Date: Tue, 25 May 2010 15:50:03 -0700 (PDT) From: Greg Subject: More is Better ch 28 More is Better By: Photo Guy (fotogme11@yahoo.com) Story Consultant: Drew Editor and Proofreader: Jere The author copyrights this story, with permission for posting on the Nifty Archive. It may not be copied to another website without prior permission from the author. This is a fictional story ... any similarities to actual people, places, events or other entities is purely coincidental. The story involves gay sex between family members and their friends, and is written solely for the reading enjoyment of people who aren't offended by material of this type! If you are underage, or this type of material is illegal where you live, please leave now. *** Guys, I want to apologize that it is taking me so long to post new chapters, but my life has been so busy since the first week of April. And, now I have to spend time preparing to move on top of everything else. Oh well... lol I'm sure all of you would prefer it if I would get back to weekly posts, but I don't see that happening until after Drew and I are able to move in with each other. I'm not sure when that will be, however. We've talked about how much fun it will be when we can work on the story together ... with both of us in the same room. Anyway, I want to thank those of you who wrote after the last chapter. Hearing from you guys really does make my day! If you want to write me after this chapter, my email address is fotogme11@yahoo.com. Thanks, Greg *** Chapter Twenty-eight (It's Ryan talking!) Hey, guys ... it's been a while! Chris has been stingy recently, when it comes to giving me time to talk. lol Anyway, the week before Halloween saw a lot of activity on the J bar A, and among the boys who called the ranch their home. It was busier than usual, and that's saying something! First, I guess I ought to tell you, Daylight Saving Time ended Sunday morning, but none of us really got to enjoy the extra hour of sleep. Don't ask me why, but for the first time since I'd lived with Josh, our parents wanted to go to church ... and, of course, they had to drag the rest of us with them. I think all us boys were sleepy, but I suppose the service wasn't all that bad. Without a doubt, our large group, consisting of one woman and nine hot guys, turned a LOT of heads! Sunday afternoon was the annual J bar A fall picnic, barbecue, and football game. It was a HUGE affair, with lots of our friends, and some people I didn't know, in attendance, but all of us had an awesome time! Fortunately for all of us, the Indian Summer continued strong through the weekend. After dark, we had a huge bonfire on ground that had been completely cleared of dried grass, and the celebration lasted for hours into the night. Monday was the second teacher's meeting of that school year. As you can imagine, all of us were very happy to have a day off school. And, while I can't speak for the other guys ... since all of us were keeping our Halloween costumes to ourselves ... Cole and I spent quite a while online checking out our options, before ordering them from a costume store in Denver. The Party Dungeon promised to ship them on Tuesday, which meant we would have them in plenty of time for the big event. After lunch on Monday, the furnace people showed up with a couple of small hanging units for the studio. While a few of us watched, they installed one of them; the second was in place when we got home from school on Tuesday. Also, the carriage house doors and trim had been painted to match the rest of the studio. I suppose it was none too soon, because the beautiful weather quickly took a turn for the worse on Wednesday. Like almost all the boys at Centennial Middle, I wore shorts to school during good weather. When the final bell sounded, dismissing us for the day, most of us guys collected our book packs and hurried toward the front door of the school building, where we usually waited for our older brothers to pick us up. "What the fuck!" Carlos cried out, as he pushed the panic bar on one of the glass doors. He stopped dead in his tracks, causing Eric to bump into him. "It's freezing out!" The normally blue, sunshiny sky was leaden; a swirling, brisk wind blew dust, and occasionally leaves, across the circle drive and the street beyond. "Shit, Eric ... watch where you're going," Carlos laughed, stepping through the doorway. "Well, YOU don't stop walking like that," Eric snapped back, grinning. "Hey ... what are you talking about, anyway? It's not too bad out here." I don't know; maybe some old people would have had a problem with wearing shorts outside in cold, windy weather, but none of us boys did. I'm not gonna say I didn't notice the chilly wind ... or that I liked it ... but it didn't keep any of us from goofing off, like normal, as we waited for our brothers. When we got back to the ranch, Tyler and Chris just dropped us off at the house, but they didn't even get out of the truck. They said they had something they needed to do before supper ... a secret, I suppose, since they wouldn't say more. As they