Date: Tue, 2 Dec 2003 11:58:16 -0800 (PST) From: Mr Swannie Subject: SUMMER VACATION CHAPTER 2 Disclaimer: The following story is FICTIONAL. It contains descriptions of sexual activities between teenage boys. If you are not over 18 years of age, or if you find this type of story offensive, or viewing this material is illegal where you live, then please don't read it! Summer Vacation By: Mr. Swannie Cumsoakedface2@yahoo.com I hope you all enjoy this story, but remember it is a fantasy and in these fantasies there are no Aids, HIV, crabs, syphilis, gonorrhea, genital warts or such but they are in the real world so when you are fucking and think about these stories please make sure there is a condom on your cock. Play safe and continue to read these fantasies for a long, long time Summer Vacation Chapter 2 It was funny how fast I fell asleep, considering how much my mind was racing when I first got back into bed with my naked brother. I woke up to the sound of a horn blearing down the interstate not far enough from the cheep motel we had spent the night at. I opened my eyes and the room as still dark with the out line of the sun around the sides of the curtains that covered the window. I lay there for a minute trying to remember where and what was going on. It was then that it dawned on me that there was a naked body plastered to mine. I turned my head and looked into the face of my older brother Alex. His eyes where still closed and he looked so sexy lying there. I was on my back in bed and Alex's face was on the pillow next to mine. His neck rested on my right shoulder and his right arm was across my chest with his hand on my left shoulder. His chest was against my side and his now hard seven almost eight inch cock pushed against my hip. My cock leapt to life as soon as I realized what I was feeling against my small waist. I tried with all my sole to feel his baggy balls against the side of my ass cheek and to this day I say I could, but I have to say I'm not sure if I could or not. Alex's right leg was bent and laying on top of my legs. I so waned to reach out and feel my brother's cock, and I just might have if it where not for our father. The door to our room opened and Dad walked in all smiles. He stopped and looked at the two of us in the bed and his smile went away and he raised an eyebrow at me and smiled bigger than before. I moved to sit up and Alex woke up and looked at me. He didn't move right away, but just looked into my eyes as if he where trying to figure out why I was in bed with him. He had a look of remembering and then looked over at Dad. Quickly Alex jumped and got off of me and looked at me as if it where my fault. "Ok guys," Dad said still smiling, "Lets hit the shower, they have a dinner down stairs so we can eat before we hit the road." Alex sat up in bed and gathered the covers over his crotch to make sure Dad couldn't see his morning boner. I hope he wasn't thinking I didn't know. Of course my cock was rock hard too. "Well lets get going." Dad said looking at us. I looked at Alex and he looked at me, "You can go first." I told him. "No that's alright you go first." Alex said quickly. Dad just looked at us and again raised an eyebrow and said, "I don't care who goes first but lets go." Dad took hold of the bottom of the covers and pulled them off us leaving us sitting there naked in bed with our morning hard-on's. We where shocked he had done it so quickly we didn't see it coming. Dad looked at us and smiled. "Oh is that it." He said with a chuckle. "You slept in the nude. "There's nothing to be embarrassed about I do too." Both Alex and I sat there for a minute covering our erections, not moving. "You know it's normal to wake up with that condition, all guys do it from time to time." Dad said sitting on the end of the bed. Both Alex and I looked guilty but neither one of us knew what of. At the same time we both jumped up and went for the bathroom. "I'm going first." I said as I got to the bathroom door. "No I am." Alex said as he ran in behind me. We both raced into the bathroom and not thinking I shut the bathroom door behind us, we where now both naked, hard and standing in the bathroom looking at each other. I looked at Alex in the eyes afraid to let them wonder any lower. "You can shower first but I'm not going back out there like this." I told him. His eyes where locked on mine and he seemed to relax and he said, "I know what you mean, I was waiting for him to start telling us when he was a boy what he did to get off." We both laughed but I have to admit my cock seemed to swell at the thought of our father jerking off. Alex walked over to the shower and turned it on. He tested the water and then got into the shower. I stood there staring at my naked brother as he started to soap up. His skin was shinning and glistening as his hands went over his skin. I couldn't seem to take my eyes off of him while he washed. His hands soaped up his sweet round bubble butt, his fingers sliding inside the crack of his ass. My cock was so hard I thought I would pass out from a lack of oxygen to my brain. I watched as his hands slid over his ass cheeks and then down his powerful legs to his feet. When he started to stand he looked over to where I was