Date: Mon, 11 Jun 2012 16:08:55 -0700 From: Karl Subject: The Family Camping Trip 4 (Revised) Thanks everyone for your feedback. For a day or two there was a different chapter 4 posted but I asked Nifty to take it down. They kindly agreed to do so. Why? you may ask. I felt the original chapter 4 took away from the story I was trying to tell. That is all I will say about that. Please remember that this story is the sole property of the author. It cannot be published, reproduced or copied without express written consent of the author. Legal crap: Please remember this is a story. It is not about what you should do next time you go camping and see to pre pubescent boys whispering near the showers. Also, please be of legal age for the area in which you live before you read this. If you're not, go read something more age appropriate you little horn dogs. That being said, I believe we're ready to start. ************************************************************************** The Family Camping Trip Chapter 4 As JW and I were walking toward the showers my mom came walkind down the path with my sisters. At first I started to pull away, but JW kept me close. "Oh, hi there," my mom said cheerily. "I see you four are back. Where's Jack?", she said, looking around for my dad.. Before I could think of anything to say, JW looked at her and said, "He and Tommy are just putting away the boat. Stevie wasn't feeling well so I brought him back up here." "Oh dear, I hope you're not getting sick," my mom said with a worried look on her face. "Just a little too much sun I think," JW said rubbing the top of my head with his paw. My mom started to ask another question but JW cut her off, "JP wanted to help Tommy with the boat. He said he'd be interested in getting a boat one day." My mom rolled her eyes. "You boys and your toys," she said laughing. "So, what have you and the girls been up to all day," JW asked, trying to get off the subject of my dad. "Well," she said looking at the girls, "we met two other little girls. While we were at the showers these girls were there with their moms. They'd been abandoned by their husbands too. So we spent the day playing cards while the girls played around the camp. We were talking about meeting up tomorrow but I wanted to find out what the four of you were up to." As she was talking my dad and Tommy were coming up the path. Tommy was laughing and my dad was smiling and shaking his head. When he looked up and saw my mom he froze. The girls went running over to him and each grabbed a leg. Dad just stood there staring at my mom. "Oh don't worry," my mom said. "I know all about it." The look of fear on my dad's face was unavoidable. "And you can just forget it," she said in a joking and chiding kind of way. "We are not going to buy a boat while you can leave me and the girls alone all day." "Sorry," JW said, "I let it slip. She asked where you were and I had to tell her about you wanting a boat." My dad visably relaxed. "Well, I guess there's no talking you into it, huh," he smiled. "That's right," my mom laughed. "So what have you been up to all day," my dad asked. My sisters started to tell him all about their new friends and how they wanted to play with them tomorrow and could they please stay at the camp again tomorrow. My dad just smiled and looked back up at my mom. "I'll let JW tell you all about it. Why don't you four get ready. I made hamburgers. They finally got in some supplies at the store so I bought a few things," my mom said grabbing the girls by the hand. "We'll see you in a little bit. Please don't take too long," she said, the three of them walking away. "We were just about to head to the showers," JW said with an evil grin. Dad looked down at me and smiled. I blushed. I didn't know what to do. He knew, didn't he? Tommy ran over to me and grabbed my hand. He pulled me with him toward the showers, again saving me from an awkward situation. I looked behind and saw my dad shaking his head a little as he and JW exchanged some whispered converstaion. JW laughed and wrapped an arm around my dad. My dad seemed to exhale and gave JW a wan smile. Tommy leaned into me and said, "Your dad and I had sooo much fun." I looked at him in a disbelieving sort of way and said, "What did you guys do?" "Well, after we fell asleep I woke up because I heard my dad and your dad kinda whispering. I tried to be really quiet and listened through the tent. Your dad was saying he wasn't sure about something, but my dad said he was pretty sure. Then he told him about us in the tent last night." I froze. "My dad knows about that?!" "It's no big deal," Tommy said as he bounced along. "Then your dad told him what happened on the hike," he continued, but I cut him off. "What did happen?", I asked, feeling my heart start to race again. "Well, your dad was standing there peeing," he reminded me. "Well, I walked