Date: Sun, 1 Jul 2007 12:10:56 -0700 (PDT) From: Greg Subject: I'll Suck You Revised chapter 1 I'll Suck You By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com) The author copyrights this story, with permission for posting on the Nifty Archive. It may not be copied to another website without prior permission from the author. This fictional story involves gay sex between family members and their friends, and it is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who aren't offended by material of this type! If you are underage, or this type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now. For those of you who read the original chapter one, I was brand new to writing at that time. And over the months, I refined my writing skills. I'm going to post revised chapters one through four ... and probably a chapter or two in the middle of the story, with some very minor revisions. Some people might ask why I would post a story, if I wasn't 100% happy with it. I guess that's a good question, but I could have never written this story without all the support I've received from my readers! This revision is how chapter one should have been written in the beginning ... HOW IT ALL BEGAN ... I'LL SUCK YOU 3:15 April 27 They were only words on a bathroom wall, but I think my reaction to them changed my life forever! I know it brought me a lot closer to those I loved the most. Hi, everybody! I'm Christopher Matthews ... Chris to my friends. And I'm a sophomore at the University of Colorado; but this story actually began a few years earlier, in the spring of 2002: I always thought of myself as a pretty normal fifteen year-old guy; average height and build with brown medium-length hair and eyes, and a dark smooth complexion. I lived with my dad Tim, and my thirteen year-old brother Kaiden. Mom was killed in a car accident a couple of years ago. We all miss her a lot, but Dad has never been the same since she died. We used to be a fun-loving, close family; but after Mom's death, Dad retreated into his work. He's a photographer, and a good one so I've heard. He always SAID he loved us and usually gave us what we asked for, but we were never really affectionate, like we were before the accident. We didn't talk a lot any more. It was as if he was afraid to get too close to us. Maybe he blamed himself for her death; I don't know ... like I said, his work came first and I felt like Kaiden and I were afterthoughts. My dad and brother play a big part in this story, so I plan to tell you more about them later. We lived in a small Missouri town. It was large enough that you didn't know everybody, but small enough that you hardly ever went anywhere without meeting someone you knew. I was nearing the end of my first year in high school. (You remember how it was when you were a kid; as Memorial Day approached, the school days seemed to get longer and longer ...) The days were crawling by! It was a beautiful late April day. The kind TV weathermen called 'resort weather'. Whatever ... If you've ever lived in the mid-west, you know exactly what I'm talking about. After the cooler weather and sometime snow of winter and before the oppressive heat and humidity of summer, it was one of those spectacular days that made you wonder how you could ever want to live anywhere else. And at fifteen, I'd never even THOUGHT about moving. We'd lived in the same place for as long as I could remember. I guess I was a pretty popular kid. I never really thought about it, but, looking back, I never had to try hard to make friends. In fact, it seemed like both kids and adults were attracted to me. Once, when I was eight or nine, I overheard Dad telling Mom, "I think we made a couple of pretty great boys!" I wasn't quite sure what he meant by that, but it sounded good! "In a few years, the girls will be knocking down our doors!" Mom agreed, and then they kissed. I sure didn't know what she meant by that; girls were the furthest thing from my mind when I was nine. Maybe what Dad had just said wasn't so great after all ... Anyway, let's get back to the story ... like I said, I was a freshman in high school. In our town, the junior and senior high schools were next to each other and shared the same gym and cafeteria. The city park was next to the schools, and the school used the park pool and baseball diamond, as well as the streets for a running track. I had just finished Phys. Ed., my next to last class of the day. We had played softball, and I pitched the first half of the game. (I was on the school baseball team. Yes, we barely had enough boys to field a halfway respectable team.) Anyway, our team lost that day. But I was about to have an opportunity to win big ... and in a way I never would have expected in my wildest dreams! Before heading to the showers, I stopped by the park boys' room to take a piss. As I was taking it out, I looked up from the toilet. And written on the wall I read: I'LL SUCK YOU 3:15 April 27 Wow ... that sounded interesting! Today was April the twenty-seventy; the last class ended at 3:05 and it was already 1:50. Some kid must have written it ... probably as a joke. But I was getting hard while I was pissing, just thinking about it! I guess I'd written my share of exaggerations on bathroom walls when I was in junior high; and this message was probably just like