Date: Fri, 19 Mar 2010 01:56:23 -0700 (PDT) From: Greg Subject: More is Better ch 22 More is Better By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com) Story Consultant: Drew Editor and Proofreader: Jere The author copyrights this story, with permission for posting on the Nifty Archive. It may not be copied to another website without prior permission from the author. This is a fictional story ... any similarities to actual people, places, events or other entities is purely coincidental. The story involves gay sex between family members and their friends, and is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who aren't offended by material of this type! If you are underage, or this type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now. *** I want to especially thank Drew for all the help he gives me on the story. His enthusiasm for the guys is infectious. And thanks to all of you who emailed after chapter 21! I always appreciate hearing from my readers, though I haven't said it much lately. All you guys are the very best! *** Way, way back ... when I began to write the first story in this series, "I'll Suck You", I was trying to determine the best way to write it. I had always liked the idea of third person stories, because the person telling it is all-knowing. But I decided to write it in first person because it is a more intimate way to tell a story. And this kind of story needs intimacy, in my opinion. The problem with first person, however, is that you only see things from that one person's perspective. So, I have tried to incorporate the best of both, by changing narrators from time to time. I suppose that can be confusing to the reader, but it does allow you guys to experience things that you wouldn't ordinarily be able to ... if, say, Chris was the one and only narrator of the story. Anyway, I said all that to say this, we are going to have a new narrator in this chapter, Devon Myers, the neighbor boy. I hope you enjoy what he has to say. Greg *** Chapter Twenty-two: (Hey ... we're gonna hear from our neighbor, Devon, in this chapter. He has something he really wants to share with all of us!) When the fifteen-minute timer clicked off the spa motor, we just sat in the water for a while. I don't think any of us were eager to climb out of the hot pool, collect our clothes, and race through the cold ... naked and dripping wet ... into the adjacent building to get dressed. But we were gonna have to do it, like it or not "Let's get going," David ... who was the oldest in our group by more than a year ... suggested, with a sigh. And, with his mostly hard, torpedo-shaped cock leading the way, he climbed out of the hot tub. "Fuckin' shit!" he exclaimed, dancing from foot to foot, while wrapping a towel around his hips and collecting his clothes. "I guess we gotta," Kaiden commented. "Come on, guys, let's get moving." As one, Eric, Kaiden, and I popped out of the quiet waters of the now-silent whirlpool. Damn, as great as it been in the water, it was miserable out of it! The gooseflesh, which had felt amazing while we were in the tub, just felt cold, as ... whooping and hollering ... we grabbed up our things. We raced after David, toward the door, and followed him through it. The dimly lit swimming pool was empty and quiet, except for the distant, muffled whine of the pool filter. "Damn, it feels good in here!" Eric declared, dropping his clothes on a nearby chaise lounge. Shivering, he pulled off his towel and began to dry himself. "It sure does," I agreed, briskly toweling my wet hair. Being the horny, young teenagers we were, a little cold weather wasn't going to completely stamp out the sexy feelings that were always a part of our thoughts. But it did put a damper on them for a few minutes. We dried-off, dressing quickly, before racing across the parking lot and back yard to the kitchen door. Kaiden pulled open the door, and we followed him through it. I closed the door behind us. "Sounds like the guys are still downstairs playing video games," David commented, as Chris' voice whooped loudly from the direction of the stairs, followed by a few comments from Tim. "Yeah ... you think we should join them?" Kaiden asked, with a smile. "Um, I don't think so, at least ... ," Eric replied, before laughing, "Hey, I'm still hurting here." Even through his jeans, it was obvious his cock was still as hard as a rock. "Me, too," David added. While grabbing his crotch with one hand, he pumped the air in front of it a couple of times with the other. Laughing, I agreed. "Let's go up to your room, Kaiden, okay?" "Sure!" our sexy friend, with the messed-up, wet blonde hair, agreed. Just as the four of us rushed through the kitchen door and into the hall, Josh stepped out of his office. He was looking down, leafing through a handful of important-looking papers. He almost heard us too late. "Whoa, boys!" he exclaimed in surprise, suddenly looking up. He took a quick step backward. "Hey, Dad!" Kaiden said, as all of us stopped in our tracks. "We're going up to my room." Regaining his composure, Josh rested his empty hand on the doorframe to his right. "Don't you guys stay up TOO late," he answered. "You've got school tomorrow, remember." "Yeah, we know," Kaiden laughed, slipping the thumb of his right hand into the elastic waistband of his sweatpants. "We won't be up all night." Giving out with a fatherly smile, Josh nodded his head. "Okay, then. Goodnight, everybody." 