not that day.
“Strike
three! You’re out!”
***
“Dude,
are you alright?”
“Mhhm,”
Hunter grunted.
“It’s
okay, you know. It’s not like anyone
was super disappointed or
anything.”
“U-huh.”
“I
mean, sure, we lost like the most
important game of the season but, it’s not like anyone really
blames you,
y’know?”
“Mason?”
Hunter finally turned to meet the
eyes of the boy sitting beside him.
“Yeah,
bud?”
“You’re
my best friend, but you are absolutely
the worst at trying to cheer people up.”
Mason
put an arm around Hunter’s shoulders
as he gave a small chuckle.
Despite
his miserable state, Hunter
couldn’t help but smile. His best friend Mason might not be
the world’s most
sensitive wordsmith, but the boy was undoubtedly the most caring person
that
he’d ever known. It was Mason who knew that Hunter had
stormed off to the
locker rooms before the game had even finished. It was Mason who had
approached
Hunter, and instead of berating him, had sat beside him, allowing him a
few
minutes of solemn silence before attempting a quiet conversation.
Hunter was
immeasurably grateful that Mason came for him, even though he never
wanted
anyone to. Silence was Hunter’s word of gratitude, and
silence in turn was
Mason’s gesture of welcome. This was why they were friends.
Mason
had been Hunter’s best friend for so
long that he’d forgotten how they’d even met. And
while ten-year-olds are not
especially known for their emotional coping techniques, he’d
sat beside Hunter
because he’d just known that misery was not an illness so
easily cured. Sadness
couldn’t be so easily dispelled with words or gifts. That was
something that
he’d learned when he and his father had bid his mother their
final goodbyes.
A
child’s sadness was no different from anyone
else’s. When Hunter had
accidentally broken an antique vase that his parents had scolded him
for, Mason
had sat with him. When Hunter’s beloved pet cat Kitkat had
run afoul of the
laws of physics brought about by a speeding car, Mason had sat with
him. Today
was no different. Mason was sitting beside Hunter, willing his presence
to say
everything that his ten-year-old mind didn’t have the words
for. It was this
gesture that Hunter liked best in the boy that he dearly considered his
best
friend.
A few
minutes later, the sound of
approaching footsteps filled the locker room. The rest of the team had
come
shuffling in, the other boys sporting equally miserable looks. Most of
them
ignored Hunter and Mason, and headed straight for the showers. Some of
Hunter’s
friendlier teammates offered a few sympathetic words.
“Hunter,
don’t sweat it. We’ll get another
chance next time.”
“We
all have our bad days, dude. Don’t
worry about it.”
“I
still think you did great out there!”
A few
minutes later, Coach Renner came in
along with the last of the boys. He approached the bench where Hunter
and Mason
were sitting with what could best be described as an impassive face.
“I’ll
be honest, Hunter. You’re one of our
best batters. But I could see your lack of concentration today, and I
admit
that I was disappointed,” said the coach. His tone was stern,
yet not angry.
Hunter was internally grateful that the coach was kind enough to
withhold the
true extent of his disappointment.
“What
happened out there today, Hunter?”
“I
. . . I guess my head just wasn’t in the
game, Coach . . . ”
“Is
anyone in the team . . . giving you a
hard time?” the older man asked cautiously.
“No,
sir,” Hunter replied, still staring at his feet.
“Well,
alright. You boys better hit the
showers. Most of the team’s already headed home,”
said the coach. He then gave
both boys a smile before walking away. Hunter could have sworn he heard
the
older man sigh.
“So
you wanna shower now?” Mason asked.
“I
kinda like sitting on this bench,”
Hunter said, still a little dejected.
“Well
I don’t. It’s getting late. You
coming or what?” Mason stood and offered Hunter his hand.
“Fine
. . . ” Hunter relented. He took his
best friend’s hand, and held it a few seconds longer before
standing up
himself. There was something oddly comforting in the warmth he felt
from
Mason’s hand. While they both stripped down, Mason went on an
animated
commentary of the game’s highlights as the other towel-clad
boys filed past
them.
“That
kid from the other team—Ethan, I
think—he definitely can’t run. I mean, who trips
while running bases?” Mason
said as he and Hunter walked over to the showers.