standing and he looked startled that I was watching him like that. He looked a bit pissed and I started to divert my eyes when I noticed his softening cock sung up again. I looked away and walked over to the toilet and tried as hard as I could to piss into the toilet. The shower had turned off before the first drops of piss hit the toilet water. When I finished peeing I turned and looked at Alex. He had a towel wrapped around his waist and he was drying his hair with another. He looked at me and raised an eyebrow as if asking a question with out speaking. I could feel my heart in my throat and I could feel my face turning pink. "What?" I asked looking at him as I walked towards the shower. He just stared at me and then he made his eyes open wide to show he knew I was gawking at him. "I thought I heard you say something." I told him with conviction, "That's the only reason I looked at you." I got into the shower before he responded and started to soap up. I kept my back to him as I soaped up and washed my hair. After a minute I turned and looked over for him. He was standing with his back to me, his towel from around his waist off. He stood at the sink shaving, and I looked away in fear he would catch me looking at his ass. I looked over again as I turned to wash the soap off my side and back and realized he was watching me in the mirror. Could it be my older brother was checking me out, or was he watching me to see if I started to stare at him again? I turned back facing the water and I got brave. I started to soap up my cock and balls. My cock was still semi-hard from before and now that I was touching it, it started to grow by leaps and bounds. With in no time my cock was rock hard. I took hold of my cock and I started to stroke it nice and slow up and down, letting the soap help my hand glide over it smoothly. After five or six strokes I glanced over to Alex. Alex was still standing with his back towards me, his eyes where focused on the mirror looking right at me. He wasn't even blinking. I could see his tight hard ass moving slightly and his right hand was down in front of him. He was jerking off too, I thought with a smile to myself. I slowly turned as if rinsing my hair, arching my back so my waist was pushed forwards and so was my hard six and thee-quarter inch boy cock. When I was turned all the way around so that I was facing him I took hold of my cock and started to stroke it looking into his eyes in the mirror. I could see that Alex took a gulp of air and then slowly turned and faced me. His big hands slid over his beautiful hard cock. It looked to be at least seven and a half inches but under eight. He was huge; the only cock I had ever seen bigger was in porn and at the dinner rest stop. He was cut like me and other than the size difference our cocks looked the same. We stood staring at each other's cocks as we slowly stroked our cocks. Every now and then I would look at my older brother's face and let my eyes run down to his thick neck and large shoulders, across to his semi-muscular chest and his large dark nipples. I would look at his thick stock of a midsection that wasn't fat but not thin like me. My brother had about forty pounds on me. He had small love handles on his sides but his stomach was flat. I would then go back to his big thick cock and his hands pumping away at it while he looked right at me. I then would look at his powerful legs and his big feet, then back up again. I was so loving this jerk off section. I had a few circle jerks with friends but it seemed so different now. Maybe being fucked and sucked and treated like a sex toy did it to me, or maybe it was because this was my brother. The guy I fought with all my life and here we where stroking our cocks looking at each other. We where both getting close I could tell, our hands where moving faster over our cocks, Oh ya I was so getting.... There was a knock on the bathroom door and it opened. Alex spun around towards the sink and acted like he was shaving. I turned so dad wouldn't see my woody. "Come on lets get a move on here." He said smiling. "I've gone down to the car and brought up new clothes for today, your clothes reeked, and I've been out there for ever. Let's go ladies we need to make some tracks." Dad smiled at me as I shut off the water and winked at me and turned and slapped Alex's ass in a playful way and said, "Well?" Alex turned his back to dad and bent over and picked up the towel on the ground and wrapped it around his waist, and walked past dad looking down not to look him in the eyes. I stood and waited for Dad to leave but he didn't. He walked over to the sink and started to wash his hands. "Well you coming out of there or are you going to drip dry?" He asked smiling at me. I took a deep breath and turned towards him and opened the glass door to the shower. I reached over for a towel but it was just out of my reach. Dad turned and grabbed the towel and handed it to me. I felt may face start to get red knowing he would see my erection. "Dam," Dad said looking down at my stiff cock. "You have a huge cock for a kid your age." He said with a look of pride on his face. "Is your brother as big as you?" He asked as if it where nothing. I took the towel and started