Dating Rules And Pretty Fools – Ch. 9
By Laura S. Fox
Copyright © 2023 Laura S. Fox
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Gay Erotica
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Chapter Nine – Into the
Light of Another
The camera had long been
forgotten, as Hudson pressed his lips firmly against the soft ones opening for
him like a delicate flower. How could some people walk through the world
without any of its darkness marring the most beautiful part of them? Yes, he
wasn't mincing words; he meant every one of them as he praised Otis, and it
wasn't only his physical appearance that made him so. Otis's beauty shone from
the inside and it spilled out of him through his mysterious eye, through the
way his mouth opened to talk so innocently about things both big and small,
without ever making a difference between them and treating all of them with the
same deference as if the whole world mattered.
In the Twinlight basement, his skin had turned so cold, crawling
with apprehension, and now he felt warm as he touched the supple body moving
ever so gently under his fingertips. This new experience reminded him of a song
talking about how cracks were only there to let the light in, only that Otis,
the whole of him, was the perfect opposite, and it was the light radiating from
him, as kind as his soul was, and warming those living outside in the gray dull
world.
A soft cute moan from the
other pulled him out of his musings, and the reality of their hard bodies
meeting rippled like an earthquake aftershock through him. He brought one hand
to caress Otis's face, the curve of his neck over the heart buckle of the
choker, the expanse of a collarbone until he wrapped it around a smooth
shoulder. Hudson felt as if he wanted to fill his hands with the lovely being
shuddering slightly under him for as long as time allowed him.
Such luxuries were meant
for further examination at another time. Without needing a map and a compass,
he knew very well what Otis needed, despite his innocence. "Is this all right?"
he asked in a ragged voice, as he traced an invisible line from Otis's solar
plexus down to his bellybutton and then lower. Even that part of him was as cute
as the rest. Hudson felt a deep need to tease Otis until he heard him cry out,
incapable of letting his pleasure soar higher.
"Everything is all right
when I'm with you," Otis breathed out and watched him with both eyes, unlike
before.
Hudson caught himself in
time. He wanted to touch that raised skin, that scar,
and ask Otis about it and learn everything about whoever had hurt him so that
he could chase them to the end of the world and hurt them back. The only thing
keeping him from doing so was that he didn't want to risk Otis shutting him out
because he wanted too much too soon.
Hudson dared to venture
further. Now, he was cupping the smooth ball sac in his right hand, rolling the
testes inside slowly. He needed to proceed with caution. Everything about Otis
screamed that he was an innocent in every aspect. Therefore, no matter how
willing his gorgeous neighbor was, it was in his hands to respect that lack of
knowledge and handle it with care.
"What about here?" Hudson
asked and pressed his thumb on the engorged head of Otis's cock.
It was, indeed, such a
cute thing, not too long, but not too short, either, a bit on the thick side,
which was surprising for someone of Otis's slender frame. In Hudson's eyes it
was simply perfect and, given free rein, he wanted to gorge himself on it,
swallow it to the hilt and lick it at length. However, he needed to ask, and in
terms that would leave no room for misunderstanding.
"You..." Otis whispered,
lost for words as he seemed.
"You will have to do
better than that. I need to hear you," Hudson said gently. "Can you put it into
words? Can you ask me?"
"I..." Otis began again.
His hands were running freely through Hudson's short hair, tentative at first,
but progressively bolder. "I want you to--" He swallowed and couldn't continue.
"Allow me to help you. I
will tell you what I want, and then you'll either agree or not. Is that okay?"
Otis nodded eagerly. "I want to put my mouth on your cock," Hudson said firmly.
The look of perfect astonishment that met his eyes convinced him – as if there
was any need – that Otis mustn't have done such a thing with anyone else until
now. No one could be that good an actor and pretend to be innocent in this day
and age. "Have you ever done this with anyone? Has anyone sucked you off?"
"No," Otis whispered.
"Would you like me to?"
"I would love it." The affirmative
was finally spoken in a firmer voice.
So Hudson let his wishes
come true as he locked eyes with Otis and took him in his mouth.