“Don’t
be so mean, Mason. Maybe he just
tripped on his laces or something,” Hunter replied.
“Nuh-uh.
He didn’t just trip, dude—he was
practically rolling around in the dirt! I mean, seriously? Seriously?”
Mason continued as he expressed his incredulity with a funny face.
Hunter
couldn’t help but laugh and join in
his friend’s enthusiasm. Slowly but surely his misery ebbed
away, as Mason’s
usual giddiness punctuated his humorous overblown observations about
the
opposing team’s members. Mason was just being himself, funny
and cheerful
enough to make anyone forget any feelings of sadness. Hunter reminded
himself
to thank Mason later. He also wished that he could apologize to the boy
named
Ethan. Though his fall had looked like it really hurt, it was an
excellent
topic of conversation. And anyway, it really was funny.
Mason
didn’t let up on his tirade against
the other team even as he and Hunter started rinsing themselves off
next to
each other in the showers. He stopped occasionally when the water would
get
into his mouth or up his nose, but otherwise maintained a lively
conversation
with his friend.
“Dude,
don’t ever borrow soap from Jake.”
“Why’s
that?” Hunter asked, looking at
Mason as he washed the lather off his crotch.
“One
time I saw him use the whole bar to
soap his crack, like he literally wiped the bar inside!”
Mason explained in a
hushed tone. He looked furtively to the side to make sure that the boy
named
Jake wasn’t there.
“Eugh,
sick!” Hunter groaned,
playfully slapping Mason’s bare shoulder when the latter
faked wiping his soap
on Hunter’s face.
Both
boys spent a moment in a fit of
giggles, some of which Mason spent choking—partly from the
giggling and partly
from yet another accidental mouthful of shower water. Hunter imagined
that the
other boys in the shower were probably looking at them a little
strangely,
perhaps confused at what the two of them were laughing about. But
Hunter didn’t
care, really. Right then his world was with Mason, and everything felt
right.
Hunter
looked all around the shower, noting
that there were only three other boys remaining aside from Mason and
himself.
Maybe, he thought, he could finally tell Mason about . . . it.
“Hunter,
I can tell. There’s something you
want to talk about, isn’t there?” Mason asked after
a brief pause. “You keep
looking around like you’re wondering if anyone’s
listening. And you were also
holding back on Coach earlier.”
“Am
I that obvious?” Hunter replied.
“To
me you are. That’s how best friends
work.”
“Says
who?”
“Says
your best friend,” Mason said as he
tried giving Hunter a smug look. He only managed to blink water into
his eye,
though, and ended up swearing under his breath while Hunter laughed at
him
again.
“Okay,
okay. Yeah, I do have something reeeally
big that I need to tell you,”
Hunter whispered, too softly to be overheard above the noise of the
shower
spray. “But just you, after everybody
else is gone”.
“I’m
almost done showering, though,” Mason
pointed out.
“Well,
just pretend to shampoo your hair
again.”
One
by one, the three other boys left,
leaving Hunter and Mason finally alone with the water still running
over their
young, naked bodies. Hunter rinsed his brunette hair for what felt like
the fiftieth
time and turned to face Mason.
“You
remember when I told you that my
brother sometimes brings his girlfriend to our place on the
weekends?”
“Sort
of, yeah. What was her name again?”
“Cara?
Long blonde hair? Remember now?”
“Okay,
so what about her?” Mason asked.
“Well
she—my brother brought her—and
she—well . . . ” Hunter trailed off, as if the
memory was too embarrassing to
put into words.
“Dude,
what are you getting at?”
“Well
. . . I think there’s something wrong
with my body,” Hunter admitted with a sigh.
“Okay
. . . so why don’t you see a doctor,
then?”
“No!”
Hunter exclaimed.
“Why
not? And what’s Cara got to do with
it?”
“Because
she said . . . I think . . . well
. . . I think my dick is broken!” Embarrassed by his
reluctant admission,
Hunter’s eyes glanced away from his best friend, choosing
instead to focus on an
unremarkable spot on the tiled floor.
“Your
dick . . . is broken . . . ?” Mason
repeated, barely managing to contain his laughter.
“Don’t
laugh!” Hunter complained, obviously
unhappy with his friend’s reaction.