to dry myself off making sure the towel covered my crotch at all times. Not thinking how my answer would sound I said, "No he's a lot bigger." Dad smiled big and reached over and pulled the towel up so he could get a good look at my cock and balls. He lowered his head and looked at my cock then back up to my face and said, "Dam boy, you'll have them chasing after you when you whip that thing out." I could feel my face start to burn it was so hot. I got out of the tub and started to dry my hair and Dad swatted my bare ass. When he did I could feel my cock pulsing. Dad laughed and walked out of the bathroom. "If he only knew who was chasing after me," I thought as I dried myself off. By the time I walked back into the bedroom Alex was changed and Dad had gone down to the office to turn in the keys. My cock had finally gone down and I through the wet towel on the floor and grabbed at the clothes Dad had brought up from the car. I looked around at the clothes and turned towards Alex who was watching "I Love Lucy" on the crappy TV. "Did Dad bring up underwear?" I asked him. Alex turned and looked at me standing there naked he turned quickly back to the TV and said, "No, he said he forgot." I turned back to the bed and put on a pair of real baggy shorts that where two sizes two big for me. I usually wore them with a pair of tight white under wear and a pair of boxers over that. I put them on and pulled the drawstring as far as I could and tied it tight. I through on the tank top dad had brought up that had the "Hang Ten" logo on it. I sat on the bed and started to put on my sneakers. Alex was just staring at the TV and I felt guilt what we had done. It then dawned on me that we hadn't done anything. Hell one of my friends once felt my cock while I was jerking off with him, and that didn't feel wrong so why should this. "Is there something wrong?" I asked Alex as if I had no idea. Alex turned and looked at me dressed, tying my shoes "You know what we where doing, I don't want you to get the wrong idea or nothing." He said in low voice as if he didn't want to talk but felt he had to. "I mean I've never done stuff like that before so don't think I'm some kinda perv or nothing." I smiled at him, "Really," I asked him. "Me and the guys get porn all the time and we circle jerk all the time. Its no big deal all guys do it, it feels good knowing your watching someone and they're watching you." I said as I got off the bed. "It's no big deal." Alex looked relaxed a bit and smiled, "Ya it is cool, I just was afraid that you would freak out is all." He stood up and turned off the TV just as Dad came back in. "Great you're all ready let's go eat and hit the road." Dad said all smiles. We walked out of the room and out to the dinner. We all ate breakfast and everything was going back to normal and that was good. We finished breakfast and headed for the car. We got in and drove around to the side where there was a gas station. Dad got gas and Alex and I just sat there looking out the window. "Are you going to live with Mom during the school year?" I asked him. He shrugged and stared out the window, "I don't know. I guess maybe, it will all depend on what it's like out there." "We might make new friends right away and never want to go." I said with a smile. "Maybe." Alex said and looked a bit blue. How could he be home sick already? I looked over at the store and where you paid for the gas and got out of the car. Dad was pumping gas and looked at me. I told him I was going to get us something to drink for the road. Dad gave me a ten and I walked into the small mini-mart. The shelves where stuffed with junk food, motor oil and magazines, and from the dates on the magazines they where almost a week behind. I walked back to the coolers and started to look at all the choices. A young looking guy in his twenties with shoulder length greesy hair and tattoos all over his arms was looking at the case too. As I passed by him he smiled at me and raised both his eyebrows and said, "Hey. How's it going?" I looked at him in he smiled and winked his right hand resting on his crotch, "Ok." I said as if I didn't know what was going on. I opened one of the glass cases to get out a Coke and he passed behind me. He held onto my waist as he passed, "Oh sorry." He said for anyone watching but the large bulge in his crotch told me he wasn't too sorry. It felt huge against my ass and once again my face turned pink. I took the Coke out and started to look for a Root beer for Alex. The young guy was near the corner and he looked over and said, "Whatch looking for?" I cleared my throat and said, "Root beer." He smiled at me and looked around the store and said, "I think what you're looking for is over here." He opened the glass door and stood against the wall. I walked over to him and saw that the root beer was in that case. I smiled at him and looked down at his crotch. I saw the fly to his jeans was open and his hand was stuffed inside as he played with his cock. I walked up to him and tried to open the door a little wider but it wouldn't budge. I squished between the edge of the glass door and the end cap of motor oil to get around it, and when I did I had then to squish against the guy. "Hi I'M Tony." The