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This is an addendum for an incomplete story.

I started this as a transgendered story. The main character is physiological a boy but a girl in every other way.  I've know a lot of boys like that but I do not know enough to carry it through a gender change.  I never intended for Josey to go under the knife.  She was a true creature of nature. 

The premise of the story was that many men like androgynous boys just the way they are.  This was my point of view and this was the story I wanted to write but it fizzled. Please accept my apologies.

His boyfriend Clark, was all male who carried a gun.  He was a tough guy and Josey's total opposite.  Although he thought of Josey as a woman, treated her as a woman and he used her like a woman.. He like that she was a boy with a cock and a ready butt.

I could not write with authority about the pre-occupation with the real change from male to female along with related issues such as hormonal drugs, clothing, the transitional phase and surgery.

My character, Josey was poor and had zero income.  For her mobster boyfriend Clark, money was no problem.  He'd just as soon spend it on her as anything else.  But once she became a woman, the dynamic that pulled them together would be changed for both...

Would Clark maintain the same interest in her?  There is the risk that he'd look for another androgynine. 

My biggest fear is writing something that would sound fake or be wrong..

Perhaps you have some thoughts on the plot line.  Please feel free to write your thoughts.



Feedback and some guidance from interested readers is requested.

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