Date: Wed, 5 Nov 2003 14:29:48 -0800 (PST) From: Mr Swannie Subject: Family Fun Chapter 13 I smiled at him and said, "Don't make a mess and don't tell your brothers, I want them in school today." Disclaimer: The following story is FICTIONAL. It contains descriptions of sexual activities between teenage boys. If you are not over 18 years of age, or if you find this type of story offensive, or viewing this material is illegal where you live, then please don't read it! Family Fun By: Mr. Swannie cumsoakedface@yahoo.com www.geocities.com/cumsoakedface/index.html I hope you all enjoy this story, but remember it is a fantasy and in these fantasies there are no Aids, HIV, crabs, syphilis, gonorrhea, genital warts or such but they are in the real world so when you are fucking and think about these stories please make sure there is a condom on your cock. Play safe and continue to read these fantasies for a long, long time Family Fun Chapter 13 I walked out to the car thinking about how my life had changed ever since I came home that faithful night and found Sam and his buddies at that first pool party. I had to admit it had all turned out for the best. I had always loved my son but now we where so close it was amazing to me. It felt like my sons where so connected to me now in so many ways. I just loved the way that it felt. I was a happy man in a great mood as I drove to work at break neck speeds so not to be late for our pre meeting before the big meeting. I got into work and Carl was already in his office with Betty our co-worker that we had agreed could sit in with us. Betty was one hell of a knock out and she knew it too. She sat there coming on to Carl as I walked into the office and while Carl looked flattered I knew she was barking up the wrong tree. I on the other hand would give her a good fucking. It had been a long time since I fucked a woman. But this wasn't the time or the place to think about that. The task at hand was to get our ideas together for the presentation. We had coffee and Danish while we threw around and firmed up our ideas. Before we knew it, it was time for the meeting. We all went in and our ideas where the talk of the meeting. It lasted way too long but it finally finished and we all stumbled out in a meeting daze. "What are you guys doing for lunch?" Betty asked as we walked down the hall towards our offices. I smiled and said; "My son and I think a few of his friends are coming by to bring me to lunch." Carl's cock leapt in his pants and his hands moved quickly to cover it. Betty didn't seem to notice, but smiled and asked, "Will I be able to meet them?" "Sure." I said, "I have to call him know and make sure everything is still firm, but when they get here we'll come by your office and say hi." "Great." She said with a sexy smile, "I have to see if they are as cute as their Daddy." With that her hand brushed against my crotch, with made my cock move. She smiled and looked at Carl and asked, "Are you doing it with them?" Carl's face turned pink and he stammered, "What?" Betty looked at him closely trying to figure out why he responded the way that he did, "Lunch." She said with a smile, "Are you doing lunch with them?" Carl seemed to relax and said, "Oh...I don't know we hadn't talked about it." "I'm not sure what we are doing yet." I said with a smile. And walked on to my office. It was maybe an hour latter when lunch rolled around. I was in my office when I heard Sam say, "Hey Dad ready for lunch?" I smiled and turned around to see Sam standing at the door wearing a pair of tight, tight, biker shorts. They where a light blue color and you could see the full length of Sam's cock which looked to be semi-erect, and his large egg shaped balls. He was wearing a half t-shirt that shown off his muscular six pack and the bottom of his chest. I stood there with my mouth open and my cock hardening. "What are you wearing?" I finally asked. "I'm sorry." Sam said with a grin, "but I lost a bet and have to wear this when ever I go out all day." Sam said with a grin. "Sam I work here." I said thinking about my co-workers for the first time. "I know dad." Sam said, "But I lost." He said as if that said it all. "A few friends are down stairs waiting for us. We're taking you out for something to eat then a great fuck, so let's get going." I moved to Sam and as I reached him I shook my head and squeezed his cock through the stretchy fabric. His cock started to push hard against the fabric making it stretch out in a small pop tent. "Let's get going." I told him with a smile and we headed out into the main office area. "Bill." I heard a woman's voice call out. I knew who it was and knew I would have a hard time explaining what Sam was wearing and why he was...well hard. It was Betty and as Sam and I continued for the door she called out again, "Bill." I stopped and turned to see her coming towards me. "You thought you could get away without introducing me to your son?" I took a deep breath and a small sigh, "Betty of course not." I said with a big smile, "This is my oldest son, Sam." Sam stopped and turned around and faced her putting out his hand to shake hers and