Date: Mon, 25 Jun 2007 02:05:48 -0700 (PDT) From: Greg Subject: I'll Suck You ch 43 I'll Suck You By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com) The author copyrights this story, with permission for posting on the Nifty Archive. It may not be copied to another website without prior permission from the author. This fictional story involves gay sex between family members and their friends, and it is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who aren't offended by material of this type! If you are underage, or this type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now. Please read this: This will be the final chapter of book one, in what will hopefully become a series of several books. These guys have come to mean so much to me as I've written about them over the past ten months! And I can't thank each one of you enough, for making it possible! Without your support, I would have given up on writing a long time ago! I've made so many e-friends since last August. If I started to name names, I'm sure I'd forget some of you. But I think you know who you are! Many of you have had a part in making this story what it's become. And each one of you has a special place in my heart! Here's an update on the Yahoo group: We had 53 members yesterday afternoon. And thanks for taking part in the polls! 80% of you said that you'd like to read chapters that I rewrite. So I will definitely post those chapters to the group ... and also to Nifty, if they can post them in the correct sequential order. (In my opinion, the revised chapter 1 needs to go after the original chapter 1 ... and not behind chapter 43.) Well, enough of all that! On with the story ... Chapter 43 Chris narrates It seemed like all eyes were on us, as we entered the large restaurant. And I guess we were three pretty hot dudes! As a guy of around eighteen or nineteen showed us to our table, Dad commented, "Boys, it looks like the two of you are giving these people quite a thrill." And I think I saw more than a touch of pride in his eyes! After noticing that several diners were holding their forks in mid-air while they stared at us, we all had a good laugh! Our booth was in the back of the restaurant, so we had a long walk before we were seated. Dad slid into one side, while Kaiden and I took the other. And after giving us our menus, the young guy just shook his head before walking away. "I guess he must be straight," Kaiden observed with a smile. "Probably," Dad replied; he opened his menu and began to pore over it. "Or maybe he's just jealous." "Yeah," I added. And I kicked off my flip-flops and began to absentmindedly play with Kaiden's right foot, while I looked at my menu. The restaurant was really busy, and the service was pretty slow. So we had quite a bit of time to enjoy each other's company while we waited for someone to take our order. Finally a young waitress stopped by; maybe it was just my imagination, but it seemed like she couldn't take her eyes off of my tanned chest. "I think she wants you!" Kaiden laughed, after she'd left the table. And he gave me a gentle punch in the ribs. Of course, I couldn't just accept that from my kid brother and we began to wrestle with each other in the seat. Dad just looked on for a little while, but then he put a stop to it. "Come on guys and act your age," he said. "Not in the restaurant; save it for later." "Yeah, Chris, stop acting like a little kid!" Kaiden laughed. Dad frowned at Kaiden, and I wanted to be mad at him; but after looking him in the face, I realized that I couldn't. So, I just squeezed his knee before replying, "Sorry, Dad." Then I rested my hand on Kaiden's thigh. We talked about all kinds of stuff, until the food finally arrived. And maybe it was just because my stomach was growling, but dinner sure tasted good! We had a pretty long meal; and I bet it was eight-thirty, or so, when Dad was ready to pay the bill. After handing the waitress his credit card, Dad said, "That was a delicious meal!" And moments later, when she returned with the receipt, Dad asked, "Could you suggest something really fun for my boys and me to do this evening? This is the last night of a great vacation, and we don't want to just head back to the motel room and watch TV!" Her eyes brightened. "Sure!" she replied. "There's a new miniature golf place that just opened up. My boyfriend and I sure had lots of fun there last Saturday!" "That sounds great," Dad replied. "What do you think, boys?" And we nodded our approval. I'd only played miniature golf once before; and I'd had an awesome time! Dad got directions to the place, and a few minutes later, we were parking next to the bright lights of a busy putt-putt golf course. It was a beautiful, warm summer evening; and lots of young people, along with a few families, seemed to be enjoying their Saturday night knocking golf balls around the circuit. After watching the group before us putt towards hole one, Kaiden wanted to go first. "Damn!" he exclaimed after tapping the ball. His shot only went a few feet! "Go ahead Kaiden; hit it again," Dad said. "But remember that each stroke counts against you!" Kaiden's next shot was a lot harder, as the golf ball rolled past the cup. And after he stepped out of the way, I took my first shot. "Not