guy said and pulled his hand out of his jeans to shake my hand. When he pulled out his hand his thick uncut seven and a half semi-hard cock slipped out too. I shook his hand and my eyes went to his cock. I then looked around the store to see if anyone could see what was happening. The store was empty except for the two of us and the attendant, who had his back to us and was working the window where people where ordering and paying for gas. Tony took the hand I shook his with and put it around his thick cock. I wrapped my hands around it and started to stroke it while I looked around scared that someone would walk in and catch us. No one was there and Tony smiled at me. "Are you from around here?" He asked. "No, we're going to LA." I said still stroking his cock. Tony smiled at me and said, "Really, I'm going out to California too. My and my brother are helping my sister and brother in-law move there shit out there." He smiled at me and looked down at his growing cock in my hands. "I think the root beers are on the bottom shelve. I looked down at the bottom shelve and saw that they had only ginger ale there, which is what I was going to get for my father. I bent over and picked up a ginger ale off the shelve. Tony took my face in his hands and pivoted me around so I was still bent over and my face was at his cock. "Go ahead." He whispered as he looked around, "No one's in here." I inhaled and brought my mouth to his magnificent un-cut cock. I held his cock in my hand and drew the foreskin up over his cock head and stuck my tongue inside. I licked around the top of his head and the inside of the foreskin. I pulled back the foreskin and looking at his purplish cock head I sucked it into my mouth. I swallowed the whole thing and he fucked my mouth and throat a few strokes and I pulled off. I looked up at him and he smiled down at me. His cock was a thing of beauty about eight inches long and thick. I licked his cock from the zipper of his pants to the slit of his cock head. Just then the bell went off meaning someone had come into the store. I jumped to my feet and squished past him quickly. He smiled at me as I stood and looked at magazines while the old guy who came in bought cigarettes. I picked up an entertainment magazine and flipped through it. Tony walked up behind me and put his arms around my waist and grabbed my crotch through the thin fabric. "I bet you have a nice cock in there." He said wet into my ear. My cock was pulsating. I pulled away looking around and Tony smiled at me his cock was still sticking out his jeans. He looked at my ass and how the shorts where showing a bit of crack from the way they hung. He pulled down the back of my shorts and grabbed my bare ass. "Dam that's fine." He said into my ear. His large still wet cock slid between the crack of my ass. "Come on where're going to get caught." I said looking around again. "So we don't know anyone here?" He said with a smile. I pulled up the back of my short as best I could and said, "If I don't get out to the car my father and brother are going to come looking for me. I have to go, thanks." Tony grabbed the back of my head and kissed me hard and passionate. "What if one of them comes in now? What will you do?" I thought as we kissed. I pushed away and Tony smiled at me, "How many miles are you guys averaging?" He asked. I had no idea but it had to be about two hundred or so. "I guess two hundred or so." I told him, "Dad's taking his time so we can see the sights and stuff. "There's a hotel in "Green Plate" it's a mile from the freeway called the "Green Plate Hotel. That's where we're staying it's about two- two fifty from here. Tell you Daddy to stay there and I'll meet you by the pool." He said. "I'll see if I can." I told him and started for the counter. "Wait." He said and I turned to watch him take off his clothes in the middle of the store. My eyes got huge and a lump was in my throat as his shirt came off and he stood there naked. He was a medium sized frame with a small trial of black hair that went from his belly button to his triangle patch of pubic hair that looked somewhat trimmed. His thighs where tattooed with Chinese decoration and his legs had a small amount of hair on them. His cock seemed even bigger now that he was standing there naked. It looked to be at least nine inches long as it stood out straight from his bush and slightly to the right and his balls swung real low in their sacs. He held out his hand and he had a camera in it. "Take my photo." He said with a grin. I took the camera and put down my stuff and aimed it at him and snapped a photo. "Take another one but stand closer." He said. I took a step closer and snapped another photo. He smiled at me and picked up his clothes and walked with a bottle of beer and chips to the counter naked. He threw his clothes to the side and gestured for me to take a photo while the kid behind the counter waited on him. The kid knew what was going on he had too, but didn't react. "Can I take a photo with you?" Tony asked the attendant. The attendant looked at me then to Tony and shrugged, "Sure." Tony leapt up on the counter so he was sitting on it bare assed while the attendant stood net to him looking at me as I took there