“Okay,
okay. But can you back up and start
from the beginning? I don’t really get you. I mean, your dick
looks just fine
to me,” Mason replied with a nod at Hunter’s bare
crotch.
“Well,
yesterday, my brother came home and
he had Cara with her. She was really drunk, so he took her to his room
and told
me to look after her while he went out to buy aspirin.”
Hunter was looking off
into the distance as he told his tale. With his back to the wall, he
slowly
slid down to a sitting position on the floor with his knees out in
front of
him. Mason did the same beside him, but unlike Hunter, he was sitting
with his
legs spread wide open. The shower was still running above them, and the
sound
of rushing water and the biting chill of the bare tiles made for a
pensive
atmosphere.
“So,”
Hunter continued, “while my brother
was gone, I took a glass of water to Cara. And when I asked her if she
wanted
anything else, she said that she wanted me to hold the glass while she
drank
it.”
“Uh-huh.
And then what?”
“She
finished drinking it, and then looked
at me kinda funny. She said I looked a lot like my brother. And then .
. . ”
“
‘Then’ . . . ? Then what?”
Mason
asked impatiently.
“She
. . . well . . . it’s kind of
embarrassing . . . ”
“Hey,
nothing should be too embarrassing
for me to hear, right?” Mason assured his
friend while giving him a
friendly nudge on the shoulder. His grin also made it quite apparent
that he really
didn’t want to miss out on hearing about whatever came next.
Hunter
gave his friend a sheepish smile,
and then hesitantly continued. “Well, she told me to come
closer, so I did.
Then she said she wanted to know if I . . . tasted
like my brother. So
she leaned on me and—“
“No
way!” Mason exclaimed excitedly.
“You mean she . . . ?”
“Yeah
. . . she kissed me. Right on the
lips,” Hunter confirmed as he pouted his own lips in a mock
attempt to look
like he was kissing something.
Mason
seemed quite awe-struck at what he’d
just heard. Without even pausing to think, he raised his finger and
touched
Hunter’s lips. “Seriously . . . right there,
huh?”
“Yeah,”
Hunter replied with another shy
smile. He didn’t seem to mind at all that Mason had touched
his lips.
“So
. . . what was it like?”
“Weird.
Wet. Disgusting, really. I mean,
she tasted like beer. And she kept moving her tongue around inside my
mouth. It
felt really . . . weird . . . kinda like jello, but alive and wiggling
around.
. . ” Hunter grimaced as he thought back to it.
“But,
dude, how could you not like it?
You got full-on kissed by an older girl!”
Mason blurted out, his eyes
glazing over with boyish awe and wonder.
Hunter
wrinkled up his nose in
disagreement. “Hey, why should kissing an older girl feel
good? I didn’t ask
for it. It felt disgusting having her tongue in my mouth. I almost
puked.”
“Well,
everybody says it feels good
. . . I mean . . . I dunno,” Mason replied awkwardly as he
scratched his wet
scalp. “Sorry—I didn’t think
you’d feel so bad about it.”
“That’s
not all. She put her hand on my
shorts and felt me . . . down there,” Hunter continued,
accompanied by a quick
downward gesture.
“Whoa
. . . she actually grabbed your
dick?” Mason asked in a throaty whisper.
“Yeah,”
Hunter confirmed with a nod. “She
said it wasn’t hard, and seemed kinda disappointed about
that. She said that it
was supposed to be hard after a kiss, and if it wasn’t, it
must mean that my
dick’s broken . . .”
“Well,
they say it’s also supposed to be a
great thing if a girl grabs you there . . . ” Mason began,
though some of his
earlier enthusiasm was being replaced by doubt.
“I
don’t know who keeps telling you stuff
like that, Mason. Why would it be great?”
“Well
. . . ” Mason couldn’t think of any
reply other than ‘That’s what they say’,
so he finally just shrugged instead.
“I
was scared, okay?” Hunter finally
admitted. “I thought she was gonna squeeze it, maybe hard
enough to hurt!”
“I
don’t think she’d do that . . . would
she? I mean, you’re her boyfriend’s brother . . .
” Mason replied, again with
uncertainty. He gently held his own dick between his fingers, and
shuddered at
the thought of anyone trying to squeeze it too
hard.
“That’s
not all that she did,
though.”