'Night, Josh,' or something like that, came out of all our mouths, as we raced each other to the stairs ... and then up them. I made it to the top first; and I turned to the right, toward Kaiden's room. "Hey, where are you going, Devon?" Kaiden chuckled, from the top of the stairs. "My room is over here now." He nodded toward his left; and laughing harder, he added, "Cole has my old room. At least, he's SUPPOSED to!" All the other guys laughed knowingly. "But I don't think Cole has even been in his bedroom since he moved in," Kaiden added, with a sexy twinkle in his large, brown eyes. Smiling broadly, while shrugging my shoulders, I commented, "I bet you're right about that!" before following the other guys into Kaiden's new room. "So are both of you guys in here now?" David asked, glancing around the bedroom. The walls were still almost bare ... with only a couple of Kaiden's many posters already hung ... so, obviously, he hadn't finished setting it up yet. "Not yet," Eric replied, nodding toward the bathroom. "I'm next door ... and I've still got a room in Ben and Tina's house, too." "For now, at least, Eric's got the room next to mine," Kaiden snickered. He pulled off his sweatshirt, before flopping down on his queen-sized bed. "But we've been sharing a lot, lately." "Sounds like fun," David said, unbuttoning his shirt and tossing it aside. The smooth, dry, dark brown skin on his torso looked so warm and inviting, as he kicked off his shoes and joined Kaiden. "Especially, since you guys are boyfriends, and all." "Yep, it's awesome!" the manager of our recently disbanded middle school football team responded. I smiled to myself, at how awesome it was that Tim and his boys now lived with Josh. I gotta tell you, I was sure a different person from the fearful kid I used to be ... back when Kaiden, Ryan, and the guys moved to the J bar A ... and I first met them. I mean, back then, even Ryan ... who's a couple of months younger than me ... had started to get bigger between his legs. But everybody had accepted me for the undeveloped guy I was ... and still am, sadly ... even though all of them had already entered puberty. They could have laughed when they saw my tiny cock, but they didn't. By accepting my predicament, they even made me feel good about myself. Toeing off my sneaks, I joined the other three guys on the bed. We wrestled for a while, like boys sometimes do. All of us were having SO much fun! I swear it was just an accident, but once ... when David had me in his vice-like grip, his body on top of mine ... my hand brushed across the bulging front of his jeans. My friend groaned deeply. "David, I think your guy is trying to tell us something," I stated, laughing. "I think he wants to have some fun!" "Yeah, it wants to be unloading up your ass, Dev," he replied, grabbing me around the waist for a second, before pulling my sweatshirt over my head. "Hey, I LIKE what I see there," David added, licking his lips, in a sexy way. Without any hesitation, he took hold of both my pants legs. Quickly, he tugged them off my legs and tossed them aside. I lay there completely naked, as David slipped out of his jeans. David had the body any eighth grade boy in his right mind would die for: deep all-over tan; just the right amount of pit hair; perfectly shaped legs, nicely covered in silky, dark brown fur; and smallish, but thick, pubes crowning a throbbing, torpedo-shaped uncut cock. Just a touch of muscle definition ... when he flexed or strained ... in his upper arms and chest competed the package. Wow, was he ever one hot guy! I might have still had a little boy's cock, but it was like a steel spike. The feelings coursing through that "V" spot under the head were nothing short of amazing, as my eyes pored over the awesome body of my friend. "Shit, yeah, man!" I exclaimed, spreading my legs some. Suddenly, I remembered a favorite scene from the DVD my brother kept hidden under his mattress ... except for when we were watching it, that is. 