photo. "Thanks." Tony told the attendant as he got off the counter. I walked up to the counter and putt down my stuff, Tony looked at it and said to the attendant, "Ring his stuff up with mine, the kid gives to good of head to pay for his own stuff." My face was beet read as the attendant looked at me and gave me a dirty smirk. When I looked at the attendant I realized he was probably my age or maybe a year older. Tony pulled on his jeans and put away his cock and balls and started to put on his shirt when the attendant told him how much. Tony paid and smiled at me and said, "So where did you learn to suck cock like that?" My mouth was so dry and I looked at him as if to say shut up. He smiled big and said, "He doesn't know who you are. Hell he just posed for a picture with me naked." "From watching videos." I said feeling kind of numb. Tony reached into the front of my shorts and grabbed my cock, his fingers going around the base of it. "Go to the hotel and I'll show you what I've learnt." I looked out the window and Dad was still pumping gas and talking to some guy in a van next to him. "That would be good." I said and pulled away. Tony smiled and said, "Just incase you can't make it let me take a picture of you." I shook my head no. "Pull up your tank top so it covers your face and drop you shorts. I love your face but I'd rather have a photo of the rest." He said smiling. I looked around and the attendant was still watching, he raised an eyebrow. I quickly pulled my tank top up and dropped my shorts. I could see the flash and I picked up my shorts quickly and looked around. There was no one there. Tony walked over to me with the camera and showed me the photo of me on the digital screen. It made my cock hard as steel knowing I was there now in his camera and I was naked, well close enough. "It looks Great." Tony said and then he showed it to the attendant who just smiled at it then me. "Take a photo of the two of us." Tony asked the attendant. I looked out the window and saw Dad still chatting away with the Van guy and Alex looked to be sleeping in the back seat. Tony walked over and wrapped his arm around my shoulder and I turned and looked at him and then the attendant. The attendant snapped the photo and then looked at the image of what he took. "One more." Tony said and he pulled down my shorts and his jeans. His arm went around my waist and he lifted my shirt up to show my chest but my face was still in the shot. The attendant snapped it quickly and then Tony pulled my shirt all the way off. Another snap shot was taken. I started to bend quickly to get my shirt and shorts off the floor and Tony grabbed me from behind and took hold of my waist and I felt his cock slide between my legs and across my balls and stiff cock. I looked up just as the flash went off again. I pulled away and put on my clothes quickly. I was scare, mad, embarrassed. I just looked at the attendant as he handed Tony the camera. The two of them looked at the photos and where all smiles. Tony walked over to me and showed me the photos with his hand around my shoulder. "You are one hot fuckin' kid." He said as we looked at the photos taken in the stroe. Tony naked, Tony naked but closer, Tony naked at the counter, Tony naked on the counter with the attendant, Me with my shirt over my head and my stiff cock pointing at the camera, Tony and me with clothes on, Tony and me naked with our faces looking right at the camera, Tony with his shirt on pants down and me buck naked, then there was the final photo of me naked with Tony looking like he's butt fucking me in the store with me looking right at the camera. I felt excited and sick at the same time. I loved the idea of being in porn, but wasn't ready for people to see it. Tony reached into his pocket and handed me a card that was one of many. He leant over and handed one to the attendant. There was his name and a cell phone number and a web address. "I have a web site I put up with me naked in places like this," Tony told us. "Don't worry I'll blur your faces before I put it on the web. All everyone will see is me naked and your body." "You don't blur out your face?" I asked. "No way." He said giving me a hug. " I love the fact that there are like hundreds of guys out there looking at me naked and jerking off to it. I love it so much." He said with a big grin. I looked out the window and Dad and the guy in the van had a map out on the hood of the van and they where talking and pointing. Tony walked to the side of the counter and asked the attendant, "Any chance I could get a picture of your dick?" The guy smiled and looked around and said, "I don't know." "I swear to both of you your faces will never be seen. Well except for when I look at them and jerk off." The kid smiled and looked around and unbuttoned his pants and let them drop. Tony took a photo of the kid standing there in his boxer shorts. The guy started to laugh as he pulled down his shorts to the floor. The guy's cock was nice and fat, about five and a half inches long and hard as stone. He had light brown pubic hair that was trimmed close to his skin. I looked out the window and said, "Someone's coming up to the window." The kid moved quickly to the window so that the woman walking