“What
else?”
“She
took my shorts off and—”
“—Damn—!”
“—and
then she pushed me over the bed and .
. . and said she had to make sure that it
wasn’t broken . . . and then
she put it in her mouth!” Hunter finished, not even daring to
look at Mason’s
face.
“Bullshit!”
Mason responded involuntarily .
. . but not entirely in disbelief.
“Dude,
I’m not lying!” Hunter insisted
adamantly, giving Mason a hurt look.
“Sorry!
It’s just that . . . holy crap!
Why would she do that? And what did it feel like?” Mason
replied, still beside
himself with astonishment.
“Well,
a little like kissing, kinda, but
with my dick instead of my mouth,” Hunter explained as he
tried to remember all
of the details. “It got really wet and slippery, and her
tongue was licking it
all over inside her mouth. I was a little scared that she might bite
it—not
like ‘off’, but hard enough to hurt. But even so,
it wasn’t as disgusting as
kissing. At least I couldn’t smell the beer on
her.” Then his face clouded again
when he added: “But I still didn’t get hard, so she
said it’s definitely broken
. . . ”
“From
the sound of it, she might have been
trying to sex you up,” Mason suggested.
“What’s
that mean?”
“You
know . . . sex!” Mason
whispered loudly. “Come on, Hunter, you really
don’t know? It’s when you get naked and hug and
stuff, and it’s supposed to
feel good!”
“I
knew that!” Hunter retorted. He was
relieved that the running water on his face probably hid the growing
redness of
his cheeks.
“Anyway,
if you didn’t like it, you should
have told someone,” Mason concluded, trying to sound as
‘authoritative’ about
the matter as the lectures about it that every kid hears.
“Exactly!
That’s why I’m telling you!
You’re the only one I can tell it to!”
“Why
just me?”
“Because
how am I supposed to tell anyone
else that my dick is broken?” Hunter blurted out in
frustration.
“So
. . . you believe her?” Mason asked,
his face shifting to a more serious expression.
“Why
wouldn’t I? I mean, she’s twenty-one so
she knows what she’s talking about. And I know what she means
about getting
hard.”
“Oh,
yeah?” Mason replied with a raised
brow.
“I
saw my brother getting himself hard one
time. He thought I was already asleep, but I saw him one night when he
was
doing something under the covers. When he got up, I saw his dick, and
it was a lot
bigger and harder than mine’s ever gotten. How about
yours—has it ever gotten
hard enough to stick straight out?”
“Well,
a couple of times I guess . . . ”
Mason replied, sounding a bit confused. “I didn’t
think it was a big deal,
though.”
“See?
My dick is broken!” Hunter declared
morosely. He closed his eyes and leaned back against the wall, letting
the
shower water cascade directly onto his face.
“Hunter,
stop being so dumb. Cara’s just
talking a load of bull!” Mason insisted defiantly.
“How
come you’re so sure?”
“In
the first place, why do you even
believe her so much?”
“Well,
I—“
“She
hasn’t got a dick, does she?” Mason
asked pointedly. Then he stood up and grabbed his dick between his
fingers,
wiggling it at Hunter for emphasis. Hunter couldn’t help but
giggle at the
sight.
“No,
I guess not,” Hunter agreed.
“Boys
know way more about dicks than girls
do. And I’m telling you that yours isn’t
broken.” Mason sounded quite
adamant, and his confidence was slowly affecting Hunter.
“But
why won’t mine get hard like
that, then?”
“Probably
because you never needed
it to!” Mason was smiling now. He knew that he was winning
his friend over.
“But,
hey, if Cara says that my brother
gets hard when she does those things to him like she did to me, then my
dick’s supposed to get hard too!”
“Ugh,
you seriously need to shut up about
‘what Cara says’!” Mason groaned.
“You can be so whiny sometimes, y’know?”
“Okay,
okay, I’m sorry. But . . . if I
could just get my own dick hard, then I’d know that
I’m all right! That’s all I
need!” Hunter stood up, and then faced Mason. He was suddenly
sporting a shy—if
hopeful— smile. “Mason . . .?”
“Yeah,
bud?”
“We’re
best friends, right?”
“Of
course we are!”