around the trees and he sorta froze for a second. Then I unzipped my shorts and started to pee. He didn't put his dick away but was standing there just looking at me. I heard you and my dad walk up the path. Your dad and I just stood there with our dicks in our hands. I started playing with mine so it would get hard. Your dad started to put his away but then I stopped him. I put my hand on his hand. He started to tell me that 'You're a just a kid' and 'You don't want to do this' but he didn't push my hand away." I was feeling light headed. This was MY dad he was talking about? I couldn't believe it but I wanted, no I needed him to keep talking. "So then what happened?", I whispered. Tommy gave me an evil grin and said, "I moved his hand away and wrapped my hand around it and pulled on it a couple of times. He just dropped his hands down to his side. I said to him 'I'll stop if you want me to'. But he didn't say anything. Then he just leaned his head back. I bent over and put the head of his dick in my mouth. I could tell he liked it because he started breathing heavy and I felt it getting hard in my hand." I watched as Tommy readjusted himself. I noticed that my own dick started to get hard. "I couldn't believe how big it was getting. It was as big as my dads. I guess 'cause your dad is shorter I just figured it would be smaller," he said as if explaining a scientific theory. "I got down on my knees and pushed the skin back. He shivered a little, which made me even more excited. I could see a little drop of precum on the tip so I leaned forward and licked it off," he said in a way that sent shivers down my back. "When I did that your dad's hands came up from his side and grabbed my head. It freaked me out at first but he just gently pushed his dick into my mouth." "Did you put your lips over your teeth?", I asked. "Of course. How did you know...", he looked up at me then back at his dad. "You mean you and my ...", he said looking again at him then at me. I smiled sheepishly. He smiled and said, "I wanna hear all about it!" "Okay, okay. But first tell me what happened behind the trees," I pleaded. "Well, he started pushing his dick in my mouth. I felt it hit the back of my throat so I pretended to swallow which makes it go even further. Your dad groaned really loud. I'm surprised you didn't hear us," he said in a way that suggested he hoped we had. I just shook my head no. "Well, I got about half of it in my mouth and needed to breath but your dad was holding my head there. I tried to pull away but he just held my head there. Finally he let go," he said in a breathless way. "My dad did that to you? Were you scared?", I was a little shocked to hear my dad would do this. "At first it freaked me out a little, but then it started to get me more excited. I put my mouth around his dick again but this time he pushed in much faster. He did the same thing though. This time when I tried to pull away he let me. When I went down the third time he started to shake and I felt the head of his dick get even bigger. Then I felt his sperm going right down my throat. Like it was going right into my stomach. He just held onto my head and kept it there. When I really couldn't breath any more I pulled back and that's when it got on my face. It was still coming out. A few more spurts came out but I moved to the side. I thought I'd wiped it all off but I guess I hadn't." "Then what did you guys do?", I said hoping my dad had given Tommy a blowjob too. "Nothing. He just kept asking if I was okay. I stood up and we both zipped up our pants," he said. "Then I came running after you guys." "Oh," I said a little disappointedly. "So what happened between you and...", we were cut off. "All right you hens, stop your clucking and let's get showered," my dad said and pushed us forward. I hadn't even heard them behind us. I wondered how much they'd heard of Tommy's story. We walked toward the showers. When we got into the shower room someone was in the last stall. That only left three showers. I looked back at my dad who looked a little panicked. Tommy piped up, "Stevie and I will share one." He grabbed my hand and pulled me into a stall. My dad stood outside the stall watching us. Tommy looked up and saw him there. He stared right into my dad's eyes. He was smiling as he pulled down his shorts and exposed his hard boy dick. I watched as my dad's eyes as they followed his slender little body down to the point of Tommy's sexual arousal. Suddenly he looked up and over at me. He bacame flustered and quickly pulled the shower curtain closed. Tommy looked over at me and gave me his 'isn't this fun' smile. I felt my heart racing as I reached down and unbuttoned my shorts. I was hard as a rock again. Tommy looked me right in the eyes and I felt his cool hand on my turgid boy cock. I shivered. He leaned forward and kissed me. On the mouth. Just like