Date: Thu, 12 Jan 2017 20:58:50 -0500 From: Alexander Nothing Subject: Train pt.1 This is my first attempt at writing a story, hope you like it. Depending on readers responses to it I may continue or let it die here. Your feedback will be appreciated. Pa_boy17@yahoo.com Train Ride Pt. 1 by Alexander Charles So there I was sitting on the train reading my book oblivious to the world, you ever read a book and just been so engrossed in the story it's like a movie playing in your head? If so you know exactly what I mean. The story is a vampire novel with lots of action and plenty of sex and boy do they get into it. With this hot sex scene going down in the book i didn't notice the train filling up around me until this person is standing close in front of me. All I see are grey jeans in front of me. He had to be close to get my attention away from the book. That's when I look up and see the dark skinned teen in front of me looking down at me with this semi snide sneer. Looking around I kinda notice I'm surrounded in my seat by him and his friends. If you know the NYC train system I was sitting by the doors in the back of the car so they easily created their own little semi circle around me, blocking the view of the rest of the train car. None of this bothered me cause all that was really on my mind was getting back into the book and jumping back into the sex scene going down. The author of the book is a woman and just like me she loves a big dick. So here she is describing this sexy vampire with a flawless body, perfect abs showing off that sexy V shape toned guys have,all leading down to his long thick dick. The main character is wet between her legs in anticipation of feeling it inside her. Knowing the thickness is gonna hurt but feel oh so good stretching her open and how the length if he uses it all will be knocking on her wall, makes a spasm shoot through her body and a slight moan escape her lips all from just seeing this beautiful male in front of her. Thats when the boy in front of me moves forward and hits my book slightly throwing me off what i'm reading and i notice his crotch. Its basically right in front of my face and looks like it's filled out some. I can make out his thick shaft going off to the right of his jeans. So now he's got my attention and I'm really looking at his dick like OMG am I really seeing this. Mind you I was already hot from the story, so I wasn't thinking too clearly while checking out this kids package. Subconsciously i lick my lips and here a slight snicker. Looking up I see this kid looking down at me with that "I know you was looking at my dick" look in his face. Embarrassed slightly I blush and try to go back to my book and not pay attention to the kid. By the way he is kinda cute. He's tall about 6'2, thin probably about 160 lbs and the way his clothes are snug against his body you don't have to guess that he's toned. You know underneath his t-shirt is the body of a Greek god just waiting to be worshipped. Ugh, why this morning of all mornings does this have to happen to me. I'm already super horny from not jerking off in weeks and reading this damn book is throwing me of making me even hornier. Then as if all this wasn't enough I have this boy looking good as heck messin with me, are all the thoughts running through my head while trying to go back to my book. All this time him and his friends were laughing and talking. Im not sure about what cause naturally you just learn to block people and their conversations out while your on the train. So I never really took notice of the convo until they start talking about some girl in there school that gives good head. Now if you know me you know my favorite thing to do by far is give head. There's no better feeling than being on my knees sucking a nice hard dick. Ugh feeling the that soft but oh so hard flesh sliding in and out my mouth, licking it all over feeling it's velvety smoothness, smelling that nice dick smell, you know the one like a mix of musk and cum. OMG does the smell of a mans dick turn me the fuck on. I swear I can get so fucking hard and wet just from that shit. If you're a dick lover you know just what the fuck I'm talking about. Lemme tell you I'm a freak and love everything about sex. Good sex is wild and sweaty; damn near animalistic. Those of you totally vanilla people that only want a man after he's just come out the shower just don't know what the fuck you're missing. I will take dick anytime. I love a man that's been at work all day just coming home and shoving his shit right down my throat. Uh papi make me gag on it. You don't even know how sexy that shit is. Dick smelling all good, been locked up all day waiting to be released. I love just deep throating that shit. Smelling it deep getting that nice musky smell all in me and over my face. Lord help me lol So here i am with all these thoughts running through my head still trying to block out the kid in front of me and read my book while they talking about how good this girl sucks dick. If you're a good little bitch like me you already know what's on my mind...no way that bitch gives better head than me :) so I smirk and look up and there's the kid looking right back at me like he's talking right to me. So I look at his face for a little but damn the way he staring at me makes me feel a way...wet I look down and no guessing nigga is hard as shit in them jeans. You can see his thick shaft clearly going off to the side. I can't see all of it cause it's going off towards his pocket and one his hand is in there moving around slightly and two his hoody is covering it. I'm looking dead at it though. Then up slightly at his firm body, only to have my eyes wonder back down to staring at his thick safe thinking damn that shit is mad thick. I wanna just lean forward and kiss it. No way is that shit gonna happen though. I'm on the fucking train; plus all this friends are here an' shit. Ugh why this boy fucking with me this morning for real. I'm saying if we were around the way it would be on and poppin. I look back up at him and I know I got that bitch look in my face cause I'm horny as fuck and