“Then
is it okay if you help me?” Hunter
asked, his determination mounting. “Just help me get hard. I
figure that since
you’ve done it before, you can tell me what to do.”
“Well
. . . ” Mason’s own bravado had
vanished. All this talk of dicks and hard-ons had really been getting
him
flustered, and Hunter’s request was starting to make him feel
quite awkward.
“I’d love to help you, bro . . . but, uh . . .
it’s not like I’m an expert on
it or anything. Actually, I just get hard at random. It comes, and then
it
goes.”
“Then
maybe we could do it like Cara tried
to do?” Hunter persisted with renewed enthusiasm.
“That way, if I did get hard,
we could be sure that she’s
lying!”
“Dude!
Are you asking me to kiss you and
put your dick in my mouth?” Mason asked incredulously,
sounding a lot more
offended at the idea than he’d actually meant to.
“I
. . . you’re right, that’s stupid. I’m
sorry! That was so stupid. What am I even
saying?” Hunter dejectedly
leaned back on the wall, completely avoiding any eye contact with
Mason. He realized
with sudden despair that he’d just asked the impossible of
his best friend.
Earlier, his only concern had been his supposed penile disability, but
now he
was even more worried about the possibility that he’d
jeopardized his
friendship with Mason.
Suddenly,
Hunter felt Mason’s hands on his
shoulders, and also noticed that their faces were only inches apart.
Mason was
looking to the side, too, as if too embarrassed to meet
Hunter’s gaze. In a
gentle tone, Mason asked, “If I do that for you . . . will it
make you feel
better?”
“Well
. . . yeah, I mean . . . is it really
okay?” Hunter’s eyes met Mason’s, and
each could tell that the other boy was
just as nervous about what was happening. Hunter’s thinking
was that if Mason
had been truly dead-set against the idea, he’d have flat-out
rejected it. But
instead, his friend was now even offering to do it.
He
didn’t want to make Mason do anything he
didn’t want to, but if Mason wanted to in
the first place . . . and
Hunter really was genuinely concerned about his dick’s health
. . .
“You’ll
owe me big-time for this,” Mason
added as he flashed Hunter a sly smile.
“Sure,
anything!” Hunter replied, with
eager puppy-dog eyes.
“You’ll
let me borrow Fallout 4?”
“Sure,
no probs!”
“And
Metal
Gear!”
“Okay!”
“For
five months!” Mason
added, putting extra emphasis on his last word.
“Okay,
okay,” Hunter agreed readily,
despite his feeling that five months seemed maybe a bit excessive for
just
borrowing a game.
The
two of them exchanged looks once again,
with Mason looking more and more as if he’d made up his mind.
In a good way,
Hunter noted.
“All
right . . . ” Mason sighed while
stroking his chin, as he’d often do while pretending to think
intently about
anything. “How do we do this?”
“Well,
I guess we kiss first . . . ” Hunter
replied, looking off to the side again. He was blushing harder than he
ever had
in his whole life.
“Okay,
here I go.” Mason then leaned
forward, putting his hands on either side of Hunter’s head,
as if to hold it in
place.
Hunter
placed his hands on Mason’s own. His
entire body was starting to feel warm, even as the shower water kept
their
bodies soaked. Mason was slowly inching his face forward, his eyes
closed and
his lips puckered in an almost-comical fashion.
As the moment of contact drew ever-closer, Hunter found
himself suddenly
starting to panic. Did he really want this? Did he really want to kiss
Mason?
What if Mason spit in his mouth? What if he sneezed? What if Mason
decided it
was gross?
Before
he could think of any additional
questions, though, he felt the warm and gentle touch of
Mason’s lips on his
own.
The
feeling of someone else’s lips on your
own is a strange sensation indeed, Hunter thought. Mason’s
lips felt so soft
and fragile—quite different from the texture of the skin
he’d find anywhere
else on his body. They stood there, unmoving, as their lips connected,
both
uncertain of what to do next. Mason still had his eyes shut, but
Hunter’s were
wide and alert, soaking in the view in front of him—the face
of his best
friend, closer to his own than he’d ever imagined. Hunter
started to feel a
strange new sensation in the pit of his stomach. It was similar to what
he’d
feel when he was nervous—like when a teacher called him to
recite, but he had
no idea what to answer—except that this new feeling was a lot
more intense. He
felt tingly in places that he’d never thought would ever feel
that way,
including the tips of his ears, the small of his back, the back of his
neck . .