smiled. "Sam this is Betty, we work on the same team." Betty smiled big as she shook Sam's hand and her eyes widened as she took in my son's beauty. She smirked and her eyebrow rose as she looked at his hard package pushing against the fabric of his shorts. "Nice to meet you Sam." Betty said smiling at Sam, she then looked at me and looked me up and down and said, "Bill I find it hard to believe you have such a big son." She said and looked at my crotch then back to my face. I acted like I didn't understand what she meant and I said, "I know it amazes me how much he's grown." Sam not missing a beet said, "And I'm getting bigger still." He raised and eyebrow and smiled at Betty. I was dieing. He was killing me right then and there and we all knew it. Betty smiled bigger and took a step closer to Sam and said in a low voice, "If that thing gets any bigger than that then that is amazing." I couldn't believe what was going on they where flirting with each other. Sam smiled and said, "Well than I am quite amazing then. You really shouldn't take my word for it though. My friends and I where going to take my dad out for lunch out at the park, nothing fancy just sandwiches and some sun. Would you like to join us?" "Sam I'm sure Betty has better plans already." I said with a smile. Betty started to speak and Sam reached down to his cock and adjusted it in his shorts right there in front of Betty. He pulled it straight up so the head of his still hardening cock was right at the top near the waistband, "Oh come on," he said in a low sexy voice, "I'm sure you'll find it filling if nothing else." Betty reached out and stroked Sam's cock right there in front of me and anyone else who was walking by. "Well I haven't had a truly filling meal in a while," she said with a sexy smile, "I'd love to let me grab my bag." Betty smiled at me and walked off to her office to get her bag. I could tell my face was red and I asked Sam, "What the hell are you doing?" Sam smiled and said; "I think I'm going to fuck a sexy woman for lunch today." He gave me a sexy smile and said, "Have you had her yet?" I looked around to make sure no one was around and said, "No. Everyone in this place has been trying to get some from her but to no avail." Sam smiled and said, "Well then this is your lucky day Dad." Just then Carl came around the corner going out for lunch. "Hey Carl." Sam said with a big smile. Carl smiled seeing Sam again and said, "Hey Sam how's it going?" Just then Carl looked at what Sam was wearing and you could see Carl's body tens up and his cock swirl around in his pants. "We're going to go to lunch in the park, care to come?" Sam asked. Carl smiled and said, "Sure sounds good." Betty walked up with her bag and said, "All ready." "Ok then let's go." Sam said to all of us. Betty and Sam walked out together and Carl looked at me and said low, "She's coming too?" I nodded and you could tell Carl was disappointed. I knew what he was thinking and the fact was I had a deep down feeling he was in for something completely different today. We got down to the road and leaning against the car was Joey standing there in a short pair of cut offs and tank top, Leo and Lance the two identical twins I had the last time I went to the park with the boys. Lance the one with the longer shaggy hair he had on a pair of farmer jeans with no shirt on and they weren't buttoned on the side so you could see he had nothing on but the jeans and boots. His brother Leo with the blond crew cut had on a pair of torn jeans and a wife better tank top. Through the holes in the jeans you could see he had no underwear on and his beautiful tanned bubble butt shown through the large holes in the back. Betty looked at the boys and you could see her eyes flair when she saw them. "Betty and Carl this is Leo and his brother Lance and Joey. Guys both Carl and Betty are coming with us for lunch in the park. Joey smiled big and looked Betty up and down and said, "Great." "Well I'll take my car and we'll follow you." I said looking at how many of us there where. "There's no need for that." Betty said, "We can take my car I have an SUV and we will all fit in that." We all walked over to our parking lot and walked up to a large dark green SUV that had to have put her back a bit. Betty got into the driver's seat and Sam jumped in next to her. Lance got in the back seat all the way in the back and Carl followed him. Leo got in the seat between the other two and I followed with Joey getting in next to me. We pulled out and started for the park. When we got there we parked on the far side away from all the other cars and parked. We all got out and Leo and Lance started to walk away from the park towards the road. "Where are they going?" Betty asked. "There's a place that sells great sandwiches right around the corner and they'll get us our lunch. They'll meet us at our lunch spot. Sam said as we started to move towards the park. Straight ahead of us there was a nice open space with no one in sight. To the right was the start of the wooded area of the park. As we walked and talked about nothing I saw both Sam and Joey checking Betty out then smiling