bad, Chris," Dad observed, as my ball rolled along the right side of the putting green and stopped four or five feet from the hole. Dad placed his ball on the fake turf, took a couple of practice swings, and tapped the ball towards the hole. Like Kaiden's second shot, Dad's ball rolled past the hole ... but just barely! "Wow, that was a good shot!" Kaiden exclaimed. And after Dad tapped in his ball, he replied, "I bet you didn't know that your old man used to play golf all the time, did you?" "Hunh uh," Kaiden answered. "I don't remember you ever playing golf ..." "Yeah, Dad ... when did you play golf?" I asked as I took my second shot. And my ball rolled by the cup. "Damn!" But I was able to tap it in on the next stroke. Dad laughed. "Actually boys, I wasn't all that much older than you. I tried to keep at it after high school. But after I got married, between the family and my job, there just wasn't time for it any more." He was quiet for a moment, while Kaiden took his shot. "Your grandpa and I used to go to the golf course just about every Saturday morning for a couple of years." "No fair!" Kaiden stated, as his ball missed the cup by a couple of inches. "I didn't know we were playing with a pro!" "I didn't know you were either," Dad replied, while laughing and shaking his head. And finally Kaiden made the putt. As the game progressed, both Kaiden and I got a little better, while Dad seemed to get worse. And although I wasn't very good at miniature golf, it was lots of fun just being out on the course and horsing around with Dad and Kaiden! Dad won in the end, but our scores weren't all that far apart. "We need to do this again some time," Dad commented, after we'd turned in our putters. "Maybe they've got a place like this in Boulder." "Or if they don't, maybe Josh could build one!" Kaiden quipped. Dad just laughed. "He DOES have a lot of money, doesn't he?" "Yeah," I replied as we headed to the car. "I never thought we'd be rich." "Well, don't let it go to your heads," Dad stated, taking out his car keys. "We're going to be living in a nice house now ... and be part of a bigger family; but nothing else has changed ... not really." And after we all took our seats, he continued, "I've got a feeling that Josh might work you boys harder than I ever did!" Kaiden moaned, but I just smiled. Other than the basics, Dad had never asked either of us to do a lot of work around our apartment. But if he meant that Josh would have us working on the ranch, I thought that might be a lot of fun too! "What kind of work are you talking about?" I asked. "I'm not sure," Dad said as he started the car. "But Josh has already enlisted Ben to help with the fall cattle round-up." And after he backed out of his parking spot, Dad continued, "And me too, if I'm not working back in Missouri." "You're gonna be a cowboy?" Kaiden asked, shaking his head. "Don't act so surprised," Dad commented. "I bet I 'd be pretty good on a horse!" The three of us had a good laugh as we imagined Dad on horseback roping cattle. And we joked around with each other on the drive back to the motel. While we were playing miniature golf, night had fallen; and as we entered the motel room, I noticed that the bedside clock read a little after ten thirty. As soon as Dad chained the door, Kaiden asked, "Dad, can the three of us snuggle together for a while?" And he slipped out of his shirt. Dad smiled at Kaiden. "Well, I can't speak for Chris, but that sure sounds nice to me!" He pulled his t-shirt over his head and looked around the room, before fixing his gaze on the large overstuffed chair. "What do you think, Chris?" And he nodded towards the chair. "You bet!" I replied. "But let's get naked first, okay?" "Sounds good to me ..." Dad said as he kicked off his running shoes. And after he slipped out of his cargos, Dad sat in the large chair. "Hey, it's a recliner!" he exclaimed, popping up the footrest and leaning back in the chair. While Kaiden sat his naked body on the right arm of the chair, I sat to Dad's left. Dad spread his arms wide, and both of us lay down into them. After we'd gotten comfortable, Dad squeezed Kaiden and me to his strong chest. And as I relaxed against him, I closed my eyes; I loved my father so much! My hips slid off the arm, and I rolled on top of Dad. And absent-mindedly, I began to hump my steely rod against Dad's hip and trimmed pubes. I turned his face to mine, and we kissed lovingly. Dad's cock began to come alive, as it hardened against my leg, pointing downward. "Kaiden, my cock is trapped!" Dad exclaimed with a pained look on his face. "Would you try and make it more comfortable for me?" "Sure," my brother replied with a smile. And Kaiden kissed Dad's neck before reaching beneath my thigh and releasing Dad's meat. He kept ahold of Dad's huge penis while he began to hump against Dad's other side. Before long, both of us were grunting with each thrust of our hips! Dad squeezed both of us tightly, and then he stated, "Guys, I don't know about you, but I think I'd be a lot more comfortable doing this on the bed! I feel like I'm being crushed here; and I can't move in this recliner ..." I laughed; but after looking at Kaiden, we both got up. Our hard cocks were tight against our stomachs and mine pulsed with each beat of my