'Hmmmm,' I wondered, before asking, "Hey, do you guys wanna try something?" Excitedly, I told my friends about the scene from Jared's porn video, and asked them if they wanted to go for it. "Sure!" Kaiden answered, while Eric nodded 'yes'. "I get to have the most fun part," David commented. "So, of course, I wanna take a stab at it!" I laughed at David's choice of words, but, honestly, I thought MY part was going to be the most fun. While David lay crossways in the middle of the bed, lubing-up his pulsating, love tool, Kaiden put his arms under my left shoulder and left leg. Eric did the same with my right, and, laughing and joking, with cocks pointing skyward, my two friends lifted me off of the bed. Carefully, Eric walked over the messed-up sheets to David's right, before he and Kaiden spread my legs. And squatting some, they lowered my ass over David's midsection, holding me suspended in midair. Eric laughed. "Stick it up inside him, David." "Yeah, poke it in him hard," Kaiden agreed, smirking like crazy. "Oh, I'm gonna," David promised, as I felt him swiping his steely dick over my most private part. Suddenly, when I felt the tip of his cock head against my anus, he realized he had found what he was searching for. From all the times my older brother, Jared, had fucked me, I knew to relax my sphincter; and, as David thrust his hips upward, mightily, he rammed his dick into me. "Fuckin' shit, David," I cried in a loud voice, because of the intrusion. It was the first time I could remember using those words, though my brother uttered them all the time, whenever he fucked me. I glanced from Kaiden to Eric, who were straining to hold me in position, before leaning my head back until I was looking at the ceiling. Fortunately for me, I've always enjoyed having a cock up my ass. Without any warmup to speak of, David began to rabbit fuck me, bucking his hips upward with abandon. And I gotta tell you, the sensations on my body were nothing short of amazing! The skin of hands, arms, hips ... and especially, hard cocks ... belonging to Eric and Kaiden pressed up against me, while David urgently rubbed his hands over my shoulders and back. The twin was a fucking machine, let me tell you! I took my prick between my fingers and began to jack it furiously. Unfortunately, though, after too short a time, Eric declared, "Damn it ... I can't hold you anymore, Devon." Awkwardly, I slipped out of his hands, causing Kaiden to let go of me, too. Both guys stood there grinning at me for a second, as I lay on top of David, with his manly cock all the way up my boyish ass. It didn't faze David, though; he never seemed to miss a beat. As I bent my knees around his legs, he wrapped his arms around my chest. His cock just kept making love to my ass. I sure can't say I paid much attention to Kaiden and Eric ... because the feelings of skin-on-skin, as I lay on top of David, were amazing ... but I did notice Kaiden kneel on the bed, beside me, as Eric mounted him from behind. Those two seemed to be having loads of fun, as David reached over my leg and grasped my erect penis between the thumb and first two fingers of his right hand. With a definite purpose in mind, he began a fast jacking motion. Lots of times, I'd been unhappy I still had a little-boy cock. But while some guys couldn't cum more than once ... or maybe, twice in a row ... that wasn't something I'd ever really thought about, since I didn't shoot like older boys, yet. In no time, David gave me my second orgasm in the past half hour, and I was well on the way to my third, when I felt David's cock swell in my ass. "Oh, fuck, Devon; I'm cummin'!" David cried out, filling my ass with his seed, while thrusting into me as deeply as he could. "Nnnnh, nnnnh, nnnnh, nnnnh." Suddenly, he was silent beneath me, as I felt his body relax completely. "Man, that was WAY awesome!" he exclaimed, wrapping his arms around me and holding me tight to him. He was still thrusting with his dick, but just barely. I turned my face to his, and David and I kissed ... something that Jared was never interested in doing with me ... before the incredibly sexy guy beneath me took hold of my rock-hard cock head again. He stroked my throbbing prick, bringing me right to the edge of what I expected would be another mind-bending climax. My body tensed in anticipation. I waited ... and waited ... and waited ... AND WAITED, as David held me right on the edge, barely touching my boyish dick. I was dying there! But it was a wonderful agony, if you know what I mean. I began to thrust my hips upward and pull them back, stimulating my cock between David's fingers ... and that was all it took. "Oh, yeah, man!" I cried out. The burning, tingling sensation began in that special point at the base of my dick head, before quickly coursing throughout my hairless, tanned body. The feelings were SO amazing, as I stretched out my legs as far as they would go ... and then, tried to stretch them further. I'd enjoyed plenty of orgasms before, but none had been like this one, let me tell you! "That rocked big time, David," I added, with a big smile. "Thanks!" "Hey, Dev, I enjoyed it, too," he said, chuckling. "You're a lot of fun to be with." "So are you," I declared, before kissing him again. "Hey, Eric, looks like we've got a couple of lovebirds in bed with us," Kaiden laughed. "Yeah," Eric agreed. I had forgotten all about Eric and Kaiden! Both of them were just lying on the bed beside us, heads propped-up on their arms, watching. "Fuck you, Kaiden ... and you, too, Eric," David replied, rolling both him and me so we could look at the other guys. "Eric already did that," Kaiden quipped in answer. "We got done a long time ago; and we've just been watching you two have fun." Damn ... I didn't know we had been going at it so long! Or, maybe, it just didn't