to each other. Sam winked and I knew to brace myself for something big. I was right. Sam stopped while talking to Betty, "You know what I love about this park most is how free you can feel here." He said and with that he pulled his half t-shirt over his head and then pulled the waistband of his shorts all the way down, and stepped out of his shorts. Sam stood up holding on to his clothes and smiled at Betty who was looking at my naked sixteen-year-old son with his almost completely hard cock bobbing in front of him. Betty's eyes where on fire as she took in the sight of his gorgeous naked body. "I agree." Joey said with a smile and started to strip right there and then. He pulled off his t-shirt over his muscular frame. Betty's mouth was watering as well as Carl's; well I guess mine was too. He the started to pull off his shorts and when he stood back up with them in hand he was wearing only his shoes and a jock strap. His muscular frame and his hard bubble butt where only made to look better by the jock strap. His hard eight plus inches pushed against the tattered fabric of his some what white jock. It wasn't dirty but older from use. Betty looked at him and then back at Sam. She reached out and stroked Sam's hard eight and a half inch cock and smiled then looked back at me. "I like you son and his friends." She said with a smile. "Why don't you take that off?" Betty asked Joey. Joey smiled at her and said, "Oh, I never take off my own jock its bad luck, I always have some one else do it for me even if it means making a team mate do it." With that Joey started to walk in front of us his hard ass flexing in front of us. Both Carl and Betty let out a soft moan. Betty turned and looked at Carl and raised her eyebrow and smiled, "Oh." She said to him and winked. Carl looked like she was about to shoot him. He quickly looked to the ground and we all started out to follow Joey to a nice somewhat shady spot near the trees but still in the grass. When we reached it we saw that there where two picnic tables right at the tree line and Carl, Betty and I started for them. The three of us sat down facing away from the table looking at Joey and Sam who where talking about us to each other so we couldn't hear. "So is your cock as big as you son's?" Betty asked with a smile. Fuck it I thought Sam made sure she was going to know everything about us soon enough anyways, I smiled and said, "As big as one and bigger than the rest." I said and winked at her. Betty smiled and said, "So Carl how big is your cock?" Carl cleared his throat not sure what to say when Sam said it for him. Sam walked up to the table right in front of Carl and smiled waved his cock at Carl's face and said, "You must be what? Around seven, seven and a half inches." Sam took hold of his cock and stroked it in Carl's face and said, "But it's not the size, he knows what to do with it. It's nice and thick and uncut." Betty smiled big knowing Sam and Carl had to have seen each other naked before. "Suck it." Sam said to Carl. Carl's heart was pumping so hard that I could feel it in my chest. Carl's face didn't move but his eyes darted in Betty's direction and he shook his head no. Sam smiled at him and said, "What just because Betty's here? Betty you don't mind if Carl sucks my cock first, do you?" Betty's smile brightened and she said, "No go right ahead." Again Carl shook his head no. Sam leant in his cock inches from Carl's face and he said in his ear, "I only offer it twice and if you say no it will never be offered again. I hate rejection, besides there's always a ton of people looking to get it inside them." Carl looked over at Betty and the looked at Sam, "She already knows." Sam said. "Last chance." Carl grabbed hold of Sam's cock at the base and held on tight. He brought his mouth to Sam's cock head and as he opened his mouth up he looked at Betty, who had moved up on her seat to get a better view as she smiled. Carl looked her in the eyes as Sam's cock head started to push between Carl's lips and into his hot hungry mouth. Soon Carl was sucking Sam's cock like the professional cocksucker he was. His head was bobbing up and down on Sam's cock as he sucked my son off like a mad man. I looked over to Betty who had her hand under her skirt as she played with herself. I smiled at her and reached under her skirt and started to play with her pussy. After a few minutes of this Leo and Lance came to the site with the food and drinks. They put them down and Sam pulled his cock from Carl's throat. "Wow you are a great cock sucker." Sam said as he walked around to the other side of the table. "Hey lets eat." Sam said. Betty, Carl and I looked at each other then turned around on the table and faced the food. Sam sat opposite me and Leo and Lance on each side of him. Joey got up on the table and sat crossed leg and we all started to eat our sandwiches. I know this sounds strange but the food was really good, and I kept think why hadn't I ever know about this place. As we ate I saw that Betty was checking out Joey's hard ass and thick legs. Joey was laughing and talking with the guys. Betty ate about half her sandwich and put it