those I'd written. But I really wanted ... no, NEEDED ... to experience a blowjob; and I couldn't let this unlikely opportunity slip by. I'd never even considered sex with another guy; and probably, nobody would be there anyway. Even if it WAS for real, the message could have been written last year, although I couldn't remember seeing it before. I just HAD to check it out! If a teacher, or some old perv was waiting, I would just piss and leave. On the way to my last class of the day, I text messaged Kaiden, telling him to walk home without me. And then I suffered through another boring lecture on English Literature. How could I be expected to concentrate on Shakespeare when I had a boner that wouldn't go down? That hour seemed like ten! Up until then, my sex life had consisted of raging hormones and a very active right hand; and that was great, as far as it went! I would dream of girls doing all kinds of kinky things to my body! In fact, I'd dated a couple of girls, but we didn't go beyond kissing. I definitely needed more; and a blowjob sounded like a pretty good next step! Last period finally ended and I raced to my locker to deposit my books. No studying tonight! At exactly 3:15 I walked into the bathroom, and it was empty. Just what I figured; it couldn't have been true! My cock began to deflate. But, I decided to check each stall. And sure enough, a boy was standing in the last one. But not just any boy ... Kaiden! "Um, Kaiden ... what are you doing here?" I asked. I was surprised to see him! "I decided not to walk home without you," he replied. He seemed a little nervous, as he looked around. "I - I see you read my note ..." "That was your note on the wall?" I asked, shocked. "You wrote that?" Then I was quiet for a moment before continuing, "I never knew you were into sucking guys!" "I'm NOT into sucking guys," Kaiden answered. "But I might be into sucking YOU though; at least ... I'd sure like to try it!" I gave Kaiden's words a moment to sink in. "How did you know I'd be the one to see it ... or that I'd think it was for real, if I did?" I asked, and then I paused. "Wait a minute ... did you just say what I THOUGHT you said? That you only wanted to suck me?" "I sure want to try it!" Kaiden said. "I was leaving the bathroom this afternoon when I saw you walking this way. I thought, 'What the hell!' and quickly wrote it in the first stall and waited back here until you left. If someone else showed up wanting me to go down on him, I'd pretend I didn't know what he was talking about and leave." It sounded pretty risky to me. "What if a senior, or worse yet, an old guy FORCED you to suck his cock?" I asked. "Well, I guess I didn't really think about that happening," Kaiden said. "And besides, I've been wanting you for SO long!!" I was floored! Kaiden wanted me and I didn't know what to think ... I guess I'd done my share of checking other guys' packages, but like I said, I'd never thought about sex with another guy ... much less my brother! "Let's get out of here," I said intelligently. "Don't you want me to suck you?" he asked, obviously dejected. "You bet I do! But not in here, let's do it at home!" We lived in a small apartment over Dad's studio. Grandma and Grandpa Matthews set him up in business after high school. Dad had been interested in photography since he was a boy, and never wanted to do anything else. Over the years, he had built quite a reputation in our small community, as well as the surrounding area as THE wedding photographer to hire if you wanted cutting-edge photos. Because money was tight back then, the apartment was basically one large room with folding screens to divide off the two bedrooms. We were comfortable now, and before Mom died they had plans to build a house. But it never materialized. In such close quarters, seeing each other naked was a common occurrence, but I'd never really paid much attention to what I was looking at. I guess we were all just comfortable around each other. I know I never tried to hide myself and I don't think Dad or Kaiden did either. Today, probably for the first time, I really looked at Kaiden. I didn't just see my kid brother but an incredibly SEXY boy. He was a couple of inches shorter than me, with slim hips and a perfectly proportioned body. He had Mom's blonde hair, but he got Dad's brown eyes and dark complexion like me. "But what if Dad is there with a customer?" Kaiden asked as we started walking. "So-o-o. What if he is? We always come home around this time. And you know he never pays any attention to us while he's working." I think I needed a little more time to think about all of this, so I changed the subject. "How long have you been planning this, anyway?" "Chris, I've always looked up to you, but I guess I started to see you as more than just my brother last fall; about the time you started working out. I've always thought you had a great body, but now... your muscles are so awesome! Sometimes it's embarrassing, because my cock gets hard whenever I'm near you. Every night, when I jack off, I think about you ... or maybe Dad. I love your smooth hard chest and the hair in your armpits is awesome! But Dad's in great shape too, and his dark, hairy body really turns me on!" (Dad wasn't unusually hairy, but I could see how someone who had just entered puberty might think so. I