***
Were they skipping steps
by going directly to that? Otis didn't think so, because everything felt too
right to be wrong. Hudson was, without a doubt, most generous to offer
something of the kind. When he had seen videos of men doing that sort of thing,
Otis had found himself prey to so much desire that he had never lasted longer
than a couple of minutes. According to plenty of articles he had read online,
men in general considered that lack of stamina to be shameful and, under any other
circumstances, Otis would have said `no' to Hudson's offer. However, since he
was learning and Hudson was his teacher, there was no shame in being what the
Internet called `a fast shooter'.
But what if Hudson minded
such a thing? What if he couldn't conduct his lesson properly because Otis was
too fast? He needed to ask. "I might," he said with difficulty while the
contact of firm lips with that part of him made his back arch off the sofa, "be
too fast."
Merciful in his own
right, Hudson removed his mouth for a moment. "It doesn't matter. I will enjoy
it either way."
"All right, all right
then," Otis repeated for the sake of giving himself courage. "Please proceed
with, um --"
"With blowing you?"
Hudson's dark eyes flashed at him.
Otis felt his cheeks
turning crimson. Then, he steeled himself. Wasn't he the one who said that he
needed to get rid of his shyness and become bolder in his interactions with
men? Hudson was a man, and not only. He was his teacher and someone who would
accepts his missteps on the matter. "Yes, please," he confirmed, but his voice
was shaky and nothing like the bold person he hoped to become.
"Say it," Hudson
encouraged him. "Say it with your own words, but say it as dirty as you can."
Dirty was another word
for sexy, as Otis had dutifully had written down in his secret notebook. Now,
that was quite the tall order and he had no idea if he could pull it off.
Nonetheless, he was there to learn, which meant that he could at least try. "I
want you to--" he started bravely and then stopped abruptly. "May I start
again?"
Hudson stuck out his
tongue and licked the head of Otis's member slowly. Otis trembled as new
sensations swam through him like electric eels. "You may start as many times as
you want. But don't mind my getting to work in the meantime. Something tells me
that you only need the proper stimulation to get your dirty-talking juices
flowing."
Oh, there would be
juices, and they would be flowing, Otis thought, as his eyes remained glued to
the impossible scene in front of him. Hudson had to be a master of all things
sexual, and that had been the same line of thinking he had had from the very
start of getting to know his neighbor. His masculine jawline, his firm lips,
the way his thick eyebrows furrowed as he was... getting to work, as he had
mentioned – that was a lot more than Otis had ever envisioned while picturing
himself on the receiving end of this type of sexual act.
"I can feel your tongue,"
he whispered. "It's so good." He trembled from head to toes, although Hudson
was teasing and playing only with that part of him. "You are... sucking me..."
He shuddered as he felt
the wave of pleasure growing inside him, as he had seen at the beach, a long
time ago, on the only trip there he had ever been to, that rise of the water,
so inevitable, so smooth, before the crest broke to fall and accelerate toward
the shore.
There was no crest
breaking to speak of. Otis gasped as Hudson caught his cock by its base, making
a vise-like grip with his fingers. The wave remained up there, cutting his
breathing for a moment.
"What are you doing?" he
asked and blinked. His skin was burning, his eyes were getting moist, and he
had never felt such great pleasure in his life.
"I'm helping you feel
this for a little while longer," Hudson explained.
Otis nodded. "You are
such a great teacher. I'm happy I found you." He wanted to sound as polite as
possible, but his words came out chopped off and ungraceful, since he couldn't
control the sensations wreaking havoc inside him.
"Let's try something
else." Hudson wrapped his tongue slowly around the head, his eyes half-closing.
He was teasing the skin right underneath, making the shudders inside Otis grow
in intensity so much that they felt like small earthquakes.
"What..." Otis began and
blinked away a few tears of extreme pleasure. "What does it taste like?"
"Like the most delicious
thing I've ever had," Hudson told him and released the tight ring at the base
of Otis's cock for a moment while engulfing him whole in his mouth.
That was high praise and
it had to be a bit of a white lie, the kind that was allowed from time to time.