want his dick. He's still looking at me too and now biting his lip. Yooooo nigga is mad sexy right now and with him bitting his lips looking at me I swear I got wetter. My hole throbbing and shit just begging to be breed by this sexy Adonis. He nods his head a little in a "what's up" gesture. And I blush mad hard casting my eyes back only to be looking back at jr. I don't know what signal he gives but I notice his friends kinda get tighter around us. In my head I'm like what the fuck is going on but it's only a far off side thought. Only at a passing glance do I really notice it happening cause here he is zipping down his zipper so I can see his red boxers underneath. My mouth relaxes and opens a little. You know that slightly shocked dumb look people get when they thinking "damn nigga for real? Is this shit really happening". My breathing gets shallow watching him unbutton his jeans. Totally under a spell I'm compelled to look up at him. He knows he has me. As I look up at him submissively, I watch him smile. I don't know why but god did that smile make me feel good all over. It was like I did something right and pleased him. Only another bitch like me knows what I'm talking about. But when you're submissive to a guy it's your whole world to make him happy, it's like all your needs vanish and you just have this one desire to please him. That smile is like water when you haven't had a drink in days... He nods again and I look down as he's reaching into his boxers pulling himself out. There he is, Jr. in the flesh. No more guessing how big he would be. No more wondering what it would look like. jr. is wide awake and ready to play. All I can say is I stopped breathing in almost a gasp, my heart stopped and I swear I went to heaven. I don't know what his mama feeds him, what kinda water he drinks or who his daddy is but god bless them all. He's standing there all hard and ready. All 11 inches of thick chocolate goodness. Even with a drop of precum on the head to act like the cherry on top of his special sundae. All I could do was stAre. I was so shocked I swear I was stuck on pause. And I'll pause here to describe this fine work of art in front of me. He had one beautiful dick. Standing straight out from his body its about as thick as 3 of my fingers getting slightly thicker as you go down. Uncut but not with to much extra for-skin. With him hard it didn't even fully cover the head, either that or he retracted it while I wasn't looking. The heads a nice size almost demanding attention. The way it's long it has a slight downward slope just perfect for sucking on. Looks like it's angled perfect to go down a throat. He's hooked his boxers under his balls so I can see they are big and full of a lot of cum, the same cum he's planning on feeding me I'm sure. I'm broken from my trance by him nudging my mouth with the precum soaked head of his dick. He pulls back leaving a string of precum connected to both of us. "Taste it" he says says. Instinctively I look up at him as he's talking, trying to make my brain register what he just said. "Go on try it" he urges me. I lick my lips tasting his sweet pre cum, licking all of it off. Wetting my lips in anticipation of whats to come. I'm rewarded with another smile which in turn makes me smile a little. He reaches down with one finger and cleans the rest of his precum of the head of his dick. Holding his finger out to me he asks me if I want more so I just open my mouth and he sticks his finger in so I can suck it off. I figure while it's in there I'll give him a preview of what I've got and start sucking it like it's a little dick. Going down on it slighty and using a little tongue to make sure I've cleaned it all off, I pull my head back and let him out of my mouth with a slight pop. Feeling proud of myself and a little defiant at the same time I look back up at him with my own little smirk like "yea now what nigga". "Word sexy, you got some nice lips yo. Why you don't use them and kiss my shit?" Fuck yea!! Nigga didn't have to tell me twice, that shit was music to my ears. I lean forward, wrapping my hand around his dick. Immediately I notice the difference in my own dick and the thickness of his. I know he got some strong legs too cause his dick is heavy; a nice meaty tube steak sandwich that I'm only too happy to eat. I move it to the side and kiss his shaft all over. First the left side down to the base. Onto the other side down around the bottom back up to the underside of his head. Leaving the best for last I look right at his dick head; shinny again with pre cum from feeling my lips all over it and kiss it to. A peck at first which then becomes a tongue kiss. Licking the head all over cleaning it off, only to have more drip on my tongue sending all kinds of flavory goodness in my mouth. I'm literally making out with the head of his dick now. I start to lick his dick all over, tasting all of him. "Yea lick mah shit shawty. Fuck he know just what to do" "fa real son" one of his friends reply back to him. I was so in a trance licking his dick all over that I kinda forgot they were there. That in turn did kind of help me remember where I was and just what I was doing, so I stopped and looked up at him looking back down at me. "Why'd you stop sexy? Look how hard you got me son, you can't just leave me dripping. Suck my dick yo! Now I know I wanted to suck his dick and he did too, but that didn't mean I was just gonna suck it either."Suck it son, come on what you waiting for?" he says while reaching down to start stroking himself. He grips the base of his dick and says "suck my dick bitch" while slapping me hard across the face with his dick. Now I know it was only his dick but that shit still hurt a little. Ain't like he has some little dick, that shit was thick and big like a bat. I guess I was still taking to long to suck him cause next I feel him slap me hard across my face this time with his hand while a friend of his coughed real load to hide the sound. Fuck that shit hurt but you know my dick was rock hard an' dripping as he grabs the back of my head and shoves his dick in my mouth. Now with no choice I'm getting face fucked by him. Not deep or anything just to let me know he means business and wants his dick sucked. "Yea sexy that's it suck my dick". He let's go of my head seeing im not going to stop and lets me work his dick at my own pace. Now that I'm back in control I wanna take my time getting to know Jr. here so I slow down my pace. Now if you watch porn, you'd think head was all fast and sloppy. Ah not mine. I really like to take my time and get to know a dick. Im taking him nice and slow in and out my mouth getting to know the texture of his skin noticing how smooth his dick feels against my lips. Slowly working it back and forth taking more and more of him into me as I go. I was using all mouth here...