heart. I wasn't sure about Kaiden, but I was so horny for my dad that I could hardly wait for him to get out of the chair and lie down on the bed! And moments later, he'd crawled into bed on his stomach. "Why don't you roll over on your back?" Kaiden asked; and right away he turned over. After Dad was comfortable, Kaiden and I gently spread his arms and legs. Then Kaiden crawled over next to me, and whispered something in my ear. "You wanna try it?" was his final question ... and I nodded my agreement. "Dad," I began, "we want to get you all relaxed." I knelt by Dad's right hand and began to deeply massage our father's chest and abs ... while Kaiden began to kiss his face and neck. "Boys," Dad moaned between kisses, "mmmmm that feels good!" Every once in a while, I would let my hand would drop lower, and it would brush up against Dad's throbbing manhood. It was just long enough for Dad to know that we hadn't forgotten about his cock; but not long enough that Dad got any real stimulation from it. And at some point, Kaiden and I switched positions; as he massaged Dad, I got to kiss the man who I loved like no other! After what seemed like a blissful eternity, I rolled onto my back and pulled Dad on top of me. "Dad ..." Kaiden asked tentatively, in his best little-boy voice, "...Would you let both Chris and me fuck you at the same time?" Dad raised his body up until he was sitting on his legs, straddling my hips. And he looked at Kaiden and me, like he was assessing the situation, before he answered. "You bet, Kaiden!" he replied with a sexy smile. "I think it just might work ..." And after pausing for a moment, he continued, "Chris, are you up for trying it?" "Yeah, Dad ... I can't wait!" I exclaimed. I reached up and drew my father's lips to mine; and we kissed again ... like I now felt every father and son ought to ... long, slow and lovingly! Finally, Dad sat up again; and this time, he tucked his feet under my thighs. "Okay, Kaiden, now lube us up REALLY good." And moments later, I heard the click of a plastic cap: followed by my brother's cold wet hand rubbing over my engorged dick. Then he grabbed ahold of my cock and held it at the entrance to Dad's back door. And as I thrust my cock up into my father, Dad sat on my meat. The sensations of Dad's hot, tight ass on my cock were WAY intense! As Dad rocked up and down on my throbbing shaft, I thrust my hips upward. Kaiden seemed to be sizing up the situation for a while, and then he knelt around my thighs. He put his arms on the mattress, just in front of Dad's knees as he leaned forward onto Dad's back. "Are you guys ready?" he asked. I couldn't see it, but I could hear the smile in his voice. "Yeah, Kaiden, I think so," Dad answered. "Stuff it up inside me!" I felt Kaiden's hard cock pressing on my shaft for quite a while, and suddenly, he just popped in! "Oh fuck!" Dad shouted. "Oh fuck ... oh fuck ... oh fuck!" I'd almost forgotten how good it felt to have another guy's cock squeezed against mine in someone's ass. And I think it felt even better this time, because it was my brother whose cock was trapped alongside mine; and the ass belonged to our dad! It just couldn't get any better than that! While Kaiden was shouting 'yeah' again and again, I began to moan. As Dad fucked himself on both of our poles, I put my hands on his hips, pressing his body back onto Kaiden and me. The feelings were awesome! All the while, Dad was moaning and yelling. I saw pain in his face, but it was mixed with what appeared to be unbelievable pleasure! As my brother's dick pressed hard against my shaft, I knew that I wouldn't be able to last for long. It was SO tight in Dad's love tunnel; and Kaiden's cock was SO hard ... "Oh fuck!" Kaiden exclaimed. "I'm gonna nut!" And before he finished talking, spurt after spurt of his hot, little-brother seed bathed my cock. He thrust urgently, and then fell forward onto our Dad. But he didn't pull out; instead he let his orgasm run its course, and then began to ram his dick into our father harder than before! "Come on, Chris ... I need to feel your spunk mixed with mine!" Dad's thick cock was rock hard; and grabbing it in my right fist, I began to pump furiously. I was right on the edge ... and when Dad leaned forward and kissed me ... well, I bet you can guess what happened next! My body tensed up; and with a giant, upward thrust of my hips, I began to unload. "Unh! Unh! Unh!" I cried as my cock shot again and again. It felt like it would never stop! And my orgasm began in my groin and traveled down my legs to the tips of my toes, as I stretched them out to their fullest. "Fuck, yeah," I gasped, as exhausted I lay back against the bed. Dad kissed me again. "Come on, Chris," he pleaded urgently. And turning to Kaiden, he added, "Son, plow my ass like there's no tomorrow!" I smiled up at my dad; and both Kaiden and I began to piston our cocks into his cruelly stretched sphincter. Kaiden grabbed ahold of Dad's hipbones, pulling our father onto our cocks and then pushing him away. And as Dad began to wail, I took his manhood in my hand. Suddenly his ass tried to clamp down on our meat. And while Kaiden and I continued to fuck him, Dad yelled, "OH FUCK, BOYS!" Followed by several long spurts from his titanic cock. The first couple