Date: Sat, 2 Jan 2016 01:52:46 +0000 (UTC) From: fiveholepunch@comcast.net Subject: Jorge's Younger Brother Please give to Nifty. This story is an experiment using dialogue only. It is what you would overhear if you were a fly on the wall. Be careful, the same character's dialogue can be split into several separate lines. The intent is to let you create the visuals in your head. Let me know if it works. I may follow this up with a longer version with conventional first person narrative. Jorge's Younger Brother "Come on in." "Is Mark here yet?" "Yeah, he's here. He just got home about five minutes ago. He's waiting upstairs. I told him I had `something' for him to do." "Did you tell him I was coming over?" "No, but it doesn't matter, he'll do what I tell him." "How many times has he ...?" "With me and our cousins a bunch of times, but never anyone outside the family. You'll be the first. You ready?" "Yeah, for sure!" "Let's go then." ********** "What's Luis doing here?" "I told you you had something to do this afternoon." "But, Jorge ..." "Hey, it'll be just like with Carlos and Jose." "But ... what if he tells?" "Luis won't tell anyone, will you Luis?" "No way." "See? " "But, Jorge ..." "It'll be fun. You like Luis, right?" "Yeah ..." "Well, he likes you too. Don't you, Luis?" "Definitely." "Come on, Marky. I wouldn't have invited him if I thought he wouldn't be nice." "What do you say?" "All right, I guess." "Good! Let's get busy. Luis, you can throw your stuff on that chair over there. Mark, go get the cream." ********** "You ready for it, Luis?" "Oh, yeah! I'm half hard now." "I'll do him first; he'll be loosened up for you." "Are you sure? I'm pretty thick." "Carlos is pretty thick too and Mark's has taken him a bunch of times." "Okay." ********* "Did you get the cream?" "Yeah." "Give it to me. Take off your clothes and get naked." "Do you want him to suck you? Mark, do you want to suck Luis?" "I'm pretty hard now." "That's okay. Mark likes to suck." "You like that cock, Marky?" "It's big." "Suck it, Marky." "Oh, yeah! Oh, fuck!" "I told you." "He definitely knows how to give head!" "Did you like sucking Luis?" "Yeah, he tastes good." "Well, how about some for your big brother?" "Mmmhh!" "That's enough. Bend over the bed. Let's get you ready." "Innh ..." "Yeah, you like that don't cha?" "Uh huh." "You wanna finger his ass, Luis?" "Yeah." "Hot and tight?" "Yeah it is." "That fingering got him hot. Did Luis get you hard, Marky?" "Hand me my T-shirt. Mark, put the pillow on the edge of the bed." "How about a little kiss for your brother?" "He's a little shy. Aren't you, Marky?" "Okay, get up there. Scoot a little further down. Okay, that's good." "Legs up." "Ihhnn ..." "That's it. Let it in." "Ohh ... slower, Jorge ..." "Open up. You almost have the head." "Ohhh ... Nnnh!" "You got it now." "Shit! That's hot." "Yeah, I like watching Marky get fucked." "I'm dripping `pre' over here like crazy!" "Don't blow your load before you get it in. Marky wouldn't like that, would you?" "No." "Spread your legs wider. Start jerking." "Tell Luis how much you like cock." "I like cock." "He likes it. A lot." "Fuckin' A he does!" "Here, let me jerk you, Marky. He likes it when I do it." "Scoot down some." "The T-shirt's slipping on the pillow." "Shit!" "He just about slid off the bed." "Yeah, I know. Sometimes, if the pillow is too high, your cock slides out." "Uhhn ... Uhh!" "You're laying some pipe now!" "Yeah, I'm getting close to busting my nut. You getting close, Marky?" "Uhhnn ... Yeah ..." "His nuts are up. I can tell." "Uhh! I'm going for it now ..." "Ihhn ... Ihhn!" "Bust it, Marky! Bust it!" "Uhhh ... Uhhh!" "Oh, fuck! Yeah!" "Damn!" "I can feel his ass twitching. You get a good one, Marky?" "Mmmm ... Yeah!" "He's starting to get some come. See?" "That tickle, Marky?" "Yeah!" "You ready for Luis?" "Mm huh." "Your turn." "Put your legs up for Luis, Marky." "Damn, your come is leaking out of his hole!" "It'll slide in easier." "Ready?" "Uh huh." "Okay." "Uhh ..." "Oh, man! Is it hot and wet!" "Ohhh!" "Should I stop?" "No ..." "He can take it, just go slow at first. Marky, relax for Luis." "Okay." "Mmmm ..." "He likes it, Luis." "I'm going to slide it in and out a little, okay?" "Yeah ... do it." "Ohh, that's good." "I told you. Push back, Marky, take his cock." "Ohh!" "Take it." "Ohhh!" "He's liking it now, Luis! I think Marky's found a new boyfriend." "Oh, man! Your jizz is squishing out!" "I can hear it from here!" "Uhhh ... I don't think I can hold it." "Clamp down, Marky!" "Ihhn ... Ihhnn!" "Ohh! I'm coming!" "Uhhn! Fuck!" "Oh, wow! Mark, that was great. I've got to catch my breath." "Shit! The come is leaking out all over your T-shirt!" "Don't worry, that's what it is there for. It's not like it hasn't happened before. You can use it to wipe the mess from your balls." "They're sopping." "I can see." "You okay, Mark? I didn't hurt you did I?" "No, I'm okay. You're big, though." "Spread your legs and show him your ass." "God damn! That hole looks well fucked." "Doesn't it, though?" "Look how puffy it is! Is that going to tighten up?" "Yeah, it's no problem for Mark. He took Carlos, José, and me two times apiece a couple of weeks ago. We were at it for over an hour. And then we did it again the next day." "Damn! That's pretty good, Mark. I don't think I could handle all that cock." "Did you like doing it with Luis?" "Yeah." "You want to do with him again sometime?" "He's too shy to answer but I think the answer is yes." "Hey, go clean up now ... and don't drip on the rug." ********** "Well, was he as good as I said?" "Better!" All Rights Reserved. Copyright 2016.