(look ma no hands) Going up and down, licking it all over paying close attention to the underside of the head on the upstroke. Not everyone likes giving head. Some people do it cause they have to, some cause they want their partner to do it back for them. They really treat sucking dick like a job, hence the term blow job and just like a job some people really hate it. Not me, if it was a job, I'm the CEO. I opened this shit up and I love what I do. I started going to town on his dick at this point. I felt I knew his dick inside and out. Like it was made for me. It fit so nice in my mouth. Just thick enough that I had to open wide but not to thick where I felt my jaw was gonna snap in half. If I was goldie locks this dick was my just right and I planned on letting him know just how much I liked it. I don't know where my mind goes or what my body does but it's like everything else just drains away. All that existed was his dick and my mouth. All thoughts left my head. I stopped worrying about breathing. I didn't really hear or feel anything. All I am at this point is my mouth. All I can feel is his dick filling me up. Sliding up and down on his dick has become my home world and I feel at home here. This is my power and I plan on using it to the max. You see it's a misconception. The top thinks he's in control. Yea here you are with this bitch swinging on your dick; the very essence of your manhood, sucking it cause you said to. Making you feel good. But nope, I might be sucking your dick and your right i had to open up and accept your dick into me, but like I said this is my world. I rule here, it's my mouth making you feel so good, it's my mouth making your dick throb and that "oh shit" escape your lips. "Damn look at that nigga go" one of his friends says. I smile inside thinking you ain't seen shit yet. I let go a little more and really start to unleash my talent taking every inch of him inside me. 11 inches of mmm mmm goodness down my throat and throbbing. "ohhhhhh fuuuuuccckkk" he moans. Lol "yea who's the bitch now" I say to myself as I pull back till just the heads in my mouth. Licking it all over, swirling my tongue around his glands and twisting my head side to side I snake my way all the way back down to the base of his dick. "Oh god damn sexy, oh fuck yea" he says as I go back and forth in the same fashion, fucking my throat on his dick. I'm totally in another world feeling his big dick being massaged by my throat while going back and forth on it. Feeling his slickness sliding past my lips only to be plunged back in till my nose is burried in his pubes. Really getting into it now he grabs the back of my head in both his hands and starts to fuck my throat on his own accord. "Fuck yea, suck my dick sexy". He's thrusting into me over and over. His dick thick with my spit only helps him slide in and out my throat faster and faster. Totally hot for this kid I grab onto both his ass cheeks and pull him deeper into me. Now i can feel the muscles in his ass as he thrusts into me, going back and forth over and over in and out my throat. Damn this kid is sexy as fuck; nice bubble but and a nice dick to match. I get a handful of cheek in each hand and kneed them as he plunges into me over and over. "Oh fuck shawty you gonna make me bust" he says and it's like a shot of adrenaline, I go into over time sucking the shit outta his dick trying to take more into me if possible. I wanna swallow him hole at this point and I'm not taking no for an answer. Thats when I hear it building. You can feel his body tensing. He's moaning deep, then "ooohhhh fffffuuuuuccccckkkkkkkkkk" he slams all the way into me holding my head in a tight vice grip. I feel his dick swell up thicker, the tube underneath getting real big, then bam he starts shooting his thick cum into me. Spurt after spurt of hot cum getting deposited right into my stomach. Oh no you don't I'm thinking to myself. I didn't work this hard not to taste your cream. I guess somehow he knew what I was thinking because he pulls back letting his dick head rest on my tongue. He shoots another 6 spurts of cum filling my mouth up with his sweet seed while i greedily swallow it all down, licking his head all over trying to get more. I'm rewarded with a smaller shot but happy to take it. After he's finished cumming I start sucking him ultra slow, taking him back into my throat, letting him enjoy the afterglow of a good nut. Part of me also just wasn't ready to let him go. I loved sucking his dick and sure as shit want him to know it'll be missed. "MMmmm yea baby, damn u sure know how to take care of a dick" he says when I finally let him out my mouth. I look at his dick still semi hard in front of me, all shinny from my spit and give it a final kiss. Looking out the window I see the train is coming up to my stop and I shoot up quick to exit the train. I jumped up so quick it startled the boys and they just move out the way letting me pass. I run out onto the platform as the doors open. "Wait! Hold up shawty. Aye yo, shawty!" I hear from behind me. I turn to see him by the train door holding a piece of paper out to me. "Call me sometime sexy, I gotta see you again" I just smile and take the paper as the bell chimes and the door start to close. The train pulls away and I'm left standing on the platform smiling down at the piece of paper in my hand. On it is his phone number and his name...