earlier. But this time instead of freaking out I kissed him back. He pulled back just enough for me to see the giant grin on his face. He leaned into me harder and kissed me more passionately. I felt my arms wrap around his little waist. I wanted to merge our bodies together. I wanted to kiss him until I couldn't breath anymore. I guess we made more noise than I realized. I heard my dad clear his throat and then Tommy's dad said, "Alright boys. Let's get showered so we can go have some grub." I saw a little face poke in the shower. It was the boy Karl from earlier. I heard him say, "That's the boy I told you about daddy." I felt my face go red as Tommy looked at me. "Oh really?", I heard Karl's daddy say. He just smiled and pulled me under the water. We washed each others backs and then we washed each others fronts letting our hands linger on each others boy hardons. "C'mon Stevie. You're mom's made dinner and they're waiting for us," my dad said through the shower curtain. That shocked me back into the here and now. I looked at Tommy who smiled and gave me one final tug. We rinsed off and dried each other and pulled on our clothes. "Mmmmm. Nothing like a hot shower," JW said and stretched. "I could eat a horse," Tommy laughed and looked at my dad who blushed. "Oh, I need something from the tent," Tommy said as he ran back to the tent. In a few seconds he was back. We all headed to our camp where my mom had just finished getting everything ready. "Well, you boys look ready," she said smiling. My sisters ran up to my dad and were showing him the things they'd made out of string and sticks. My dad gave them appraising looks and told them how great they were. I watched as JW just smiled at the way my dad was with my sisters. You could tell he liked my dad. I felt a little of the ol' jealousy rising in me. I looked over at Tommy who was looking at me. He gave me a big toothy grin. He sat down next to me then leaned closer and whispered, "I think you're the greatest." Any kind of ill will I had toward my sisters disappeared instantly. How did he know what I was thinking? I wasn't sure how he knew, but I knew I wanted him to be my friend forever. I leaned back and said, "Thanks. I like you too." My mom looked over and said with the 'are you two plotting something' look, "Alright you two. Are you up to something?" "No Mrs. P. We were just gonna ask if I could stay here tonight," Tommy said with a smile. My dad looked up with a little bit of terror in his eyes. But my mom said, "I don't see why not. But it's gonna be a little tight in that tent." "I don't mind," said Tommy matter of factly with no sexual over tones at all. I felt my stomach turn a little. Did he plan on fooling around with my parents right there? Oh god. "Is it okay with you JW?", my mom asked. JW looked at my dad and said, "I'm okay with it." Mom said, "Alright then. She stood and went back into the tent and came out carrying a bag. "I was feeling a little naughty and bought this when I went to the store." She pulled out a bottle of wine. My dad and JW smiled at her. Then she said, "Or you two can drink these," and she smiled as she pulled out a six pack of my dad's favorite beer. Then my dad really did smile. "I'll take a beer," my dad said. "I figured as much," my mom laughed. "Which would you like JW?" He smiled sheepishly and said, "I think I'm gonna have a beer too." Mom shrugged, handed them each a beer and said, "More for me," and laughed. When we'd finished dinner and mom put the girls to bed she reached for the bottle and poured herself another glass of wine. Both my dad and I looked at her. She never had more than one glass of wine. Ever. She saw us looking and said, "It's vacation." Dad and I both laughed which made her laugh. As we were sitting there talking these two older men came by. One was like my grandpa's age and the other guy seemed a little older than my dad and was real tall. Taller than JW. "Hey there. Are you JW and JP?", they asked. My dad and JW looked at each other and you could tell they were wondering 'who the hell are these guys' but my dad said, "That's us." "This here is Jeff and I'm Bill," the taller man said with a heavy southern accent. "The Mrs' spent the afternoon together." Just then my mom sort of snapped to attention. "Oh that's right. Betty and Carla talked about you. Jeff, Bill, this is my husband, we're calling him JP for the purposes of this trip." She sounded a little drunk I thought. "And this is JW. He and his son are staying down a few tents. Would you like a glass of wine or a beer?" "No, thanks, ma'am," said the older guy. "The girls just mentioned that you guys had a power boat." "Oh yeah," my mom continued. "I said you should all go out fishing together." JW looked over at my mom, then at my dad, and true to the good natured guy that he was he said, "Why don't you join us tomorrow. We could go out early