know I was STILL proud of the hair on my lower legs!) As we were talking, my cock was getting stiff again! Wow ... three revelations ... until today, I didn't know that Kaiden had even noticed my body, and I SURE didn't know that he thought I was hot! (But he was right about my muscles. I had been hitting the weights and I loved the fact that they were getting really big and hard. I could stand in front of a mirror for hours and flex, admiring them.) "How long have you been playing with yourself?" I asked about his third admission, as I adjusted my package. His eyes moved to my crotch. "Um...Since I was about ten, I think. One morning, I woke up early and saw your hand moving really fast under the sheet. At first, I wasn't sure what you were doing, but you had to be holding your cock. So, I kept watching. You looked so ... I don't know ... I guess sexy is the right word. Your eyes were closed and your mouth was hanging open ... like you were really enjoying what you were doing! After a minute, your mouth opened real wide, you started nodding your head and it looked like you were stretching your legs. Then a stain appeared on the sheet. I remember thinking that you better not be wetting the bed!" "That night, after you went to sleep, I tried to copy what I'd seen you do. My cock was still little, but the feelings were unbelievable! I almost stopped several times, but then I remembered how it looked like you'd enjoyed it, so I kept on. Boy, was I glad I did! I've been doing it at least once a day ever since! I've seen you lots of times, after that first morning. You always have that same look on your face; and sometimes, I wondered what you were dreaming about. Lately, I've hoped that maybe you were thinking of me! I was always afraid you'd laugh at me, or tease me, so I never told you how I felt towards you. But this afternoon ... I don't know ... I just had to do something!" I stopped walking and hugged Kaiden, hard. "You know, I've always loved you; just because you're my brother, and I've never really teased you," I said as I looked up and down his lean body. 'Could there be more to my love?' I wondered. Although I admit that a long dick or a guy's muscular body turned me on, I always planned to marry and have a 'normal' family. But on that afternoon, Kaiden sure looked awfully inviting! Staring into his brown eyes, I said, "You're the hottest little brother a guy could have!" And I meant every word of it! I leaned over and kissed Kaiden on the lips for the first time. He started to pull back; but then he must have understood what I was saying, because he pressed his lips harder into mine. He hugged me hard and smiled his shy, little boy smile. For the first time, I noticed he had dimples! We laughed, punched and wrestled with each other the rest of the way home and by the time we got there, we were pretty sweaty and had taken off our shirts. Unlike some brothers, we never really fought, but the two of us could wrestle for hours. Sometimes, Dad would join in ... (Mom used to call him her big kid) ... but not so much lately. Before today, I'd never considered it sexual, but now I was looking at things a little differently ... okay, a lot differently! I was beginning to realize that my brother was one of the hottest guys around. And he was in my hands. And HE only wanted ME! When we entered the front door to the studio, a chime sounded. "Boys, is that you?" Dad asked. "Yeah Dad, it's us," Kaiden answered. I heard a muffled "just a minute" and Dad's head appeared from behind the black curtain that divided the portrait studio from the reception area. "I'm just finishing a shoot," Dad said. "How was school today?" He smiled. It seemed like ages since I'd seen Dad smile! "Same as usual," was my stunned reply. (Well ... not quite!) "Good!" And wow, Dad smiled again! "Do you have homework tonight?" It was Friday, and neither of us had brought home books, so I told him no, as we headed for the stairs to our apartment. "My photo session is about over," Dad said. "Let's have dinner at Red Lobster tonight." Since neither Kaiden or I could cook worth a darn, and Dad wasn't much of a cook either, we spent a lot of time at McDonalds or Taco Bell. But I couldn't remember going to a sit down restaurant since before Mom died. Red Lobster was forty-five minutes away, but I could taste the fried shrimp already! "Great!" I said as we ran up the stairs. Like all teenaged boys, I liked to eat. But my mind had never left my hard cock; and it was urging me to hurry! Dad never brought customers into the apartment, so I wasn't worried about some stranger walking in on us. In fact, I heard Dad and the customer talk, laugh and the front door open and close. Kaiden and I would have enough time alone, if we didn't get too loud. Dad usually did paperwork for an hour or so after his last session of the day. But, I guess Dad could finish up early and come upstairs at any time; and if he did that, he would see us. But my little head was doing all my thinking right about now! We went to our bed, stripped off our shorts and resumed our earlier wrestling match. Although I was older and stronger, Kaiden got me in a hold and had me pinned until he felt my hard cock press against his chest. All of a sudden, he pulled down my boxers and took my cock into his mouth. I pulled Kaiden off and