. and strangest of all, the inside of his butt and the entirety of his
dick.
Hunter
could only describe it as a feeling
that was both good and quite bewildering at the same time. It was a
feeling
that he wanted to keep on feeling—his need for it was so much
that he dreaded
ever losing it. He wanted to keep on looking at Mason’s
face—his friend’s eyes were
lazily closed, his lips so intently focused, and his cheeks so rounded
and
contracted as Mason moved his lips around. The longer that their kiss
went on,
the more Hunter felt that strange feeling. It was now coursing through
his entire
body, the intoxicating sensation heightening all his senses and making
him
aware of every subtle movement, every terse heartbeat, and every bead
of water
pelting their entangled bodies.
A
moment later, Mason broke off and opened
his eyes. Without waiting for Hunter’s reply, he looked down
to observe
Hunter’s still-flaccid dick and asked, “Still not
hard, huh?”
“No,
I guess not,” Hunter admitted with
apparent disappointment.
“So
. . . what did that feel like? Was it
gross?”
“No,
not at all!” Hunter hastily replied.
“It felt warm and soft, and it’s like my whole body
just wanted to stay like
that . . . ”
“Well,
that’s good, right?” Mason asked
with another sly grin.
“Yeah
. . . real good . . . ”
“You’re
still not hard, though, so let’s do
it some more. There’s still the tongue thing.
C’mere,” Mason instructed as he
planted his hands onto Hunter’s shoulders.
Hunter’s
faint whimper and sigh might have
been an attempt at a non-verbal protest, but Mason’s lips
swooped down and met
his in an instant, dampening the sound into something more akin to a
moan. It
vibrated lightly through both boys’ now-connected lips,
causing Mason to squint
and his cheeks to quiver, as if he was stifling a giggle.
With
barely a pause, Hunter felt something
moving past the smooth surface of his lips, and into his mouth.
Mason’s tongue
was inside him, and he didn’t know how to react. After
clumsily licking
Hunter’s teeth initially, Mason’s tongue then found
Hunter’s, and lightly
probed it in seeming curiosity. Hunter then moved his tongue to
reciprocate,
almost reflexively. And when their tongues made contact, what felt like
an
electric shock ran through Hunter’s entire body. Both he and
Mason broke the
kiss at the same time—it seemed like his friend had felt the
very same thing.
“What
. . . what was that . . . ?” Mason
asked as he brushed his lips with his fingers. He looked at Hunter with
his
mouth open in an awestruck half-smile, the incredulity all but written
on his
face.
“You
felt it too? That feeling? Like a
thousand bugs just crawled up your skin at the same time?”
Hunter asked. After
seeing Mason slowly nod, he continued, “That’s the
same feeling that I had when
Cara did it. But back then, it was just gross. This time though,
it’s
different—not gross at all! I don’t really know how
to describe it but . . .
it’s different. It’s . . . uh . . . ”
“Dude
. . . I think your dick knows what
you mean,” Mason said with an answering smile. He was
pointing at Hunter’s
boyhood which—though previously droopy and
uninterested—was now
ever-so-slightly raised. Not enough to be considered even semi-erect,
but in a
noticeably different stance than before.
“Oh
my gosh . . . I think it’s actually
working!” Hunter declared in an almost-cheer. He held his
shaft between two
fingers and studied it intently. He definitely did feel a tingle down
there
whenever he brushed his tongue against Mason’s. Along with a
similar sensation
on his nipples . . . speaking of which, he’d never seen them
stick out the way
that they were right then.
“Awesome!”
Mason crowed triumphantly as he
pumped a fist into the air. “If we just do it some more, then
you’ll definitely
get hard!” With that, he leaned over to Hunter again, and
unlike the last
time—when he’d settled for just placing his hands
onto Hunter’s shoulders—this
time Mason draped his arms over Hunter’s neck. He was
literally wrapping his
best friend into a hug. Unlike all of the other times that
he’d he hugged
Hunter, though, Mason leaned in, met the expectant lips of his best
friend, and
plunged his tongue back into Hunter’s warm mouth.