Otis could only assume that Hudson had tasted many delicious things in his
life, and probably `that' wasn't exactly the most delicious of them all. Or,
maybe, if he thought about it... but he couldn't because that very moment, Hudson
squeezed him between his lips and pulled up only to descend fast.
All of his cock was in
the other's mouth, and it felt like nothing else ever. Otis couldn't describe
it; it was pleasure to the hottest degree, and he had to tell it like it was.
"Hudson," he moaned, "it is... as if... you're taking it all... out of me..."
The last words ended up
as a long keening sound while Otis couldn't hold back. His toes curled against
the sofa, and Hudson just held him down and sucked it all out of him,
determined as he seemed not to miss one drop.
Otis closed his eyes as
he experienced the best falling of his life. It was a wonder he wasn't going
through the sofa, his body regaining slowly the same consistence and weight he
knew. For moments there, he had felt as if he no longer had a material body and
was only made out of sensations and nothing else.
He threw one arm over his
eyes. Was there anything he could say to let Hudson know just how much that
meant to him? How grateful he was? His mind was a field of molasses and made no
sense. He wanted to laugh and cry at the same time. And some of it, he did, as
he let a sob escape his lips, followed by a low giggle.
"Hey," Hudson called for
him gently. "Are you okay?"
Otis thought for a moment
what he could say or do, but then he just acted on impulse. He straightened up
enough so that he could throw his arms around Hudson and hold on to him. "Thank
you," he said with profuse honesty, "thank you, thank you!"
Hudson hugged him back.
"You're more than welcome, beautiful."
Otis felt his chest
expanding and warmth spreading throughout his entire body. He enjoyed how
Hudson didn't let go of him and continued to hold him, both gently and firmly,
as seemed to be his manner in dealing with all things.
***
How different Otis was
from any lover he had ever held in his arms before. Hudson was dumbfounded how
no one had snatched this lovely young man and made him his, but he was more the
grateful for it. It offered him a chance like no other to have him all to
himself, no matter how short that time may be. As long as this investigation
went, he promised himself. He had to protect Otis, he said to himself. That was
all, he lied – a little – to himself.
Otis's clear eyes were
amazingly beautiful as they bore into his, as they needed to break their embrace.
"May I taste yours now?"
That was a question
Hudson hadn't expected, when he should have. Otis was a generous being, in all
possible ways. However, he wouldn't take advantage, not right now. "Maybe
later," he chose to say, no matter how much his flesh throbbed at the promise
of having those beautiful lips wrapped around his cock, teasing him with their
clumsy yet endearing innocence in such dealings. "But you will have to promise
me that, in the meantime, you won't rush into doing this kind of thing with the
first man that crosses your path."
Otis snickered. "The
first man that crosses my path each morning is Mr. Jericho, the mailman. I
don't think he would like me to offer such a thing."
Hudson traced the shape
of Otis's nose playfully. "Don't be such a smartass. You know what I mean."
Otis nodded eagerly. "I
won't taste... another man's cock," he eventually said and blushed, "before
yours. And until you finish teaching me. But you will... you will put it in my
mouth, right?"
He was whispering now,
and Hudson had to lean forward to catch it all. He didn't mind since it allowed
him to be as close as he could be to that lovely human being and the warmth of
his body. It was easy to lean forward and catch the pretty lips in another
kiss.
"Is there nothing I can
do for you in turn?" Otis asked anxiously once Hudson gave him back the ability
to breathe.
"Maybe there are a few
things," Hudson said as he decided that Otis might very well like the thing
that would follow. "How about making that inventory? Of my tattoos? You seem
like a very thorough fellow to me."
Otis's eyes lit up. "Do I
get to see you naked? Completely naked?"
"You must check every
inch of my skin, you know?" Hudson joked. "And, who knows? I might have tattoos
in places I don't remember."
Otis blinked while the
wheels of his mind kept turning. "Is that possible? Doesn't it hurt to have a
tattoo done?"
Hudson shrugged. "You
just go ahead and satisfy your curiosity. Deal?"