looked him square in the face. "Are you sure you want to go through with this?" I asked. "I don't think I've ever wanted anything more!" he replied, as he again brought his lips to my cock. He gripped my shaft with his left hand and began pumping. I put my hands on the back of his head and pressed lightly, as he engulfed my manhood. I had never felt anything so incredible! I knew I wouldn't last long as he bobbed his head and his tongue slurped my rod. Every nerve in my body seemed to be on fire and when his teeth grazed the head, I shot without warning! He didn't pull off, but started sucking me in earnest. He was actually DRINKING my sperm; and seemed to be enjoying it! All of a sudden my orgasm REALLY overtook me. They were always good ... but I'd never felt THIS way before! A warm, tingly, good-burning feeling started in my cock, and traveled down my legs to the tips of my toes. I stretched my legs and feet as much as I could and began shaking, almost uncontrollably! I thought it was all over, but Kaiden didn't want to let go! He kept on sucking and nibbling and I stayed hard. His mouth made an "O" around my penis and he gently bit my cock just beneath the head. His front teeth were pushing on that most sensitive area. And then he began to pull on the head. You might think it would hurt, but the feelings were WAY intense! I arched my back and moaned while pounding my fists on the mattress. He sucked me like a hungry, nursing baby, until I came again. I laid back, completely exhausted; my heart was pounding in my ears. Still Kaiden sucked until I gently asked him to pull off. His face had a radiant glow and the sexiest smile I'd ever seen. "That was the most incredible feeling I've ever had!" he exclaimed. I sat up and hugged him tightly. "YOU ever had? You're the most awesome brother!" I gushed. "I didn't know it could feel so good!" I paused for a moment. "Where did you learn to do that with your teeth, anyway?" My skin was still covered in goose bumps and I shivered one last time. "I don't know if I can make you feel the way you just made me feel, but I sure want to try!" He looked so hot, with his blonde hair and dark tan (even for April). How could I have lived with him all these years and not have noticed? I pulled his face to mine and kissed him, running my fingers through his shaggy hair. It wasn't a brotherly kiss, but a real, passionate lovers' kiss! He pulled off his underwear and sat on my stomach while looking deeply into my eyes. "I was hoping you'd say that!" he replied. "I so-o-o wanted to make you feel good! I read some stories about cock sucking on-line, but I wasn't really sure what to do. They all said 'no teeth', but I don't know, biting you like that just seemed like the right thing to do!" "Thanks, Kaiden ... it was so awesome that I'm still shaking!" I pulled him back to me and we kissed again. I pushed with my tongue; and his lips parted, letting me enter his warm mouth. I licked his teeth and felt the metal of his braces. I suppose they would be coming off soon; his teeth looked perfect to me. I had never eaten my sperm, but I guess I could taste my seed inside his mouth. It was hard to describe: I think it tastes like it smells. But I sure wanted to sample it in Kaiden's mouth again! He lay down next to me, and his flesh made hot contact with mine. I looked into his brown, wanting eyes while I rubbed my hands over his slim chest and shoulders and down his sides to his ass, kneading the pale cheeks between my thumbs and fingers. Every nerve in my fingertips was marveling at the perfection that was his body! We smiled at each other. His raised his body onto mine until his steely cock was pressed firmly into my pubes; and he began to hump me fast and hard. With my hands on his ass, I pulled him closer to me with each of his thrusts; and then relaxed as he pulled away. Unbelievably, my cock was getting hard again! Kaiden grunted, "Unh! Unh! Unh!" as he came on my belly. And then his tongue invaded my mouth for the first time. I grabbed Kaiden's ass and pulled him tighter to me, while his ejaculation slimed our bodies. He had a look of love and pure contentment on his flushed, boyish face. "Let's do each other at the same time," he suggested. Then he turned around in the bed, and suddenly he thrust his impressive boyhood in my mouth. I started to gag and quickly pulled part of the way off. Of course, I'd never tried sucking a cock before, but after what he'd given me, I so wanted to please him! I tried to imitate what he had done to my body, and sucked like there was no tomorrow ... Kaiden gently grabbed my balls in one hand. And wrapping the other hand around my stalk, he began kissing and worshiping my manhood. "Boys, let's talk!" Dad said from the top of the stairs, as he walked toward our bed. He wasn't smiling any more... ## Thanks for reading the revised chapter one. I hope you enjoyed it! If you are new to this story ... I'm really glad you decided to read the first chapter, and I hope you decide to read on! If you'd like to comment on it, I'd sure like to hear from you! (fotogme11@yahoo.com) The revised chapter two needed a LOT more work than chapter one! There was a formatting error in the original post to Nifty. But besides that, the original chapter two left a lot to be desired! It will be posted shortly! Greg