Date: Sun, 1 Jan 2006 19:22:45 -0800 (PST) From: Steam Train Subject: Alternative Deterrence Chapter 1 Alternative Deterrence. By Steam Train (steam_t2000@yahoo.com) Introduction: This fantasy is a version of my original story `Juvenile Deterrence'. It contains older characters in a similar but not identical plot. The original story and thus this version is an attempt on my behalf to combine some of the very common concepts and themes raised in the erotic writings of numerous writers. Themes such as `Naked in School', `Nudie Judie', the `Police Strip Search' and not forgetting the `Medical Examination'. Overriding all this of course is the concept of slavery, my favourite fantasy universe theme. I will acknowledge specific writers or groups of writers at the end of chapters where I have drawn on their work to formulate the base structure of the chapter. These are writers whose works I have enjoyed and admired. Enjoy, Preamble: The economic reforms introduced many years ago by President Shelley had long ago bought about the return of a "normal" life to the bulk of the population. For about fifteen percent of the population however it had meant a radical change in existence. The poor, long term unemployed and the criminally convicted were after the reforms mandatarily placed in servitude for life. Officially the acts that set up the reforms referred to the process as `Servitude' however everyone referred to the participants as slaves. It was cheaper to provide adequate food and housing for slaves rather than for the poor and the long term unemployed who were previously on welfare or the criminals who had to be kept in prisons and of course enslavement made it easy to stop them continuing to breed and adding to the problem. President Shelley had set up a system that clearly differentiated between the rights of those citizens who remained free and those who through enslavement lost their freedom. The free citizens were still able to make their own life decisions; slaves on the other hand had their life decisions made up for them by their owner or masters. There was now a clear delineation in the status of a citizen and a slave. The laws that applied to citizens did not apply any longer to slaves. Slaves were now items of property just like livestock. The owners and masters were required by law to look after their property and ensure they were adequately watered and fed and that the slaves treatment not sadistic, but that was the limit of their responsibility. Free citizens no longer had to worry about set working hours, unions, holidays or wage demands as far as slaves were concerned. Major body modifications and alterations like castration or body piercing for slaves was allowed upon legal authorization, provided it could be shown that the modifications or alterations were required for the better performance of the slave. Slaves now did nearly all the `blue collar' jobs that had been done previously by free citizens. Slaves worked the production lines, collected the garbage, kept the streets clean, delivered the mail, and when you saw delivery trucks coming and going you knew that slaves would unload the goods. The slave reforms of President Shelley had solved the problem of what to do with criminals and vagrants but it did not address the anti social behaviour of the youth of the community. The authorities soon realised this problem and President Shelley had legislation passed that authorised the states to sentence juveniles aged between ten and fifteen under a new initiative called the `NEWDD'' Program for Juvenile Deterrence. Over the years particularly at the urging of Senator Michael F Wright, Democrat New York and his mother the political activist Mrs Jaclyn Wright the age range was extended to define Juveniles as aged between ten and under twenty one years of age. They had campaigned successfully that the original slave laws were too harsh and that a `half way house' was needed. For all but major offences the `Juvenile' could be sentenced into the Juvenile Deterrence programme instead of straight into slavery These NEWDD juvenile slaves could be seen like their permanent counterparts working away in their spare time serving out their sentence performing community service projects. The only differences being that they were unlike their decently dressed permanent counterparts almost totally naked at all times, they were younger and there were legal limits on the sexual use and types of punishment applicable to the temporary juvenile slaves. NEWDD juvenile slaves were not broken in spirit to the same extent as adult slaves but their totally humiliating and embarrassing experiences in the temporary slavery of NEWDD juvenile deterrence usually resulted in very upright law abiding young citizens emerging from the scheme. End Preamble. Chapter 1: Caught. It was a sunny Saturday afternoon and Owen and Vicki Green and their three children Daniel, Eric and Melissa were cutting through Poulton Park to their car after a family bonding session at the movies. As they turned a corner of the shrub lined path that wound through the centre of the park they came across a coffled council work gang. It was comprised of six slaves watched over by their overseer. Eric the middle child upon seeing the gang of sweaty slaves immediately commented out loud "No ones ever going to make me into a slave". His older brother Daniel looked across at him and replied "Well you better make sure then, that you obey the rules a lot more than you do or you never know what will happen to you" `Look who's talking" Eric retorted. "What do you mean by that squirt' Daniel teased. "I mean look at who's sneaking off and getting up to mischief with his closest friends. And in case your blind `squirt', I'm taller than you now so shut your mouth" Eric replied. Though he didn't want to show that Eric had scored with that last comment, Daniel felt his face blushing. "Yeah well I'm more mature than you, who's the little high schooler?" Daniel responded. "Yeah you think your so cool being at college don't you" Eric replied. `Daniel, Eric grow up and stop tormenting each other, this is supposed to be family time" his Mum rebuked. "Yeah bossy boots" Melissa chipped in supporting Eric and poking her tongue out at her eldest brother Daniel. "Well it's true Mum, they are so immature, neither Eric or Mel do what they are told when I ask them when your at work. If