Otis nodded with
irresistible eagerness. There was a short time for regrets once hurried hands
began to finger the hem of his t-shirt, but it was very short. What followed
would be in equal parts satisfying and tough to bear teasing.
***
What an incredible chance
Hudson was giving him! Otis helped Hudson out of his tight t-shirt first and
licked his lips at the sight of that hairy chest. His eyes moved from one perky
nipple to the other and then back again.
"Take a picture, it will
last longer," Hudson joked.
"May I?" Otis inquired
politely.
"Not now. Get to that
inventory already."
Right. Hudson was
offering him so many tasty bits to choose from, and he was like a kid in a candy
shop. He truly needed to focus and start with the first thing offered. After a
short moment of deliberation with himself, he reached for the belt buckle on
Hudson's jeans. What would his neighbor's cock look like? It had to be darker,
right? What about his behind? Otis had shamelessly ogled Hudson's ass a few
times, and in those tight jeans, that part of the man's anatomy appeared to be
rock hard.
Secretly, Otis decided
that he would push things as far as Hudson was all right with, since there was
so much for him to learn about the male body in general. Only that it wasn't
quite so, and he had to admit to himself, just as secretly, that it was
Hudson's body he wished to learn down to each pinky and no one else's.
Maybe it was because it
would be the first body he was allowed to explore to such length. He would
think of it later, once alone. He shook his head. Once alone, he would most
probably relive what Hudson had done to him over and over again, until
exhaustion.
"Come on," Hudson
encouraged him since he had frozen with his hands on the buckle. "Don't tell me
you're afraid of snakes. This one's not poisonous, I assure you."
Otis remained
disconcerted briefly, and then he understood that Hudson was using a euphemism
for his sexual organ. Now, he was all the more curious. Was it as long as a
snake? And what kind of snake?
Full of curiosity and
emboldened by Hudson's willingness to allow him to explore his body to his
heart's content, he proceeded at helping the other out of his jeans and
underwear, too. That was when his jaw dropped so fast and hard that he had to
grab it with one hand and put it back. "What's this?" he asked in unhidden
fascination as he pushed against the metal bead coming out of the little hole
and having a matching bead right underneath. "You have a piercing!" he
exclaimed and began playing with it. It moved easily, but it looked like Hudson
wasn't that comfortable with his manipulation of the metal half-ring, so he
stopped.
"That's Prince Albert for
you," Hudson explained and let out a short breath.
"Oh, he's royalty? How
should I address him?" Otis lay on his belly so that his head was level with
Hudson's crotch. That way, he could stare openly at that thing, which looked
like nothing else he had seen in his life.
He looked up as Hudson
touched his head. He needed to angle his neck so that he could meet Hudson's
eyes, as his cock was in the way. And what an incredible thing that was! Not
only because of the piercing, but because of how veiny and hard it presented
itself. Darker, yes, it was darker than the rest of Hudson's body, and it was
complete with a nice pair of hairy balls that made Otis want to weigh them in
his hand and marvel at their heaviness.
"That's the name of the
piercing," Hudson said and smiled. "But if you want to address my cock as Your
Majesty, I'm not against it."
He was laughing. Of
course, he was laughing because it was a joke. Otis guffawed, too, and then,
before Hudson could say a thing, he pressed the large cock against his cheek.
"Your Majesty, you're so big and strong," he said, and he wasn't lying.
Hudson ruffled his hair.
"Didn't you have a job to do? Or now that you've seen my piercing, you're no
longer interested in my tattoos?"
"I am very much
interested in everything," Otis said promptly.
How at ease he felt being
naked in another man's presence! That could only mean that he was making
tremendous progress. Reluctantly, he gave up on staring at Hudson's amazing
cock from up close and placed himself on his knees. Carefully, he took Hudson's
right hand and began examining the tattoo that appeared to go as high as where
the shoulder met the torso. No wonder he had dreamed of riding down a serpent
after seeing his new neighbor for the first time; that right arm was covered in
green scales and winding paths that circled their way around in an upward
spiral. When his eyes fell on the highest point of the shoulder, he came face
to face with a pair of burning eyes, and only then did he identify the presence
of an animal head. "It's a dragon," he exclaimed and traced the inky design with
his fingers. "How wonderful." Now, all the more curious about the other arm, he
hurried to examine it before Hudson got bored with him. "And here?" he asked,
as he traced the ink lines carefully, barely touching the skin. "Why black
roses?"