down. "That was really good." She said. "I'll have to go there again." She reached up and stroked Joey's ass and let her hand slid over his thigh to the front of the pouch of his jock. She stood up and let her hand slid under his jock and you could see her hand sliding over and groping his balls and then his cock. Joey smiled and continued to eat his lunch. Betty looked up at his face and asked, "How old are you?" Joey smiled and said, "Sixteen." Betty looked at him and smiled and looked over at me and said, "They're children." "Yes." I said drinking the last of my soda, "Children with huge cocks." Betty turned and faced Joey her hand still playing under the jock, "Have you ever fucked a woman?" All the boys started to laugh. Joey had a huge smile on his face, "Ya, a few." "Really?" Betty asked still playing with his balls. "Really." Joey said with a smile, "A few woman, a few girls, a few boys, a few men." Betty stood all the way up in her seat as she pulled Joey's cock to full harness. "So you'll fuck anything?" Joey though about it for a moment and then smiled, "I haven't done a dog." Betty smiled and said, "You shouldn't knock it till you try it. I have a great Dane named Bruce who is a God send." No one knew if she was kidding or not then again no one seemed to care. "What women have you fucked with your big thick cock?" Joey swung his legs around so he was sitting right in front of Betty with his legs on each side of her. Betty started to pull down his waistband of the bulging pre-cum stained jock as Joey said, "Well my history teacher is a good fuck." "No she's more of a good head kind of woman." Sam said and both Leo and Lance nodded their heads. "That's true." Joey said as his hard cock sprang out of his jock. "The lady on the corner of our street is a real good fuck, but she's a bit older she's in her fifties." "I hope I have a stud like you fucking me when I'm in my fifties." Betty said as she tugged his balls free from the jock strap and pulled it off his legs over his feet and tossed it to the ground. "There's the crossing guard at the school. My father's secretary what a great fuck she is. And of course you can't forget mom." Betty was stroking Joey's cock while my fingers played with her snatch. Betty had put her face to Joey's cock when he said his Mom and she stopped and looked up at him. "You birth mother?" She asked. "Hey like we all say if you can't fuck your family than what good are they." Joey said with a wink to Sam. Sam got up on the table in front of me and knelt there stroking his cock. "Daddy?" he said in a sexy voice. I knew what they wanted and I would be dammed if I didn't give it to them. I grabbed my son's cock and started to suck him off with all my fatherly love. I heard Betty moan and I looked over as she started to suck on Joey's large cock head her eyes on Sam and I. I started to stand and undress while keeping my mouth on my boy's cock at all times. I could feel hand all around me undressing me and I soon found myself buck naked sucking off my son in the park with my co-workers. I could feel the warm breeze against my skin as hands slid over my naked ass and around to my stiff eight and a half inch cock. I pulled off Sam's cock and looked around. Betty was naked and being fucked like a dog by Joey on the grass to the side of me. She had a great body and I knew why every one wanted it. Behind me was Carl wearing only a jock strap with Leo fucking his ass and Lance fucking his face. Leo was the one who was playing with my ass and cock while he fucked Carl. I looked over to Betty again and she would look from Joey fucking her to the boy's fucking Carl to Sam and me. After a few minutes Sam got off the table and had Lance pull his cock from Carl's mouth and had me shove mine in. I was in a doggy style position ass in the air and on all fours. Carl's head bobbing under me sucking my hard cock. I looked over and saw that Lance's cock was aimed at my mouth and I started to suck him in as I felt Sam's cock starting to shove into my ass. I so loved being fucked and I really loved being fucked by my sons. I was being fucked by both ends while my cock was bathed in Carl's mouth. After a bit. I felt Sam's cock pull out and I heard Joey say, "Switch." It was Joey's cock shove into my ass next and some how he seemed it fit oh so right. I could feel his muscular legs against the back of my legs ass he slapped his balls against my ass. I was so loving this lunchtime with my co-workers and the boys. I heard Betty moaning and looked over to see her on her back and Sam fucking his stiff long boy cock in and out of her cunt. I was soon taking Lance's cock back down my throat as Joey fucked me black and blue. Joey pulled out and so did Lance. I was pulled to my feet by Joey and led back to the table. He bent me over the table so my ass was in the air. Next to me Carl was placed in the same position and next to him Betty. The boys, Joey, Leo, Lance and Sam all started to take turns fucking our holes then they would swap off. One cock after another filled my ass and there boy nuts would slap my ass. I looked over to Carl and saw he was in heaven. Betty looked