were driving away, I noticed my boyfriend's old Subaru wagon in the parking lot, and heard strange whirring sounds from inside the photo studio. "I wonder what's going on in there?" I asked, glancing in the direction of the studio, while we hustled to the Wilson house for our after-school snack. "Yeah, I was just thinking the same thing," Eric agreed. "Let's check it out, as soon as we get a bite to eat," Kaiden suggested, opening the front door. All of us hurried inside. "Damn, it sure feels better in here!" As we agreed, Eric greeted Tina with a cheery, "Hey, Mom!" "Hi, boys!" Tina replied, smiling at the three of us. She was standing at the kitchen counter, kneading dough. "Only three of you today?" "So far, at least," Kaiden laughed. "Chris and Tyler had to go someplace; I don't know about the twins and Robert, though." Apparently, the Lopez boys had other plans, too. At least, they didn't show up while we talked to Tina and ate the apples she had set out for us. Like most moms, I guess, she always seemed interested in how her boys' school day had gone, and, like all kids, we grudgingly coughed-up information. After the gentle grilling was over, and we were finishing our snack, the three of us told our mom we were going to check out the studio. "I think they're hanging drywall this afternoon," Tina chuckled. "When the lumberyard delivered the stuff, right before lunch, Ben was like a little kid, he was so happy." "Cool!" I smiled, tossing my apple core in the trash. "Thanks for the snack, Mom." "Thank YOU, Ryan, for letting me be your mom," Tina answered, with a motherly hug. "Any time," I said, meaning every word, as I wrapped my arms around Tina. I still thought about my birth mom sometimes ... I guess that's only normal ... but my old life seemed like it had ended ages ago. In so many ways, it was like I'd always lived on the J bar A. The family we had become was SO awesome! Maybe, only a kid who had endured a completely different kind of existence could REALLY appreciate what we had here on the ranch. As those thoughts crossed my mind, I wrapped an open arm around Eric. "Hey, I love you, man," I stated, smiling. "I love you, too, Ryan," Eric replied, returning the hug. "Of course, not as much as I love THIS guy!" He stretched out an arm and pulled Kaiden into a four-way hug. I've given and been given loads of hugs since moving in with Josh, and all of them were special. But this one was extra special, I think; it was the first time I can remember the four of us in a group hug. Every one of us must have felt the same way about it, because we held each other for quite a while that afternoon. Sadly, all good things must come to an end, I suppose, and this hug ended when Tina spoke up. "I love each one of you boys," she stated, "but you guys better run along now. I've got work to do." "I love you, too, Mom," Eric declared, giving Tina another hug after Kaiden and I had dropped out of the four-way. "Say, let's check out what they're doing in the studio," I suggested, moments later. "Sure!" Kaiden agreed, and after hustling across the parking lot, he pulled open the door to the studio. Stepping inside, Eric exclaimed, "Wow, this looks awesome!" "It sure does," I added, looking around. Ben, Tim, Cole, and three of the cowboys - Miguel, Chance, and Jamie had sure been busy! The interior of the studio, which had been an unfinished room when we left for school that morning, was in the process of being transformed. It was utterly amazing! Sheet after sheet of wallboard had already been hung, and, as we watched, the men finished one of the sidewalls. The tall back and front walls had already been covered. "Good job, guys," I declared to the workers. "Thanks!" Miguel laughed. "We'll take all the compliments we can get." "Yeah," Cole agreed, lowering his screw gun ... so they were making the noises we had heard earlier. He glanced over their work. "It DOES look pretty good, though, doesn't it?" "It sure does," Ben stated, stepping back beside Cole. "This is going to make one hell of a photo studio!" The men took a break, and all of us talked for a little while. Thinking back over the last few months, all of us agreed that it was amazing how an old barn ... which had been filled with junk ... would soon be a photography studio. To hear the men talk, everything would be finished in less than a month. The remodeling was ahead of schedule; both Ben and Tim thought that was almost miraculous. Anyway, when their break ended, most of the men, except for Cole and Tim, went back to work ... and the rest of us were preparing to head into the house to do our homework ... when Cole spoke up. "Ryan, there's a package on our bed, addressed to both of us," he said, smiling broadly. "What is it, anyway?" I asked, anxiously, following Tim through the door. Cole was right behind me. "Well, I didn't open it," Cole replied, as we began to walk across the parking lot. "But it's gotta be our Halloween stuff." "Awesome!" I exclaimed, taking Cole's hand in mine. "Can I see?" Eric asked, coyly. "Yeah ... on Friday night," I laughed. "Hey, no