Date: Fri, 15 Dec 2023 12:53:05 -0700 (MST) From: Ash Hunter Subject: It's a Surprise This story is a work of fiction. Characters may be inspired by people and fantasies in my life but have in no way occurred, with name and location changes as needed. As a first-time writer, I would love any comments, critiques, questions, suggestions, or pictures (or even videos ;) ) that you deem necessary. Help me become a better author and inspire me with anything you think would work. In fact, two parts of this story were inspired from a reader's DM on Twitter and another's email! You can also find me on Twitter @hunter_writing If you enjoy the stories at nifty.org please consider making a donation to keep the archive running! There is a huge body of work available to suit every taste. Please support nifty.org if you can. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- I have a surprise for you. A message I've gotten from my brother Ryan quite a few times over the years, so I knew better than to ask who, but I was intrigued. I thought about it on the ride home from the airport. I have a somewhat unique dynamic with my brother. First of all, we're identical twins. The real deal identical twins to the point where on some older pictures we're not even 100% sure who is who. That already made us closer than many siblings, but my brother took it to the next level with some diagnosis. He's a narcissist and a sex addict, fully diagnosed, and he's really into himself. He will and can pretty much screw anyone. But being that into himself, well that has led to him developing a fetish where he likes sharing guys with me and watching. He gets off seeing "himself" fucking a guy, and honestly, I've found out that I like being watched. I guess it works, he's a narcissist with a voyageur streak (once he's satisfied) and I'm an exhibitionist that doesn't care who watches. I have a surprise for you. The first time he'd sent that was just after high school graduation. We're from a fairly well-off family, and our parents let us have a "safe grad" party at our place. Basically, as long as no one got alcohol poisoning and there was no property damage, they were fine with anything we did. As an added present, they locked themselves in their room and let us go wild. The party was winding down, and I got that text from my brother, followed by another one telling me to come to my room. Everyone was passing out or playing drinking games, so I went to see what it was. I walked into Ryan on my bed, naked, facing the door, with his dick balls deep in my best friend Nathan's ass. Nathan, also naked, had a bunched-up pair of underwear in his mouth, deadening the moans he was making and was taking Ryan's 7-inch dick like a champion. Nathan's eyes were glazed over, but slowly focusing on me in horror. But just as he was realizing I had walked in on them, Ryan suddenly thrusted forward. Immediately Nathan's eyes lost focused, and the underwear barely held back the sound he was making. I stepped in and shut the door behind me. Slowly processing watching my brother fuck my best friend. Now that I was in the room and the door was closed, Ryan smirked, grabbed a fistful of Nathan's black hair, and started pounding. It was surreal. It was like watching yourself in a mirror. The same tanned white skin flushing with the effort of stretching out Nathan's hole. The same medium length, light brown hair falling into the same blue eyes, looking directly at me. The same crooked smirk with perfect teeth from years of braces. And the same 5'11" slender, but fit frame. Even the same 7-inch, cut cock pulling out of Nathan's big ass, before slamming back in. Every thrust was met with a slam of flesh as Ryan started drilling Nathan so fast it sounded like he was applauding himself. Nathan seems to be struggling. He moaned louder and louder with every thrust from my brother. Nathan was the school's top wrestler, 6'3" and build like a brick wall -- solid muscle, but not very defined. Very popular with the ladies, excellent athlete, decent student with a full ride scholarship to the same university I was going to, and apparently a power bottom. I've seen him wrestle and win against guys bigger than him, and hold them until tap out. Even in the exhibition matches for the teams, he pinned his coach. And now I was watching my brother turn him into a moaning mess of a man. Holding his hair for leverage, and Nathan's back seemed to naturally arch so that Ryan could go deeper. Those thick arms he used to win almost every match he'd ever been in, were shaking from the effort of keeping himself up during my brother's assault on his big ass. I had just recently come out as gay to my friends and family. Ryan was pan, as long as he got off, he didn't care who he was fucking. He already knew I was gay. Nathan had been my first friend to find out, and he just said it changed nothing and we'd still be best friends in his deep, comforting voice. He hugged me, and we kept going on like nothing was different. He didn't know I had had a crush on him for ages, but he was my rock and best friend, which was more important to me than anything else. And now he was getting fucked like a pornstar by my twin brother. It was trance-like crossing the floor to my bed. Inching closer I could see the beads of sweat on both faces. I'm not sure when, but I had stripped out of my own clothes, and had my cock throbbing in my