like a woman possessed with the powers of sex. All four boys had fucked me at least five times and when Joey pulled out and Lance moved over to me I smiled and bent him over the table and pile drove my cock into his ass. He started to moan loud and I saw that Carl looked over and saw it wasn't me still there. When the boys all swapped, I moved over to wait in line as Leo fucked his twin brother's ass and Joey fucked Carl, and Sam fucked Betty's twat. When they swapped again I took my hard cock and aimed it at Betty's ass hole. I spit on her ass and then my cock and started to wedge it in her. She let out a painful moan and her head spun around to look to see who was fucking her virgin ass. I shoved and she bit her lip and thrashed her head around as my balls slapped he ass. I started to pound her ass hole harder and harder and she took it like a man. We all swapped again and I started to fuck Carl's ass and Sam started to fuck Lance's ass. Lance let out a loud moan as Sam started to pound his ass. I saw Betty thrashing around and saw that Leo had fucked her ass too. I started to fuck Carl nice and hard as the three fuckies moaned as there ass's where fucked nice and hard. I then took over fucking Lance again and he moaned nice and loud. I looked at my watch and knew we didn't have too much time left. We swapped again and when I got up to Betty I saw that I had started a tradition and Sam was fucking Betty's ass with his stiff eight-inches of boy cock. I got up on the table and placed my cock at Betty's mouth and said, "Suck it." Betty opened her mouth and started to swallow my cock while Sam fucked her ass. I looked at Leo fucking his brother and Joey fucking Carl and said, "Time to shoot." Sam, Leo and Joey all held firm to their lover's Asses and started to fuck hard and I started to shove my cock in and out of Betty's mouth. I leant over and kissed my son's mouth in a passionate kiss as we shared our first woman. I could feel my balls lifting and as soon as Betty started to play with my balls and ass with her hands I started to shoot my load into her open mouth. Stream after powerful stream of cum flew into her greedy mouth as she sucked and swallowed my load. I pulled out at the end and shot a nice creamy load all over her face. She looked even better covered in my cum. I looked up to see Sam's head thrust back then forwards as my boy filled Betty's ass with his boy cream. He pulled out and I pushed Betty's face towards his cock as a stream of boy love shot over her nose and chin. She opened her mouth and took my son's cock in her mouth as she swallowed the last of his cum. Leo started to grunt, "Ya fucken take my load..." over and over and started to shoot his load into his brother's butt. His face was so great as he shot more and more cum inside his brother's ass. It looked so hot seeing twins fucking like this. Joey fucked Carl harder and harder until it felt like he was moving the table with each thrust. Carl was sweating and moaning with each powerful thrust. Joey screamed out loud, "Fucken Ya." And started to shoot his load deep inside Carl's' ass. Joey was holding onto the back of Carl's jock and as he fucked his cum into Carl's guts it looked like he was riding a horse. Joey kept pounding Carl's as even after he had shot the last of his load. He pulled his cock out and it glistened with his cum covering it. I called for Leo and Joey to come over and had Betty suck there cum cover cocks clean. She did this with excitement. Lance and Carl stood up looking very sore and smiling. I walked over to Carl and had him sit down with his legs spread wide I licked his balls and stood up and called Betty over. Carl looked a bit nervous when Betty stood naked in front of him. I whispered in her ear, "Sit on his cock." Carl's beautiful uncut cock stood like a tower from his crotch. His foreskin was stretched back over the head and it looked so good my cock was back hard as steel. Betty smiled at me and swung her legs over Carl's waist and taking his cock in her hands she stuffed his cock inside her pussy. I had Lance face fuck Carl while Betty fucked herself on his cock. While it was going on I whispered in Betty's ear, "You're the first woman and the only woman Carl will ever be with. He has never had a woman you are it. You wet pussy is the only one he was ever been in." This was driving Betty nuts and she started to scream out an orgasm as she fucked herself harder and harder. It subsided and Sam and Joey started to fuck her mouth at the same time two cocks down her throat at the same time. I squeezed in and aimed my cock at Betty's cunt stuffed with Carl's cock. I pushed my head into the tight hole and it soon popped in and slid against Carl's cock. As soon as he felt my cock inside her against his, his cock got rock hard. Out two cocks filled her cunt and soon she had both of us all the way in her cunt while both Joey and Sam's cock slid against each other's inside her mouth. Leo and Lance started to fuck Carl's mouth at the same time and soon we where all a big pile of flesh fucking away at each other. Betty started to gurgle another orgasm and we fucked. Soon Carl