Both
ten-year-olds were being bombarded by
the new sensations that they were giving each other. The
‘electric current’
running through their bodies only intensified as they continued
brushing their
tongues together, eventually getting accustomed to the feeling enough
for them
to seemingly wrestle inside their mouths. At certain moments, the
feeling would
get especially intense and one of them would involuntarily moan, the
vibrations
serving to enhance the pleasure that they were now experiencing.
Mason
didn’t have time to truly admit it,
but he was thoroughly enjoying what he was feeling. He accidentally
brushed his
crotch against Hunter, and after that, both boys began grinding their
bodies
against one another as they continued their tongue-frenzied embrace.
Soon,
Hunter began feeling an extremely
urgent sensation in his dick. At the same time, he felt its firmness,
its heat
and its desire to rub up against even more of Mason’s body.
He was already
hard, but he didn’t dare interrupt the kiss that was
pleasuring his very being
just to say what was already obvious. He desperately rubbed the flared
tip
across Mason’s skin as it brushed against a similarly-rigid
tube of flesh. He
looked down for a split-second to see—for the very first
time—the full extent
of his best friend’s stiff and throbbing penis. It looked
nearly identical to
his, no longer than his index finger, and as thick around as a nickel.
He
looked up at Mason and met the other boy’s eyes. Their looks
said everything
that their mouths were far too busy to say: “I
know that you’re hard. Don’t stop. Keep rubbing.
Keep licking. Do it again.”
Hunter
lost all track of time after that
point, so he didn’t even know how long they’d been
kissing. All he knew was that
the sensation suddenly stopped, leaving an agonizing void where the
pleasure
used to be. He saw Mason lean back against the wall and let his head
slump
forward, exhausted and breathless but still smiling contentedly. The
other
boy’s dick was still twitching angrily, begging for
attention, but it seemed
like his legs were too worn-out. Hunter let a tired laugh escape his
mouth. He
was also out of breath, but was too caught up in the moment to even
notice.
“That
. . . that’s definitely hard,” Mason
said with a goofy grin in-between raspy breaths. He let the grin linger
on his
face as Hunter beamed a wide smile in reply.
“Mason,
that felt good . . . really good. I
get it now. When it feels
that good, that’s when it’s
supposed to get hard!” Hunter announced happily,
pulling down on his impossibly-hard dick and making it slap back
against his
body after he released it.
“It
sure looks that way. If I’d known that
messing with our dicks felt that
good, we’d have been doing it every day!” Mason
replied with a giggle. “And now
we know for sure that your dick’s not
really broken.”
Hunter
stepped closer to Mason—who was now
seated on the floor with his back to the tiled wall—and
thrust his crotch at
him playfully, aiming his dick so that it was pointing right at
Mason’s face.
But then Mason suddenly grabbed the hard dick in front of him, much to
the
surprise of its owner.
“Mason!
Wha—?”
“One
more thing that we haven’t tried yet,
right?” Mason asked with a grin, with his tone turning rather
seductive despite
his childishly high-pitched voice. He tugged Hunter’s dick
closer, until it was
practically next to his mouth. “We need to make absolutely sure that your dick is
perfectly fine . . . ” Then he
looked up at Hunter one last time before putting roughly half of his
best
friend’s dick into his mouth.
“Mason!”
Mason
greedily sucked on the small member
into his mouth, engulfing it completely. Hunter felt his
friend’s lips touch
the smooth skin surrounding the base of his now-crazed erection, and
felt even
more vividly the hyperactive tongue that was feverishly licking away at
his
extra-sensitive glans. It seemed as though Mason was copying what
he’d done
during their kiss, but this time applying it to his pleasure-hungry
dick. It
was all that Hunter could do to keep standing during Mason’s
oral assault. He
placed both hands on the wall just to steady himself as Mason bobbed
his head
rhythmically on his most precious appendage. He didn’t even
mind the few times
that Mason’s teeth accidentally scraped his tip—the
temporary pain was easily
replaced with pleasure the instant that Mason regained his tempo.
“Uhhh
. . . uhhh . . . ahhh . . . .”