hand, precum running like a faucet. I was never much of a precummer before, but I was dripping more now than I normally came. A sudden tempo shift brought me to reality. The thrusts were slowing down, and I realized that Ryan had blown his load in Nathan. I watched as my brother drew his semi soft cock from Nathan's twitching hole, semen coating it, and he let out a satisfied moan and smacked his hand on Nathan's big ass cheek. I saw several red marks from where Ryan had been spanking him. Ryan smiled my smile, "Are you ready for the real surprise?" I was too stunned to say anything, and Nathan seem to have been rendered mute from the fucking. I watched as Ryan flipped Nathan onto his back and pulled him to the edge of the bed, underwear still in mouth and chest heaving, sticking straight out and curving sharply upward was a cock so hard it looked painful. The foreskin was covering its head, but it glistened with cum or precum, I couldn't tell. But it was dripping off and pooling on Nathan's furry lower stomach. Dusting from hair from his pecs and lower stomach, then into the well trimmed dark pubes, making his skin seem paler in contrast. I felt a hand wrap around my dick, I almost thought it was my own from how expertly it grabbed me, but it was my brother, he gently pulled me forward with one hand, and pushed one of Nathan's meaty legs up with the other. He pulled me forward until the head of my cock was at Nathan's used and quivering hole; the hairs around it rubbing against my too sensitive cockhead. One of Nathan's legs was hanging off the bed, and pushed aside by my own leg, and the other was being held up to his stomach by my brother. I looked Nathan, my best friend and the high school's wrestling captain, directly in the eyes and saw only blind lust. My mind, already over stimulated by what was happening, blanked, until I felt a hand at the small of my back push. My cockhead slipped into the warmth of Nathan's ass as his eyes widened at the sudden intrusion. Something in me just snapped. I reached up and pulled the underwear from Nathan's mouth. He inhaled sharply, but before he could say anything, I plunged in balls deep. Nathan's eyes rolled back as his hips instinctively bucked up to give me more access. He moaned, a deep, guttural sound. His dick twitched. I drew back out until my cockhead was rubbing again his hairy entrance and pushed in again. And again. And again. Faster and faster, as I lost control, the feeling of his hairy hole rubbing my shaft as my head kept slamming against his prostate in that soft, velvet tunnel. I could even feel my brother's cum lubing my best friend's hole as I slammed into it. Even though he had just been fucked senseless, every thrust felt like the first, the hot, inviting tightness locking me in place, begging me to go harder. No, that wasn't the hole begging me to go harder, that was Nathan. His deep, comforting voice was now cracking with lust as he begged for it. His hands had flown to his own beer can thick cock and were a blur as he was jacking himself off in rhythm to my thrusts. Our eyes locked, as I slammed in a final time. My dick exploded, filling him with the biggest load of my life. I could feel he already filled hole tremble as my seed spilled out around my shaft. His ass trembled, and on the second or third shot into him, Nathan sudden shouted as he hit his own climax. His dick fired shot after shot of thick cum. The first shot past his head and splattered on the wall, his second and third both streaked his own face, and he didn't even notice that, firing several more shots across his pecs and stomach. His hand let go of his cock, and suddenly grabbed me by the back of the head and pulled me onto him. Our lips met and I tasted his own salty load on them, as he shoved his tongue into my mouth. I could of stay like that forever but then heard my brother shout out: "Oh fuck, yeah!" He pulled me back and shot his second load over Nathan. Salty streaky of cum pooling between his pecs and dripping down his cheek. "Fuck that was hot, Nick." He said to me. "Hope you liked your surprise. Easiest ass I've ever gotten in to after he got drunk enough to think I was you." He smirked again, used the pair of underwear that had been gagging Nathan to wipe off his dick, put on his pants and shirt, and left the room. I just looked at Nathan again, wiped my brother's cum off his face, and went right back in for another kiss. My half hard cock was still inside him and was starting to harden again. I didn't even have to pull out before I started to fuck him again. My brother and I fucked Nathan almost daily for the entire summer. When the summer ended, Nathan and I went to university together and we continued to fuck all the time, staying best friends between fucks. Though it never became anything more than best friends with the best benefits. "We're here." Said the cab drive. I snapped back to the present, rock hard, but luckily, I could hide my erection with my bag. I thanked and paid him and started walking to my front door. It was winter break of my 4th year of university, and every time I came home, my brother had at least a couple different men to watch me fuck. He reveled in the challenge of getting different men to spread it for him, for us. My mind raced to the last few trips home as I opened the unlocked front door, cell phone in my hand, the message still open. I have a surprise for you.