fair, guys!" Eric shot back. "I told you what Tyler and I were gonna be." "On Friday," Cole agreed with me. Smiling, he ruffled Eric's hair. When I opened the door to our bedroom, I noticed an unopened, brown carton on the bed: it had Cole's and my name on the label. Right away, I tried to break it open, but the tape was too strong. Noticing my problem, Cole took out his car keys, and, with a few strokes, had the box open. Cole pulled out his costume, undressed, and slipped into it; both of us laughed long and hard. No doubt about it, Cole's would be the best at the party. We had to make a few changes to the costume I bought, but half an hour later, both Cole and I were smiling, as I tried part of it on. Fuck ... it fit perfectly! "Damn, Ryan, seeing you like that is making me horny," Cole declared, with a lecherous smile. He flicked my hard dick, pulling the head down as far as it would go, before letting it snap back to its normal position against my pubes. "I wish my cock would stand up like that," he added. He began to take off his costume. "I like your dick just the way it is," I stated, moments later, reaching out and taking hold of his throbbing ... but always downward-pointing ... shaft. Cole just smiled, his eyes clouded over with lust. "Say, Ryan," my college guy began, tentatively, "how'd you like to watch some porn tonight?" "Um, what do you think?" I replied, chuckling. I'd known for a while that Cole had porn on his computer, but this was the first time he'd offered to show it to me. Cole laughed. "I'm gonna take that as a yes, then." "A BIG yes!" I exclaimed. "Cole, is this the kind of porn you wanna make some day?" "The stuff I make is gonna be way better," my boyfriend laughed. He opened the lid of his laptop, placing it on the foot of our bed, while I stacked pillows against the headboard. Moments later, the two of us were reclining comfortably against them. "What kind of shit would you like to watch?" "Ummmmm ... you pick out something I'd like," I said, kneading my pulsating cock between my fingers. Cole chuckled. "Why do I have the feeling that it doesn't matter what I choose, since ANY of this stuff's gonna turn you on?" He gestured toward his laptop, where a long list of titles filled the screen. I nodded; he was right, of course. Back then, it didn't take much to make me cum. It still doesn't take a lot of the RIGHT thing today. Anyway, Cole scrolled through page after page of color-coded files, choosing an orange one. I asked what the colors meant, and he said the purple ones were the hottest ... there weren't many of those; reds were next ... there were quite a few of that color; and orange wasn't quite as hot as red. He didn't keep anything he rated lower than orange. Seconds later, the two of us began jacking off to the first of several short video clips he had downloaded from the Internet. The pictures were tiny ... and sort of fuzzy, but they had the intended effect on both Cole and me. Within minutes, we shot our wads. "We've gotta do this again!" I stated, licking my fingers. "Soon!" "Yeah, we do," Cole laughed, glancing at the clock. "We'd better make it after supper, though. You need to get your homework done first." "Oh, okay," I sighed, smiling sadly. "I guess." Lucky for me, I didn't have much homework that Wednesday. I was just about to wipe up my spilt cum, when Cole leaned his face over my belly and lapped it off. Moments later, I cleaned him up, pulled out my math workbook, and began solving problems, while Cole studied for a test. After supper, Cole said I could watch porn, as he did the rest of his homework ... but I decided to read, instead. It was more fun watching porn with Cole than doing it alone, anyway. Sometime later, pulling my attention away from my novel, Cole exclaimed, "Fuck, you're sexy, Ryan!" He shook his head, as I smiled. "And I'm all yours tonight," I replied, marking the page and closing my book. "Only tonight?" Cole wondered, before climbing over me and planting a big kiss on my lips. I hugged the man I loved, while frenching him back. "Hey, guys, how's it hanging?" Eric asked, while opening the door. Laughing, as he stepped into our room, he added, "Oops ... forget I asked." "It's not HANGING at all, Eric," I chuckled, pulling my lips away from Cole for a second. I pinched my erect penis through the denim of my jeans. "We were just gonna watch some more porn." "Sweet!" Eric declared, grinning broadly. "Say, could Kaiden and I watch it with you guys? I've never seen porn." "Sure," Cole said, "there's always room for the two of you in our bed." "Thanks, Cole," Eric answered. "I'll be right back with him." Leaving the door open, Eric hurried from our room, as Cole and I stripped out of our clothes. Moments later, Eric returned with Kaiden in tow. Eagerly, they undressed, before climbing onto the bed beside me. "Maybe one of you guys ought to close the door all the way," my boyfriend commented, nodding toward the mostly closed door. "I don't want Tim getting mad at me for corrupting his baby!" "He won't mind," Kaiden replied, making no move to