they keep that up they will end up in trouble" Daniel replied. "Oh and you never break the rules?" Vicki Green asked? I'm not like the pair of them mum I follow the rules; I am never going to end up as a slave that's for sure" Daniel replied. "Ok that's enough son" Owen Green interjected in a voice that told all the matter was closed. They walked on through the park in silence but just before they reached their parked car the family came across a group of naked youths picking up rubbish as part of their community service requirements as temporary slaves. The three teenagers and even the parents couldn't help glancing at the naked bodies of the five miscreant youths who were serving their time in NEWDD Juvenile Deterrence or `nudie', as it is called in the local community. NEWDD which stood for `Notice of Exemption from Wearing Decent Dress' was a special form of temporary enslavement that enforced complete public nudity to humiliate and embarrass the offender that much that they would never progress to more habitual criminal activity. "Man that must be so embarrassing, I'm never going to end up like those guys, no one is ever going to make me go around naked in public" Daniel asserted. "Well then son you too had better be on your best behaviour" Dad responded. "I always am dad you know that" Daniel replied. "Hey isn't that nudie over there picking up rubbish Ryan Muller?" Melissa blurted out. Eric looked across and said, "Yeah sure is". Eric and Melissa ran across to where Ryan was working. When he noticed them approaching his face turned an instant shade of pink. 17-year-old Ryan was in 11th grade with Melissa, though not in the same classes, nevertheless she knew of him, so did Eric who was one grade ahead. When they arrived in front of Ryan he stopped collecting pieces of rubbish and took up the display position. NEWDD juvenile slaves were required to comply with any reasonable requests from free citizens to display their naked bodies for posing or examination and to cooperate in those activities, providing that it did not interfere with the juvenile slave's schedule. Melissa giggled as she took a close look for the first time at Ryan's genitals. Standing naked in front of his two middle school companions Ryan displayed an erect 6" cock that surmounted a shaved hairless ball sack that was hanging low. He had a standard trimmed pubic bush extending to either side and to the top of his penis. Pubic hair that was hard to see at any distance as it was trimmed so short. Turning to the nudies overseer Melissa asked, "Can we examine him?" The rest of the Greens had followed the teens over to Ryan and when he arrived Daniel recognised the overseer as Blake Rivers, a senior from his college who only last year when he was 20 had been a nudie himself. Blake replied "Sorry Miss, but Ryan's work schedule does not allow him time for examinations today". "Oh what a pity, still I guess we will have plenty of time to examine you at school on Monday Ryan" Melissa responded. Ryan breathed a sigh of relief but still turned a deeper shade of pink. Daniel admired Ryan's matue genitals but he was never gladder at that moment that he was a free citizen fully clothed in decent dress! Of course as a kid growing up especially once you turned ten years of age you had to be extra careful in your public and private behaviour, less you were sentenced under the `NEWDD', `Notice of Exemption from Wearing Decent Dress' Program for Juvenile Deterrence. None of Daniels friends or family had ever served time in NEWDD. All of them had been careful to keep out of trouble as they were just too petrified of being placed into `Nudie' to do anything wrong. That of course was the whole aim of the program. However life under all these harsh rules was boring and Daniel like many others occasionally ventured into activities that could lead him into trouble if caught, he and his friends had always been very careful not to be caught! Public nudity enforced by a court order was a powerful tool in keeping kids always on their best behaviour. Good manners and being helpful to your parents around the house was now expected of all children still living at home. The NEWDD program now ran until you turned twenty one, then you were sentenced under adult law, which often meant enslavement for life. In fact the enslavement laws still came into effect from the age of sixteen so once a Juvenile turned sixteen they had to be doubly careful as they were at the courts mercy as the wether they would be sentenced into Juvenile Deterrence or Community Servitude or slavery as it was commonly referred. Though the state had recently passed new public decency laws and slaves had to be kept `decent' in public so as not to offend the decency of all the free citizens the law still allowed with authorisation the stripping of slaves in public as a means of specific punishment and humiliation. NEWDD juveniles were also exempted from the decency laws under the court-imposed conditions contained in the Notice of Exemption from Wearing Decent Dress. Apart from the nudies working on the community service projects like the family had just passed you would see juveniles at school or at the mall who were totally naked. They were the focus of much torment and ridicule apart from the embarrassment and humiliation of being seen totally naked. This of course was just what the NEWDD program set out to achieve. Daniel Green had grown up amongst this `normal' life in a leafy tree lined street in suburban Eastbrook named Henson Avenue. His father Owen was employed in Real Estate sales and his mother Vicki was a Retail Store Manager. The Green family only had the one slave, Tom. He was elderly and did all the cooking and housecleaning. He had a small bed-sitter room in one corner of their house basement, next to the laundry. Tom kept to himself most of the time. In the Green household just because Tom was a slave did not mean that he was not shown the respect due to an adult. Daniels parents had always taught the nearly 19-year-old Daniel, his 17 ½ -year-old brother Eric and his 16-year-old sister Melissa to be respectful to Tom. Daniel had never seen his parents punish Tom like he had seen some of his friend's parents punish their domestic slaves. Daniel had been shocked and a little aroused when he first saw grown adults forced to strip and be beaten with the tawse or cane on their bare