take Eric long to cum. Whatever the reason, however, after we made last minute trips to the bathroom, Kaiden set the alarm and turned out the room lights. In no time, the four of us were falling asleep in each other's arms. *** Except for a few brains, I don't think many kids enjoy report card days at school. I mean, I'd always been an average to just above average student ... and I HATED getting my quarterly grades! They only served to make my parents push me harder to do something I didn't like to begin with. Near the end of first period PE, Coach dismissed us to the locker room, with instructions to reassemble on the bleachers a few minutes before the bell rang. Coach tersely barked out our names, quickly handing out our grade cards and dropping them on the gym floor, if we didn't hustle to collect them. Several slips of paper fluttered to the polished hardwood that morning. As far as I could tell, all my friends were happy with their grades in gym ... I know I was. Coach taught all the boys' physical education classes at our school; and, while I didn't know how he graded the non-players in the other classes, it seemed that all us football players got pretty good marks. Of course, that was gym class; unfortunately, I didn't do as well in my others. After the final bell sounded that Monday afternoon, I took my jacket out of my locker and slung my book bag over my shoulder. As I was walking toward my bus, I noticed David and his brother Carlos, Ryan, Eric, and Kaiden standing just inside the front door of the school, talking. Since we didn't have afternoon classes together, I hadn't seen any of them since before lunch. Ryan saw me, and called my name. "Hey, guys," I hollered, above the din of the frenzied, end-of-day rush, and hurried toward them. Obviously, Eric was talking to Kaiden about his grades. "Well, they could have been worse," Kaiden shrugged, sensibly saying what any middle school boy would tell another about less-than-good report cards. "Not much," Eric replied, dejectedly. "Ben and Tina are gonna hate me." "Do you REALLY think they're gonna HATE you because of 'Cs' and one 'D+'?" Kaiden asked, curling his arm around Eric's slight shoulders. "Hey, and you got an 'A-' in PE," Ryan chipped in, using an extra-cheery voice. "That ought to count for SOMEthing." "I hope," Eric said, trying to smile. "But I don't know; I just don't know." He slowly shook his head from side to side. "And just about every grade card says the teacher wants to meet with my parents, because they know I can do better." "Yeah, some of mine have that on them, too," I added, telling Eric I knew how he felt. We talked for a sec, but I had to catch the bus. "Well, I'll see you guys in the morning." Then I had a thought. "Maybe give me a call tonight, Eric, okay?" "Sure, Devon," he answered. "I'll try to, if they don't ground me without my phone, or something." "That'd be the pits," I agreed, shaking my head. "Well, see you guys later." "I'll walk with you to the bus," David offered, smiling. "Cool!" I gladly took him up on his offer. As we were ambling away from our friends, some girls stopped to say a few words to them. "Dev, I just wanted to tell you, again, how much fun I had last night," my brown-skinned friend commented, as we began the short walk toward the bus loading zone. "Me, too," I replied, sincerely, before having another thought. Laughing on the inside, but keeping a straight face, I added, "I wish you were better in bed, though." David turned an incredulous face to mine, before both of us burst out laughing! "Hey ... maybe I just need more practice," David stated, still smiling broadly. "Maybe BOTH of us do," I offered. All of a sudden, my tiny cock was rock hard. Without thinking, I reached down there, pinching the head. As we talked, I rolled it between my fingers, making it feel really good "Sounds like a plan to me," David agreed, as we pushed the panic bars on a couple of doors. A row of identical school buses sat at the curb. "Any time you wanna get together is good with me." "Me, too," I smiled. I stopped for a moment, right in the middle of the sidewalk. If it wouldn't have been for the throng of our fellow students moving past us, I would have kissed David right then and there. But instead, I just told him I'd see him in the morning. I was excited, though. Let me tell you ... was I EVER excited! *** Well, I'm going to end chapter 22 with those words. I hope all of you enjoyed hearing from Devon. I know I sure did! Why don't you let me know? (fotogme11@yahoo.com) If you would like to join the Yahoo! Group for my stories, you can do that here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ill_suck_you/join And if you've never read the earlier stories in this series, you might enjoy them. They're also in the Gay/Incest area of the Nifty Archive. "I'll Suck You" - Final Post Date: June 25, 2007 "I've Got the Best Family" - Final Post Date: May 23, 2008 "Us Guys" - Final Post Date: May 29, 2009 Or you can go to the "Prolific Authors" tab and scroll down to my pen name ... Photo Guy. Have a great week, guys! Greg