close the door. "I'm SURE of that." Cole shrugged his shoulders. "Okay, then ... what would you guys like to see?" he asked. "Something HOT!" Eric stated, with a wicked grin. "REAL hot." "Let me put in a DVD from my collection, then," my lover snickered, reaching into his backpack and withdrawing a plastic case covered with photos of hot, naked guys. "I think this one ought to fit the bill." He slid the disk into the slot on his laptop, and, after the computer pulled it in, and he clicked 'Play', the four of us slumped back against the pillows, to have some fun. Well, at least, Kaiden, Eric, and I settled back. Cole had other ideas. "Guys," he began, "I know how Ryan will answer." Glancing lovingly in my direction, he smiled. "But Eric, will you and Kaiden let me suck you off?" "If you'll let all of us give you a blow job you won't forget," Kaiden immediately replied, reaching out and worshipfully stroking the scorpion, inked on Cole's throbbing member. "You got a deal," my boyfriend chuckled. And ALL of us had quite a deal! Laying between our legs, so we could still watch the porn, Cole began by licking each of our cocks ... starting with Eric first, moving to me next, before taking Kaiden's super-sized, stiff manhood in hand and tonguing it lovingly. As we watched the super hot scene unfold on the computer screen, one every bit as hot ... though very different ... was playing out in my bedroom. After a brief warm-up, the guy I love began sucking all of us in earnest ... and before the second scene began on the DVD ... Kaiden, Eric, and I had deposited our loads in Cole's eager mouth, and the three of us went to work on his mammoth penis. With a sexy gleam in his big brown eyes, Kaiden said he wanted to go last. I still don't know how he did it, but after Eric and I had our turn with the scorpion, Kaiden took Cole's thick, pulsating, ten-incher in his fist and went down on it ... swallowing every inch. In seconds, Kaiden's button nose was pressed against my lover's pubes ... with Cole's small crop of short, wiry, dark red pubic hairs on either side of my blonde-haired brother's nose. "Oh, fuck, yeah!" the hot college guy exclaimed, as he began to fuck Kaiden's throat. "That is SO hot!" Eric commented, taking his stiff dick in his fist and stroking it like there wouldn't be a tomorrow. "Yeah, make him cum, Kaiden," I urged my brother, while sensuously rubbing my hands over Cole's rock-hard chest, fingering first one nipple and then the next. Kaiden's sexy mouth was stretched SO wide ... damn! If Cole's manhood had been ANY thicker, I KNOW Kaiden couldn't have taken all of it. I had seen Kaiden deep-throat Tim's monster once or twice, but all he would ever say about his technique was 'practice makes perfect'. I guess I had never been all that interested in learning how to do it, but judging by the way Cole was enjoying himself, fucking Kaiden's throat, I knew I had to learn! Anyway, when Kaiden began to make a humming sound, Cole went crazy, fucking with abandon, before tensing up. "Oh, shit! Fuckin' shit!" Cole cried out, tangling his fingers in my thirteen year old brother's shaggy hair. "I'm gonna fuckin' fill your belly with my college-man sperm, Kaiden." Those words made Kaiden hum more loudly, as he sensuously ran his hands over Cole's hairy, muscular thighs. Over the past few weeks, I'd come to know Cole SO well, and I knew without any doubt that Kaiden was about to give him one of the best orgasms he'd ever experienced! For the longest time, Cole hung right on the edge, with every muscle in his hard body tensed. He was like a strong rubber band that had been stretched to the absolute limit. If a guy kept pulling on it, something had to give; well, Kaiden kept pulling, and Cole's penis gave all right. On sensory overload, Cole bucked upward, while pressing Kaiden's face tight to his pubes. Immediately, he began to erupt down Kaiden's throat. "Oh, yeah, man, I'm cummin' ... I'm fuckin' cummin'!" Cole exclaimed, in the throes of an amazing climax. Without saying a word, at almost the same time, Eric began to unload on Kaiden's face, and Kaiden and I sucked each other off moments later. After we came, the four of us relaxed on the bed for a while, watching the DVD. When the second scene ended, Eric and Kaiden decided to spend the night in bed with Cole and me. It was an awesome night, let me tell you! *** I think I'm going to end chapter 28 with those words. I sure hope you enjoyed reading it! Why not send me an email (fotogme11@yahoo.com) if you enjoyed it? If you would like to join the Yahoo! Group for my stories, you can do that here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ill_suck_you/join And if you've never read the earlier stories in this series, you might enjoy them. They're also in the Gay/Incest area of the Nifty Archive. "I'll Suck You" - Final Post Date: June 25, 2007 "I've Got the Best Family" - Final Post Date: May 23, 2008 "Us Guys" - Final Post Date: May 29, 2009 Or you can go to the "Prolific Authors" tab and scroll down to my pen name ... Photo Guy. Have a great week, guys! Greg