and do a little morning fishing." This seemed to make both men happy. "That'd be real nice. How early is early for y'all?", asked Bill. "How about 7am," my dad said, "That way we can be back by noon." Then he turned to my mom and said in a way that suggested 'paybacks are hell', "You won't mind cleaning and cooking them for us, will you honey?" My mom, getting his tone, laughed and said, "Oh, I guess. It's the least I can do." Bill said, "That's real nice of ya. We'll see ya at 7." They walked away talking. My mom looked at my dad and JW and said, "Sorry. We were just talking. I didn't think they'd really do it." JW shrugged and said, "Ah, what the hell. I've got the boat here. It'll be fun." He chuckled under his breath and said, "Plus, that accent cracks me up." My mom, who had by now finished the second glass of wine stretched and said, "I'm beat. Plus 7am is going to come pretty fast. I'm going to bed." Tommy did a theatrical stretch, smiled and said, "I'm tired too. Let's go to bed Stevie." He didn't even wait for a response. He grabbed my hand and pulled me into the tent. I heard my mom say, "You two don't stay up too late," to my dad and JW. "We won't be up that much longer," my dad said. Tommy had already peeled his cloths off and his boy boner was stabbing me in the side. As I was pulling my shirt over my head he stuck his hands onto my zipper and started unzipping my pants. There was no way our dads weren't hearing all of this. We were both naked now. I leaned over and grabbed Tommy's dick. He moaned really loud. I instantly said, "Shh. They'll hear us." Tommy smiled even bigger. He wanted them to hear us. He pushed me over on my back. The tent was just high enough that he was able to straddle me. I felt him rubbing his butt against my dick. It felt incredible. Tommy leaned down and reached into his shorts. He pulled something out but I couldn't quite tell what it was in the dark. He put whatever it was down and reached behind him. I felt the cool touch of his hand but it had something on it. It felt like baby oil. As he stroked my hardon and I couldn't help it. I moaned louder than I had intended. Tommy reached over and grabbed the bottle again. He put more in his hand and I expected to feel his hand wrap around my dick again but instead he put his hand behind himself. What was he doing? He reached around and once again I felt his hand on my dick. It felt so good. Then he leaned forward a little. When he started to sit up again I felt it. A warmth was closing in around my dick. Tommy breathed in deeply and froze for a minute. I thought maybe he was hurt. But then he lowered himself so that I could feel his butt cheeks resting on my hip bones. I was in heaven. I wasn't quite sure what to do next. Then Tommy used his legs to bring himself off my dick and little and then slid back down on it. I couldn't imagine anything else ever feeling better. I looked down and watched as his hand moved down to his own hard boy meat. He started to stroke himself. He started to pick up speed and animal nature took me over. I started thrusting my hips forward. Whenever he would start to pull up I would push in. I felt our flesh clapping together and became more aroused with each slap. I started to pick up speed but Tommy whispered in a desperate voice, "Slow down. I want this to last a little longer." We slowed down and now it was just a rhythmic grind. That's when I heard from outside the tent. "Fuck. That is getting me so hot." I wasn't sure who said it. It sounded so gutteral and raw. It served only to stir up me up and Tommy too. He started bouncing faster and I took that as my cue to speed up as well. We only lasted a couple of more seconds and I felt Tommy's sphincter tighten around my dick. He moaned and I felt the hot splashes on my chest. I started shaking and felt like I wanted to drive my dick right through him. I relaxed and felt him collapse on top of me. Eventually he raised himself up just enough so that our noses were touching. "That felt incredible," he said. "I'm so glad I got to do it with you first." "You mean you've never done it before?", I asked a little shocked that he seemed so good at it. "I used a cucumber once but I've never had a real one up my bum," he sighed and leaned back onto me. I laid there thinking about how wonderful it felt to have his weight on top of me and I heard his breathing start the soft, steady in and out of someone who's asleep. I was in heaven. I felt myself drift off to sleep with the wet, warm feeling of my 'boyfriends' cum between us. *********************************************************** Please remember this is a work of fiction. Also, please remember that Nifty needs our help with donations. It's easy to donate AND it's tax deductable. If you have any questions or comments I love to hear from the guys that I get off. You can write me at: karlsfriend@gmail.com