was shooting his first load of cum inside a woman's cunt and all over my cock. I pumped a few more times and sucked her nipples and started to shoot another load inside her all over both Carl's and my cock. I pulled out and watched as Lance shot his load into Carl's mouth and all over his brother's cock. Lance pulled his cum covered cock from Carl's mouth and smiled at his twin and said, "You want some?" Leo pulled his cock out of Carl's mouth and showed his cock was covered in his brother's cum. They smiled at each other and got down on the ground in a sixty-nine position and started to suck each other off. Sam and Joey got off Betty and Betty got off Carl. We all looked at each other and smiled. "Now that's was a filling lunch." Betty said playing with Sam and Joey's cock. "I told you, you would like it." Sam said smiling at her. I handed Betty her clothes and Betty, Carl and I started to get dressed. We all jumped when we heard a bellowing deep voice coming from over us. "Well what do we have here?" We all turned to see two park rangers on horses staring down at us. Betty was dressed. I had my pants on and that was it. Carl was in his jock and his shirt and that was it, the four boys where all buck-naked. I was scared shitless as where my co-workers. The two Park Rangers smiled at Sam and Joey and one said, "You know what we said we would do if we ever caught you here naked again." Sam smiled and laid down on the table and spread his legs pulling them up to his chest, "Yes officer." He said with a smile. Joey smiled and sat next to Sam and played with Sam's sphincter and said, "Why do you think we came back?" Betty, Carl and I looked at each other not knowing what to do or what was going on. The Park ranger looked at us and said, "I guess you need a lesson too?" "No." Sam said with a smile. "You'll have to let them off with a warning this time they have to get back to work." The other Park Ranger got off his horse and walked over to us. He was at least six feet five inches tall with a big mustache and big broad shoulders and a bulge in his pants that maid our eyes bulge. "Ok. I guess we can let you go this time but just keep in mind we patrol this area every day at lunch and again at five so if we find you naked in public or fucking around you'll have to pay the fine." With that he grabbed his large crotch. "We could stay a bit longer couldn't we?" Carl said with a smile. "I wish we could." Betty said licking her lips, "but we have a presentation to get ready. You say you come back around here at five?" She asked with a grin. The Ranger smiled and said, "Yes we do." "So if I came out here a six I'd be all alone tonight then?" She asked. He smiled at her and said, "You know we might be late tonight and not get here until six." "Well I hope the fine is a stiff one, it's the only way I'll learn." Betty said and smiled; "I think I'll come back for a walk tonight." "Well then we'll see you then." The ranger said. Joey and Sam walked over to us. "Dad Lance is going to go back with you to bring the car back, I'll see you tonight." Carl started to put his pants on and Joey stopped him. "I can't believe I didn't notice." Joey said with a laugh, "This is the jock we let you take home last night." He and Sam laughed. "You like wearing smelly used jocks do you?" Joey said pulling his cock out so the Ranger could get a look. "You had better wear it everyday. Both Betty and Bill ask to see it and you show them you have it on. If you don't lets just say you wont be happy." Carl put on his pants and we started for the car. Sam called out to us, "Dad invite Betty to the party this weekend I think she will like it." We got in the car and Betty said, "What party?" I smiled and said, "Well according to the boys there's going to be an incest sex party this weekend. I guess he thought you would like to come along. You can invite someone that you think would have a good time at it." We started down the street and Betty said, "Could I bring my son?" "You have a son?" Both Carl and I said together. "Yes he's seventeen, I had him when I was very, very young." She smiled. "The only thing is he doesn't know I'm a swinger." "If you tell us where he hangs out and a photo of him we can hook up with him and invite him without him knowing you'll be there?" Lance said from the back seat. Betty got a sexy smile on her face and said, "Ok. I guess we'll be partying then." She looked at Carl in the back seat and asked, "Will you be there stud?" I answered, "Oh, He'll be there." We drove to the office in quite all of thinking about what was going to be cumin next. MORE TO CUM When I ask for feedback it is my asking about the story line. I don not need to know what is spelled wrong or if my grammar is off, I don't want to read it so please if my writing bothers you just don't read any more and that will cut out all the problems. I am not a professional writer and I do have dyslexia so keep it about the story line only please. Please come and visit my new web page for my stories, photos, and more at www.geocities.com/cumsoakedface/MAINPAGE.html You can write to me about the story line to cumsoakedface@yahoo.com