Date: Wed,  6 Jul 2005 08:40:48 -0700
From: Wishus Teglin
Subject: Stupid Johnny, M/b, Chapters 11 & 12, with Epilogue.

For the one or two who have asked me to complete the story, I submit this
rough sketch for the final chapters.  It is VERY unlikely that I will ever
actually write the chapters.  That which could be will never be.  I have
accepted that fact.  The passion for telling the story of 'what if' has
gone.

I had two chapters in mind to complete the story:

Chapter 11

Piotr and Jasio undertake their evening journey down to the collective.

On the way Jasio sees the symbols carved upon the cliffside, speculates on
their meaning and origin, begins to place everything Babcia has told them
into historical context.

They arrive at the collective furtively and park at the same place as
before.  It is not yet dark enough to enter directly, so they have a very
sensuous, gentle, romantic time together, piotrek lying over Jasio on the
front seat, hugging him, rubbing their dicks together.  They kiss long and
passionately.

They are interrupted by Leon and his minions, who remove them from the car.
They are tied together, back to back, in Leon's storage shed.

Jasio cold and afraid, desolate. Piotr attempts to soothe him with a tale
of lost youth - essentially the story of his time with Stefan in the late
'30s.

Leon forces them up and into his home.  He's half drunk, has a young girl
with him.  Orders Piotr to fuck the girl.  Piotr refuses.  Leon holds a gun
to the girls head.  Piotr tries, but cannot get an erection.  Leon laughs,
says it must be that Piotr only goes for boys.  Orders him to fuck Jasio.
Again the threat to the girl, so Piotr attempts it.  Easiy is aroused by
Jasio's naked form, but attempts to tell Jasio how terrible he feels about
it being this way their first time.  Leon explods, demands an immediate
rape.  Jasio takes command subtly, manipulates Leon, reassures Piotr.
Jasio asks to suck Leon, while Piotr prepares to take Jasio doggie style.

At the moment of penetration, with Leon at the height of arousal and
distraction, Jasio grabs his balls, bites his dick.  Piotr is quick enough
to disarm Leon.  They disable Leon.

Return to the shed, where they find Jasio's family treasure chest.  Take it
and return to the car.

Leon had had the car rendered inoperative, by jerking out the spark plug
cables.  They are disconsolate, but again Jasio takes command, wants to
know what is wrong with the car, can it be fixed.  Piotr explains as much
as he can.  Leads jasio to understand about the firing mechanism.  Jasio
understands enough about electricity to be able to comprehend, retrieves a
stash of copper tubing he had hoarded.  They laboriouosly attach the tubing
as substitute firing cables, manage to get the firing sequence just right
soon enough, and are able to drive back up into the mountains.

Chapter 12

Next morning they find that several men and boys have arrived.  All
devotees of The Way.  Important, influential men - bankers, government
officials, military officers - Captain Rudenko among them.  They were
summoned to meet Jasio and to learn if he had retrieved his treasures,
among them an essential item for their rites of The Way.

It's another key.  A massive key, which allows them to enter the caves up
within the mountain.

The caves are analogous to the grotto in Ganymede's 'Platonic Love.'  The
secrets that Ganymede alluded to in his story are revealed in this one, as
the men and boys procede to enact the rites of their boylove society.
There are ancient murals on the walls of the caves, informing them of the
rites.

The rites end with each couple in the pools in the caves, making love,
consummating their union.

Piotr and Jasio perform their rites, discretely witness the consummation of
the others, and are last to enter the pools.  There are two conjoined
circular pools, fed by the warm springs, with murals on the bottom of the
pools also.  There the two consummate their own union.

Later in the afternoon they discuss what must be done next - escape of
Piotr.  Jasio of course will go with him.  With Captain Rudenko's help,
they are able to use a brief window in the security over Polish skies, make
their way to the airfield nearby, take a plane and fly it out across the
Baltic.

the story ends with the two in the cockpit of the plane, Piotr explaining
the dangers involved - the risk of radar detection.  Jasio analyzes the
problem, pictures it in his mind, understands how flying low will keep the
radar waves from hitting their plane.

The last words of the story, midst the trepidation of the escape, Jasio
asks Piotr to tell him the story again, about little Piotrek and Stefan.

Epilogue

Jasio returns 4 years later from America, to a free Poland.  Reclaims his
birthright and quietly reopens the path to The Way.