up could only see him from the waist up. Tony smiled big and started to snap away as the attendant waited on her and made change. I looked at the screen as Tony turned it towards me and it was cool to see his ass cheek, cock sticking out and yet you could see the woman getting gas and the people outside. It did look hot. The woman left and Tony said to the attendant, "Quick come over here." The guy hobbled over with his pants and shorts around his ankles. Tony handed me the camera and grabbed the attendant around the waist sucking the guy's cock into his mouth. I took a few photos and then backed up to get their whole bodies and the side of the store in frame so you could see it was happening inside a covenant store. It didn't take more than a few strokes before the guy started to moan and Tony took his finger and shoved it up the kid's ass. I took photos of it all and as the guy started to shoot his load Tony aimed the guys cock at his face. I took photo after photo of the beautiful white cream as it shot all over Tony's nose, lips and tongue. When the last drop was gone Tony waved his hand for me to come in for a close up of the cum all over his face. I took the photo and looked out the window. Dad and the guy he was talking to where folding up the map and shaking hands. "I have to go." I said, "I'll try and get him to go to the Green Plate Motel." I grabbed my bag and Tony grabbed my hand and pulled me towards him. He kissed me hard, and the mixture of his hot tongue and the attendant's cum filled my mouth and nostrils. I pulled away and saw Dad putting the gas hose back in the holster. I turned and looked at Tony and licked a glob of cum off his nose. I handed him the camera and looking back at the attendant and Tony I said, "Thanks." I walked out to the car and got in the front seat. Dad was still talking with the guy when Tony came out of the store. He was walking right towards the car, bag and camera in hand. My heart was some how pumping in my chest, throat and head all at the same time. He walked around the front of the car and looked in at me and winked. He still had a few globs of cum on his shirt near his chest. My heart was pumping so hard I couldn't hear anything but that. Tony walked over and to my shock opened the door to the van next to us and threw his stuff inside. I heard the guy talking to Dad say, "This is my brother-in-law Tony." I couldn't believe this was happening to me. Tony walked over and shook Dad's hand and he said "Hello." At last after some small chit chat Dad said "Well we have to get going there are a few things we want to see before it gets to late." Dad got into the car and started the engine. He looked at me and smiled, "What did you get?" "What?" I asked still thinking what a close one it had been, "What do you mean?" "In the store?" Dad said with a smile. "Oh." I pulled out a bottle of Ginger Ale and handed it to him. I took out the root beer and passed it to Alex who was once again staring out the window. I took out the Coke for myself. Dad took a swig out of the bottle. "Was there a line, it took you a while?" "No." I answered without thinking, "It was nice and cool in there so I just waited until I saw you had finished." I did a lot better when I didn't think before I lied. "Oh." Dad said getting on the main road. "Well the guy I was talking about is on his way to California too. It's him and his wife and his two brother in-laws." He said. I tried to act as if this was the first time I heard this. "They are moving there and the bother in-laws are going along for the ride and to help them get their place ready when they get out there. They told me about a great farm a few miles down the road that has trails for riding horses and swimming and stuff. He said that there are a ton of trails and all that, It sounds like fun, doesn't it?" I shrugged and looked at Alex, who looked at me and shrugged, "Ya it could be fun." I said. "Well we can only go for a few hours I want to get to the Motel before it gets to late tonight." Dad said with a smile. "Motel?" I asked. "Ya he also told me about this great place that they are staying at tonight, he said they have pool and hot tub that stays open all night and big soft beds. He's stayed there before, he said it's about two hundred and twenty five miles down the highway, in Green Plate." "Green Plate?" Alex asked. "Ya it's the name of the town and the Motel." What do you guys say? Are you up for horse back riding and swimming, then straight to Green Plate to eat and relax?" "Sound fun." Alex said perking up. "The places with the horses, is there a lake or a pool?" "I'm not sure?" Dad said, "It sounded like a resort kind of day place that might have both." "Cool." Alex said. And with that we where off to the farm. MORE TO CUM When I ask for feedback it is my asking about the story line. I don not need to know what is spelled wrong or if my grammar is off, I don't want to read it so please if my writing bothers you just don't read any more and that will cut out all the problems. I am not a professional writer so keep it about the story line only please. You can write to me about the story line to cumsoakedface@yahoo.com or visit my new web site at www.geocities.com/cumsoakedface/index.com