buttocks. He had never witnessed a whipping and never wanted too! The Green household was an average middle class suburban family. The jobs that Owen and Vicki Green held down meant that they had to work on a rostered basis on the weekend. They tried to ensure that one of them was rostered off work to be at home with the children over the weekends but as the kids got older this became less of an issue. Daniel being the eldest had been since he was a young teenager entrusted to be in charge of the household if they both had to be at work on the same day of the weekend. Both Eric and Melissa resented their older brother's authority over them and as Daniel had complained they entrusted tried to push their limits with him as far as possible. To make the sibling rivalries even worse Daniel was always laundering his superior status being a College sophomore compared to his 12th and 11th grade High School siblings. Daniel was a popular guy. He excelled at sport and was a high academic achiever. These twin attributes gave him a high self confidence level and had by natural selection made him a natural leader To go with his academic and sporting prowess, Daniel was also a handsome boy. Even though he was of average height for his age being 5 feet 10 inches his slim build with his light blond hair, blue eyes and pale complexion attracted the attention of a lot of girls and unbeknown to Daniel quite a few guys as well. They all secretly wished to know him better. He was considered `hot' even though he was also considered a bit shy. Daniel was shy! He was too embarrassed to go out on dates with girls other than group type outings where one-on-one situations could not develop, not because he wasn't curious about girls, but rather because he feared what the consequences for his reputation might be if he was too successful with the girl. The law was very tough on premarital sex and Daniel had private reasons for his shyness as well. Daniel was the youngest guy in his year and one of a handful of students who were not already 19 years old when college resumed after the summer holidays in early August. He would turn 19 years of age next Friday on the 1st of September, the last possible date for him to have entering his 2nd year. If he had been born just an hour later on the 2nd of September he would have just finished High school and be starting College. As they got into the family car Owen Green commented, "I hope the three of you noticed how embarrassed and humiliated that boy was. Let it be a warning and a lesson to all of you of the consequences of misbehaving". If it was a warning, Daniel he did not seem to head it. The very next day after the family outing to the movies, both parents were working and so in the afternoon, Daniel with five friends, went over to the old Thompson's Foundry site. It was a great place to hang out, lots of old buildings with many nooks and crannies to explore and hide your activities. Daniel had formed a local street gang called the `Henson Avenue Gang' during 7th grade when he was 12 years old, soon after he had returned from a long period in hospital recovering from injuries received when a car driven by runaway slaves hit the stationary car his Grandfather was driving. The subsequent hospitalisation and the trial and execution of the slaves had made Daniel quite a local celebrity at the time and catapulted him to the top of the local popularity stakes. Eric sometimes hung out with his older brother and his friends but mostly he had his own group of friends. Even though Eric was 1 ½ years younger than Daniel he was already taller than Daniel, being 5 foot 11 inches tall and much to Eric's amusement his voice was way deeper than his older brothers. Eric really resented his little brother treatment by Daniel and had told his brother so on numerous occasions, often threatening Daniel with the words, "You wait bro, your time will come". Melissa was 5 foot 5 inches tall and had filled out nicely where it mattered most to horney guys. Her firm large breasts hadn't gone unnoticed over the last few years either by, lots of guys who saw her and even by Daniel and Eric. She never wanted to hang out with all her brothers dorky friends, though she had become very interested in boys. She had her own group of girlfriends who were constantly sleeping over at the Greens house much to the annoyance of Daniel and to a lesser extent Eric who saw this as a great opportunity to chat up some girls. As the guys in the gang got older they became bolder in the activities that they undertook to keep themselves amused. This boldness was fuelled by the fact that none of them had ever been caught and placed in the NEWDD scheme. Daniel was the leader in planning a lot of these activities. It was becoming more and more important to Daniel that he maintains the respect of his peers so as he grew older the gang drifted apart but he actively led and encouraged bolder escapades amongst his group of close friends. On this occasion two of the guys had bought along some cans of spray paint and Daniel being the natural leader had insisted he start the first graffiti of the afternoon. "Michelangelo Green shall now commence his latest masterpiece' Daniel boasted. Like most things he undertook Daniel was a pretty good artist with the spray tin. He had not long started when Joey yelled out "split, cops!" All the guys darted from the site in different directions, but Daniel in the middle of spray painting the graffiti on the wall hesitated just momentarily before dropping the can and bolting. The delay however was critical. Daniel was a good athlete and had he moved immediately he would have cleared the grasping hands of the police as they ran towards the wall where Daniel had been painting. Because he delayed those few seconds he felt a hand grasp the back of his tee shirt as he began to run away. "Oh shit' Daniel exclaimed. The next thing he knew he was grappled to the ground, his hands forced behind his back and hand cuffs applied. "Fuck off let me go" Daniel screamed to no avail. He was caught! End Chapter 1. Acknowledgements: Pete Brown for originally creating this universe. This fantasy is written in the same universe as my story `A Middle Class Slave Revisited'. This was a sequel to Pete Browns original story. The term NEWDD, `Notice of Exemption from Wearing Decent Dress' is a concept developed in `Seven Naked Ambersons' by Nap.