Hunter’s words had completely devolved into grunts and moans
of pleasure as the
sensation overwhelmed him. Never before in his young life had he even
imagined
anything like this amazingly delightful feeling. It was simply
unearthly—totally beyond this world. He felt like he could
fly off into space
and never come down . . . as if he could strike the planets themselves
with his
invincible ‘bat’ and make a ‘home
run’ around the galaxy. The infinite was
within his grasp and within his reckoning as long as Mason kept sucking
his
dick, as long as his loving, surprisingly cute, and most eager best
friend sent
him to new heights of euphoria.
“Gaaah!”
Hunter moaned throatily as he hit an entirely new plane of bliss. Mason
had
increased the pressure of his suction, squeezing almost all of
Hunter’s
delighted shaft inside is mouth and enveloping it in a warm, moist wall
of soft
flesh. Mason then bobbed his head, revealing that the combined motion
of his
mouth and tongue enabled an infinitely more pleasurable method of
jerking
Hunter’s throbbing dick.
After
only a few seconds of this, Hunter
reached his sexual plateau. He felt as if he had reached the peak of a
majestic
mountain, then jumped off, revelling in the rush of the sudden fall.
All of the
planets that he’d hit with his ‘stellar
bat’ coalesced and exploded in a
spectacular supernova a dozen times over. The agonizingly sweet and
infinitely
intense feeling pulsed through his dick with each spastic throb,
hitting the
roof of Mason’s mouth multiple times. Hunter’s dick
tried desperately to
release a wave of energy that didn’t exist, an explosion that
had yet any fuel
to burn. Hunter had achieved his first-ever orgasm, and it was more
splendid
and overwhelming than anything Hunter had ever experienced before.
When
Mason felt Hunter’s dick throbbing
even more powerfully than it had earlier, he instinctively stopped
sucking. He
let his friend just bask in the feeling, even though Mason himself had
yet to
experience it first-hand.
After
several minutes of just standing
still with his hands to the wall, Hunter backed away slowly. Mason
tightened
his lips around Hunter’s penis as if refusing to let go of
it, until it finally
came out with a resounding pop. Mason
then began urgently fisting his own still-erect member, thinking that
the
fantastic sensation that Hunter must have felt would happen to him as
well if
he only stimulated himself hard enough. Soon after that, Mason felt his
friend
sag to the floor beside him, leaning on his shoulder for support. There
was no
doubting the fact that Hunter was physically drained, judging from how
he now
seemed so spaced out.
“That
sure was something, huh?” Mason asked
while gazing over at Hunter.
“Nguuhh
. . . ”
“Well,
now that we know your dick’s
working, I guess that means I practically own your games for half a
year,
right?” Mason laughed, the playful teasing evident in his
tone. And all the
while that he was speaking, his hand was still busily pumping up and
down on
his dick.
“No
fair . . . ” Hunter groaned softly, his
strength still too depleted to be any more coherent.
“Well,
if you want, we can have a new deal.
Instead of letting me borrow your games . . . just suck my
dick
instead,” Mason offered, a grin forming on his lips.
Hunter
smiled wide as he replied, “Deal!” He
quickly bent down and took in his best friend’s impatient
boyhood.
Mason
sighed contentedly as he began to
feel his own bout of sexual bliss. Without missing a beat, he added,
“Every
day, for an entire year.”
Even
through the noise of the still-running
shower, Hunter’s reply was very audible.
“What?”
But
as the next few minutes were replaced
with wet slurps and boyish moans, it was clear that Hunter
didn’t really mind.
And as he sucked his best friend off, a single thought dominated
everything
else:
He was absolutely glad that his dick wasn’t broken after all.
—End—
Author’s Notes:
Hi there!
Thanks so much for reading this story of mine. I wrote this as
a
request a while back. I was given a premise to work with, specifically,
two ten-year-olds named Hunter and Mason get kinky in the showers after
a game of baseball. It was honestly hard for me to write because I'm
not used to writing about characters this young and I don't have a
solid idea about how they'd react to things like sex and stuff (my
forte is in older adolescent characters). I kinda just winged it, which
led me to that absurd 'broken dick' idea lol. Anyway, it seems like it
turned out well enough, and maybe some people might actually enjoy it.
I wanna give a shoutout to my friend Leo Fuentes, who has been my mentor and friend when it comes to writing. Without his help, I wouldn’t be who I am today, and this story definitely wouldn’t look as good as it does now.
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