of shots hit me in the face; and I closed my eyes. But I felt the rest as it squirted onto my neck, chest and stomach. Then I guess Dad leaned forward, because I felt him begin to lick over my eyes, nose and cheeks, as Kaiden pulled out of Dad's once tight ass. I opened my eyes, and Kaiden was crawling into bed next to me. And he began to lap up Dad's spunk that had fallen on my torso. Fuck, I could hardly believe what had just happened! Still impaled on my rapidly deflating cock, Dad sat up. And then, after untangling his legs from mine, he slowly lifted himself off of me. "Be right back," he said, as he hurried to the bathroom. Several moments later he flushed the toilet, and was wiping a towel over his legs as he came through the door. "You guys made quite a mess in my butt!" Dad exclaimed; and grimacing, he added, "And I don't think my ass muscle will ever be the same again!" Dad's face was deadly serious, but as he approached the bed, he laughed to let us know he was all right. And after a moment, he smiled warmly. "Boys ... I love both of you SO much," he declared. He climbed into bed and hugged both of us long and lovingly, before giving Kaiden a passionate, manly kiss. Then he leaned forward; and I thought I could see a touch of pride in his eyes, as he tenderly kissed my lips. "How was I ever so lucky to have both of you as sons?" he asked. (Chris continues from his college dorm room four and a half years later ...) 'How could WE have ever been so lucky to have him for our Dad?' I wonder as I type these words into my laptop. And I pause for a long, long time and reflect again on all the great times I had while growing up. *This is the ending of the first book ... but just the beginning of this tale ... (But Chris has a few more words he wants to say.) For the past couple of years, I've felt like I had to tell the incredible story of our family. At first, I'm sure the other guys thought I was crazy; but when they began to read what I'd written, they all wanted to get in on it. The spring and summer of 2002 changed my life! I began that spring with a dad who was still missing my mom, and one brother. But by the end of July, I had two incredible dads and three awesome brothers! All of us learned a lot about loving that summer ... and about how to make love. No doubt about it, I've got the best family in the world! I think that Ryan can't wait to start telling you about some stuff that happened to the family after Dad, Kaiden and I left Colorado on that Saturday morning in July. He says that he's having a hard time finding enough time to write, what with his last year of high school and all ... But he sure hopes you'll still be here to read it when he gets the first chapter finished! ## Guys ... thanks so much for reading the first book about the lives of this awesome family! It started out as a story, but it's over five hundred pages long, so I think it ought to qualify as a book! I've learned a lot about myself over the past few months, and I also discovered that I have a talent for writing. But now, after ten months, I need to take some time off ... and get away from writing for a while, to recharge my batteries. I sincerely hope that all of you will understand! Each of my readers means more to me than you will ever know!! And I know how much some of you look forward to each new chapter. I would expect that I'll try to post the first chapter of the still un-named second book in August or September. At the moment, I'm planning to keep it under the "I'll Suck You" heading on Nifty. But I'll send all of you in the Yahoo group, and on my 'next post' list an update with exact information before I post it. It may seem strange that I just started the Yahoo group and now I'm not going to have a new chapter for a while. A month ago, when I began the group, I hoped that I would be able to continue writing through the summer. But I can tell that I need some time away from writing, because the last few chapters haven't been fun to write. I am going to do simple rewrites of a few of the early chapters of "I"ll Suck You". For a 'write and post as you go' type of story, I think the continuity is pretty good. But there are a couple of things that don't jive between some of the first chapters and later ones. And I want to take care of the formatting error on chapter two! Even though my writing style has changed somewhat over the chapters (I think the boys talk in a little more casual manner now than at first, among other things), I'm not going to rewrite chapters to specifically address that issue. That would defeat the purpose of me trying to get away from writing for a little while. Anyway, Steve and I are going to try to keep the group going until I begin to post the second book. Have a great summer everybody! And thanks SO much for reading! Greg And now a note from Steve: While Greg is getting his recharge there will be new stuff posted to the Yahoo group every week. We will be creating polls and discussion questions to get feedback from you the readers on how you would like the story to go. While Greg has sworn me to secrecy about what is planned for Book Two maybe I can sneak a hint or two about what you will be seeing in Book Two. I think when Book Two begins you will agree it was worth wait. Steve