Hudson offered him a
somewhat forced smile. "Something about beauty in darkness, I thought at the
time. For a cool kid like you, I bet that sounds pretty mid, right?"
Otis knew for a fact that
Hudson was simply pulling his leg. "I am not a kid, I am twenty-"
"-two, I know. Frankly, I
thought you'd protest at being called cool." Hudson flashed another dazzling
smile at him.
"I wouldn't. Cool is a
good thing to be when you're young. Not very much so when you grow older,
because you might come across as immature."
Hudson looked at him with
questioning eyes. Otis blushed and draped one arm over himself. He was naked
and had taken too many liberties. And now he was blabbing about all the useless
things he knew and no one cared about. Before he had the guts to come up with
an excuse so that he could leave the apartment, Hudson took his hand – the
other one – and placed it on one of the tattooed guns. Otis looked up for
confirmation and noticed right away the burning eyes.
"Weren't you curious
about these before?"
"Yes. They are very--"
Otis swallowed and decided to muster all his courage. He placed both his hands
on the inked guns – a pair of shotguns, he believed – and moved them slowly
downward. They were sexy. That was the word he was searching for. Now he
remembered. But he didn't have time to say it, because Hudson talked again.
"But these were the easy
ones. I have one more."
"Oh, I want to see it,"
Otis said right away. "What sort is it?"
Hudson's smile was
enigmatic. "I will let you discover it on your own."
Hmm, that sounded a bit
disconcerting. Otis looked the chiseled body in front of him carefully,
although it did nothing for his nerves to do so. Yes, he had been right from
the very start about that meat percentage Hudson had. His body was sculptured,
like a work of art. It was hard, but warm to the touch, unlike stone. And Otis
loved the hair. He brushed his hands over Hudson's chest and snickered. That
felt very good.
"Aren't you forgetting
your mission?" Hudson asked in a teasing voice.
Usually, someone taking
that tone with him would make him wary. People certainly loved having a laugh.
It was when they were having it at his expense that things got complicated. But
Hudson wasn't mean, and he could tell. A mean person wouldn't let him have his
go at all that exploration, with so much patience and understanding.
"What mission?" he asked,
still mesmerized by the movement of those beautiful muscles underneath the
skin.
"Finding my secret
tattoo. I'm going to make it worth your while," Hudson promised.
"How so?" Otis asked, his
ears perked up to attention, like a dog's.
"Let's say that I'll give
you a prize."
"We're just going to say,
or will you give me a prize if I find your other tattoo?" Otis asked, eager to
have everything straight.
"There's no cutting
corners and beating around the bush with you, is there?" Hudson grinned and
flicked his nose playfully. "I will definitely give you a prize as a reward if
you can find it."
Otis touched it and
stared back. "What is the prize?"
"A secret until you meet
your goal. What do you say?"
"Like a mystery box. That
is so cool," Otis said, a bit awkward for saying stuff like that, because
`cool' wasn't a word usually in his vocabulary.
"Now, let's make it
time-sensitive. I'll give you five minutes--"
"Starting when?" Otis
pushed himself back on his heels and began scanning Hudson's body with keen
eyes.
"Don't steal the start,"
Hudson chided him. "Starting now."
***
Otis took him by surprise
when he pushed him, so he laughed while his naughty neighbor rolled him on one
side, his eager hands all over. He obviously meant to handle and fondle him at
the same time, because Hudson could feel Otis's fingers roaming across his
skin. He wanted that experiment of theirs to last for a bit longer, but that
wouldn't happen with such a determined little hunting doggy as Otis was.
Hudson allowed him to
manipulate him so that he was now on his belly, which had to give Otis the unhindered
view of his `secret' tattoo.
"That is so pretty!" Otis
exclaimed and pushed his finger into Hudson's right butt cheek. "It's a
butterfly, right?"
"As you see me lying
right under you in the buff," Hudson confirmed. "So, what do you think?"
"It's very different from
your others," Otis commented. "It is so pretty and colorful. The others are
sort of dangerous--"
"What do you mean, sort
of?" Hudson asked, pretending to be scandalized by such an understatement.
"They are
dangerous-looking," Otis hurried to say. "But this isn't."
"Are you sure?" Hudson
teased him. "What if it's a poisonous butterfly?"
"It's not," Otis said
with incredible confidence. "I know all the poisonous types of butterflies, and
this isn't one of them."
If he hadn't known Otis
already and his fairly odd habits, he would have thought that the guy was
pulling his leg. "I had no idea there were butterflies like that. You sure?"
"Yes," Otis said
promptly. "Some you can use to poison darts and arrows. You know, for hunting."
"Okay, Mr. Grylls, remind
me not to get on your bad side."
"I'm not Mr. Grylls, I'm
Mr. Bendecker," Otis insisted.
Hudson decided that he
was already having too much fun to insist on details. "Oh, and you want me to
address you formally now, Mr. Bendecker?"
"No. I don't think that
would be a very good idea since we have already seen each other naked."
"Ah, so that's one of the
criteria for getting chummy with you. I see," Hudson teased his cute neighbor
again.
Otis pressed his finger
into the middle of the butterfly. "How did this get here?"
"What? You don't like
it?" That would be a bit of a bummer since Hudson hoped he would impress Otis
in all possible ways. Why that was so important, he couldn't very well say,
except that it would give him a very pleasant feeling.
"I do. But it's so
different from the rest."
"Fair's fair. I made a
bet and lost." Hudson smiled at the memory. Not everything was bad all the
time, was it? That had been a lesson for him to learn, and for others to teach
him.
Otis surprised him by
bending over and kissing the butterfly. His lips felt so good against his skin,
but Hudson pushed the feeling away. "Hey, that's ticklish." He had to be
careful around this pretty man. It was too easy to get lost in his strange blue
eyes; they had the power of hypnosis, even though their owner didn't know it.
And what he did with those soft lips could drive a grown man crazy, too.
He turned and pulled Otis
over his body to kiss him and regain control. Otis seemed to allow it
patiently, kissing back, but also being the one to break it. "What is my
prize?"
Eager, always so eager.
He was definitely tempting Hudson beyond what he could possibly deal with.
"I'll do you a favor, but I'm letting you choose."
"Choose?" Otis echoed
slowly. "Do I have to say it off the top of my head?"
"Yes. So what would you
like? For me to blow you?" Hudson whispered in Otis's ear, enjoying the small shiver
in the supple body he was holding, "or maybe taste you in another way?"
To his surprise, Otis
pushed him away and then straddled his body. He looked quite determined,
holding him prisoner between his thighs like that. The hair had fallen over the
one eye Otis preferred hidden, but he was all the more alluring like that. "I
want to play with this," he said and grabbed Hudson's cock with both hands.
He grunted as that simple
thing did nothing for the horniness he had experienced since he had invited
this pretty guy into his apartment. "The favor was supposed to be me doing
things to you. For you."
"I want this," Otis
replied and pursed his lips, seemingly displeased with being contradicted on
the matter.
Hudson put his hands on
Otis's wrists only to hold them not remove them from his body. "Do you want to
give me a hand, then?" he asked, suddenly aware of the raspy tone of his voice.
Otis nodded and smiled.
"Can I? I might not be good, but--"
Hudson decided that it
was about time to give his neighbor his vote of confidence, so he grabbed him
by the back of his neck and pulled him close so that they could openly stare at
each other. "You can do no wrong, Otis."
The temptation was too
strong, after all, so he indulged in kissing Otis again, while slender fingers
began moving up and down, tentatively at first, and then faster, as their kiss
grew hotter. He couldn't tell how he came so fast, but it happened, and he
swallowed Otis's surprised, yet pleased, gasps with his mouth long after.
TBC
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